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#1 Posted: 21:31:03 26/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok this the seqeal to the legend of spyro the unknown world I hope you like this story and ENJOY I'll start soon
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#2 Posted: 22:18:54 26/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter1 Spyro was thare thinking of the past, the battle against Cynder when she was evil, the battle against gaul. the battle against Malefor, and Ignitus, training him, his father figer, and after all the training with Ignitus, Spyro was here going to battle him, Spyro was going to kill Ignitus. But it wasn't only Spyro, it was Cynder and Sandy too. Spyro couldn't belive that this is what it came to. Cynder was in pain from the waterfall, Sandy was confused but she was going to help them.......no matter the cost. Spyro was scared that, because of the battle, he'll never be able to tell Cynder how he feels, for her.They were all thare ready, to the last man standing. "YOUR ALL GOING TO DIE!!!!" Ignitus said They all started to fight. Spyro and Sandy blasted fire at Ignitus then Cynder blasted poison.Cynder got hit, she could'nt doge because of her leg and wing. "CYNDER!!!" Spyro yelled and picked her up, Sandy then went into the air, all three used there abilitys. It went on for hours, they didn't know what was going on around them, they were all focused on the battle. Sandy went to go see the gairdeans.Cynder was now unconcase, Spyro and Ignitus were still battleing, Ignitus was almost defeated, he was on the ground when he said "are you really going to kill me your father figer, the only one who trusted you, the only one who ever thought of you as a son" "I can't do it, i can't kill you" "well that good because I can" Ignitus got up, he was about to kill Spyro when the gairdeans came, Terrador, Volteer, and Cyril all blasted there ability a Ignitus. Then he was down, not dead, but down, he turned red again.______________________________________________________________Do you like it?
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#3 Posted: 16:45:41 29/10/2009
Yeah! you started! This is sooo good, Cynder19000! but you may want tto use the words, he, she, him, her, his, hers, ect. BUT other than that AWESOME!
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#4 Posted: 23:29:54 29/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks and Sorry about that I make it up as I go and don't think of puting any of that, I'll try to put it in more
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#5 Posted: 00:02:55 30/10/2009
I understand.
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#6 Posted: 21:20:39 30/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter2 The gairdeans were talking about what just apend "What are we going to do with them" Cyril asked "I don't know" Terrador said "Well were going to bring them to a hospital" Volteer replied. "That's what were going to do with Cynder, but what about Ignitus?" Terrador said "why don't we just leave her down here for the under ground dragons to take care of" Sparx mummbled to himself nobody hered but Spyro. "Sparx!" Spyro said."Were going to bring him to the hospital too" Volteer said "We can't. What if he turns evil again, he will kill every one in sight, were going to have to finish him off" Cyril said "NO!!!" Volteer and Spyro yelled at the same time "But were going to have too" Terrador said "Why don't we bring Cynder to the temple and she'll be under treatment, and Ignitus can have a highly protected chamber, under our prtection at the temple, ware he'll also be under treatment" Spyro said "That's a great idea but, we can't have Cynder at the temple, she going to have to be in the hospital" Volteer said "Why" Spyro said "Because since she's already been to the dark side, If she to close to Ignitus she might go back, plus she'll get better help at the hospital" Cyril said "Ok, but we are brining Ignitus to the temple" Spyro said "Yes we are" Terrador said. On that note they went off. Terrador, Volteer, and Cyril was carying Ignitus on their backs while Spyro, Lori, Sandy, and Darco had Cynder on their backs, Aurther and Sparx followd behind.
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#7 Posted: 22:21:44 30/10/2009
cool! I LOVE IT! It is awesome!
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#8 Posted: 19:24:46 31/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter3 They just got to the temple, Sandy's faimly were talking about ware they were. "It's so.....so....so beutiful out here" Sandy said "So much fresh air" Lori said "We should get all our freinds to come here" Draco said "Spyro you droped some thing" Lori said. Spyro thought, he wasen't carring anthing but Cynder what could he of dropped, the toqioz heart cristle. "I'll pick it up for you" Aurther said the pisked it up. "We have to stay here and put Ignitus in a chamber you guys can go to the hospital Spyro knows the way" Terrador said. Then they went, when they got thare every body was staring at them. "Lindworm dragons" a mole wisperd another said "Who care about the lindworms, thay have Cynder and she's hurt!!!" "we have to get her to a chamber FAST" a mole yelled "Get red life crstles!!!" another mole yelled then they all started rushing trying to find the best life cristle around. Spyro was happy that every one was working so hard to heal Cynder, because she needed it.she had wing and leg from befor and she might of broken more bones from the battle.she was FULL of cut and bouser also some of them from befor and the batle, she was unconchase she was still breathing but not hard. She was gaging. Every thing was ready for her when she got to the chamber.
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#9 Posted: 19:06:34 01/11/2009
cool!
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#10 Posted: 19:10:18 01/11/2009 | Topic Creator
the next chapter will be in 1 and a 1/2 hour
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#11 Posted: 19:17:26 01/11/2009
cool, can't wait!
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#12 Posted: 19:47:10 01/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter4 The left Cynder at the hospital to let her heal. They were all talking "So did you and Cynder really save the world" Sandy asked "That they did" Sparx anserd for Spyro "Oh i almost forgot here's the cristle thing" Aurther said handing it to Spyro "Thanks" Spyro said "So what were the big dragons talking about when they said Cynder might go back to the dark side" Draco asked "The big dragons are gaideans, and Cynder was currupted by evil when she was a egg then i saved her from the evil spell that was over her" Spyro replied "so she was evil at one point, but it was only a spell so couldn't she be at the temple" Lori said "Ya she was evil but she couldn't help it, and they don't want to take any chanses who knows the spell might not be off yet, so she could still turn evil again if she exsposed" Spyro explaind, then Sandy was smirking, Spyro was suspicious of her. When they got to the temple Ignitus was in a chamber, with lots of red life cristles, he was turning from red, to black, to blue. When he was red he stayed still like he wasn't going to wake up any time soon, but when he turned black he would twich and say "you not going to get away with this" , and when he was blue he would stay still but he would say" It can't NO!!!", then he will be red again as if nothing happend.________________________________________________________He turns blue because he's supposed to be the chonical.
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#13 Posted: 19:57:20 01/11/2009
Hmm, Ignitus turn evil, interesting. |
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#14 Posted: 20:03:26 01/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Did you just realize that, it happend in the last story.
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#15 Posted: 22:44:35 01/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter5 Spyro was living in the temple again since his home was almost destroyd, so was Sandy's faimly so they could keep an eye on Cynder, plus they could explore the place they were in. Spyro liked Sandy......at first, he was starting not to trust her he felt like there was something wicked with that kid. Something just didn't fit in right, she never did any thing to make him feel that way, exsapted when they were coming back from the hospital. That smirk it was....evil, he had to know what she was thinking. Spyro went to go see Ignitus. "Hey Ignitus can you hear me, it's me Spyro how are you" Spyro said. Ignitus made a grunting noise. "Ignitus are you ok" He made another grunting noise "Are you hungry" Spyro went to go get some food. He went into the chamber and gave it to him. Ignitus made a grunting noise that sounded like he was saying thank you so Spyro said "your welcome i'll be back later" Spyro now went to go see how Cynder was doing.
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#16 Posted: 22:58:03 02/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter6 On his way to the hospital he met up with Hunter. "So hows the new cheif thing going on" Spyro asked "Better i gues" Hunter replied "Are they going to choose Medow as the leader instead of you" Spyro asked "I havn't gone around to asking yet" Hunter said "you might want to ask soon or you'll be the leader" Spyro said "I was going to after you and Sparx left" Hunter replied "so why didn't you" Spyro asked "well i went on my newest adventure........and I wished i never did" Hunter said he seemed to be very worried, he kept on talking "when i left, lots of weird things were apening some tribe members disapeared, some are back and said they had no idea what happend, others......others are still not back, we fear the worst and when i was on my adventure I......I scenced evil following me, I have a feeling some sort of evil is going to rise again.......soon" Hunter said slowly "I've been feeling the same way" Spyro said "All i can say is that you wach yourself, oh i forgot to ask is Cynder out is she ok?"Hunter said "She alive she badly hurt but shes alive, i'm going to see her at the hospital do you want to join me?" Spyro said "I'll be glad to"Hunter replied. And off the two of them left.
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#17 Posted: 03:21:57 04/11/2009
*claps* PC!
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#18 Posted: 20:54:03 04/11/2009 | Topic Creator
What does 'PC!' mean? and thers going to be onother chapter soon
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#19 Posted: 15:22:35 05/11/2009
oh, please continue is what 'PC' means, Cynder 19000. Also I can't wait!
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#20 Posted: 21:49:23 06/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter7 When they left, Spyro felt like he was being wached, and every time he looked, he eather saw nothing, or a yellow blur. He was woundering what the heck was going on. He didn't tell Hunter, he felt like if he did tell him, something terrible would happen. Hunter was woundering what was roung with Spyro, he kept looking back. So he asked him what he was looking at, Spyro didn't replie. When they arrived at the hospital a mole asked them if they could get red life cristle for Cynder, they agreed. When they got to Cynders chamber there was a mole thare, then Spyro said "Heres the life cristles" "Thankyou so much Cynder really needs them badly " the mole said "what do you mean?" Hunter asked "Well shes not getting better........just worst" The mole replied. You could see Spyro had tears in his eyes he was about to cry. He ran out of the hospital he wanted to be alone, Hunter and the mole were very confused. "whats with him?" the mole asked "I don't know"
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#21 Posted: 23:04:21 06/11/2009
Oh boy, poor Cynder! Please Continue. *gulp*
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#22 Posted: 00:46:04 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter8 Spyro was headed for the woods. He sat down a started to cry "Cynder!.....don't leave me.....please don't die.............please!" He yelled into the woods it just he herd nothing but the birds. Then every thing got dark, the wind was picking up, and he herd somthing in the destance.He saw something run past him. "Hello?" Spyro said. The thing ran past, and again then started going around Spyro, the thing satarted to breath fire, Spyro started to breath earth sonic boom, but it just hurt him more, the thing was was going around him to fast so his attack just went right back at him. He got a glimse of the things tail and thats all Spyro needed to see he knew it was a dragon....it was yellow. He knew it was the thing that was following him. "WHAT DO YOU WANT!!!" Spyro yelled at the dragon. The dragon just disapeard,every thing went back to normal as if it never happend. Then he saw Sparx coming towards him. "You look like you were just attacked" Sparx said "did you see it" Spyro said in a painic "What are you talking about" Sparx was very confused. "I take that as a no" Spyro said. "anyways Hunters looking for you" Sparx said "Why i just saw him like an hour ago" Spyro said "he said something about you running out of the hospital" Sparx said "Umm... ok i'll go see him now" Spyro said. Spyro and Sparx ran out of the forest to go see Hunter. On the way thare the met up with Sandy..........
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#23 Posted: 18:34:37 07/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chater9 "Hello, boys" Sandy said "Hi Sandy, we can't stay we have to go see a Hunter" Sparx said "What do you want" Spyro said "Oh nothing but...." Sandy said, then she said some words and Sparx looked like he was a zombie. "WHAT DID YOU DO TO HIM!" Spyro yelled at her "Oh, i just ipnotized him" Sandy said "Why?!?" Spyro said "I just wanted to talk to you alone" Sandy said "about?" Spyro asked "Well, I know you, love Cynder, but do you really, why do you love her" Sandy said she was circleing him now, she was slowly ipnotizing him "I know you don't, I know you love me, just look at you, your staring at me as if you have a HUGE crush on me" Sandy said, Spyro was compleatly ipnotized now. "Give me the cristle you were going to give to Cynder" Sandy said , Spyro handed it to her, she said some words and gav it back to Spyro."Thankyou Spyro, now go put this on Cynder's neck brace, just like you were going to do anyways" Sandy said then, they were out of the ipnotize "WHAT DID YOU DO TO US!!!" Spyro yelled "Oh, nothing" Sandy said with a evil smirk "Comeon Spyro no need to pick a fight" Sparx said "Fine" Spyro said giving the evil eye to Sandy, she just smiled at him. Then they left, when they were out of sight, the sky was getting dark, and the wind was picking up. "Master are you here" Sandy said "yes Sandy" the master said "It was a good idea to stalk him then attack him, you were right he was vonrible to ipnotize, but when will the time be right" Sandy said "Soon, and then it will be time to make our move" The master said. Then every thing went back to normal.
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#24 Posted: 00:55:24 08/11/2009
Nice, I like it. Please Continue!
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#25 Posted: 15:24:47 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!Chapter10 They got to Hunters tribe it was like a ghost town if Hunter wasn't thare, Hunter was in shock that his hole tribe was gone and forgot to ask Spyro why did he run out of the hospital. "Whats going on" Spyro sasked "Everyone in the tribe disapeerd, just like befor....but worst" Hunter said "What... what happend" Sparx said "I don't now" Hunter said. Hunter and Sparx were taking, so Spyro snuck away. He was headed for the hospital. When he was close to Cynder's chamber he heard two moles talking "Shes going to die in a matter of days, hours maybe" a mole said "it could even be a matter of minutes, for all we know" the other mole said. Spyro knew they were talking about Cynder, he could'nt bare to listen any more. So when he got to Cynder's chamber he put the cristle on her neck brase, and said "don't leave me please don't, leave me" then he gave her a kiss on her cheak then left, he didn't look back for fear that when he did he would'nt see her breathing.
"Master, I ipnotized all the cheatah tribe member but....." Sandy said "but what?" the master said " well,exsept for one, the one they call 'Hunter'" Sandy said "GO GET HIM WE WONT BE ABLE TO CARY ON WITHOUT HIM, HE THE MOST IMPORTANT" The master yelled at her "Yes master, also when will we make our move" Sandy asked "short after Cynder gets the cristle on her neck brace, NOW GO!" the master said, then Sandy left.
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#26 Posted: 18:25:31 08/11/2009
Nice chapter Cynder 19000, Please Continue!
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#27 Posted: 20:49:43 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter11 Spyro went to the temple, since it was almost bed time, he saw Volteer beside Ignitus's chamber, he said"My dear old freind, what have you done to yourself" Then Ignitus turned blue, and his eyes were a pure white, then hesaid "Evil is going to rise again and....." then he turned black "and there nothing you can do" then he turned red again. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN" Spyro yelled. Volteer stared at him "ah, Spyro you gave me a fright come here" Volteer said Spyro walked towards him "Do you know what hes talking about" Volteer asked "No but I think he's right" Spyro said "But he's been bableing on all day no one belive what he says since hes been magerly brain danaged" Volteer said "no hes right" Spyro said "how can he,he's been MAGERLY brain damaged every thing he say is just nonscence" Volteer said "There must be a reason why he turns blue and balck there must be" Spyro said "it's a medical condison thats all, oh and it's time for bed" Volteer said "oh fine" Spyro said then went to his chamber.
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#28 Posted: 20:59:25 08/11/2009
Cool!
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#29 Posted: 21:07:28 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks oh and i'll try to get another chapter today but i might not be able to.
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#30 Posted: 23:20:14 08/11/2009
I like that chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
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#31 Posted: 23:53:50 08/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter12 The next day, Spyro went to go see Cynder. When he got thare he came to a surprise. "Cynder! your alive!" Spyro said "it's not like i was going to die or anything" Cynder said "Achally you were, you were very close to dieing" a mole said "I was? I feel great today" Cynder said "it's a mirical you lived" the mole said "When will she be able to come out" Spyro asked "Well she doing so good she can come out today, all we have to do is rebandege her wing and she'll be out, i'll go get the bandage right now" the mole said. The mole bandeaged her wing and then they left. "lets go to the temple" Cynder said "I achully want to go in the forest" Spyro said "why?" Cynder asked "just because" so they went to the forest when Spyro said it was time to rest then they did. "So, why did you bring us here" Cynder said, she was achully happy. "because i want to be with you...alone"Spyro said then Cynder said "Spyro, did you put this on my neck brace" Cynder showed the cristle to Spyro. "yes" Spyro said. Then Cynder felt somthing touch her tail, Spyro was rapping his tail around hers, he looked into her eyes and said "I thought I was going to lose you. I thought i would never be able to tell you that........ I love you" Spyro felt foolish for saying what he said, what if he herd her roung at the end......what if....... "I lo...." Cynder was cut off by, Spyro flying away. "Spyro ware are you going!" Cynder yelled. He didn't anser.
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#32 Posted: 00:40:45 09/11/2009
Awwww, *sniffle* pl- *sniff* Please continue! *sobs*
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#33 Posted: 23:25:46 09/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter13 "SPYRO!!!" Cynder yelled, she was going to fly after him, but she couldn't because of her wing. She ran to the temple "Cynder your out good to see you again........are you ok?" Cyril asked. She was panting, "Spyro...flew....away...and I...don't know why" Cynder said "we must go look for him" Terrador said. It was getting dark, Aurther and Terrador were partners, Volteer and Draco were partners, Cyril and Lori were partners, and Cynder and Sparx were partners. "We all have to split up, you and Sparx can go ware you last saw him, and the rest of us will go by air now GO" Terrador said. When Cynder and Sparx got to the forest, Sparx said "So, why do you love Spyro?" "I don't love him" Cynder said she was liying, she was also covering the cristle on her neck brace. "i'm not blind, i already saw the cristle and you blushing, but seirosly why do you love Spyro" Sparx said "I don't know, I just do.......and you better NOT bug us i hate it when you do, and i'm not going to stop loveing him because of you" Cynder said "I was going to bug you but you know i don't really mean it, and I....I...I hate to idmit it but.....I'll suport you two" Sparx said "you will" Cynder said " Sure, he needs someone in his life, but i'm going to lose him as a freind though" Sparx said "what do you mean" Cynder said "well your going to be his girlfreind and he's going to want to always spend time with you" Sparx said "That not true.....tell you what i'll make sure he spend time with you, I promise" Cynder said, really meaning it "you'll do that" Sparx said "only if you don't bug us"Cynder said "ok" Sparx said. Then Cynder heard Sandy in the bushes...........
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#34 Posted: 23:33:05 09/11/2009
I like the chapter. Please Continue.
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#35 Posted: 23:50:27 09/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter13 "Cynder come here" Sandy whisperd then pulled Cynder into the bushes. "what do you want" Cynder said "whisper, i want to say......." Sandy said then she said some words then Cynder turned into dark Cynder, but she wasn't compleatly evil yet she said "why did you turn me evil" Cynder asked "because you must join me and master" Sandy said."but thats not me anymore" btu Sandy said some more words and then Cynder was compleatly ipnotized. "whats our first task" Cynder asked "you must make all the gairdeans, and my faimly, turn to the dark side.........even Sparx, now go" Sandy said, so Cynder went to Sparx's side and said "so, Sparx how are you" Cynder said, Sparx looked at her then, Cynders eyes, and the cristle started glowing then, Sparx was dark Sparx. Sandy got out of the bushes then turned her self into her dark form and said "get every one you know, but not Hunter he's mine, and DON'T GET SPYRO" Then they all split up to get all there freinds and faimly.One by one they all turned into there dark form.........
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#36 Posted: 23:56:36 09/11/2009
Awesome, I can't wait for the next part!
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#37 Posted: 00:26:10 10/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter14 Spyro was headed for.....well anyware. He was tierd so he went into a cave to sleep. Then next day, he was talking to himself "why did i tell her.............NO WHY DID I LEAVE!, whats roung with me, I have to go back, but Cynder must hate me now. Wait what was she saying befor i left, she said Spyro ware are you going, no befor that........she was about to say I love you. Why did i leave i have to go back" Than he took off.
Sandy was about to go get Hunter. "Who go's thare!" Hunter yelled, Sandy just stared in the shawdows, then when Hunter turned his back she stricked. "Your going to come to the dark side" Sandy said, she was playing mind tricks on him. "You going to come here and......" Sandy said. Hunter moved to sandy's position, then Sandy moved "I'm over here" Sandy tunted .She did it for a few minutus until she thought he was angry anuf. "COME OUT OF THE SHADOWS WARE I CAN SEE YOU COWERD!!!!!" Hunter yelled "Fine" Sandy came out "Your just a little dragon" Hunter said "yep" Sandy said inecently "why don't you come closer" Hunter said, Sandy was walking towards him starting to have a evil face. "Things don't seem they way they are" Sandy said with a smirk, and befor he could say anything, her eyes started to glow then, Hunter to, was turned into his dark form.
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#38 Posted: 01:23:20 10/11/2009
That was cool, Please Continue.
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#39 Posted: 01:24:31 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter15 "Hello old'freind'" the master said. Ignitus turned blue, "you can't do this.....NO......NOOOO!" Ignitus yelled. I think you need some reminding on who side you on" the master said, then hit him. Ignitus turned black "Master, what brought you here today" Ignitus said "It's time to carry on the plan, Ignitus" the master said "oh yes, the plan is every thing rea....." Ignitus was starting to turn red again "Here are the dark life cristles" the master said, the master put them neer Ignitus, then he turned black again "is every thing ready, is every one turned to there dark side" Ignitus asked "even the cheetahs" the master said "Great, when will we make our attack" Ignitus asked "as soon Spyro gets back" then master said "good" Ignitus said. Then every one came into the temple ready to attack...............__________________________________________________________Do you like it?
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#40 Posted: 01:28:33 11/11/2009
yes I do! Please Continue!!
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#41 Posted: 22:53:39 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter16 Spyro was on his way back untill he herd Cynder yelling. He went to the directoin he herd the call. It was at the temple. When he landed Cynder was thare waiting for him....."Hello Spyro" Cynder said with a smirk, but Spyro didn't noitice it. "Hi Cynder, why were you yelling" Spyro asked "Just come" Cynder said, leading him to the biggest room in the temple "Hi every one!" Spyro said then, saw Ignitus "Ignitus your alive!!!" "Are you ready to fight, you pathidic weakling, you don't even noitice your out numberd" Sandy said "what are you talking about" Spyro asked "Oh, you don't even noitice ALL your freinds and faimly, are agenst you, you don't noitec that every one have turned to the dark side, once again your all ALONE, not even Sparx is thare to help, NOBODY'S HERE TO HELP YOU NOT EVEN THE ONE YOU LOVE!!!!!" Sandy said, Spyro was close to tears, then he said "Cynder your...your....." then he growled and then said "IT'S TIME TO FIGHT!!!!!!" Then Spyro was burning every one, earth, ice, the electrisity. Then he saw Ignitus turn blue for a slight moment, but in that slight moment he was trying to help him he also said "SPYRO THE WEEKNESS GO FOR THE EYES" then turned balcka again. Spyro was blasting fire at Cynder, when he saw somthing hit him he couldn't breath............____________________________________________________________That was the last chapter for this story, the sequl will be called: The legend of Spyro the darkest secret, it will be out in a day or two, I hope you liked this story.
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#42 Posted: 02:20:37 12/11/2009
That was interesting, I can't wait for the sequel.
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