darkSpyro

This is the sixth in my seris.
1.The legend of Spyro the unknown world
2.The legend of the dragons eye
3.The legend of Spyro the darkest secret
4.The legend of Spyro the battle begun
5.The legend of Spyro the new world

I hope you like this story as much as the others. I will start, when my art contest is over.

Yay! I can't wait.

Neither can I!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
Yes, I am hyper today.

I can tell!

is it rely that obvious?

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the Death of things

Wow... That title is fail...

what?

"The Death of Things" - Imagination involved... 0%

So, you not reading the story, i only expect the people that have read the others to read this one, like CinderLover, she's been reading since the first one. and doesn't care what the title is. And it's called that for a reason anyways. I don't understand why you even care, it's my story i will call it what i want it's not like im selling it, and trying to get money off of it. I rather not argue about it, it's just a title.

You know, she is right, we should stop fighting about it and just wait for the good story.

Quote: Cynder 19000

So, you not reading the story, i only expect the people that have read the others to read this one, like CinderLover, she's been reading since the first one. and doesn't care what the title is. And it's called that for a reason anyways. I don't understand why you even care, it's my story i will call it what i want it's not like im selling it, and trying to get money off of it. I rather not argue about it, it's just a title.

All I'm saying is that it would be better if you specified what "Things" was... If it was something like "The Death of ____" and then you put something rather than "Things"... "Things" could be anything and it kinda leaves me wondering... "What things?"

Oh, thats what you meant. Well that is kinda the piont, 'Things' is what brings the supence on what is 'things' is it Spyro, is the world, is it....there so many options. It just makeing people wonder what 'things' is that will make a reader wonder what it is. As my teacher says, and i quote:Quote:

"Leave the readers guesing. A good auther tells you what it is throught out the book. A great auther leaves unknown plot holes that will, make the reader keep on reading. Also make the reader guess, and ask questions that will, or will not, be answered thought the book. So a title is just makeing you geuss, and is just the beginning of a hole story, that will bring lots of differnt problems in the book."

I know it's not the best of titles, but that all i could think of, also it does have something to do with the book. Also my teacher achully reads the story's i put up on here, and see what my progress is in becomeing a writer.

I know what your trying to do, but you could have used a better word than things...

I did say it wasn't the best of titles didn't I? But i do see ware your getting at though.

Quote: bionicle2809

I know what your trying to do, but you could have used a better word than things...

inb4flamewar.

Anyways, I think it keeps people in suspense, at least it isn't more vauge, like 'The death of Stuff' I support you CYnder 19000.

Thanks. And that was the point for the suspence. Well im not trying to start a flame war, but he does have a point im not going to say he doesn't. But so doI.

Quote: Cynder 19000

Thanks. And that was the point for the suspence. Well im not trying to start a flame war, but he does have a point im not going to say he doesn't. But so doI.

Yeah. Lol, I now you weren't trying to start one, just it looked as though it could grow.

Not with bionicle2809 he usally keeps thins under cotrole....i think...

Quote: Cynder 19000

Not with bionicle2809 he usally keeps thins under cotrole....i think...

Yeah, but still, other people can come... (nawt saying who. Just some people aim to create flame wars, then flee the scene of the crime.)

Yeah, I mean, Just because the title is not the greatest thing in the world, no offense, does not make it a bad story, and suspense is a good thing! It makes people want to find out what the things are, it is a hook!

No offence takeing. That's exactly what i wanted to do.

Phew, I am SO glad I did not get anything wrong! I did not want to make an incorrect statement!

I generlly don't take offence to titles.

hm, I respect that, but seriously, why do people get so excited over a simple title!?

I don't know. *shrugs*

*shrugs*

Well, that was... interesting...

Well i don't think it's over yet. B2 still has not come online since then, after he does, then it'll start up again.

Actualy, I was just gonna end it there...

Quote: CinderLover

hm, I respect that, but seriously, why do people get so excited over a simple title!?

I wasn't, I was just making a point... We're all intitled to express our own opinions and beliefs...

yeah, I guess you are right sorry...

@B2.Oh, well i was roung then.

@CinderLover. He is right thare.

I KNOW THIS FACT!

Quote: CinderLover

yeah, I guess you are right sorry...

Apology accepted...

Quote: CinderLover

I KNOW THIS FACT!

sorry i didn't see the post under his.

Bionicle2809: thank you.

Cynder 19000: It is alright.

So bionicle2809, since every one made such a big fuss over the title, are you going to read the story when i start posting the chapters?

I might, but I've never been really into fanfics since I stopped writing my own...

Well, that is too bad, why don't you start another? It is rely fun! I have written a few myself.

Quote: Night Owl

Quote: bionicle2809

I know what your trying to do, but you could have used a better word than things...

inb4flamewar.

Anyways, I think it keeps people in suspense, at least it isn't more vauge, like 'The death of Stuff' I support you CYnder 19000.

It could be "The Death of A Whole Bunch of Crap and Whatnot"

Quote: CinderLover

Well, that is too bad, why don't you start another? It is rely fun! I have written a few myself.

Meh, I'm too busy making The Destiny of Spyro: The Dark Spirit

Quote: BlinktheCookie

Quote: Night Owl

Quote: bionicle2809

I know what your trying to do, but you could have used a better word than things...

inb4flamewar.

Anyways, I think it keeps people in suspense, at least it isn't more vauge, like 'The death of Stuff' I support you CYnder 19000.

It could be "The Death of A Whole Bunch of Crap and Whatnot"

Cookie, i don't want a flame war.

Quote: bionicle2809

Quote: CinderLover

Well, that is too bad, why don't you start another? It is rely fun! I have written a few myself.

Meh, I'm too busy making The Destiny of Spyro: The Dark Spirit

Mmm....sounds intresting. What is it about?

Here's a good one:

"The Legend of Spyro: Something Signifigant Happens"

Cookie, please stop.

EDIT:why are you trying to start a flame war?

I'm not trying to create a flame war, I'm just suggesting that the title could be a lot worse.

YEAH BUT YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO BLURTING OUT RANDOM THINGS THAT ARE NEGATIVE TO THE WHOLE THING!! oohh, wait did i have caps lock on? oops, sorry I was not trying to yell...

Quote: BlinktheCookie

I'm not trying to create a flame war, I'm just suggesting that the title could be a lot worse.

Oh... Sorry for thinking you were trying to make fun of me, because of the title. I'm really sorry cookie.

That's okay.

To me pretty much everything is an opportunity for good-natured humor or an opportunity to state an opinion, so I often offend people.

Speaking of titles, how about this:

Tiger Attack
written by Claud Balls

50 Yard Dash To The Outhouse
written by Willie Makit
illustrated by Betty Wont

hm, okay..... I think they could have made better titles!