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#51 Posted: 17:29:06 20/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 14 Voices??? I collapsed there and then on the balcony. I could have been mistaken for dead, not twitching a muscle, scarcely breathing. But even with my eyes closed something seemed to take shape as a dark atmosphere around me. I was on a rock, a rock that was hovering in a space-like world. It was very perculiar. There were spiked platforms with clumps of old books bigger than Ignitus on them, and drifts of stone whirling around the space. What was very strange was the high turquoise lakes, the water wasn't flowing off them, as such, but water glided up from the ever-ending darkness and into the lakes. I heard a sensible, old voice that boomed through every platform, book and lake. I didn't know whether it was echoing or whether it was in my head. 'Do not be frightened, young dragon. I have meerly summoned you for little reason. I trust you are aware that the Night of Eternal Darkness is nearly among us, do you not?' "Who are you? What do you want!?" I whispered fearfully. "I do not request anything, young dragon, I wish to warn you. The Ever-ending Darkness will fall and I trust you to stay close to you'r-" I woke with a start, eyes bulging. I didn't hear what he had to say. But who was he? _________________________________ Thanks people, I was in a bit of a rush. x
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#52 Posted: 08:58:22 21/08/2009
ROCK!
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#53 Posted: 08:09:25 22/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 15 Fight! I hauled myself up and stood jerkily on my feet. It was a dream, wasn't it? I flew off the balcony and through the shadowy leaves of the lofty trees around me. I glided softly to the ground and padded towards the heart of the forest. I could see something in the distance, a shady figure with hooked fingers and a long snout, with bulky shoulders. It's head jerked and it's eyelids flashed open, exposing a pair of gleaming red eyes. I whisked behind a stumpy tree trunk, my heart pounding. But it was too late. The siloette lurched to the trunk where I stood and grabbed me, it's claws scraping inbetween my scales, cutting my skin. I shrieked, whirled round and spat out a blast of fear breath, the sound of a piercing scream echoing around. But the creature, now recognised as a bloodthirsty ape, wasn't fazed. It rolled out of the way and dived for me, slashing my face with its claws. Blood spurted from my mouth as he sliced it. I had no choice, I spat hard. The familiar purple beam flew out of my mouth, but somehow the ape dodged it swiftly. I spat again. And again. The ape leapt and clawed my neck, leaving it bleeding, then he plucked at my wings, tearing the wing-skin. He slashed my eyes, he scalped my tail. "Why are you d-doing thi-ss!" I croaked hoarsly. "I was sent, by Malefor's armies!" the ape hissed. "What! I'm Malefor!" "WHAT!" The ape tore away from me and ran for it, I could see the figure getting smaller and smaller until it was just a black smear. He ran. Leaving me. I felt my eyes roll like marbles in my head. They closed. I wondered if they'd ever open again...
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#54 Posted: 08:13:36 22/08/2009
NICE!!!!
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#55 Posted: 10:22:22 22/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Thankies
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#56 Posted: 11:31:44 22/08/2009
MOAR PLZ!
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#57 Posted: 18:31:08 23/08/2009
MORE PLZ keep on going PLZ
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#58 Posted: 01:35:21 24/08/2009
plzplzpzlpzlpzlzplzplzplzplz keep a going...:B
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#59 Posted: 19:10:38 28/08/2009
Come one!KEEP GOING!
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#60 Posted: 12:41:17 01/09/2009
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#61 Posted: 12:47:59 01/09/2009
WHAT HAPPENS? DON'T LEAVE ME ON A CLIFFHANGER FOREVER! MORE PLEASE! Brilliant story
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#62 Posted: 18:54:41 01/09/2009
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
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#63 Posted: 20:41:24 01/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I thought no one was reading anymore.
Chapter 16 ...Nightmare... Help! "Do not be frightened, young dragon," came the familiar voice. I tried to oped my eyes to see the weird void world, with the thick, floating, leather-bound books, but my eyelids were too heavy. "Easy for you to say," I mumbled. "What's wrong with me?" "You were attacked, by Gaul," the voice told me. "What? Gaul got on with me, sorta," I murmured, my eyes stayed firmly closed. "Not the young Gaul you are familiar with, but your servant, in the future, the chronus crystal went wrong, you sent him to attack Spyro, but the type sequence went wrong and you ended up years back, and Gaul, believing you to be Spyro, the next purple dragon, attacked you by accident," the voice explained. "What is Spyro! Gaul is not my servant!" I cried weakly. "I can't turn into a monster like that, I don't kill!" "You won't mean to, but our destiny is decided, there is nothing we can do about it." "SHUT UP!" I shouted, then my eyes prised themselves open wide. "Mahleefor!" Airess was above me, her pale blue scales glinting. My eyes were like little slits in my face because of the sharp, gleaming white light. Airess spread her feathery wings and draped me in shadow. "Are shou okaay, no?" Airess asked. "You were dreaming," Calaknight said. Her thoughts flickered. "Ok, nightmare-ing. You ok Mally?" I wasn't wasn't wasn't ok, but I lied because I was so scared. "Something attacked you, Malefor, but how? You've summoned EVERY element now, how could they beat you?" "I-I don't know," my voice was meek croak, rasping my throat. "The Everending Darkness does things to us, dreams, illusions, drain of power," Terrador mumbled. Calaknight's eyes rolled while my eyes shut once again, I couldn't see, it was just a dark black chamber where all the voices and fighting was shut out... I thought more, my head began to throb so hard it was like someone was physically banging my temples, like the armies - my armies - were hammering upon the door to my black chamber, and there was no way to keep them out... "...you think everything has cause, don't you? You never think about chance, you know, the random decision made by some God-Forsaken force in the universe, fate isn't real," Calaknight spat. Fate isn't real. The voice's words echoed in my head. Our destiny is decided, there is nothing we can do about it...
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#64 Posted: 02:13:44 02/09/2009
MORE!
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#65 Posted: 08:28:53 02/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll write some more soon
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#66 Posted: 08:30:30 02/09/2009
thanks!
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#67 Posted: 12:33:21 02/09/2009
Brilliant!
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#68 Posted: 14:02:18 02/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thankies!
Chapter 17 I flexed my arms and leapt up shakily. I couldn't stand them all looking at me. I ran out of the room, past the emerald pool and away into a tight cupboard. I jammed myself in tight; it made me feel just a tiny bit safer. Calaknight called for me but I kept my mouth shut. She wasn't fazed and butted right throught the door. "Malefor, you know very well that this flipping door is a jamming one, what if you got stuck?" Calaknight said. "I don't care, you'd be doing me a favour," I hissed. " Don't be like that. What's up, eh?" "Calaknight..." "What, chum?" "I'm...I'm dreaming things," I whispered. "I thought it might be that," said Calaknight, lying casually beside me. "Nightmares," I said, resenting her attitide to the situation. "They're getting worse, a voice talks to me in this world, a world with huge floating books and stone platforms." "Yes, some people get that each time, I'm one of them, it's peculiar, isn't it?" said Calaknight vaguely. My skin beneath my scales flushed scarlet. "The voice told me something," I hissed, it seemed to have slipped out of my mouth, I couldn't stop it. "Yes?" "It told me that when I was older I would send back Gaul, an ape I know, to kill the next purple dragon named Spyro, only the Cronywhatsit Crystal goes wrong and Gaul sees me, and attacks me by accident!" My words blistered my lips, my cheeks flamed so hot at my stupidity they felt scalded. "I-I didn't mean," I stammered. "No, of course you didn't. The Everending Darkness forces us to believe, hear, see the worst. You have heard what you fear most, tis not true, Malefor," Calaknight whispered, standing up. She was saying all the right words but the glint in her eyes had dulled. She didn't trust me. ------------------------------------------- Hey, has anyone noticed that Volteer's being unusually quiet?
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#69 Posted: 15:40:24 03/09/2009
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#70 Posted: 20:28:50 03/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll write some more soon, but I have three fanfics to keep writing at the moment and I'm not one to leave them un-edited, so, you know.
But why don't you check out Starlight
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#71 Posted: 12:00:57 05/09/2009
nice chapter cant wait 4 the next one
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#72 Posted: 12:17:50 05/09/2009
Great fanfic! I'd love to read more.
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#73 Posted: 16:37:26 05/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 18
Decision I kept out of everyone's way for the next few days, though Calaknight seemed to steer clear from me. I hated her for it, but hated myself for saying those things. It looked like Calaknight had kept quiet, because everyone nattered to me like normal, but she didn't take me for training anymore. It was quite depressing. Ignitus was too serious, Volteer never shut up, Cyril was pompous, Terrador kept jabbering on about warriors and Airess' voice drove me up the wall. I started to feel out of place and awkward, also, my dreams were getting worse. The dragon introduced himself as the Chronicler, at last. He taught me about my powers, more than the guardians could ever teach me. I learnt fury's to the max, my melee and flight improved dramatically. "You must use it for right, young dragon, but...but you won't." "I will! I wish you'd shut up," I spat, gliding freely around the void world, perking on top of the slippery leather books. "One cannot choose their future." "I can." "It is already chosen." "That's why I can change it now I know!" "It is impossible." "Shut your face. You're just a voice in my head, you don't mean anything." I peered at the inky, olive sky. It was spread in delicate swirls in many deep shades. "So then, genius, tell me the wonders of my wicked life," I hissed angrily. "You will be harnessed into the Well of Souls, a place you created yourself, the spirits of your victims resting in there for you to bind to your will, Nina, Missy-" "MISSY! YOU LIAR!" "You didn't kill her intensionally." "I didn't kill her at all, you little git." "Also Calaknight, who you destroy in battle with her, she is so distraut after you manipulate her child to your will-" "SHUT UP YOU STUPID CREEP!" I awoke, sweating. My head hurt and I curled up on the ground. I wasn't sure I could hold it in much longer. I had to make a decision. I thought for hours, the pain in my chest expanding. I felt I was going to burst. I had to tell them.
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#74 Posted: 17:24:22 05/09/2009
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#75 Posted: 20:11:14 05/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Tomorrow
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#76 Posted: 00:13:09 06/09/2009
EPIC fanfic! Pleeaasseee make more! This is really good!
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Thanks!
Chapter 19 The Truth I padded slowly in the room with the bright green pool whirling round and round. The Guardians were clumped together over the honey coloured brick rim, peering into the liquid. They didn't seem to notice me. I opened my mouth, but my voice felt sticky and hoarse. "Uh," I croaked. "I-I need to tell you all something." Ignitus waved his tail at me in irritation. "Not now, not now," he murmured. I stiffened. "I need to. Now." Ignitus turned round, unbothered by my tone. I felt anguish brimming as no one seemed to be taking me seriously. I realised that all along I'd just been this little purple thing that was different to everyone, so they'd took in this little saddo and trained me. I was a tiny little thing that shot mulitiple breaths out of my face, at least to them, anyway. "Look, I-I've been having nightmares," I stammered. "Bad ones, really really bad ones." Calaknight looked like she'd swallowed a lemon, I saw her mouth 'Don't!' but I ignored her. "They say, that in my future that I'll become evil, wicked. I create a place called the Well of Souls where my..." I swallowed. "My victims rest." I winced as I said the names I had heard, apart from Calaknight...and Missy. "I killed someone called Nina, a-apparantly, and...and...and, oh God...Missy..." Ignitus' eyes flooded as wide as they could go. "Who said this, Malefor?" he asked quietly. "Someone called.......the Chronicler."
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#78 Posted: 15:03:46 06/09/2009
Gwahhhhh...?
SOHMAHGAWSHKEEEEEPGOING!
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#79 Posted: 17:00:42 07/09/2009
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#80 Posted: 01:54:20 08/09/2009
GOGOGOGOGOGOOOOOOOOOOOO.....8D
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#81 Posted: 04:58:54 08/09/2009
NICE!
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#82 Posted: 19:43:06 08/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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Chapter 20 Rejection Each guardian exchanged glances, Ignitus looked like he'd just been force-fed lemon-peel. "I...It's just a dream, isn't it?" I croaked. Ignitus' eyes flickered. "I'm...I'm afraid not, Malefor...The Chronicler is an ancient dragon of time and wisdom, who truly can see into the future, and...and that is your future..." My eyes rolled round each guardian, who shared identical expressions of dying trust, apart from Calaknight, who couldn't meet my eyes. "I'm sorry, Malefor..." Ignitus said meekly. My throat dried, so much I could scarcely swallow. "What do you mean?" I whispered hoarsly. "Cyril...please escort him to the exit," Ignitus demanded quietly. Cyril stepped forward and stared at me with his outlined eyes. Calaknight put her foot in and crawled up to Cyril. "Who are we to judge? Dreams do things to people, and that's the bloody tune you've been singing for weeks on end. Why should we boot him out?" "If what the Chronicler said is true...then we are all in danger..." Ignitus said. He hesitated. "He must leave." "NO!" I shouted, then spat harder than I had ever spat before. A jet of battering purple light fired from within my jaws and crashed through the wall, making honey shade rocks tumble from the walls. "I TRUSTED YOU!" I shrieked. "I THOUGHT YOU WERE THE RIGHT PERSON TO TURN TOO! AND THEN WHEN I TELL THE TRUTH YOU SPIN ROUND AND KICK ME RIGHT IN THE TEETH!!!" Calaknight seemed to be flaming beneath her scales. She glared at Ignitus and called him a bad word. She turned round to me. "This lot may leave you, but it'll take more than some stupid Voice of Doom to tear me away," Calaknight announced. "Come on kiddo." I turned round to the guardians, considering whether to say farewell. But Calaknight hooked her tail round the root of my horn and tugged me along before I could register the expressions upon their faces. I left with Calaknight. My biggest mistake... ___________________________________________________________ That is it for Malefor's Childhood, people. But, however, as it is a loose end you shall see a new fanfic named Malefor's Adulthood some time or later.
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#83 Posted: 23:42:38 08/09/2009
Ooooohhh!!! Calaknight called Ignitus a bad word! Naughty naughty!
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#84 Posted: 20:36:08 11/09/2009
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Please! Please! More!
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#85 Posted: 20:38:00 11/09/2009
NICE!
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#86 Posted: 20:46:04 11/09/2009
I'm exited for Malefor's adulthood now. What about Malefor's teenhood?
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#87 Posted: 11:29:23 12/09/2009
Yay, that was so ausem!!
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#88 Posted: 16:50:33 12/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#89 Posted: 17:12:35 12/09/2009
Lol. . I can't wait for the next story.
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#90 Posted: 17:18:15 12/09/2009 | Topic Creator
It's up
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#91 Posted: 23:47:46 15/09/2009
Yes,Malefors teen hood....
But I would rather you keep going on this...I want to know what CalicaKngiht(sp?) does to Malefor!
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