Hi everyone! I am starting to make a fanfic in here!
My characters in it so far:
Singe: Malefors daughter, and the main character of this story.
Lee: Ignitus father.
Irena: Ignitus mother.
Inferno: Singes mother.
Story:
Singe is the daughter of Malefor himself, but she don't like it, and is not proud of being child to the dark master himself. As an 8 year old, Malefor tells her that he murdered her mother, because she tried to stop him from taking over thw world. Upset and angry, Singe attacks her own father, but fails and is almost killed, until a mystical stranger appears out of nowhere, and takes her with him. She gets brought to the dragon realms, where she meets a little red-orange dragon that she ends up having a great amity for.
That was the story line. Shall I continue it?
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#1 Posted: 15:37:31 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 17:57:35 11/10/2008
Why can't it be a boy? Cuz girls rule?
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#3 Posted: 18:25:09 11/10/2008
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#4 Posted: 18:44:27 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: New parents.
It was a cold and rainy night. A purple dragon was together with his wife in a cave they where living in. His wife, was a blue ice dragon. Her name was "Inferno" and she was pregnant. The purple dragon looked out of the window, into the rainy night. "What gender do you think it gonna be, Malefor?" Asked Inferno. "I don't know. I just hope the hatchling will be healthy." He turned and walked over to his wife, laying down beside her, kissing her lips gently. She smiled and kissed him back. "I love you, Malefor!" "I love you too, Inferno!" Then, they heard someone knocking on their door. It opened and revealed an old light grey dragon, also known as "The Chronicler." He smiled at the two young lovers. "How is it going with the child, Inferno?" "It going very well, Chronicler! If I am right, I shall give birth to it in this night!" The Chronicler nodded lightly and turned. "I wish you two the best future. Goodnight, young dragons!" With that, he left the room. Malefor and Inferno gazed at each other lovingly, starting to near each other, and began to liplock. They stayed like this for some minuts, before falling into a nice night sleep. Later that night... Inferno woke up, sweating all over. She could feel her body hurt, like it was gonna eksplode. She looked down on her stomach and felt on it. It was time. She quickly waked her husband. "Malefor! It is now!" Malefors eyes widened. He quickly stood on his feet. "I go get The Chronicler!" Little later... Malefor was standing outside his and Infernos room. He waited for The Chronicler to come out. The door suddenly opened and The Chronicler was seen. "You can now come in!" Malefor didn't hestitade and quickly rushed into his wife. Her stomach wasn't big anymore. He walked over to her. She looked tired and happy at the same time. He could see tears of joy flowing down her cheeks. "Has it hatched yet?" She nodded. "Yes. We got the must beauthyfull daughter, my love!" Malefor bend over and looked down at a light purple dragoness, with tiny horns and very cute purple eyes. He started to share tears of joy himself. "Shes a cutie! Can I hold her?" "Of course! It also yours!" He took his little daughter in his arms and smiled down at her, stroking her cheek. "Welcome to the world, my beauhtyfull daughter!" To be continued...
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#5 Posted: 08:01:34 12/10/2008
Thats really great Crush!
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#6 Posted: 08:03:41 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I upload it when I come up with ideas for it
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#7 Posted: 08:13:31 12/10/2008
yey!
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#8 Posted: 08:19:35 12/10/2008
If you make updates put markings where you've done that so we know where to continue.
Gondfrepa, Lore Mistress: not bad by the way. ^Thats like an academy award comming from her.
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#9 Posted: 08:21:37 12/10/2008
Markings?
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#10 Posted: 08:22:51 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#11 Posted: 08:30:43 12/10/2008
What are markings?
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#12 Posted: 08:32:48 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I am not quite sure
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#13 Posted: 08:40:04 12/10/2008
me too...
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#14 Posted: 08:49:47 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: Singe.
The next day, was the day for Malefor and Inferno to give their new born daughter a name. They where both sittin outside their cave, enjoying the sun. Inferno was sittin and feeting her daughter, while Malefor stood up and looked around. It was all quiet, until Inferno began to spoke. "It about time we get a name for her, Malefor." Malefor nodded, and sat down beside his wife. "Any ideas then?" He asked. Inferno started to think. "You know, my mom had such a beauthyfull name. She was called "Singe." Malefor smiled and kissed her cheek. "I like that name, sweetie!" "Then Singe, it is!" Inferno said, smiling down at her daughter. She kissed her forehead gently. To be continued... I know it a short chapter, but the others will hopefully be longer!
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#15 Posted: 09:46:39 12/10/2008
Good, your doing great!
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#16 Posted: 13:16:13 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you
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#17 Posted: 13:55:29 12/10/2008
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Cause they can kick your butt? |
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#18 Posted: 14:56:31 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Lol!
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#19 Posted: 17:31:40 13/10/2008
This story is COOOOL!
I lv it!
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#20 Posted: 18:15:54 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you! I continue when I gets ideas for chapter 3
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#21 Posted: 18:16:45 13/10/2008
nice!!!
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#22 Posted: 18:18:34 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks
![]() Chapter 3: Friends or Foe? In a big dark fortress, miles away from the Dragon Realms. It was a huge dark fortress. Lots of apes was walking around it, either guarding it, or just walking around, being bored. Inside it, was a huge throne room. On the throne, sat a giant ape. He didn't look like the other apes. He had a green glowing crystal in his left eye. He had a huge helmet on with horns. Compared to all his soldiers, he was much bigger and scarier. He had a scar across his face. He was no other, then "Gaul", king of all the apes. Next to him, stood another monkey, wich face you couldn't see, because of his helmet covering everything, but his eyes. He was Gauls Assasin. "Something troubling you, sir?" Gaul nodded. "Like this, we have no chances against those pathetic dragons!" The Assasain nodded. "Especially not with that purple dragon on their side!" Gaul suddenly looked at him, surpriced. "They have a purple dragon!?" "Yeah. Didn't you know?" "Damn it! Now we never have a chance against them!" "I am not so sure of that, sir." "What do you mean?" "This purple dragon called Malefor, just got a daughter! If we gets her, maybe we have a chance, if we can get her on our side! She is a purple dragon like her father!" "Yes, of course! Thats an excellent idea! As soon as it is night time, go out and bring her to me!" "I will, sir!" He bowed for Gaul, and wandered of. "Now, we apes... SHALL FINALLY HAVE OUR REVENGE!!!" To be continued...
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#23 Posted: 18:20:11 13/10/2008
hmm... hey do u know who i am?
this could be intresting! i had a dif name on site ![]()
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#24 Posted: 18:47:14 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I know who you are
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#25 Posted: 18:51:28 13/10/2008
This story rocks!
i cant waot for chapter 4!
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#26 Posted: 03:43:41 14/10/2008
OMG! Go Crush! Go Crush!
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#27 Posted: 15:17:05 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you
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#28 Posted: 20:31:48 14/10/2008
i like your story so far!
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#29 Posted: 15:00:49 15/10/2008
Awsome!
![]() Oh and just to ask, would you read my fanfic, it's called Born in darkness... PLease read!
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#30 Posted: 16:00:47 15/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Sounds cool! I check it out sometime
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#31 Posted: 23:31:28 18/10/2008
Lol, Crush. Doing some more?
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#32 Posted: 08:03:51 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Yup! Just need to think about it
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#33 Posted: 15:41:15 19/10/2008
Awesome! Crush this is amazing!!!
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#34 Posted: 16:33:37 19/10/2008
Yay! More!
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#35 Posted: 19:05:59 19/10/2008
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! yeah! morez!
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#36 Posted: 19:58:43 19/10/2008
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Darn strait! |
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#37 Posted: 18:24:08 21/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: Wrong dragon.
It was night, and Malefor was sleeping with his wife and daughter. They lay just there, peacefully, unaware of the danger outside their house. The Assisian was leading a group of apes. The hided inside a bush and looked carefully at the little house. The Assisian turned to one of the apes. "You there! Go check if they are asleep!" He ordered. The ape nodded and started to sneak up to the little house. When he was close enourgh, he looked into a window and saw three dragons sleeping. After that, he returned back to The Assisian. "They are all asleep, master!" "Good! Go in and take the purple dragon!" All the apes headed in and did what they got told. Meanwhile inside. Inferno woke up to hear Singe crying. "What is it, honey? You hungry?" She took Singe into her arms and headed out to the kitchen. Malefor was left alone, sleeping. The apes started to jump in and looked over at the sleeping Malefor. "Yup! His purple! Lets take him!" They quickly put a necklace on his neck, that keeped him from using his powers. They carried him out of the window. They walked over the bush, where The Assisian where. He looked at them in anger when he saw who it was. "You fools! t was the wrong dragon!" "But master! He was the only purple dragon!" The Assisian started to think. "You know, this is even better! Lets head back to Gaul!" With that, a portal arrived and they jumped into it. Inside the house. Inferno came back, with a now sleeping Singe. But she got shocked when she saw her husband was gone. "Malefor! Where are you?" No responce. Then, she heard footsteps behind her. She turned to see The Chronicler. "Something wrong, Inferno?" "My... My husband is gone!" She kneeled down on the floor and started to cry soundly. To be continued...
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#38 Posted: 23:11:53 21/10/2008
Oh brother, I know what's happening now.
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#39 Posted: 07:20:04 22/10/2008
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#40 Posted: 08:01:52 22/10/2008
that is a great story crush keep going *chants* DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE DO MORE*:terrador
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#41 Posted: 08:35:41 22/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#42 Posted: 16:39:25 23/10/2008
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#43 Posted: 03:11:20 24/10/2008
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#44 Posted: 16:03:11 24/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I sure did
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#45 Posted: 13:55:44 29/01/2009
Please Continue!!!
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