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#1 Posted: 03:48:14 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
This is my FF but Spyro isn't the main character though and there will be strong language. Violence, Sexual themes. So Users be Advise!!! this is your warning (I would rate this story but I'm not for sure how the rating thing goes lol ; )
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
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#2 Posted: 03:49:24 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
The Legend of Sky the Primal Dragon
Prologue: Three years ago A sky blue dragon hit the ground he was cover in open wounds. He had no horns and his wings where bird-like the snow white feathers were cover in his blood. The fire in the dragon’s sky blue eye was burning brightly with anger and hatred at the blood-red dragon with the black underbelly and horns. The skies were black and stormy; an explosion like gun-fire boom across the dark skies. Lightning flash with an angry hiss before it makes the ground explodes. The icy cold rain was like daggers as they hit the sky blue dragon’s face. The ground was shaking at the planet was coming apart. The Sky blue dragon shot into the air and tackles the blood-red dragon. “YOU BASTARD I’LL ****ING KILL YOU!!!!!!” roared the blue dragon at the red The red dragon laughed, “You can’t kill me! I’M A GOD!” the red dragon laughed as if he was a psychopath. The blue dragon growled loudly, “I WON’T LET YOU GET AWAY BLITZ!!! IF THIS WORLD GOING TO BE DESTROY THEN YOU ARE STAYING HERE WITH ME AND DIE!!!!!” the blue dragon roared as he tackled the red dragon. Water, Blood, and feather rain down on the ground as the world started to split apart. Blitz’s claw went black, and strikes the blue dragon, and the claw mark that was across his chest exploded with a dark energy. The blue dragon roared in pain and he hit the ground. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! YOU CAN’T BEAT ME!!!!! I’M A GOD!!!!!” Blitz laughed evilly. The blue dragon growled as he weakly stood up. “Blitz” He growled loudly. Blitz appeared in front of him and he sent a vortex of flames at the blue dragon blasting him through a pillar of stone. The blue dragon stood up again but he fell back down. The blue dragon’s eye sight started to fade, “Da-Damn it!” He thought angrily to himself. How could he let this happen!? Was this his destiny!? To destroy the world and unable to bring down the dragon who drive him to do it!?! The sky blue dragon with the snow white bird wings slowly and painfully slipping into the black; the last thing he heard was Shade his best friend voice as he was dragging Sky to safety.
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Blayze Gold Sparx Gems: 2299 |
#3 Posted: 04:42:14 12/06/2012
Woah, that's so awesome love yours details!
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I'm wearing lots of belts..... for no reason at all ~Jinx |
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#4 Posted: 05:15:04 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Thanks ;
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Gem-A-Knight Yellow Sparx Gems: 1644 |
#5 Posted: 06:23:43 12/06/2012
It needs a bit of rewording but still very interesting! Thank you for randomly giving me the link sky! I learned a few things in detail from you xD
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#6 Posted: 12:29:58 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Your welcome i think lol JK
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Purple n Spyro Ripto Gems: 1096 |
#7 Posted: 12:54:38 12/06/2012
Coolio. Nice
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Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763 |
#8 Posted: 13:15:38 12/06/2012
Well... At least you give a '*' mark for the strong language... Anyway, nice chapter! Keep writing!
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon |
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#9 Posted: 13:31:34 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Actually the site automatically does that I think
anyways thanks
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
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#10 Posted: 13:31:57 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
@Purple N Spryo
thanks
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
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spyro and sonic Diamond Sparx Gems: 8325 |
#11 Posted: 13:33:13 12/06/2012
That was really good. The only thing I would suggest is as mentioned earlier a bit of rewording. Other then that it's amazing. I'll be waiting for more!
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#12 Posted: 13:34:21 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
thanks
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Purple n Spyro Ripto Gems: 1096 |
#13 Posted: 20:54:51 12/06/2012
Yeah the site bloches out cussing (thank you dark52)
More chaps! |
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#14 Posted: 22:07:36 12/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Yeah I notice that before I uploaded this up here lol
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Sky the Dragon Emerald Sparx Gems: 3972 |
#15 Posted: 01:55:07 23/07/2012 | Topic Creator
Hey guys don't mean to double post but here is the link I change the Prologue and all that and I moved it to this link //forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=56115
thank you for your cooperation ^__^
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Blayze Gold Sparx Gems: 2299 |
#16 Posted: 10:18:54 05/09/2012
Next chapter?
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I'm wearing lots of belts..... for no reason at all ~Jinx |
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#17 Posted: 10:47:11 05/09/2012 | Topic Creator
I discontinue this FF and Rebooted it in the link in my last post
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Aconx5 Blue Sparx Gems: 517 |
#18 Posted: 21:26:35 14/09/2012
I like this one too.
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JoseDrag Green Sparx Gems: 165 |
#19 Posted: 12:40:39 16/09/2012
Awsome
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#20 Posted: 13:09:45 16/09/2012 | Topic Creator
Thank you
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"What is better? To be born good or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?" ~ Paarthurnax |
Aconx5 Blue Sparx Gems: 517 |
#21 Posted: 22:00:43 23/09/2012
I do like the new prolauge, though
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