darkSpyro

Ok I made a remake of my FF because I thought that this might be a better idea

anyways Users please be warn. this FF will contain bloody scenes, use of profanity, "suggested" scenes, and all that good stuff. If you don't like any of this stuff please forgive me but don't say I didn't warn you anyways enjoy ^__^

A ten year old white dragoness was in a cage, she was on the ground tears falling from her face. She was holding her stomach, pain was erupting from the place between her legs, and she never felt so much pain before. Her beautiful amber colored eyes were raw, red, and swollen from where she cried so much. So much happen in the past month and now this.

First she was kidnap by the Terror of the Skies-Cynder, then her mother was killed by a red dragon name Blitz, then she was torture days on end, No food, no water, her spirit was broken. So why he continues do this? Why does he want to cause her so much pain and suffering. She never did anything to him! But why does he enjoy it so?

She did not know but she continued to cry and cry. It was like an endless rainstorm of tears. Her whimpers echo from her dark, lonely cell and down the halls of the dark and scary dungeons. The shadows on the wall were like evil faces mocking her misery. She knew that it was her imagination that the darkness wasn’t laughing at her, but they sounded so real. Is this the way she will live rest of her life? In fear, despair, and alone; Then she heard someone coming, She thought it was Blitz again, Fear ate her soul. She felt someone touching her shoulder. She didn’t think to look she just started scratching, punching, and kicking.

But whoever was in her cage grab her and holds her still. “NO! GET OFF ME” She cried

“Frost calm down it’s me” a gentle but strong voice said, Frost open her eyes a bit to see the dragon that was holding her was Sky. Sky was a year older then her. He sky blue scales and eyes, he had no horns, nor fins. His wings were white as snow, and they were bird-like. Sky was the only good thing that came out of this mess, He was Blitz’s twin brother but he was nothing like Blitz. Sky bought her food and water to her to keep her from dying, he talk to her so she wouldn’t feel lonely, He healed her wounds after Blitz finish with her.

Before Frost could stop herself she hugged Sky and cried into his chest. She felt Sky’s arm’s hold her gently. “Shhhh…..its ok Frost” he whisper gently to her. She felt his warm feathered wings wrap around her.

Sky held her closer, “Please stop crying Frost” he whisper to her. “I won’t let him hurt you ever again…” He whispered to her gently as he can.

Frost looked up at him. The look in her beautiful amber color eyes nearly bought Sky to tears himself. She was already hurt, lost, broken, and lonely. Sky wish he could have save her then. He was angry with himself. He could have prevented this! Only if he came back faster! Sky wiped away her tears. “Frost….Let gets out of here” Sky said gently.

“R-re-really” She stammered, Sky nodded.

“I don’t want to see you in anymore pain Frost and I won’t let Blitz, Malefor, or anyone hurt you anymore….Frost you don’t deserve this day in and day out and I swear on my life I will try to make it up for what my brother done to you and to protect you from harm. Starting by getting you out of this hellhole…” He said. Then Frost noticed something that she didn’t notice before. Sky had wounds on his body, just a few cuts and bruises like he been in a several fights. Frost completely forgot her sorrow and pain. “Sky! What happen?” She gasped.

“It’s nothing just a few bumps and bruises” He said. Then an old red dragon walked in a Frost hugged was scared at first. “It’s alright Frost he won’t hurt us he’s here to help us” Sky whispered to her. Sky talk to the old dragon and he nodded. Then they left and Sky walked close beside her. And then after a few minutes they were outside, and Frost finally felt free. But she was more scared than ever. But when Sky is around she felt calm, safe, and…happy. Only a few days later when she learned of the red dragon who help them. His name was Ignitus.

That was good and I'll certainly be waiting for more. But, there are quite a few grammar errors, these might just be typos but I wanted to point it out.

@spyro and sonic

Thanks and I know there probably are even though I use Mircosoft Word but it doesn't do its job >.<

Nice remake, Sky, is Spyro will be in this story too?

I am wondering the same thing as Denragon is Spyro going to be in this story

@Denragon

thanks

Now to answer your and dark spyro1 question Yes he will be in the story

AWWW YEAH AWWW YEAH AWWW YEAH AWWW YEAH AWWW YEAH AWWW YEAH

I personally know sky peeps, dont be jealous (the character and author)

Yay!!! I'm really sure that Spyro will be like A New Beggining, because Cynder is still in her corrupted form, right?

You have to wait and find out

Okay... I'll wait with the other readers...

poor poor denragon

What?

Lolz~ I'm only want to wait... Hey, guys, I hope you want to read my story...

when will there be 'suggestive' scenes *wink wink* nudge nudge hint hint say no more. say no more.know what i mean? know what i mean?

Ah... No...

do you mean ah... no as in you dont know what i mean

Ooohh. I like the story already! Can't wait for more! Oh, and I LOVE Sky's appearance! Especially the wings! (I have a photographic memory, so anything you describe my brain pictures it. )

@MarieAlexandria

Thanks I'm glad you like it

Hey, Sky, when will you continue your story?

I'm working on the next chapter as we speak

Great job with this story man! I can't wait to sure what Spyro does in this.

@SonicGX98

Thanks

Me too, SonicGX98, I wonder about what Spyro does in this story... Is he will save the world too and fall in love with Cynder? Lolz~

Its pretty awesome.

thanks

No problem.

We'll wait for the other chapter, Sky...

Hey, since this FF just progressed one chapter, it's still fun to follow it...
I just want to say, this FF help my grammar a lot, and how to write too...

Hey guys I have some news I won't be able to continue my FF here for a few weeks because I'm sending my computer away to get it repaired

Do you have a smart phone?

I have a Android

Can you get on DarkSpyro on that?

Yeah but I'm halfway finish with chapter 1 and its on my flashdrive

Oh, OK, thats OK. Lol

What's wrong with Your computer?

No worries

Just post it when you have a time, okay?

Ok thanks for understanding

No... Problem...

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Good. I like it!

thank you

Keep goin! Im paitent.(for the most part )

No new chapter, Sky? I'm waiting for it...

Me as Well...

Sorry guys I can't finish the next chapter because I have to send my computer off soon and I can't save anything to this one until then and when I get my new computer and have everything set up on it I will finish up chapter 1

Poor pen and paper have been forgotten.

Trust me its better if I type I have horrible handwriting lol

Just saying, you can write as good as I can create and draw dragons.

Thanks