darkSpyro

well here goes my first fanfiction...my computer is low on battery...be back tomarrow............just a quick proaluoge

PROALUOGE

after malefore death spyro and cynder were unconcius(spelling?) while the world split into millon pices....when they woke they woud be happy to find that the world was kind of...somewhere in the frogotten realms halfway across the universe elora was sitting looking up at the stars. a star had just gone out

yay! an elora story!

i dunt like elora but it's gona by a good story!i duno elora

the first real chapter is going to be out tomarrow

cant wait

okay here we go..
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chapter 1
Elora thuoght about what she had seen. No she thought not sencse the dragons left theese realms 100 years ago. noone knows why though some people thinks it becuse it too loud then her grandfather appeard in her haed he was dead for about three years now.since then Elora tried to make sencse of the last messge wich was "Elora you are destin for great things you be taking a long journey in three years time...if your stuck just rember who you are wand where you come from..and your marking". and with that he died the 2 months later Elora's younger sister was bron her mom died at birth and her father died of a hreat attack a week later so her older brother amramth were left to fend for them selves amramth took poppy with him back to his home world.Elora's mark it was a outline of somthing. Elora stared running thuogh thr sunrise spring forest.why was she running? she had know idea.
somewhere in avalarr on top of a volcano.....
spyro and cynder had been passed out for 3 hours cynder was the first to wake up spyro...wake up ...spyro wake up the volcano is about to blow!!!!! spyro was not buding....

hope you enjoyed the very first chapter!!!!!!

cool.

capter 2 coming soon

coool and nice
Whitedragon
i done enother eposode in my story!a ryly long one

cant wait for both new chapters

ok thanks
and nice story

thank you for awsome comment heres cahpter two!!!!
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chapter two
cynder was alone on the vocano that was about to exlpode!spyro was breathing..but she coud not wake him spyro wake up..please spyro wake up! now she was screaming at the top of her lungs spyro woke up at last second what'ts going on? where am i? we're on top of a volcano that's about to blow cynder said egar to get off the vocano spyro shook his head a couple a times to rember what was going on. then it came to him they had just saved the world everything was over now or so he thought we get off of the volcano then spyro saidlet's go....hurry cynder could not move her back leg so she was afraid it might be broken but she into the air just as quick as they flew spyro was uncoftrable fying with cynder why was he feeling like this? why? then he remberd right before he saved the world cynder whisperd i love you to him...when they found a spot to land in that was away from the burnig lands cynder crash landed owwww she moaned....


hope you enjoyed chapter two

sorry about the double post just et you guys know i'll br gone for seven days staring july fifth sooooo please i'd like to get chqpter 3 online before i leave

a suggestion... use spell cheek and when characters speak use this "

okay thank you torok (you gonna have to wait till chapter four to see what happens to cynder)
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chapter 3
It was morning at evening lake Elora loved sunrises but she hadn't been in a good mood lately since that idiot sorceress took over with her apprentice bianca....sorceress had been around since the dragons left and only just recently had sorceress took over.Eora was trapped no portals had been working she didn't see shelia at sunrise spring now the star ugg she had a headache from it all she shared her home with her roommate zoe who was very hot headed but Eora would not let all that stand in her way of building a new portal....2 days later "so you're going to build a new portal to this new world"? zoe asked "yes i am" don't tell bianca that tattletale she'll tell the sorceress." Elora said with a worried look in her eye "i hope it's not like the last one you tried to build but worse." I'd have to find a roommate said zoe Elora was just about to say something when from out of nowhere bianca appeared

It is so....awesome!!!!but spelling....

i know i know....but here chapter four (using spellcheck now)
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chapter 4
Cynder tried not to scream the pain was so intense.spyro who had landed and was running towards cynder. "Cynder are you alright"? "i don't think so my leg was broken before we left the volcano. i think it's worse now" she tried to get up but she stumbled."i hope were close to warfang" said spyro "try limping" she did it wasn't as effective as walking but it was getting her somewhere.When night came cynder couldn't sleep her mind was full of thought one important one was:"did he hear me? i think he did i really hope he did but then what about sparx?


heheh did'nt see that one comng did you

wow good!

wow thanks...
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[b][CHAPTER 5/b]

"What are two doing"? Bianca asked with an evil look in her but then again her face was darkened..."That depends on your doing Bianca you traitor". said Zoe "ohh buzz off" Bianca said "HEY pick your someone your own size"said Elora like you?"sure why not"? alright Elora prepare to die!!"she thew her hand back thew it forward out came an electric ball Elora dodged it hit the portal the started they stared in awe as they portal came to life."it works"? Elora said quietly. "grrrr" growled Bianca ran and tackled Elora from behind they went tumbling to the portal "oh great now i have to go in after them." Zoe said and flew in

wow cool

tha's it for chapters today......but tomarrow yeah!!!!

neat cant wait

i'm touched by how awesome your guy's comments are
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chapter 6

they came to a cliff the end of the forest they could see warfang it was close "i'm sorry cynder you are going to have to fly"said spyro trying not to get distracted in cynder's big green eye's "i know i know "said cynder "tacking off is easy landing is hard"out of spyro eye he saw a flash "what was that "? said spyro "what was what"? ""a flash over there on that hill" "probably nothing" cyder said and then they took flight when got to warfang the to the elders they brought the news of ignitus's death the elders gave that hunter was sick. but little spyro,cynder and sparx(who was waiting with the elders) that more danger lied ahead


okay a couple of things

• i have a mobile skills disability
  

• sparx is to appear in the fanfic and going to say stuff
  

awesome

thanks whitedragon
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chapter 7
it's long

After a minute of clawing each other they realized they weren't in the forgotten realms any more they got up "where are we"? asked Bianca "looks like that other world" said Elora calmly even though she was freaked out at moment Zoe came though the portal at that same moment whoa major headache that's probably portal sickness portal sickness was really just a migraine "well you did it Elora you brought us here" said Bianca "now take us back" ! I'm going to check out the place first and she walked out of the bushes that the duplicate portal was in the scenery was beautiful it was sun sunrise here too weird it had taken the portal a day just to get them there that's why Zoe was a few minutes late.
somewhere in dragoncity.....
Spyro cynder and sparx had just woken up for the first day of peace "where are we going to hunt today?" "that hill where i saw the flash" okay whatever you say man said sparx "okay spyro"cynder said a little uneasy there was a dark feeling behind that flash she could feel it. on the way up the spyro was positive he coud hear shouting it got louder and louder....

wait till chapter 8

Wow thats really good

thank you!
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chapter 8
Bianca's and Elora's shout shad just gotten louder and louder. Zoe could hear something voices they weren't Elora and Bianca's that's for sure she couldn't tell whose they were there was too much shouting. "Shush!"Zoe said still arguing she tried a least 8 times now finally she cracked and yelled at the top of her lungs "SHUT UP!"!!! Bianca and Elora stopped arguing "what Zoe?" "do you hear something besides me and..." she didn't get to finish her sentence because shadow were flying over them all three looked up nothing it happened again they looked again "werid" Bianca said. A thrid time this they looked up and saw a black and red winged creature
that same hill.... Cynder had been looking for a lot of prey dhe wanted to impress spyro alot but there was nothing on this side of the hill she had flown over the same area three times now "spyro probably trying to do the same thing for me" she flew over to the other side of the hill "there was no prey on that side of the hill" i did smell UN familiar scents though" "why don't we go check that out"said spyro "okay whatever you say" cynder replied "spyro and cynder have been acting very weird lately could they? no what am i thinking? sparx thought they took off cynder leg wasn't hurting as bad as it was the doctor said it couldn't heal right when they flew outside the bush the girls were in they stoped they smelled unfamiliar scents "you were right cynder" "well here we go" sparx said they step into the bushes and saw three unfamier figures.....

nice chapter

okay this is the post edited..........
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chapter nine
Elora stared at the strange and wonderful creatures one of them looked familiar then her birthmark witch was killing it never had felt this way before they stayed staring for five minutes the pain got so bad that she dropped down on her knees then she looked up at the creatures they had concerned looks on their faces then she blacked out...
spyro and cynder were concerned what had happend to that creature that collapsed anthor five minutes past.....Bianca finnaly brokke the scilence "may we help you?" then Zoe said "Oh now you want to act good instead of evil" "shut up " bianca said i don't have to" zoe siad "okay fine you the talking then.......


sorry it was so short... but... i have news to tell

• there is going to be a sequel to this fanfic..called Elora's quest.....
  

• and sooner or later i'm going to write a fandragon fanfic....here's a preveiw of what one of the dragons look like
  

Wow I can't wait for the next one and Shadow looks awesome!

thanks you spyroena well heres the plot for that one: what if there were 8 eggs that survived and not just two...well really thats all i got for the plot so far if you want to make your own dragon spyroena go to your search box type in dragon generator it should be the frist one down
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heres chapter 10( this might remind you of somthing)

the two strange creatures kept aruging spyro and cynder were a little weried out by all this aguring but sparx was just staring at that flying creature face meanwhile that goat creature was just lying there.....Elora woke up sundenly she was in the same spot she felt werid like she was full of power she tried to get up but she had a little trouble Zoe noticed "Elora are you alright"? "i think so..." Zoe who are they?" I don't know" more importantly what are they" Zoe said the three stared staring " haven't you guys seen dragons before"? sparx said "No" said Zoe "And what is she spoused to be some kind of goat?" sparx said "i'm fuan you dork"! "Sparx stop it". spyro said......


did it remind you of something? (i did it on purpose)

Wow...took me a while, but good job!

thnx....its been a while since i updated
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Chapter 11


"Sparx cut it out!" said Spyro. Bianca just watched and chuckled."Im sorry about her rude behaverior."Elora said pointing at Zoe "Hey what about her?" Zoe looked at Bianca who just meraly said "i have nothing to apolgize for" "Oh i belive that" said Elora Bianca remained queit. "My name Elora" said Elora "I'm spyro this is cynder" "Hi" said cynder "and youve already met sparx"spyro said "so where do you come from"? Cynder asked "The forgotten realms" Zoe said We were in search of help from dragons" said elora. "I'm pleaed to have made friend with two already" "Can you two please help?" Elora asked....


okay i have two fafics now.....ill edit the post and put the link up...THE LINK

wow paris! this awesome! you are way better than me...

youre awesome at writing!
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CHAPTER 12


"Yes' said spyro "whats going in your wold anyway"? asked sparx. "You can explain on the way to warfang" said cynder"Thats fine with us...." said Elora

in warfang

Elora had eplained eveything on the way and was expaing how the soceress had banned the dragons and not realizing they were the sorce of the magic ih their world..Bianca dissaperd shesaw Hunter she watched him...knowing he was sick

terrador listened intenly...at the end he said "i rember hearing a story like that years ago when i was spyro and cynders age" sparx said "you were spyro and cynders age?" Terrador ignored him "Elora you are seeking help from spyro and cynder yes"? Elora said "yes" "then they may help" he said "will you Elora asked "yes' both spyro and cynder said....


what is hunter doing out of his village Bianca sees him too i can tell this is not gonna end pretty....

Oh....keep going DX MOREEEE!

okay deathstar
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chapter 13

Bianca watched hunter a gurblin came up behind him "Look out" she screamed hunter herad her....

in warfang.

"When shall you leave"? Cryill asked "Tomarrow at best". Elora said "So were are we spending the night then"? Zoe asked "In the Dragon city hotel" Volteer awnserd "Thank you" Elora said "youre welcome" Terrador said.

outside of Warfang

Hunter saw the gurblin he shot his arrow then he asked in sickly voice *Who goes *chogh* there?
"Its me Bianca the soceress".......

If anyone has reqests just PM me ill add them in

Wowowo...Great work! Can't wait for nextie! :3

Chapter 14

Elora stared out the window of the dragon city hotel thinking of her lost family and her only family left. her older brother and younger sister. Then Bianca "Hey Zoe?" "Yeah?""Where Bianca?"

"Come out to where i can see you!" he had his bow and arrows ready "Happy now"? she said he dropped his bow at the back of his MID he was saying "she sure is pretty"....."Hmm you sorceress types can sneaky how this isn't a trap "I just saved your life you furry numb skull how can i trap you by saving you?" "Uhhh" Hunter just stammered "Here i wll do you another favor...


noticing ORINGANAL qoutes? and a little of X hmmm?

hehe.

yes wats gonna next? only i know!

Chapter 14

She closed her eyes and centerd her thoughts and cure Hunters sickness he felt better already.
"How did you...??" Bianca cut him off "Magic" she said "I must leave now" she said "Well can i least know where you live"? Before he coould finish she was gone but she cae back in front of him "Trust me im not yore type but here" She handed him a card that had her adderess on it then she left. Hunter stood there dazed "Who was she?" he asked himself. He read the card. It had her forgooten realm adderss on it.

Back to and ...

Spyro and Cynder were in the sae hotel but differnt rooms.They were eating. Finally Spyro said: "I heard what you said"


....
o great now Hunters love sturk

WOO! Finally another, but I still can't wait for the next <3

here we go!


Chapter 15

Bianca went back to the soceress temple in the center of the Midnight mountain garden "Well im here what do you want"? she asked a rynoc named Firgor'e (free-gor-a) 'The soceress needs your serveices" he said "As her most trust ser-erm uh i mean adoted duagther id advise you to do so" "Fine" she said and came in the soceress room "Bianca dear i know of your trip to that world of the dragons..." Soceress said "Yes but there IS nothing there just a bunch of rocks" "And a cute guy" she thought 'He looked familer" she thought again "You know your crystall ball was running i could see everthing until you turned it off after you almost got attacked. nice use of magic by the way"... "Thank you I am off to bed" there in her one cold room she dreamt a dream of memory

Spyro and cynder..

'What do you mean you heard what i said" she whisperd "I heard you say I love you"... Cynders body shook a little "Y--you ac--ccully heard that" she stammerd

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Watcha dreamin bianca

oh ye great job! got mad skillz

thnx! the next chapter is coming soon