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Soceress's ravenge [CLOSED]
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#1 Posted: 02:25:04 24/09/2010 | Topic Creator
is their topic about this? anyay its a classic spyro fanfiction expet its in the form of "I ran to backyard" it though spyros eyes........

storyline:
with the dragon realms saved and year come and gone things come and go but When the soceress is belived to be alive and Bianca is forced to return to her side what will happen....
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#2 Posted: 02:45:39 24/09/2010
Sounds interesting.
Queen_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1694
#3 Posted: 03:30:07 24/09/2010
Cool, I wanna see this! smilie
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I know my username says Queen but I’m a guy I’m just gay : (
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#4 Posted: 14:05:30 25/09/2010 | Topic Creator
alright


chapter 1 the innocent pay the price

I ran up the beach and into the city. Appernty Bandit fell down the sewer. When I heard that I "WTF". I was the only one brave enough to go down i the sewer. I came into the city. everyone was gathered around the "Dragon" hole...i heard bandit i had rescued him last summer when the sorcerer took over and re-opend the dark realms portal. "Im coming hold on" i said and dropped down the "Dragon" hole as soon i landed i heard a scream coming to my left . I ran after 2 minutes that have i saw bandit unconscious then a big shadow "What you don't rember me? the voice said the shadow stepped out it was sorceress "No!" i said your dead that not possible" it is and im going after your sweet fuan too!" she disapperd with a laugh the purple color faded from my body i truned as white as ghost I whispered "Elora!"


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spyro cuses?
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Queen_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1694
#5 Posted: 14:45:23 25/09/2010
neat! keep goin smilie
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I know my username says Queen but I’m a guy I’m just gay : (
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#6 Posted: 15:10:01 25/09/2010 | Topic Creator
okayz!


chapter 2 an evil plan unflods


i was pulled out of the sewer still as white as ghost "Whats wrong spyro"? i just "mumbled "Soceress after elora" (My worst fear) "I need to get i said" they all watched my go sparx buzzed after me "Spyro i know your upset" *buzzez* i went inside my beach house and called Elora "Please pick up.Please pick up" i chanted my mind was racing my heart pounded then i heard."Hello"? but it wasnt Elora's voice

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dun dun dun....
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#7 Posted: 20:41:45 25/09/2010
Interesting so far.
Pyro-Spyro Gold Sparx Gems: 2866
#8 Posted: 20:56:18 25/09/2010
Awesome, keep goin'!
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#9 Posted: 03:20:24 26/09/2010
Great story. Hope you get more done soon!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#10 Posted: 04:04:58 26/09/2010 | Topic Creator
awesome! re you go

Chapter 3 a race agaist time PRT 1

"Who are you" I demanded "Ahhh spyro as if you don't rember me?" I immediately reconized the voice "Grendor" I shouted the voice chuckled "Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahah Ive got our "Girlfriend" tied up in closet!" "Let her go" I screamed "Get here in an hour mabey i will" then the dial tone I dropped the phone and ran as fast as my little purple legs could carry me i went to the boats and asked 'When is the next boat to avalar?"


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Frist soceress now grendor Geez spyro slow down dont kill yourself...
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Pyro-Spyro Gold Sparx Gems: 2866
#11 Posted: 22:59:38 26/09/2010
OMG, great! Can't wait till Chapter 4! smilie
pony_girl24 Blue Sparx Gems: 742
#12 Posted: 23:09:22 26/09/2010
COOLIO!
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#13 Posted: 23:26:01 26/09/2010 | Topic Creator
here it is


Chapter 3 prt 2

i ran to the docks i asked the dockmen when the next boat to avalar. he said "Now! get on were about to cast off"........."Alright how long will it take?" i asked "20 minutes" "Okay" the boat sailed off as soon as i laneded i went to summer forsest and burst into Elroa's house she was unconcuis....Grendor came out and said "Im surprised you got here dragon but can you put up a fight?"
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#14 Posted: 23:33:16 26/09/2010
Awesome so far! Lets see Spyro fight!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#15 Posted: 23:58:53 26/09/2010 | Topic Creator
okay here we go


Chapter 4 I lose more than just a leg


"I'd be happy to i growled" Grendor attacked me it made a puncutre wound in my leg it went numb i could'nt feel it anymore blood gushed from it i gave a yelp of pain '"Ha" Grendor said i let out a very big breath of fire than some ice than fire again his face was burning i got up on tree legs and head butted it got him in the stomach "GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" H e screamed Elora sighed in her sleep. Grendor used his magic wand to shoot a fire ball at me i passed out.
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When i woke i was in the hostipail i new immedly i lost. Hunter, Bianca,sparx ,Tamas and all the other elders, Flame Ember, Blink were there (I had asked the nurse) "Hunter wheres".....I was too weak to finish the question "Elora?" He said "I m sorry I tried to stop him" "He got away.. and her with him..." "No!...." i blacked out again

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thats enough for right now....
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#16 Posted: 00:05:22 27/09/2010
Okay, but that's really good!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#17 Posted: 00:07:46 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks!
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#18 Posted: 02:33:45 27/09/2010
Awesome!
Pyro-Spyro Gold Sparx Gems: 2866
#19 Posted: 02:39:48 27/09/2010
More! More! smilie
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#20 Posted: 23:11:54 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Later i havent even typed up 5 yet
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parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#21 Posted: 17:28:17 02/10/2010 | Topic Creator
sorry it sooo long


Chapter 5 im now a runaway


It was 3:00 AM in the avalarian hospital i opend the window I looked it 4 STORY drop i gulped i jumped the gileded i eased my onto the ground and started lim running to the nearst ocen i cuold stay underwater i went under trying to get to the forgotten raealms wich i dont know why no has neamed it i stayed in the aquira towers hotel i few free nights beacuse of when i saved them back when


The next day.. it was 12:00 i left started up again swimming with my limp leg then i realized i had called elora my girlfirend i smiled then i heard a nosie..


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who could it be this time?
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#22 Posted: 17:38:10 02/10/2010
Good! smilie
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#23 Posted: 18:39:39 02/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thnx....

chapter 6 the the only wepon i have is a toothbursh


i turned to gnasty gnocs ugly mug "Wheres grendor"?? i shouted gnasy chuckled "hes with your worthless friend" "But so far the plan is working" "What plan"? i snapped "Youll see" he sneered i reach onto my bag only to pick out a tooth brush....not my best choice...he attacked i hit with my toothbush and appertny i bit him he drew back i swam as fast i could
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#24 Posted: 20:38:49 02/10/2010
Lol, toothbrush as a weapon smilie. Good chapter!
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#25 Posted: 22:15:48 02/10/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah wait 7.....i have a spyro RP up
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#26 Posted: 03:01:32 03/10/2010
This is cool!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#27 Posted: 03:02:46 03/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thnx!!!
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#28 Posted: 03:06:48 03/10/2010
That's okay.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#29 Posted: 17:08:49 03/10/2010
Write more! THE SYMPTOMS ARE STARTING!!!
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Keep smile
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#30 Posted: 17:24:04 03/10/2010 | Topic Creator
what symtoms?
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matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#31 Posted: 17:26:53 03/10/2010
ABSTINENCE SYMPTOMS!!! BODY ALL TWISTED AND SHIZ, NOT TOO MUCH GREAT VIEW!!!
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Keep smile
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#32 Posted: 17:39:17 03/10/2010 | Topic Creator
sorry masteds
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#33 Posted: 22:27:49 03/10/2010
When are you going to right more?
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#34 Posted: 01:11:01 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
right now

Chapter 8 where do theses ididots keep coing from!???

I got up on the beach and guess who was waiting? Ripto GRRREEEAAATTTT hes the least of my Problems i grabbed my totaly epic toothbrush soward and chucked it in glups eye it was pretty funny watch Gulp fall! ripto landed in front of me. I TOUCHED HIS BUTT! i was luaging so hard i fell down on my back!

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LoL SpYrO
who wants links to my other 2 stories?
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#35 Posted: 01:36:46 05/10/2010
Awesome! smilie
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#36 Posted: 01:37:53 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thnx
anyone wants links
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looks like ive got some things to do...
Pyro-Spyro Gold Sparx Gems: 2866
#37 Posted: 01:38:01 05/10/2010
EPIC story so far! Keep goin! smilie
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#38 Posted: 01:38:38 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
i willz
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LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#39 Posted: 01:41:21 05/10/2010
I want to see your other stories smilie
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#40 Posted: 01:44:28 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
heres one

heres 2

yeah....here they are
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looks like ive got some things to do...
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#41 Posted: 01:48:00 05/10/2010
Thanks!
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7577
#42 Posted: 01:51:02 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
welcome
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