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Chapter 1: The Crystalised Dragon
3 dragons were hunched down under a misty grotto, Lersk, Drent and Littouette. Littouette was thin, black with six horns on her narrow head and had very dark emerald scales in certain places on her body. Also dark green coloured skin under the wings. Lersk was a golden honey colour with a largeish body, but normal for a male dragon. He had four horns, 2 facing down and 2 facing up. Drent was a pale greyish white, his eyes seemed to always be in a squint, even when he was asleep. He was quite bony, even though he was male.
They were all watching a little boy dragon, Clodine. He was a crystlised Dragon, the rarest kind ever. With purple dimond scales, ruby claws, an emerald under belly, silver backspikes, sapphire wing bone (just light blue skin in the wing though), gold horns and the thing that identified him, the diamond pressed into his forhead that was multicoloured, every colour all pressed into the diamond that was so strong, so magical.
"It won't be long until they arive Littouette, I'm sorry but there is nothing we can do, they're too strong, Clodine'll be too strong in a few years, now even," said Lersk.
"Shut up! Don't make our deaths sound so close!" shouted Littouette.
There was a crack and dusty rock was falling down, then the entire rock!
"Ahhh...Clodine, what a...suprise," said a purple dragon with a grin on his face...Lerex.
Lerex was a visious dragon that had conducted the UnderEarth and many fights and wars, he was purple, he knew many breaths, like any purple dragon, his eyes were like dark red and black marbles, he had dark blue wings as well, white claws and a nasty grin that made you shudder, his back spikes were the same dark blue as his wings.
He stood still, there were many dragons behind him, he darted out and grabbed Clodine and flew off!
"No NO!" said Littouette flying up.
But they were gone, lost in a midist of darkness...

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Lerex flew down into a crack in the earth were wepons and poisons were made. He took Clodine into a dark room, with some crupled hay in the corner.
"Err...Don't put him there sir, he needs a proper bed," said an Urgen dragon.
"This is where he goes... until he is ready..." said Lerex.

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10 years later. (I know it's a long time)

"Clodine! Time to see what has happened with your breaths!" said a black dragon called Luciden.
She was 10 like Clodine and lived in the cell next to him (they didn't have muddy old cells now, they were good cells) she was black all over apart from her white claws, purple eyes and purple wing skin and she had four white horns on her head all facing upwards.
"Luciden! You know what's happened with my breaths, I have: fire, water, electric, ice, earth, wind, shadow, psychic, light, poison and fear," said Clodine breathlessly. "Is that enough?"
"You're still one short, but it can't be long till you learn it," said Luciden sighing.
"You've seen my breaths though," said Clodine. "How many more times do I need to be tested?"
"Stop asking so many questions," Luciden said irritably.
"You can't tell me what to do, you're not an adult," chuckled Clodine.
"You're going to be tested by Lerex OK!" Luciden said in a stop-being-so-irritating voice.
But they were friends.
Or that's what Clodine thought.
Clodine was oblivious to the fact he was going to be used as a war machien and be poisoned with darkness unless he found a way out...

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Clodine flew up to Lerex's chamber and gave the door a gentle push.
"Enter..." mumbled Lerex.
He walked into the pale green chamber. There was an odd damp feeling about it that made you feel like you were walking through muddy water. But still, Clodine walked to Lerex.
"Ok, lets go, I want you to melt this metal pole with your fire, fill this bucket with water in 8.9 seconds, break these walls with earth, power these lights with your eletricity-" He went on and on.
Clodine's head began to ache trying to remember it all, but he began melting and freezing things, but as he tried to shoot earth breath to knock down a wall, an odd blast of force shot out of his mouth instead, it was multicoloured but had lots of inky black and bright pinky purple in it, it had streams of blue eletricity coming out of it and it was quite blurry like when you look above the top of a candle, but it was a hell of a blast!
"Wha..." said Clodine cluelessly.
"Oh my...you breathed the best breath any dragon has ever had in the entire dragon race! Glist!" Lerex cried.
"Okay.....that's good then," Clodine said not quite taking it in.
"GOOD! Oh, this breath could kill all the forces of the Overworl....walls, this could destroy 50 walls, Glist could! It calls for celebration, we will have a celebration in the Festive Pit!" Lerex announced.
Clodine couldn't speak, he was dazzled with pride and happiness, but he did not know that he might be finding out a secret that he didn't hide or even know about...

Clodine flew down along with the other dragons, threw another crack in the already deep earth. Clodine didn't know weather it was just that he was flying down or the fact he was shrouded in oily smells that was making him feel like his head was giving in to pressure.
He landed to many faces staring at him, not nessercerilly in a nice way, more of a sly grin. But he perked up when he saw the table laid with large chunks of meat and sour berries. But something seemed strange, all the adult dragons walked away down the even deeper tunnels, and Luciden was with them! He wasn't sure his head would be able to stand even deeper grounds but he bravley followed.
He scampered down the tunnel, he really was feeling sick now but he didn't stop until he came to a steel door that had a hole in it. He listened cautiously.
"He is ready now, we can get him inked with Labble poison, and send him to destroy the OverEarth," said Lerex.
"But...But after," murmered another dragon.
"Ah yes, he'll be destroying everything so...we'll kill him after he's done what he's done," said Lerex.
"NO!" shouted Clodine.
He gave a blast of Glist and a large amount of rock cracked and fell! He flew out...out into the OverEarth...

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The OverEarth wasn't what Clodine had expected. He expected it to be muddy brown and misty because of the way Lerex had talked about it. But it was lush with flora and fauna. The trees stretched over him even as he flew higher.
His throat was dry as they had nothing but dry berry juice that made you shudder and your head go fuzzy at the celebration, so he decided not to drink it.
He saw a glimps of something, he wasn't familliar with water (not drinking water) but whatever it was it was running. It looked a bit like lava but was quick and clean, unlike lava that is lumpy and heavy. He had an idea, it looked like one of his breaths, so it couldn't hurt him, could it? He took his chance and flew down to it and took a long drink. He had a feeling he'd never felt before, freshness.
He heard something behind him, a rustle. Four horns were poking out of a bush behind him. He turned round, his heart racing and got ready to fly. But as he began to move his wings, but something darted out and bit his tail.
"YEOWW!" he yelled.
"Come back to the UnderEarth!" said a familliar voice as it let go of his tail.
"Luciden?" Clodine said startled.
She shuffled.
"What, come back, so you can poison me and kill me...And I thought you were my friend..." said Clodine angrilly.
"Please! He'll kill me if you don't come!" Luciden said desperately.
"You don't have to come back, you could go away," said Clodine.
"Oh please! Can I come with you?" she asked pleadingly.
"You what?" he said shocked.
"You heard," mumbled Luciden.
"Oh...Oh fine..." he replied negitively...

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Chapter 2: The Second Meeting
It was now raw black and Clodine's eyes were starting to droop and he beginned to look cross eyed with tiredness. He glided down into a misty grotto moss growing over it. He walked down through the mist into the grassy beds. He curled up, Luciden on the oposite side. He was awoke, half asleep he heard something.
"Oh...Oh, LOOK! It's Clodine, it's CLODINE! It is!" said something, a dragon.
"My God...how?" said another.
He woke up and stared at the faces. One dragon was thin, black with six horns on her narrow head and had very dark emerald scales in certain places on her body. Also dark green coloured skin under the wings. The other was gold with pale yellow wing skin and 4 horns 2 facing down and 2 facing up. Another apeared, squinting, greyish and bony with grubby white horns. He recognised them for some reason.
"Clodine, it's really you isn't it?" said the squinting dragon.
"Wha...Do you know me?" questioned Clodine.
"We know you, we have to explane..." said the golden dragon.

"I am Lersk, this is Drent and Littouette. When you were just born, we were hiding you, but they found us..."
"Who, this is wizzing too fast, slow down...Are you sure...but why do they want me, Lerex?" gabbled Clodine.
"Urgh...You're strong but not brainy," said Luciden. "You're a Crystlised Dragon, the strongest dragon in the entire universe."
"She's right," said Drent. "They wanted you to kill the OverEarth."
"But what do you three have to do with it?" Clodine questioned.
"That night you had only just been born, we are all siblings and Littouette..." Lersk stopped. "Littouette is your...your mother..."
"What?" he said startled "We don't even look alike! First I find out I'm special, three people I barely know looked after me and you claim she's my mother!"
"We don't look alike because Crystlised Dragons only have a 3% chance of being born, I got lucky, seeing that egg crack..."
"I don't want to...but I believe you..." Clodine said. Then he remembered.
Once, when he was supposed to be asleep he heard Lerex talking to a guard outside his cell, he could remember him saying:
"Ok, Litttouette, lucky cow, managed to have this child, be we have him now, in a few years Lersk, Drent and Littouette will be dead, with the rest of the OverEarth. Who is the father of the child? Oh, him, takes 3 years for the egg to hatch, she and him are young parents even now..."
"I believe you..." said Clodine.
"Oh just before we set to flight, here's my good friend Markend," said Littouette as an Ice dragon stepped in.
Markend was a pale blue all over but had dark blue diamond shaped marks on his legs. He had light blue wing bone and white wing skin, he had a light blue face, white horns and green eyes.

They flew up. Markend hovering behind.
"Oi Mark, keep up will you!" shouted Lersk.
"I don't want to, I'll stay behind if I wanno!" Markend shouted back.
"Quit nagging," said Littouette.
"Urgh..." said Lersk.
Then he began to whisper. He only caught a few words.
"Why......deffend.....all..the...time.......he......gave you....."
What did he give her?
He flew without a sound out of him. Then he flew up to Luciden and whispered to her:
"Is it just me or is Markend strange?"
"Oh Mark. He's strange yeah I think he fanceys your mum that's why," she said.
They flew up through a crack between the clouds in the sky, to reveal an extrodinary place, a castle, black bricked and towering above them. As they entered it, Clodine saw a huge White Orb in the middle of the huge room. There were rooms in the wall with silk covered cushions and rugs with a cage for a door. He looked into the Orb curiously and saw white voids, he stared for a little longer until he saw a white ghostly version of Luciden, and him standing there crying, but he was in colour... He stared for too long and his eyes stung so he backed away shaking his head, his eyes watering.

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Clodine couldn't sleep as comfey as he was. He wanted to talk with his mother, that he didn't know anything about. He flew out of his cage to his mothers room. He stopped and looked at his mother she was asleep, and Markend was there too! Their tails were entwined and they were quite close. His mum was awake! She smiled and cuddled up to him. Before Clodine could stop himself he shouted:
"JUST WHAT IS THIS!!!"
Startling them and making them brake apart.
"Err... We're going... Why don't you and Luciden go out flying," Markend stuttered.
He flew off angry and literally dragged Luciden out of her room.
"What's with you?" asked Luciden.
"Mark is- LUCIDEN!!!!" yelled Clodine as something grabbed her.
He swooped down into the darkness, and through the cloud of black fog. Then something grabed him. It looked like some sort of Terradactill. It swooped down into a crack in the earth, he knew where he was going...

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The thing carried them down to the fuggy conditions. He spluttered as it had seemed to have got smokeier. They were obviously desperate for wepons now he knew the truth.
He threw them into Lerex's chamber, them damp feeling met him again.
"You can't resist this power? Why are you taking me, why do you want to kill the OverEarth?" Clodine shouted.
"I want to destroy it...because...I will tell you...
Long ago, there were two metourites, they clashed, creating the OverEarth, and, the UnderEarth. The two finders of the Earths, were Lerexien and Lerskind. Lerskind suggested that they somehow push the UnderEarth up to level with the OverEarth, so he could rule it, But Lerexien suggested the opposite OverEarth to UnderEarth, so this caused fights, the dragons equally matched so the fight lasted for long long long years, and contiued to this day..." he said wickedly.
"What? So this is just for land?" he yelled.
"I can win though, oh yes.But I don't need you...I need you..." said Lerex glaring at Luciden.
He suddenly lunged out, fansening a chain round her neck, there were chains also going into the celing, he suspected out to the OverEarth.
"Ahh, let me go, let me GO!!!" Luciden shouted.
Suddenly a black current began to come from her and she began to loose her blackness, she began to become white, watery white, it went on for a second too long.
"END THIS LEREX!!!" Clodine shrieked.
He darted out, and snapped the metal chain and he got a shock, as well as Luciden. They fell, together. And the air began to chill.
"En....End this Lerex..." he gasped.
"Th...Th-th-thank you...Cl...Cl-Cl-Clodine," whispered Luciden.
"Nothing can end this...This is when the OverEarth sinks in to pure power..."
"Not yet!" shouted Clodine as he swung his arms around Luciden's neck, blasted a hole in the top of the chamber with Glist, and flew out carrying Luciden's weak body.

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He flew hurridly back to the castle. It was dawn now so the sky was streaky and an orangey honey colour. he burst in.
"HELP!" Clodine yelled.
They flew down and began to try and get life into her. She coughed and awoke. Before Clodine could stop himself he hugged her. He didn't get it. He hated Luciden and wanted to thump her half the time, but for some reason he was really glad she was alive.
"What happend?" asked Littouette gently...

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"I don't actually know what happend," said Luciden.
" I d-"
"Something's going on out there..." whispered Littouette walking to a hole in the wall.
Markend was in the shadows, hidden from sight. But Clodine glared at him even so.
"Where's the flippin' sky!" yelled Markend.
"What the hell do you mean, where's the sky?" laughed Luciden.
She went and looked.
"Ahh!!!! Where is it?" she shreiked.
Clodine walked through the wooden plank door. He got a unpleasent shock. He couldn't see any clouds, stars, moons, suns, galaxys, just black nothingness!
He flew out, down, for a few seconds longer than normal. He felt a familiar feeling, like his head was giving into pressure. It suddenly eased off and he saw a dead gray rock it seemed further away, just a tiny little bit, than before.
"Hey Luciden! Come here!" he called.
He saw a glint of purple as Luciden flew down.
"Why is the OverEarth...Dead? It seems to be a little bit further away, like it's sinking," she said worried.
"That's what he said, isn't it? It's sinking to level with the UnderEarth, but slowly..." Clodine muttered.
"What do we do?" questioned Luciden as she grabbed her lolling tail.
"We stop it, but time is running out......"

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Chapter 3: The White Snake
They hovered futher down. Then a huge white winding thing flew down and hit Luciden hard in the face. She fell, down, down, down. Clodine darted after her. He landed. The white creature flew into the pit. It was long like a snake. With white bird-like wings. It had two arms with pearly white claws.
Clodine focused hard. And a great roaring blast of glist channeled out of his mouth! The white creature howled in pain and turned into black mist. Clodine looked among it.
"LUCIDEN!" yelled Clodine frantically.
Something looked at him through the mist, white eyed, very thinly faced. With a slim body, a great lolling tail and, and, and, she looked very much like Littouette, but with a purple under side, completely black scales and purple wing skin. Her wings were on long stalks, she had white claws.
"Lu...Luciden?" Clodine gasped.
"Ha ha ha!" Luciden cackled, her voice was sinister and felt like it could slice you."The White Snake has been called. Lerex knew right! It has got my true powers unleashed, I have grown! And my energy can destroy, but not you, beware..."
She darted out and started to hit Clodine, but Clodine used his many breaths to weaken her, he managed to hit her hard against the rock walls and scratch her face badly.
"Ha! Beware!" shouted Luciden "The White Snake is a ghost, he cannot die! He'll find you and unleash the calamity of you, just wait, just
W-A-I-T!!!"

(Luciden looks very very simaler to Evil-Cynder when she's evil)

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