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#1 Posted: 13:06:27 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok, this is my first story, but here are some things you need to know. A cave is a dragons bed room, a nest is a dragons bed, Spyro and Cynder are still 15. I'll try to get 2 chapters a day, but i may not, so just keep checking in. Enjoy
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#2 Posted: 15:22:34 12/10/2009
Ok!
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#3 Posted: 17:15:31 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter1 Spyro and Cynder moved into there new home. They moved from the dragon temple to the valley of avalar,(ware they saw the hermit). The gardians, new it was time, they were old anough, and they thought it would be safer, but it wasn't..... but i'll get to that later.... It was only 6 mounths since they defeated Malefor.Spyro was full of emtions, happy, sad, frustrted, angry, and the one he didn't know he had...love. Cynder was the same, she was worried about Spyro, he lost almost all of his straenth, from the battle. Cynder coudn't understand how he lost his straenth, he, Spyro, THE purple dragon lost steanth, Cynder was fine, achally she had 2 new abillitys,(they still go to the temple every day to train) Shadow wind, and poisinstrike. Shadow wind was a mixture of well, shadow and wind, and poisinstrike, was that she could make her whole body full of poisin so when she meelee the enamy would have 10 times the pain then they uasally would. Spyro had 2 new abillitys he just didn't know it.Cynder was woundering if spyro herd what she said at the end of the battle.
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#4 Posted: 20:50:57 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter2
Cynder didn't think that, but Spyro was right it's just a dream.... wasnt it?
At the Temple
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------There might be more later on today. I hope you like it so far
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#5 Posted: 22:28:56 12/10/2009
this is a good story butyou should really make it clear who's saying what in your dialog.
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#6 Posted: 22:33:17 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: torok
I know i have to work on alot in this story, i just type and dont go back to check to see if i put a Spyro said or a Cynder said or a whoever said. P.s you can pm me for request in what you want in the story, and i will think about it.
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#7 Posted: 00:16:16 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter3 Spyro went to go see Volteer, he was waiting for Spyro.
It was a letter. The letter read:
Spyro was balling now, but he was releaved, like a part of his sadness was just lifted, he felt lighter then a feather. He never felt so happy.
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#8 Posted: 22:01:43 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter4 Cynder was in her training, learning how to make a meelee more powerful. Sparx was being the pain he is, and Spyro was still balling. A puddle was surronding him now, they were tears of pain, tears of sadness, and tears of happiens.Spyro finally stoped and desided to go for a walk, since he was to week to train. It let him have time to think.He was thinking about Ignitus, his dream, Malefor, Sparx, Cynder. "Cynder" Spyro thought, he couldn't explain how he felt for her, he never felt this way for someone before, every time he saw her he was happy. He wonderd for a moment, is this the way Cynder felt, was it love?
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#9 Posted: 00:01:43 14/10/2009
I read it! Its cool! yet happy and sad!
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#10 Posted: 00:53:59 14/10/2009 | Topic Creator
ThanksChapter5 Spyro found a torqoise cristle shaped in a heart, he thought Cynder would love it.Cynder found Volteer, Volteer told Cynder, Spyro was on a walk, so Cynder went to go find him. She found him close to there home.
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#11 Posted: 22:50:24 14/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter6 THUD Cynder hit the ground, black that all she could see. "Spyro" Cynder wisperd into the black. She herd,she herd.... water? Was she really hearing water?
"CYNDER NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Spyro yelled. Everything went back to normal as if it never happend. Spyro was panicking, Cynder was under his feet and he couldn't do anything about it, what if she sufficated, he wished he told her how he felt.
Cynder started to walk to see if she could find a way out, when all of a sudden,there was light everyware. From lightbulbs? How could lightbulbs get down here? Whare would they get the electricity? Cynder kept walking, to see if she could find the water, if there was any. The noise was getting louder and louder, she could feel the mist on her face. She kept walking when... "It's beautiful down here" Cynder said to her self. There was a waterfall with a pound surronded by rocks, huge flowers, and palm trees, she never saw a place so beautiful.There was some lindworm dragons and knucker dragons, some of them swimming in the pound, Cynder thought lindworms and knuckers were extinct. It was like she was in a unknown world._________________________________________________________ anyone still reading and NO i didn't copy Cinderlover I have the dragonology book.
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#12 Posted: 01:07:16 15/10/2009
I like it, and I don't mind, even if you accidentally do copy me, I not saying you were. I wonder what happened to , and what about ?
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#13 Posted: 22:04:35 15/10/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks Chapter7 Spyro went to go see the gairdeans to see if they could do something. "Theres no way she still alive" Cyril said to Spyro, the other two stared at him like he was a nutjob. " I know how we could get her out, after all I'm the gaidean of earth. But we don't have much time" Terrador said."No time to explain now, tell you on the way thare, now, go! go!" Terrador yelled at everyone. They were on there way Terrador was explaining now " Me and spyro will use earth sonic boom while Cyril uses uses ice shards and Volteer will electric blast at the place Cynder went under"
Cynder was walking toword two adult lindworm dragons and a knucker, they seemed to think that they were hallucinateing, when they saw Cynder. One of them said "Who are you". "My names Cynder, whats yours". "I'm Lori lindworm, this is my hasben, Aurther lindworm, and this is our freind Chole knucker" Lori said."Ware are we"Cynder asked Lori. "Were in the underground paradice"Lori explained. "I see why you call it that" "yes, kids come meet Cynder" "your, your, a european dragon" Lori's two kids said they stared at Cynder. "DON"T BE RUDE, sorry Cynder, this is Draco my youngest, and this is Sandy my daughter. Draco is 10 and sandy is 15"Lori said "I thought european dragons were extinct" Sandy said. "That funny, i thought lindworms and knucker dragons were extinct" everyone started to laugh. "The last one to the pond is a rotten egg"Draco yelled while running to the pound, Cynder and Sandy ran after him.Cynder was haveing fun but she missed Spyro.____________________________________________________Hope you liked it. I'll try to get anther one tonight im assuming that Spyro and Cynder are european dragons. anyone reading?
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#14 Posted: 22:29:19 16/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter8 It went black again Cynder was getting a headache from how dark it was when a dragon yelled"Oh great, just great, the power went out again this is the second time today" and another said" we need a electrcian" "I could fix it" Cynder said without thinking "Have you gotten experience" Aurther said. "well i've fixed a catapult before" but before she was with Spyro she hoped she could do it with out him. "Good enough, i'll show you ware the problem is" Aurther said "it's pich black in here and i don't have fire breath" Cynder said. "I have fire breath " Auther had fire blasting out of his mouth, but it was so dark Cynder could only see his face. "Ok show me the way." Cynder said walking toword Aurther. Aurther coudn't reply but he started to walk, Cynder followd. When they got thare Aurther stoped blasting fire to say"Cynder I don't know how but I think yo.." he was cut off by Cynder "Thanks.But if you blast fire again I can figer it out, because before you talked i saw a glims of it and it looked like the catapults control system" "your are a smart kid"Aurther said before he blast fire again,"Thanks,oh this is really easy i can fix this in no time at all" Cynder fixed it and then they went back. Every one ways cheering for her. "Why is every one cheering for me?" "Because we never had someone who could fix the lights, well since the end" Chloe said "Ok, let me get this straght, i fix the lights and everyone cheers for me, and me and Spyro saves the world from total destruction, and we don't have anything, I really don't care but thats umm... just a... plane..." Cynder was cut off "You saved the world there no way" "I can prove it since you guys are under ground did you see a purple and black dragon in core before the explosion" "I did" "i did" now tuns of dragons were saying i did. "thare's your profe im a black dragon and Spyro's a purple dragon" Cynder went to go see Lori, and her kids"Cynder did you really save the world" Lori asked " Yes i did but i don't want to think about it"Cynder replied "Why don't you want to think about it" Draco asked "Because i miss Spyro, can I stay at your place for the night"Cynder was trying to pull back tears but she couldn't. "Well ofcourse dear" Lori said. "Thanks"Cynder walked off to lori's house.______________________________________________________Thats a long chapter.Is anyone still reading?
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#15 Posted: 23:26:54 16/10/2009
Cool! I like it! Keep going!
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#16 Posted: 23:29:31 16/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok but it might be in a hour or so
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#17 Posted: 00:51:37 17/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter9 Cynder was Crying now she was in a nest that Lori and Aurther maid for her. "Cynder are you ok?" Sandy asked "No,*sniff* I...I miss *sniff* Spyro *sniff* *sniff*" Cynder said. "I've been meaning to ask you who is Spyro?"Sandy asked "Spyro is *sniff* Spyro is... is...*sniff* my...*sniff*" Cynder didn't want to say the one she loves to Sandy."he's *sniff* a really *sniff* close freind" "Oh ok" Sandy walk away she new Cynder wanted to be left alone.
" But Terrador shouldn't blast all my elements instead of one" Spyro said. "Why didn't i think of that, yes Spyro you should, It would take less time"When they got thare Spyro ran to the spot and started to used all of his abilitys."Spyro don't, your still week if you go to fast you wont be able to use them later" Cyril said." BUT CYNDERS UNDER THARE IF SHE DOESN'T GET OUT SOON SHE COULD SUFFICATE" Spyro yelled a Cyril with tears in his eyes. "Cyril right use your abilitys carefully" Volteer said "BUT...BUT...CYNDER UNDER THARE"Spyro yelled at everyone" And were going to get her out as soon as possible, just start useing your abilitys but use them wisly were all to use our abilitys were going to get her out soon i promise. NOW EVERYONE START BECAUSE IF WE DON'T SHE COULD DIE SOON" Tereador said. Every one started.Sparx came and said "I got some other dragons to help us" "I never thought you would do this for Cynder"Spyro said with tears of joy and sadness. "I may not like her but I don't want to see her die, but i didn't do it for her i did it for you"Sparx said "Thank you so much Sparx" "Don't menchin it...................seriously"Sparx said "I wont" Spyro said with a small smile on his face, he couldn't belive that Sparx did that for him, but he knew he did it for Cynder too.
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#18 Posted: 21:11:34 17/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter10 Sandy was walking to the king of the underground paradice "Young one what brout you here today" said the king "Theres a new female dragon down here, a european just like you"Sandy replied "What's her name" "Cynder" "Cynder!!!!"the king yelled "Yes, king and shes crying about an guy name Spyro" "Spyro!!!!!" the king yelled, then he said, under his breath"There alive" "What did you say" "nothing, nothing" "Please dont hurt her shes my freind, my best freind, I just thought it would be important to say to you" "you did the right thing and trust me I would never hurt her"the king replied.Sandy went to go see if Cynder stopped crying. When she got to Cynder nest she was gone then found Cynder and Draco playing tag. "Hey, can i play"Sandey asked them "Sure but... tag your it!!" Cynder taged her and ran away. When they were finnished playing Sndy asked" Cynder can you swim" "No, no one every tought me how to" "We can teach you, can't we sis" Draco said "Ya, lets go to the pound to start giving her lessons" Sandy said "Ok lets go" Cynder said.Cynder was swiming like she was a expert. They were having fun. Cynder really liked Sandy and her faimily, they were nice dragons, lived in a nice place, but she missed everyone......... even Sparx." Hey Cynder want to go on a tour of the underground tunles" Sandy said. "Yes" Cynder replied.______________________________________________________ Is anyone still reading.
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#19 Posted: 21:55:30 17/10/2009
I do! Also you might want to stop using 'Cynder' so much.
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#20 Posted: 20:27:33 18/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry The next chapter will be in 2 hours or so.Sorry for the loung wait.
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#21 Posted: 21:51:12 18/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter11 Everyone was trying to get Cynder out, even Sarx was digging. "Spyro you take a break, we have alot of dragons helping us, and you need to get steanth if you want to help later on" Terrador said "Ok" Spyro replied "HEY, what about me, you guys get to use a fire breath or somthing, I have to dig with MY bare hands" Sparx complaned "You can take a break to Sparx" Spyro said, rolling his eyes.They went for a walk. They talked about life but Sparx was almost falling asleep, bored to death by what Spyro was saying.Sparx then said "What was your dream about" Spyro was suprised that he asked that, he thought that Sparx didn't care."it was about Cynder getting..... getting killed" "Oh".They kept on walking they finnaly decided to go see Hunter. "Hi, Hunter how'v you been" Spyro said "Fine"Hunter replied with a serious exspeshion on his face. "Hunter whats wrong" Spryo asked "Cheif prawless, died and i've been elected as the new cheif" Hunter replied "Well thats great Hunter" Sparx said "Yes..... Well it would be if i didn't travle alot, and ware the cheif goes everyone goes.I dont want my faimly and freinds to have the danger i have everyday" "Well thats not good" Sparx said. "Hunter why don't you tell them that" Spyro said. "because they don't know the danger i go through, and if they new, they would make me stay in Avalar" Hunter said " Why don't they choose Meadow or someone Meodow would be a good leader. Oh Sparx we have to go now or the gairdeains will yell at us, sorry Hunter we have to go"Spyro said "Good luck" Sparx said.
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#22 Posted: 22:57:03 19/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter12 Spyro and Sparx ran back. Then Spyro felt something hard on his foot he went to go see what it was, it was the torqoise heart cristle, he compleatly forgot about it. Sparx saw it he was thinking "Oh my god, he does love her............Im all alone" then he said "whats that?" "It's nothing"Spyro said, snaching it away so Sparx couldn't see it, even though he already did "Hey, did you know it's the same colour as Cynders eyes and it's the shape of a heart" Sparx said, Spyro was thinking "Does he know, oh great now the blaber mouth is going to tell everyone I bet he's going to tell Cynder as soon as she gets out, and going to bug us more then he already does" then he said "Oh really, anyways it's time to go or else th.." He was cut off by Sparx" The gairdeans will yell at us i know i know" Then they left, without saying another word. When they got thare Terrador said" were almost thare i can tell" every one got to work. Spyro got enogh steanth he used his convixsty. Then everyone heard the rocks falling..........__________________________________________________________ Is anyone reading?
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#23 Posted: 21:48:58 21/10/2009
I AM I AM!!! I LOVE IT!
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#24 Posted: 22:11:05 22/10/2009 | Topic Creator
THANKS Oh and I wont be able to write chapters as often because i'm stating to have alot of homework.
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#25 Posted: 00:18:05 23/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter13 Cynder was in the tunles with Sandy. They were walking in a tunle that talked about the underground paradice's past, and how it was all like a unknown world to outsiders there are very few of them who get chosen to come down. Sandy then said "lets go back, and take a short break to swim, then go back to the other tunles" Cynder agreed, then they went back. When they got thare Sandy went to the top of the waterfall then yelled"Hey,come up here it's fun going down the waterfall!!!" " Ok!!!" Cynder said with exsitement. When they got up thare, Sandy went down first then Cynder, but when she went down she got tons of cuts and brouses. "Are you ok!!!!" Lori yelled "I..I'...m....bl...ee...di..n..g a..lo..t" then she fanted she herd a fant "This is all my fault.....". "Oooow" Cynder said sitting up "Your alive!!!" Draco said "ya, ooow" "O thank god!!!" Lori said with relife "Why does evrey thing hurt?" "You went down the waterfall and you broke right wing and infront left leg" "thats why i'm bandegd up, wares Sandy I want to go in the rest of the tunles" "But your hurt you just fanted" "so, i've been in worse danger, plus it would be a good so i can get used to walking with this leg" "well im not your mom so i cant tell you what to do so you can go" Lori said. They were in the tunles when Cynder said "Ignuitus?!?!"_____________________________________________________________Is anyone reading, do you like it?
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#26 Posted: 01:44:11 23/10/2009
I don't LIKE it, I LOVE it!!
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#27 Posted: 11:00:20 23/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks, the next chapter will be tonight
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#28 Posted: 21:09:01 23/10/2009
Hurray!
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#29 Posted: 23:03:35 23/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter14 "Ignuitus?!?!" Cynder said "Cynder?!?! your realy here, Sandy was right and yes young one" Ignuitus said "b...b..bu..but I thought you were dead, and how did you know i was here" "I can anser that" Sandy said "You see Ignuitus is our king, and i reported that you were here" "What?!?!" "Yes i'am the king of the underground paradice, but thats not the only reason i new, i'am the cronical"
The rocks were falling "We made it though!!!!!" Spyro yelled in relife "Thats odd, she isn't here, and there's a tunle, lite up with lights?" Cyril said "It looks like Spyro is the only one that can go through the hole" Terrador said "Well, good luck Spyro I hope you find Cynder" Volteer said "Let's go Sparx" Spyro said. Then off they went to go find her. They saw Lori and said "Have you seen a black dragon her nam..." Spyro was cut off by Lori "Her name is Cynder right, and you must be Spyro" "Ya, how do you know" "Well two reasons, your the only eruopean dragon here, and Cynders been crying over you, and she went thourgh that tunle" "thank you...." "Lori, my names Lori" "Thank you so much for your help, Lori" "your welcome" Spyro and Sparx went off into the tunle._________________________________________________________I hope you like it, there's only going to be another chapter after this one but the sequel will come in maybe less then a week{Maybe a day after the next chapter is finnished} the name of the sequel is: The legend of Spyro the dragons eye
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Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822 |
#30 Posted: 18:13:26 24/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter15 Cynder, Ignitus and Sandy was talking, when Spyro and Sparx came in. "Cynder!!!, and Ignius?!?!" Spyro said "I thought you were dead" Spyro ran up to him,with tears of joy."No im not, Spyro did you get the later i wrote" "yes" "thats good" The five of them were talking for a few minutes when..."Theres nothing you can do" Ignitus said with a evil smirk. "What are you talking about Ignitus" Ignitus was turning black to red again like he was, turning evil and back again.While he was red he said "RUN,NOW" then when he was black he said"There's nothing you can do about it" Spyro then realized..."It was you in my dream!!!" Ignitus was staying black now "Thats right, young one, the Ignitus you know is no lounger here, and your all going to die mwhahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "I'm going to end this evil in you once and for all" Spyro said. He was going to kill Ignitus.__________________________________________________________I hope you liked my story, the sequel will be in two days.
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#31 Posted: 20:42:04 26/10/2009
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh....How can l make my own story?
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#32 Posted: 21:22:47 26/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok you think oof a story if it's Spyro realated(or fan dragon) you place it here ware you found this story go to topis list for fan fiction go to the top and click on, Create New Topic, then from thare on it's prety easy.
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