this is my second fan fic heres my its not quite done yet.
Prologue:
Isis and g'reth were sitting a few miles away from the cave village entrance they were looking at the stars...g'reth had fallen asleep. His big sister Isis still gazing up it was a very clear night. she sighed. She put her head down next to g'reths when a earthquake hit........
heres the link to the other fanfic....TLoS : a new era this takes place around the time of the of TEN read it if you want to find out why....
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#1 Posted: 22:34:50 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 01:35:46 26/07/2010
This is where you say... dun dun dun!
Whats gonna happen?
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#3 Posted: 01:47:53 26/07/2010 | Topic Creator
SOMTHING VERY MYSERTIOUS!
-------- CHAPTER 1 THE BEGINNG Isis was startled by the power of this earthquake. "Greth woke with a start wha whats going on"? he asked scared "i don't know lets fly back to the caves"! "yeah lets" Isis was a 12 year old dragon who ha a younger brother named Greth who was nine. their mom died 9 years ago so she was stuck raising him. there were others that lived at the caves these were the decedent's of the guardians Isis was soupsed to take the earth dragons place after he died but then there was that raid and it was all gone she still wore the necklace her mother santa-maria had given her to mark she was a future elder.... sorry so short my laptops batter is low...more tomarrow
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#4 Posted: 01:52:17 27/07/2010
Is there more mysterious events up ahead?
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#5 Posted: 04:25:08 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
ohhh yeah its just gonna keep getting werider and weider...
---------- chapter 2 the dream they got back to the entrance of the caves after being blinded by a shadow over the lands in the shape of a priate ship Niomi was waiting for them "Where have you to been we called in every just before the earthquake" Niomi Who was leader of the cave village said Isis started talking really fast.. "sorry Niomi the stars where just so pretty tonight and"...she was interrupted by Redeye( he and Niomi could never be separated).....Niomi! greentail is still missing! said "Redeye how many times do i have to tell to to keep track of your little sister"? "Have you searched the amphithere the ruins? my cave?" asked Niomi "No but i will look Now you two get off to get off to your cave...Isis and g'reth flew to the some of the highest caves. Isis saw Greth was hungry she saw a rat killed it and gave it to g'reth. He ate it. Isis took G'reth to his side cave she went to hers... 5 MINUETS LATER "Isis are you asleep?' it was G'reth. "No not yet". "why"? "beacuse i can't sleep...im scared can i sleep with you"? "Yes come here" G'reth went and cured up next to Isis.Isis fell asleep... she stared dreaming it was her and her mother Santa-maria at the "big temple" 10 years ago she was only two when the monsters attacked. but this was before thenshe was watchin the egg her what could have been her 10 year old brother/sister the purple dragon her mother had told her about these dragons rare only come around ever 10 generations....blah blah..her mother was a phycic dragon....she new the future she sighed every time she looked at the egg...one she was playing with some butterflys by the big satue her nacklace was weghing her jumping down but she did not care she was having fun anyways the other two year older dragon were in the other room then she heard a terrible screaming come from the other room.... purple dragon?! i think you know who im talking about also if you wnt to look at the chacters..go go to my guestbook all of the ragons are chacters...yeah there is alot
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#6 Posted: 13:02:07 03/08/2010
Awesomeness!
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#7 Posted: 15:13:13 03/08/2010 | Topic Creator
thank you!
------ chapter 3 the attack. Isis still dreamt she mumbling things in her sleep... she into the other room to what all the commtion had been almost all of the eggs had been smashed expetfor a few and the other baby dragons that lived with Isis now were in a corner with the females. A female named Henriettea who had an and a ice the sam age as Isis older ice dragon had seen one of apes holding her egg she tried killing ot but i did'nt work. Isis tried to get across the room to her mom by avoiding the apes. But it failed. The ape grabbed her by thorat. The ape sracmed somthing in ape langue. Isis was terrifeid. An even bigger ape holding the black egg said this: "we did what we came for now lets go" The ape thew her to the coner Santa-maria looked down on her Isis got up "everyone" Santa-Maria said "we have to get out of the tempe before Igniusus return its for the good of th childern" A white dragon Chleasa who had a 4 year old earth dragon said "you heard her lets move".They flew off Isis was on her mothers back Isis asked her mom "moma where is my baby brother or sister? Santa-maria replyied "honey Igniuts has taken it to safty" "ohh" Isis said back and she curled in ball and slpet. Isis also had Anthor dream two other baby dragons had been born Greentail and Greth unfortinalty Santa-Maria and heriettea died while laying the eggs but the eggs lived. god thats was a lot of typing oh yeah if you're wondering about the fourth female she has the other dragons she died cuase could'nt take care of all of them.....oh yeah heres the title for the next story: Legend of Isis: shadows of love:
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#8 Posted: 21:35:08 11/08/2010
this is awesome!
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#9 Posted: 04:07:47 12/08/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks icedraginmacey2
--------- chapter 5 waking Isis woke up it wuz morning her moms last words echoed in her head "Isis find him"....."the purple dragon"...."your brother" it made her sad...she still hd yet to find that purple dragon hopefully she find him soon. she looked around Greth was gone "hunting" she thought she went outside she saw guinivere(gewn) and tamryn her best friends. "Hey guys"said Isis "hey Isis said gewn the girlyest dragon out there "hey Isis" said tamryn the common tomboy they stared talikng all of sudden Redeye the leader of the hunting/scouting team said "weve spotted enmay dragons.... ----- i knowwat youre think and no the enmies are and :cynder; but if you haven't figured it out already yes is Isis's and Greths brother....Heheh
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#10 Posted: 01:55:10 14/08/2010
Isis?
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#11 Posted: 01:58:14 14/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Heheh sorry Isisstormdragon Isis is my fan dragon that i made sorry if the was any confusin
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#12 Posted: 02:01:53 14/08/2010
Oh, okay. I got worried for a moment... I have a fan Dragon named Isis, too.
Now that I see there's nothing amiss, carry on. |
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#13 Posted: 02:06:29 14/08/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks isisstormdragon id love to see your fan dragon! im gonna update soon!
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#14 Posted: 02:16:58 14/08/2010
//www.darkspyro.net/images/nig...30042A-Isis.jpg
^This is her. She's also in a fanfiction of mine.. Anyways, to comment on yours, I like it. |
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#15 Posted: 03:12:06 14/08/2010 | Topic Creator
awesome dragon! thanks Isis!
------- CHAPTER 6 THE ATTACK AND THINGS I FORGOT TO MENTION Isis got scared she looked at the wound th ape gave her years ago(yeah i totally forgot that) Niomi shouted "Everyone to the emergancy cave now" they flew torwards the emargency cave 20 minutes ago....somwhere we are just leanring about Poisinfang had been on gurad duty for awhile now he missed Rubywing "Stupid Raggnarr why do i have to go on garud duty?" he thought "i have much better things to do" he smiled then he saw the the dragons enmaies....... sorry so short im having writers block....reqests anyone?
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#16 Posted: 00:07:34 08/10/2010 | Topic Creator
wow...
i dont care what people say Chapter 7 Raggnarr He was evil. his soul had been evil ever since he was born. His name was Raggnarr. his father was good his mother was too. he was the "rotten egg" his parents called him a few weeks after he had hacted they had no choice but to leave him in the wild. For hours. he cried he never was supposed to be evil never. He cried "Why dont they love me for who i am"???? "They hate me!!" A female ape who had been banshied from Malefore foretress by gual himself(a few days after the egg raid) she came acrross him. Now her own child had been killed by gual in that egg raid she almost murdered Gual for that. Thays why she was banshied. So as i was saying she came across Raggnarr and said "Who are you young one"? .....
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#17 Posted: 02:46:29 08/10/2010
Story rocks. i luv it keep it goin!
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#18 Posted: 03:13:34 08/10/2010 | Topic Creator
^ i willz!
[b]Chapter 9 this is where it really begins[/b "I am Raggnarr" he whisperd fanitly. "I am Mona" she said "Will you love me??" he asked "Yes." picked up Raggnarr and brought him to her cave to the north of where Caveville is.... Back to where we were Greth and everyone younger than 9 wich was bascliy 2 dragon greth and greentail but anyways there were enimeis out there so they had to stay Isis and Niomi ran to defend to the left wing Redeye and Gewn ran to the left wing. then they came
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#19 Posted: 03:26:55 08/10/2010
¥ay!¡ great chapter!
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#20 Posted: 21:10:32 08/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thnx!!!
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#21 Posted: 00:49:57 09/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10 Her secret power
"There coming in by the dozens" Gewn. Who although a girly-girl would kick the crap outta somone if she had to. "We can take em" Isis said "Get ready....." "Now" Niomi said and they took off in flight. They were losing. Isis shut her eyes and landed "Seema! and Simius! "I call upon thee" Isis whisperd. She focesed her mind. Her scales rattled then it happed. A gaint worm hole opend out came two young dragons Simius and Seema...The god of warriors and goddess of messenger. They spoke with such calmness "We are here who has called upon us"...... O_____o WTF? Isis controlling dragon gods and goddesses?
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#22 Posted: 02:55:00 12/10/2010
Nice.
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#23 Posted: 03:04:29 12/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thnx im going to get started on chapter 11 soon
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