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The Skies of Passing: A Prophecy of Eight Dragons [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 06:52:14 27/02/2012 | Topic Creator
WARNING: This story starts out mild, but you MUST be aware that my writing is going to move into much more gory, complicated, and I wouldn't say sexual but definately "awkward" situations that might spark very few disturbed feelings. This is NOT INTENSE but these are things to look out for.

Main Characters:

Spyro (age: 35, our great hero)

Cynder (age: 35, Spyro's greatest love)

Vulcan (age: 13, one of the eight, the fire/swordsman dragon)

Flece (age: 13, one of the eight, the fire/ice dragon)

Ace (age: 13, one of the eight, the archer/earth dragon)

shadow (age: 13, one of the eight, the shadow/electric dragon)

Midnight (age: 13, one of the eight, the shadow/fear dragon)

Amythest (age: 13, one of the eight, the fire/shadow dragon)

Glasel (age: 13, one of the eight, the earth/fire dragon)

Ress (age: 13, one of the eight, the fire/electric dragon)

Soulious (age: 27, the main villian)

Chronicler/Ignitus (age 47, the one who was passed down the job of the chronicler)

Brant (age 16, a strange warrior of magic of which no one knows where he came from...)

Celeste (age 16, an ally to Brant, who also is experienced in the arts of dark magic)

Characters that have been revealed so far...:

Spyro

Cynder

Vulcan

Flece

Ace

Glasel

Soulious

Prologue:

It's been 17 years since we last saw our heroes, yes they have grown rather old, Spyro and Cynder, but never the less, they are still just as as powerful as they use to be. For those who remember, Spyro was the one to save the planet and bring peace to the world, but, this only lasted for these 17 years......

One day, not to late after the time of these last 17 years of peace, did darkness rise up against good, Soulious, a son of Malefor, took over the country of which Spyro and Cynder lived in. After he did this he found Spyro, and simply touched a claw to him, and all of his power was drained from him, weakening Spyro. Soulious did the same to Cynder, and so he had both of them useless on the ground, but when he pinned them both and had the chance to end them...he let them live, although since this happened, Spyro and Cynder have never been found, as if they vanished.

For the next five months the many people and dragons prayed for hope, a hero to rise up against the darkness, except no one came..... All hope was lost, and darkness continued to spread, taking over the land, and having more and more people worship Soulious. With in time, all citizens of the country became slaves, and most, knowing of Spyros and Cynders disappearance, surrendered.
Not even the chronicler, Ignitus, knew what happened to them. So...the question remained: Would good ever rise against evil? No one knew....
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#2 Posted: 06:55:35 27/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Right then, as I said this will be a work in progress, but please and thank you for at least checking out the topic and bieng patient for chapters to come. In the mean time feel free to post and talk about stuff here, I really dont care what topics you bring up, but when I post chapters just be sure to read them smilie Oh and sorry if 1 chapter gets to be a little long...I tend to write... a lot.
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#3 Posted: 09:56:33 27/02/2012
How much is a lot?
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#4 Posted: 01:10:27 28/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Maybe like....14 pages worth for just one chapter...That's the most I've ever done for one chapter, but it's still a lot I suppose.
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#5 Posted: 03:42:52 29/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Whatever Happened to Spyro...
Chapter 1

"How could this happen?" Spyro wondered. Cynder stared at him. "How am I supposed to know?" she said. "Well you knew Malefor best, bieng possessed and all.." Spyro smirked. "So? Spyro why do I have to keep telling you, I knew nothing of Malefor having a son. Like I said, I've already told you everything I found out while possessed by Malefor. Nothing of which I told you is going to help us figure this out either." "Well what then!?" Spyro shouted. He turned around and sat in a corner with in the jail cell. Spyro shook his head. "More importantly, Spyro started, how do we defeat this guy? "It's like a simple touch from him causes us to be weakened and almost pass out." "I know..." Cynder said, disturbed. Spyro watched as his wife (Cynder) paced the room. "It also disturbs me why he didn't just kill us when he had the chance.." Cynder said "I mean he had us pinned and weakened, he could have just ended it, right then and there...but he didn't." "And then he just throws us in here for the next five months." Spyro muttered. "Exactly!" Cynder shouted, with a dazed look in her eyes. "I just don't understand! There must be SOME reason he left us alive." "Maybe he just didn't have what it takes." Spyro said.

"Oh please Spyro! This 'son of Malefor' was born from pure darkness. I'm sure he would have just killed us!" Cynder said irritated. "Behind any dark heart is a soul Cynder." Said Spyro. "Oh shut up with that!" Spyro just rolled his eyes. "How is it even possible that two thirty-five year olds are destroyed by a twenty-seven year old!?" Cynder said bewildered "Well if you think about it, that's like two thirteen year olds beating a forty-five year old. Oh and really... a thirty-five to a twenty-seven difference...really isn't that far apart in age. Plus, this guy seems to be a lot more powerful than Malefor somehow. It's as if Malefor thought ahead of time to tell his son absolutely everything he knew.... including our weaknesses." Spyro smiled up at Cynder. "What's wrong with you Spyro?" Spyro found himself a bit insulted. "Excuse me?" "Well seriously!? Your bieng a smart-alec. You're all like, the age difference isn't that far apart, and behind every black heart is a soul and bla bla bla! What's happened to you? You're all annoying and you just sit around not even bothering to at least TRY to break out of this jail cell were in! What happened to the Spyro I fell in love with?" Cynder said irritated. "Well first off we CAN'T break out considering the cell bars are made of steal, earth, and diamond. Secondly, if I'm not mistaken...I'd say you've developed a few tempter issues." Spyro said. "Why you!" Cynder said angrily. Spyro jerked backwards in the corner, frightened.

"Ahem!" spoke another voice. Cynder stopped herself and turned around to see a demon outside the cell bars. The demon took his hands and waved them across the bars. The bars slowly started to vanish. "The master will see you now." the demon grunted. Spyro got up and stood next to Cynder. He looked at her, nervous. Cynder returned the same look, although a bit more frustrated than nervous. The chains made of the same material as the cell bars turned visible on both Spyro and Cynder. They were perfectly chained so they could not attack in way, and since they had their powers drawn from them, they could not attack even with elements. Spyro and Cynder went ahead and followed the demon down a long spiraling trail to the base of the volcano, the bars to the cell reappearing behind them, and the chains on them tightening.
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#6 Posted: 03:46:46 29/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Well, chapter 1 is just the intro, so it's rather short. Chapter 2 should be longer...Anyway, tell me how that sounds. smilie

For those of you who are wondering, chapter 2 is called "An Escape" but don't get this confused with it bieng part of chapter 1, cuz it's not. No, chapter 2 is about my first two dragons, I've left the next chapter of Spyro and Cynder to be far away from this point. If you read the notice you should know that Spyro and Cynder are to be saved, so what happens after what happened during chapter 1 is going to be left as suspense smilie sorry!
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#7 Posted: 21:09:46 03/03/2012
Hey! Can WE join?
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#8 Posted: 01:23:42 04/03/2012
Why is Shadow such a common Video-game name?!? I know FIVE Shadows now!!! FIVE!!!!!!!!
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#9 Posted: 07:08:51 04/03/2012 | Topic Creator
@miniquiny
Lol, I don't know. Honestly, I just make my dragons and name them based on how they turn out.
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#10 Posted: 07:09:33 04/03/2012 | Topic Creator
@CatAmber
Not really sure what you mean by that....
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#11 Posted: 13:27:36 04/03/2012
I believe she means to get her characters into your story
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#12 Posted: 03:24:48 05/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Oh, I might, I'm still workin on at least getting through to chapter 3.
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#13 Posted: 08:23:30 05/03/2012 | Topic Creator
An Escape
Chapter 2

Vulcan gasped. He looked around with crazed eyes. "Where am I?" Vulcan wondered. Vulcan's voice was rather deep. He was a red dragon with green eyes. On his back were to large red wings. He also had some crooked horns, and dented armor.

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Vulcan looked around. It looked like he was in some large grassy fields, where the wind was blowing softly, and the sun was setting over the horizon. Vulcan stared straight forward, then closed his eyes.
He saw a memory, or vision of some sort. Before him stood two large dragons, but it was too dark to see their appearance. The two dragons stared at him. Suddenly they turned around. An even larger figure, still in the shape of a dragon, appeared. The dragon swooped down and attacked the two other dragons. They fought back fiercely trying to protect Vulcan, but the larger dragon only pushed them off. The one dragon, after so long, flew away and vanished.

Not to long afterwards, somethin erupted. The two dragons looked around and saw their home, the volcano, suddenly erupting. The dragons started to rampage. They flew to Vulcan and suddenly, Vulcan, found his vision blurring. Just in time, before it all went dark, he saw the two dragons bieng attacked once again. They didn't get up this time, and the lava, was just about to wash over the two..... Vulcan opened his eyes and found himself falling to the ground. He was frightened by what he just saw, but for a small second, what frightened him even more, is the fact that he could have sworn he knew the two dragons somehow. But he wasn't sure how. Without a clear image of who the dragons were, he had no clue who they were, yet he knew them somehow. Vulcan struggled to get up. After falling to the ground a few injuries, that until now he noticed, we're repulsed. He eased with pain, and looked at his armor.

"Where did I get this?" he wondered. He found his armor was awfully dented, which obviously confirmed that he really WAS injured, but yet again....he wasn't sure what had happened to him to cause these injuries. In fact, aside from the vision and where, or how got to where he was...Vulcan wasn't sure he even knew who he, himself, was. He looked around at himself. "I'm.....a dragon?" He wondered in his thoughts. "A name..." "Bob!" Vulcan shouted. He started to laugh at the thought. "No...that can't be right.." he said. Vulcan looked over the horizon of the fields to find the sun had set. He instantly realized, somehow, that he shouldn't be in one place at night. Vulcan, despite his injuries, tryed to take flight, and was successful. As he flew over the fields, not to sure where he was heading, he continued to think for hours, mostly about his vision, but also who he was. Around midnight, he started to fall asleep, causing him to start falling to the ground, though just in time he would catch himself and continue flying. Sooner or later he found himself flying over a forest.

"Maybe I should rest down there.." he thought. No, if something told him it was bad to sit in one spot at night...Vulcan knew for sure that of all the places a forest would be the worst spot to stand around and rest in. So he kept going. After so long Vulcan felt like he was imagining things fly pass him through the air, but he wasn't.... He looked around to find an arrow had shot past him and off into the distance. He looked down and instantly felt a strong pain in the side of his stomach. Vulcan looked around to find an arrow sticking out of him. He lost vision, and he started to fall unconscious into the forest. With a bit of hearing left, Vulcan heard foot steps come towards him, and he felt himself bieng lifted. "Well, well, well." said a raspy voice. "Won't the master just be pleased with what we found here?" "Ah yes." said another raspy voice, although a bit more high pitched. "We will be rewarded greatly!" the voice continued. Then, all sight, all hearing, and all sense of touch, left Vulcan, leaving him completely unconscious.
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#14 Posted: 08:30:14 05/03/2012 | Topic Creator
An Escape
Chapter 2 (Cont...)

Vulcan gasped once again. He tryed to get up but felt even more pain then before. He looked around and found himself inside, what looked like, a dark cave. Vulcan remembered the arrow that had hit him, so he looked to the right side of his stomach, but nothing was there... Instead, he found that there was a harmless vine bandaging that went around his stomach. Not only this, but he also found that his armor was no longer dented. "Who..." "I did." spoke another voice. Vulcan whirled around and found to glowing pairs of eyes in a corner of the cave. "Sorry I startled you." spoke the creature. "Do not fear, I am not an enemy." Vulcan suddenly found himself blushing as the creature stepped out from the corner. He found that the creature was a beautiful female dragon. The body of the dragon was full of mixed colors such as yellows, greens, and a few hints of light orange. She had eyes that glowed gold, and wings that were a great bright pink. The dragon also wore a teeara, as well as garments that were made of very special looking fabric. There was also an emerald that hung down from the front of the garment.

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"Wow, umm, I.....uh....umm.....god you're beautiful!" Vulcan stuttered. The girl dragon blushed a bit. "Thanks." Her voice was soft and graceful. "Umm anyways...allow me to introduce myself." she continued. "I am Glasel." she stated. "And....I fixed your wound." Vulcan looked back to the right side of his stomach. "You did that?" He said, astounded. "Yes." said Glasel "I hope you don't mind, I'm an earth dragon you see? It allows me to take rocks, vines, diamond....anything found in the earths grounds pretty much, and use them for certain tasks, such as taking vines for bandaging." "Thanks." Vulcan said. "No problem." said Glasel. "Say...you wouldn't happen to have fixed my armor did you?" Vulcan wondered. "Actually....yes, yes I did. I'm sorry for getting so umm....close...to you, but I found the injury and the dents so I took action to fix things a bit....to help make you feel better." "Oh well... that's fine!" Vulcan shouted, but softly. "But how did you...." "Fix your armor?" Glasel finished. "Yeah." Vulcan agreed. "Well like I said... I have the power of earth, so I took some diamond and crafted it into a tool that would push the dents back in." "Hmm...that's quite a talent you've got there." Vulcan whistled. "Thanks." said Glasel. "But..." she started. "I don't know how I knew what to do with my abilities..." "What do you mean?" Vulcan asked. Glasel only shook her head. "I don't mean to pull you into this kind of situation but...you see...i don't know how I knew that, vines for instance, could be used as a good tool to cover wounds. And that I could craft tools out of rock or diamond." "So like...you're not really sure who you are?" Vulcan wondered.

"I'm afraid not..." Glasel said. "I mean..at least I know my name, and that I'm an earth dragon but...other than that...that's all I really know about myself." she explained. Vulcan just smiled at her. "To tell you the truth....I don't know who I am either." Vulcan said. "Really?" Glasel wondered. "Yep. And unlike you, I don't even know my name." Vulcan said. "Wow..." Glasel said astounded. "Do you remember ANYTHING about yourself?" Glasel asked. "No." Vulcan shrugged. "That's sad..." Glasel said. "I'm sure we can get it back soon." "We?" Vulcan wondered. "Why not?" Glasel wondered. Vulcan smiled. But then he frowned. He looked around and only now realized that he was trapped in a cave. "Why am i here?" Vulcan asked. "In this cave you mean?" Glasel asked. "Yeah." said Vulcan. "Well...as far as I remember, you were thrown in here by two demons, who one of them I assume shot you with that arrow, which made you unconscious." "Is there a way we can get out?" Vulcan asked. "I'm afraid not." said Glasel. "Well, what's Gona happen to us?" Vulcan asked, worried.

"I don't know." said Glasel. "Well...there's gotta be some way out of here.." "I'm sorry Vulcan but....see we are about fifteen feet below the surface, and the bars to the cell door up above are made of earth, diamond, and steal, almost impossible to break unless you have fire breath that goes up to about three-hundred thousand degrees." Glasel said, rolling her eyes. "Well, if part of the cell bars are made of earth...can't you break them then?" Vulcan asked. "No. The bars also contain steal, which makes it impossible for me to break." "Because its not a substance of earth?" Vulcan finished. Glasel nodded.
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#15 Posted: 08:34:05 05/03/2012 | Topic Creator
An Escape
Chapter 2 (Cont...)

Suddenly, the cave started to rumble. "W-what's happening!?" Vulcan shouted.
"I don't know!" Screached Glasel. The cave continued to rumble, shaking harder, and harder, by the moment. Glasel flew forward and up a hole in the cave. She found the cell bars of the cell door and did her best to squeeze her eyes through them. As Glasel watched, she noticed a volcano erupting. She looked farther down and found a whole pool of lava coming straight Glasel's and Vulcan's way. "Lava!" Glasel screamed. She flew back down the whole and to Vulcan. "Lava is heading this way at an intense speed! If we don't get out of here....we're done for." Vulcan hesitated, half calm, and half terrified. Then, it all clicked. "Look...I know because I don't remember anything I might be a bit useless to you, but you've gotta listen to me!" Glasel stared at Vulcan, then nodded. "Ok." she said

. "Right so, remember when you said nothing could break the cell bars unless fire at a temperature of three-hundred thousand degrees came and melted them?" Vulcan asked. "Yeah..." Glasel said. "If we time it just right, the lava should burn through the cell bars creating a hole for us to fly out of, just before the lava poors in here." Vulcan said. Glasel hesitated. "No. That isn't going to work... There has to be another way." Glasel said. "But there's not." Vulcan said. The cave started to rumble even more. "The lava is closing in." Vulcan stated. "This is the only way Glasel." She stared at him. "I guess you're right." Glasel agreed. Vulcan nodded. "Let's go!" he said. The two of them flew to the cell doors and waited. "What happens if this doesn't work?" Glasel asked. Vulcan hesitated. "Then we go down." he said. "You're brave aren't you?" Glasel wondered. "I guess I am." Vulcan shrugged. The lava was awfully close now, almost to the cell doors. "Ready?" Vulcan asked. Glasel nodded. "Ready." she said.

The lava instantly flew over the cave doors, burning through the cell bars. "Go!" Vulcan shouted. But to late. The lava had already caved in, leaving no way for the two of them to escape. Glasel screamed in terror and flew down to the back of the cave, with Vulcan, feeling a bit more conscious of the lava attempting to burn him up, following behind her. Vulcan stopped to see Glasel curled up in the back of the cave, terrified, with tears coming out her eyes. Vulcan looked at her. "Don't let it kill me!" she said with a sad voice. Vulcan, for some reason at this moment, felt like he really HAD to stop the lava, he came this far, and didn't want himself, as well as Glasel, to die. Vulcan stood in front of Glasel, keeping his ground. He watched as the lava flew towards him, feelling half brave, half sad, and half terrified. He opened his mouth and then, everything exploded. Glasel, wondering why the lava had STILL not yet reached her, opened her eyes, and saw that the lava was literally one foot away from her, but it was stopped in its position.

She got a better look and saw that, absolutely amazed, Vulcan, was blowing an extremely fierce fire into the lava, slowly pushing it back. Glasel followed behind Vulcan as he moved forward with his fire, pushing the lava back farther, farther, and farther. With in time, Vulcan had the lava cramped back in the other side of the cave. Glasel, not quite sure what she was thinking, using her earth power, pulled a whole wall out from the ground and in front of the lava. With the lava trapped, Vulcan and Glasel flew out through the burned cell bars of the cell door.

Many hours passed as Vulcan and Glasel flew through the air, startled, and amazed by what had just happened. It was until now that Glasel broke the silence. "That....was amazing! Vulcan do you even understand what you just did? You took a simple fire breath and totally slashed it into the lava pushing it back! You should be amazed at yourself!" "I know.....but for some reason....I feel like I've always had such an ability. After what just happened.... I feel as though, a few memory's of my powers have been returned to me. I really should be thankful to have my memory coming back but still.... It's like...somewhere in the past, I've taken my fire power to an even higher level, that has done so much more for me, so in that case...I just don't feel that amazed by the fact that I did that because somehow I KNOW I have even greater powers." Vulcan faced Glasel. "Does that make any sense?" "Mmm, sort of....I still think, to me anyway, that that was truly amazing!" Vulcan managed to at least put on a smile. "Well...I guess I know I'm a fire dragon now...right?" "Yeah!" Glasel said excitedly. "So that shows that your memory is already coming back!" "Yeah." Vulcan said.

The two continued to chat about the amazing stuff that had happened that day, as well as getting to know each other a bit better, or Vulcan getting to know Glasel a bit better anyway. After so long, when the moon had rose, the two settled down in an open valley where, now that they had each other and had not to many worries about the dangers of night, rested in peace. Once they got up tomorrow morning though, the time would sooner or later come to ask where, just where, these to we're destined to travel to....
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#16 Posted: 08:39:58 05/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Next chapter > Chapter 3 > The Blade
(Coming soon)
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#17 Posted: 22:49:42 05/03/2012
this fanfic caught me off guard since midnight's name is there (or is it someone else?)
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#18 Posted: 02:57:39 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
It's someone else, as soon as I saw someone had made a midnight I was like smilie But she sounded a lot different from mine so...it's all good.
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#19 Posted: 02:59:33 06/03/2012
oh LOL things be random
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#20 Posted: 03:03:01 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol, yeah smilie

I think my chapters are to long.....
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#21 Posted: 03:14:34 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Oh! I almost forgot, just in case, for those who look at the picture to see that Vulcan has a sword...he does, but not yet. He gets it in chapter 3.
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#22 Posted: 03:20:26 06/03/2012
O3o.......... Random ideas. flying turtles.
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#23 Posted: 03:24:29 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
When pigs fly.... Attack of the turtles!
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#24 Posted: 03:28:44 06/03/2012
smilie turtle ATTACK!
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#25 Posted: 03:47:24 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Could you imagine? Lol like CHARRGE!! (15 hours later..) the first turtle walks in the door of your house. smilie
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#26 Posted: 03:48:51 06/03/2012
LOL nope cause. -interuppting sonic- they're too slow.
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#27 Posted: 03:52:12 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol, totally!
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#28 Posted: 03:53:30 06/03/2012
Exactly
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#29 Posted: 23:03:37 06/03/2012
awsome story..... chapters r kinda to long
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#30 Posted: 23:44:38 06/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol, I know, I tryed to worn others I tend to write... A LOT. smilie I didn't even expect chapter 2 to be like... 3 pages!

Thanks though!
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#31 Posted: 00:01:08 07/03/2012
i was reading in the dark so it was kinda hard.... wen i would read i would accidently read da same lines over and over.... and i would think to myself didn't i just read dat?? smilie
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#32 Posted: 05:44:12 07/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Oh that's fine! Lol I've done that to....though in the dark or not I tend to read the same lines over and over. smilie

When you read chapter 1 did you think cynder was a bit...rude perhaps?
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#33 Posted: 19:58:45 07/03/2012
wait ... cynder 124...or... cynder ?
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#34 Posted: 23:32:44 07/03/2012
cynder 124 i think he meant smilie not you
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#35 Posted: 05:08:59 08/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Yes I meant cynder not cynder124
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#36 Posted: 23:00:36 09/03/2012
soo...r u goin ta use mah idea??? smilie
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#37 Posted: 04:57:18 10/03/2012
hey i love your story
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#38 Posted: 08:03:53 10/03/2012 | Topic Creator
@Cynder124
I thought about the idea but...I like the plot the way I have it. Sorry...

@Camo1123
Thanks smilie
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#39 Posted: 13:07:57 10/03/2012
r u going to send it in
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#40 Posted: 01:39:13 11/03/2012 | Topic Creator
I haven't decided that yet. I'm focusing on finishing it first.
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#41 Posted: 02:07:45 12/03/2012
when will u be done with the next chapter
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#42 Posted: 05:37:52 12/03/2012 | Topic Creator
I think I will write it tomorrow. I've got most of the plot for this one.
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#43 Posted: 06:14:18 12/03/2012
Yayyyyy
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#44 Posted: 06:19:47 12/03/2012 | Topic Creator
Glad you like it! smilie
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#45 Posted: 13:23:02 12/03/2012
your book is great but is kinda run together put more paragrephs in it.
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#46 Posted: 19:36:22 12/03/2012
ok no matter :') smilie smilie
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derp.
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#47 Posted: 00:08:17 13/03/2012 | Topic Creator
@camo1123
Meh, it doesn't matter TOO much smilie

@cynder124
Cool thanks for bieng patient smilie
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#48 Posted: 00:58:35 13/03/2012
ya it is hard for me to focus smilie please smilie
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#49 Posted: 01:11:49 13/03/2012
can u try to put camo in it
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#50 Posted: 02:11:47 13/03/2012 | Topic Creator
@camo1123
Well...I'll try to make paragraphs when I start a new sentence to a new subject in a chapter.

Also, this is my add on to Los, so I can't really add a skylanders character, plus, most of the characters are made up by me. I'm just putting in the important ones, such as spyro and cynder, because technicially, part of the story does have some stuff to do with them.
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