Forum

Poll

13 Years of Skylanders, Have You Played Any?
View Results
darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Fan Fiction > The legend of Spyro the darkest secret
Page 1 of 2 | Last
1 2
The legend of Spyro the darkest secret [CLOSED]
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#1 Posted: 21:39:33 12/11/2009 | Topic Creator
This is the last in my trilogy. The legend of Spyro the unknown world is the first and The legend of Spyro the dragons eye is the second. I hope you like this story as much as the others. I'll start soon, ENJOY!
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#2 Posted: 21:43:04 12/11/2009
I haven't read the others, but... ( sits down with a bag of popcorn)
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#3 Posted: 21:45:10 12/11/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Well you should get started or you wont undersatnd whats going on.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#4 Posted: 21:48:52 12/11/2009
Okay. smilie ( walks over to links)

EDIT: I've read 'em both.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:58:26 12/11/2009 by IsisStormDragon
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#5 Posted: 22:04:27 12/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter1 Spyro was thare gasping for air, unable to breath, his life flashed befor his eyes. From when he found out he was the dragon that had to save the world, to now, when all his freinds and faimly, agenst him trying to kill him. He was thare just about to die, minutes, seconds maybe. When he saw Sparx turn back to normal. "SPYRO, BUDDY I'M COMING!!!" Sparx yelled. Sparx was thare helping him to breath, some how he managed to make Spyro breath but.......it took his life away, Sparx was dead. "SPARX!!!" Spyro yelled, but he knew that....he was gone. "YOUR ALL GOING TO PAY FOR THIS" Spyro yelled "YOU PATHEDIC DRAGON" Cynder yelled, then without a warning she started to grow. "I'VE BEETEN YOU ONCE I'LL BEET YOU AGAIN!!!!!" Spyro yelled at Cynder "Ya but now I have a team a army you could even say" Cynder said. Cynder orderd to blast there strongest ability, they all did, Spyro was traped, but he got the power to use convisity. Then it was all over.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#6 Posted: 22:11:20 12/11/2009
smilie

What happens next?? I must know! smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#7 Posted: 22:13:12 12/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry i'm going to wait untill Cinderlover reads it she's been reading since i started. I'm sorrysmilie
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#8 Posted: 22:14:08 12/11/2009
It's okay. smilie I can wait. I've got my own story to write anyway.
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#9 Posted: 23:56:47 12/11/2009
I'M BACK!!! And I like your new story. And thanks for waiting. But still...
*CPR Sparx*
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:01:36 13/11/2009 by CinderLover
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#10 Posted: 01:53:29 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter2 Cynder shrank back down to size, and every one was turned to there normal state. "what happend?" Cynder asked, rubing her head, Sandy was trying to sneek away, but she was stoped by the master, Sandy and Ignitus kneeled down of the presance of him. "YOU LET ME DOWN!!! AND THIS ISN'T THE FIRST TIME FOR YOU IGNITUS, YOU WILL PAY THE PRICE!!!!!!" The master said "Malefor!?!?!" Spyro said, he was very confused "Thats right and Ignitus is yet to fail me once more!!!" Malefor said "but master i ca....." Ignitus tryed to explain "Whats going on?" Spyro asked "you see i've.....i've been working.....for Malefor, we were freinds when we were younger, since we hatched...and when he turned evil I helped him....when you were born I took your egg Spyro and you know from thare but you don't know why.....I didn't want to bash your egg.....and so i did what i did" Ignitus explaind "Then why didn't Malefor take mine and Spyro's egg" Cynder asked "well he didn't want to take the chance, when i saw you Spyro I was shoked and happy in a way, it's was part of our plane to train you, but then i started to feel sorry that you were going to die, so I trained you, more then i trained any ther dragon, you were turning into my son, but when we went through the belt of fire I was the chronicle, untill Sandy came and turned me back to the dark side and thats what started it all" Ignitus explaind. Every one was in shock.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 12:04:11 13/11/2009 by Cynder 19000
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#11 Posted: 03:10:23 13/11/2009
Wow. smilie Amazing.
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#12 Posted: 19:49:12 13/11/2009
I was NOT expecting THAT smilie smilie smilie uh, Continue?
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#13 Posted: 23:03:29 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter3 "honny your evil?" Lori asked Sandy "That right and i don't need any of you, my pathedic faimly just relized i'm evil, how STUPID can you be" Sandy said. After that Malefor, Sandy, and Ignitus left. "NO YOU CAN"T GO IGNITUS!!!!!!" Spyro yelled "there's nothing you can do, he betrade us, lied to us,do you really think he cares about us" Terrador said "but he must he....." Spyro was cut off by Cyril "Spyro hw's evil there nothing you can do about it, he turned us evil, he's the one who made us try to kill you, he made Sparx die....." "BUT WHEN ALL YOU WERE TRYING TO KILL ME HE TURNED BACK TOLD ME THE WEEKNESS TO DEFEET YOU ALL HE HELPED ME DEFEET YOU! HE.....HE......" Spyro yelled "Spyro stop yelling about it isn't going to work, it isn't going to change anything, let's go for a walk" Cynder said "ok" Spyro said, them they left. "Spyro, do you want to talk about it" Cynder asked "no....well just one thing........why did yuo turn evil, when the end came, Malefor made you turn to you dark form but you snaped out of it, do you remeber what happend?" Spyro asked "Whaen Sandy turned me to my dark form was half and half like at the end but.....something she did, i could feel it, magic or something at my nake brace, like at the cristle" Cynder said. Spyro was thinking of when Sandy ipnotized Sparx, maybe she did something to the cristle maybe if he took it off maybe Sandy would'nt have the grip she had on Cynder, he had to take it off. "Cynder i think i know why, we have to take the cistle off" Spyro said "ok? if it will make me not able to go to the dark side, im with it" Cynder said, so Spyro was hiting the cristle whaen, Cynder was gasping for air "S...py..ro...stop..." Cynder tryed to say then she felt pain all over, she couldn't move the pain was so bad. "CYNDER ARE YOU OK!?" Spyro relized that it was hurting her, he picked her up and started to fly to the hospital "YOU GOING TO BE OK, I'M GOING TO THE HOSPITAL!" Spyro said. They were almost thare.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#14 Posted: 23:20:23 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: CinderLover
I was NOT expecting THAT smilie smilie smilie uh, Continue?


why do you think my storys called: the darkest secret, there has to be some kind dark secret, right?
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:41:29 14/11/2009 by Cynder 19000
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#15 Posted: 00:47:23 14/11/2009
Riiiiight, Please continue!

So that crystal now holds Cynder's life force?
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#16 Posted: 00:50:44 14/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Exactly!
thats why she was ok the day after Spyro put it on
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#17 Posted: 00:51:49 14/11/2009
I see, I repeat, Please continue!
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#18 Posted: 02:16:25 14/11/2009
Interesting chapter.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#19 Posted: 14:39:59 14/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter4 Thare she was in the same chamber once more, but this time she wasn't dieing. "what happend to her?" spyro asked, "tell me what happend, when she got hurt" the mole said "I was trying to take the cristle off, then we had to come here, i think the cristle effected her some how" Spyro explained, the mole took a magnafineglass to the cristle, he was studying it very closely "I don't know why the cristle would of effected her" the mole said "i was dieing when he put it on could that of explain this" Cynder said "maybe but it would be odd, but if so come back and will take some studys on it" the mole said "ok" Cynder said
    Meanwhile....

"YOU PATHEDIC DRAGON, HOW CAN I EVER TRUST YOU AGAIN, YOU HAVE ONE MORE CHANCE TO PROVE YOURSELF WORTHY!" Malefor yelled "Yes old freind, what would you like me to do" Ignitus said "you know perfectly well what i want you to do, if you need some reminding i'll send Sandy with you, SANDY!"Malefor yelled, then Sandy ran to them "Yes, master what would you like me to do" Sandy said "I want you to go with Ignitus, to remind him on what his job is, NOW GO!" Malefor yelled, then they were off.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 23:53:00 14/11/2009 by Cynder 19000
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#20 Posted: 18:53:22 14/11/2009
Cool story!!
---
you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#21 Posted: 23:41:27 14/11/2009
Hmm.... Pretty good.
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#22 Posted: 23:57:22 14/11/2009
Yeah, good part.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#23 Posted: 00:33:52 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter5 They were headed for the temple, but they decided not to go. They found a cave near a waterfall "it's peasefull up hear" Cynder said "it's just what i need to clear my head" Spyro said. Then they went to bed. BANG "did you hear that" Cynder said "uh....what....did i hear what" Spyro said BANG "THAT" Cynder siad "I don't know, lets see what it is" Spyro said. They were looking all over when they, transported to the cave "why are we here" Spyro asked "what are you talking about" Cynder said, she was looking out of the cave "i mean that we heard bangs then we got here some how" Spyro said. Cynder turned her head like a owls, then started to melt "what are you talking about" she said then disapeard "you never should of been born" a voice said "what" Spyro said, then relized it was Sparx "YOU NEVER SHOULD OF BEEN BORN, BECAUSE OF YOU AND CYNDER I DIED,YOU NEVER SHOULD OF LOVED HER, YOU NEVER SHOULD OF LIVED, NOW IT'S YOUR TURN TO DIE" Sparx said, then choked Spyro. He was about to die when...... "Spyro are you ok" Cynder asked "I'm alive, your not melted, Sparx didn't kill me, it was a nightmar thank god" Spyro said in relife.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#24 Posted: 00:56:06 15/11/2009
Yeah thank goodness! Cynder isn't melted! Yay! any way Please Continue.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:56:32 15/11/2009 by CinderLover
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#25 Posted: 01:00:17 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
There'll be another chapter tomorrow.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#26 Posted: 03:16:49 15/11/2009
Cool.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#27 Posted: 14:14:37 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter6 "I melted, Sparx killing you, what?!?" Cynder said "just from the dream, Sparx said said i never should of been born, and...." his voice trailed off, thinking of his dream. "and...." Cynder said "and.....I never should of loved you, i bet thats what he would think if he was alive" Spyro said now mad at Sparx "thats not true" Cynder said "what?" Spyro said "that's not true he supported us, he wanted us to be together, but he was scared of loseing you as a freind" Cynder said "why would he be sacred of loseing me as a freind" Spyro asked "he was scared that all you would do is hang out with me and forget about him" Cynder explained "so he wanted us to be together " Spyro said "yes" Cynder said "thats a loud out of my mind" Spyro said, they wrapped there talis together then went to sleep.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#28 Posted: 19:02:29 15/11/2009
Cute!
---
you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#29 Posted: 19:06:35 15/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!smilie if you want to do a reguest in what you want in the story i'm all hears, send it through PM's
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#30 Posted: 19:09:03 15/11/2009
I don't really think I want my ideas in the story...
My brain's not on at the moment, maybe later?
---
you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#31 Posted: 19:31:23 15/11/2009
That was a good chapter. smilie
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#32 Posted: 22:46:32 15/11/2009
Yes, a very good chapter indeed!
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#33 Posted: 05:18:05 16/11/2009
MORE!!!!
---
you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#34 Posted: 12:21:31 16/11/2009 | Topic Creator
more tonight, if i don't have alot of homework.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#35 Posted: 21:24:08 16/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter7 Thare they were sleeping, tails wraped around the others, life was perfect at the moment, only one thing could make it better. When they woke up, Cynder said "Spyro, wouldn't be nice, to live here" "it would be the great place to live, calming noises from the water fall..." Spyro's voice trailed off, Cynder finished his sentence "calming noises comeing from crickets, birds signing songs, fish splashing, bee's buzzing, and it's so beautiful it's like no civilization ever been here but us, and the animals" "yeah i know, it's as beautiful as you are, and were you serious about Sparx" Spyro asked " Thanks and, I cross my heart and hope to die" Cynder said blushing, then Cynder leaned her head agenst Spyro shoulder, he started to blush.
    Meanwhile...

"I wonder ware Spyro is" Volteer said "I bet he's looking for Ignitus" Cyril said "or maybe just trying to find a place to live, since his home it destroyed" Terrador said, Draco walked into the room. "or maybe he's being chased after by my sister, trying to kill him, I HATE HER!!!" Draco yelled "no need to yell Draco, but that could be a option" Terrador said, Draco was in shock "do you really think that" Draco asked "we don't know young dragon, we don't know" Volteer said
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 22:27:33 16/11/2009 by Cynder 19000
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#36 Posted: 01:03:59 17/11/2009
Interesting, indeed. smilie
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#37 Posted: 17:19:28 17/11/2009
Yes, I liked it too. Please Continue!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:41:45 18/11/2009 by CinderLover
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#38 Posted: 21:19:24 18/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter8 time for the one thing better "Cynder, i love you, your all i ever need, we could stay up here forever for all i care" Spyro said then got all serious and sad even close to tears, then said under his breath "it's not like anyone would miss me anyways" "Spyro you know thats not true" Cynder said, getting her head up from his shoulder "then why did every one get mad at me when i tryed to covince Ignitus to stay"
    Meanwhile...

"you better not fail this one, or master will make you pay the consequants" Sandy worned, Ignitus. "I know" Ignitus said glumly "do you remember what it is" Sandy asked "yes, i will be sentensed to death, but i know he wont i've failed him many times, even when we were kids, but i'am i dead,young one? No,you have to learn more about life and peaple, start making you own decisons" Ignitus said, Sandy was surprised ofwhat he said "I do make my own decisons, i DECIED to work for Malefor" Sandy said. Then both of them were guit.
    Meanwhile...

"because, they were angry and shocked and full of emotions like you were" Cynder said "I gues" Spyro said, then Cynder was going to kiss Spyro on the cheak but, Spyro went to go kiss her on the lips then they did. Both of them were blushing.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#39 Posted: 21:23:12 18/11/2009
Hmm... Pretty good. CinderLover, we need you over here! smilie
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#40 Posted: 01:40:10 19/11/2009
okay, I am here and Yeah, that is a good chapter. Write More, Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes I am hyper today!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 14:33:31 19/11/2009 by CinderLover
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#41 Posted: 22:09:59 19/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter9 They were speechless, they didn't know what to say, to the other, they just shared a kiss. They sat thare looking in to the others eyes, it was like a dream that just came true, something they thought would never happen, something they wanted, just came true. "I just kissed Spyro, I...he...we...kissed...i don't know what to say exsept for, I love him" Cynder thought "We kissed, I just kissed Cynder, she kissed me....I love her, she truely loves me" Spyro thought. They loved eachother so much but they were scared to talk, as if it was a dream and then the dream would just go away, they were so happy, they were full of emtoins. "Cyn...d...der....we achully.....achully" Spyro said, then stoped he was scared the dream would stop. "Yep....Spy...ro....I love you from the bottem of my heart" Cynder said "I love you too, I would die for you" Spyro replied. Then they were guit. They laid down beside eachother, still shoked, yet so happy, they rapped there tails together, once more then went to sleep.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#42 Posted: 23:11:24 19/11/2009
Cute. smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#43 Posted: 00:55:35 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!smilie more tonight.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 13:05:48 20/11/2009 by Cynder 19000
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#44 Posted: 14:31:40 20/11/2009
Awwww... that is precious! please continue, write more!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:06:27 20/11/2009 by CinderLover
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#45 Posted: 21:27:07 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter10 The next day when they woke up, Spyro cought a bird for himself and Cynder cought a posionis frog."Mmm this tastes great!" She said, liking her lips."I'll stick to my bird, don't want to die from a frog, after being put in soooo many life of death battles" Spyro said "true, i can't belive how many time we both could of died, there uncountable. Too many battles, too many life or death exspirinces" Cynder said with a sigh, then they went back to eating breckfast.
    Meanwhile...

"It's been four days, we should orginize a search party" Cyril said "i'm worried about them but they can take care of them self's they were living on there own" Terrador said. "ya, but that home has a big hole in it " Cyril reminded him "it wasn't there fault, it our fault, we were the one who dug it, and we did it to save Cynder" Voteer reminded Cyril "but if it wasn't for us, Malefor, Ignitus and Sandy would still be down thare, and they wouldn't be gone" Cyril argued "Ya but, if it wasn't for us, Cynder would be dead" Volteer argued "not true there was knuckers and lindworm dragons down thare how could she of died" Cyril argued, then Terrador interrupted them "Stop your bickering. Whats done is done, we just have to get ride of the evil thats here now"
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#46 Posted: 21:29:30 20/11/2009
Interesting. smilie
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#47 Posted: 23:28:55 20/11/2009
CYNDER DON'T EAT A POISONOUS FROG! That is SOOO stupid! anyway, good chapter!
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#48 Posted: 00:24:17 21/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: CinderLover
CYNDER DON'T EAT A POISONOUS FROG! That is SOOO stupid! anyway, good chapter!


I didn't put in she's able to eat it because she has the element of posion, and it cames out of her mouth all the time. But i didn't put it in because i tryed to refrase the conversation between Spyro and Cynder and it always came up so you would think Spyro was a retard, and i didn't want to make him sound like a retard, so i didn't put in why she was able to eat it. And she's NOT STUPID. lolsmilie
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#49 Posted: 01:53:00 21/11/2009
OHHHHH! Okay, sorry... hee hee hee...... that was embarrassing! smilie
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#50 Posted: 23:06:06 21/11/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry for not writeing a chapter today but i was busy, i'm stuck.
---
I'm batman!! Shh...
Page 1 of 2 | Last
1 2

Please login or register a forum account to post a message.

Username Password Remember Me