darkSpyro

Ok im doing this with fan dragons, and spyro cynder. Your dragon along side the 2 legendary dragons!This will be fun. each dragon will have there own importance. who ever wants theres in it either pm or comment. guidlines for dragons, personality, NO PIC NEEDED(although this helps oodles ), if no pic describe color set, your dragon elements.(if you really want your drAagon in a special plot like if you want evil.
character slots:all open(3 needed)
GOOD

• FlyingSeal(Ash)
  
• nightblade(Ummy)
  
• cynder 09(Rouge)
  

BAD

• SHORTAHAY
  
• (my character) Dexter
  

the story will very due to the dragons personatlity.EXAMPLE: if i have a stuck up dragon for example he either will not get along or would try to stray from the pack. depends. cosed for inactivity, i might reopen this sometime after my new story is finish. i do this for my peeps+dragons because im not good enough to write consistantly good.

I luv it With my evil gecko dex i will get an evil chapter up and following wen we have enough a good chapter. usually i will have in same chapter just separated but since there is a lack of participators

do they have to be dragons? because i was hoping to use Ummy, from this story of mine.
The Rise of Thorn!

No they dont need to be at least one doesnt have to. lemme see watcha got. u could be that one if you wish. make sure u give me a detailed personality description

mmmkay im going to make these chapters uber long! in my judgement

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Chapter 1The Evil Lair

Jewel of Darkness the dweller of all evil, the greatest villian yet she shgows a bright side her eyes on abase are red/ blue.In the kingdom of Jewel, a tall, spiked at the edge palace of evil. A place of terror, destruction. It was black with banners of the logo of the evil dragoness about every 3 stories of so. The palace sat in the depths of the planet. Miles below civilization. Odd enough a sweet interior, with some nice portraits of the unpredictable, dark dragoness. At the very top of the 66 story tower of evil, Jewel sits near her window that stretches from floor to ceiling overlooking her civilization. her leveled ground a pool of lava settled bye huge chunks of island. Here is where she sits pondering her next sinister plot. Some call her insane others brilliant. As she sits in her throne granit sculpted in the shape of her tainted red wings, she often talks to her self. When she is in this state of mind people seem to be tuned out, like she cant hear them. this is mostly how she gets her ideas.
The day was normal according to what is "normal" in that palace. On the tax day her residents would be harvested a portion of money.
*the tax collector enters* the dragoness sat in her throne as always not in a trans this time.
"Your money has arrived." The collecter shouted to reach the dragon's ear.
At that moment her scales grew a few levels brighter, her red eye slowly fading out into a baby blue. her streight mouth grew wide into a big grin.
"Thank you, could you be a dear and fetch me the earnings?" Jewel said softly glancing back at the dwin with a raise of eyebrows. The dwin is a creature genetically engineered from the DNA of a leopard gecko and dragon. leaving them to look tall, vibrant in colors, and huge beastly animals.
"Yes ma'm" the dwin chanted.
"Thank you again" she wisped, Jewel was very charming in this form.
The dwin backing out the door, made his way to the elevator to slide down to the middle floor where she kept her treasures organized and neatly separated according to her dates collected. When he made it down to the treasury he found the big sack of money not yet piled to its corner. the dwin sighed in relief know that he wouldnt have to stuff it all back in. he walked over and snatched up the sack and journeyed back up to Jewels HQ. he stumbled into the room with the money and walked over to her and plopped the sack down.
"Here ya go Jewel your earnings from this month." The dwin said panting intensly.
"Fabuolous! good to see you again james, as always." Jewel chimed sweetly at a high pitch.
the dwin strutted off. Jewel got up and fetched her money capsule. this is used to pour the money into and to count the earnings. she would sometimes use this when she felt she wanted to. *shling* the sound of the money sent chills through her spine. When she was done she slightly grinned and dropped the money back into the sack and called up another dwin to take the earnings to the treasury and dump to the right pit.
About 20 minutes passed and she decided to make a walk around her nicely decorated, tower. she took the elevator to the bottom floor. when she made it to the bottom floor she strolled around. A while later she decided a visit to her right hand man Dex wouldn't hurt. she made it to the lab on the bottom right side of the base floor. This is where Dex usually like to hang out. There he was expirementing as always. Dex is a more scentist. He has an equivelence of Albert Einestine in smartness. He most oftenly will be experimenting, plotting or cracking jokes by Jewels side. Dex and Jewel's history has gone back to the establishment of her kingdom. Dex after all was the one had made the dwins.
"Hey Dex, what are you looking at now?" Jewel questioned.
"Oh this, psshhh nothing why its just my research on how to chemicaly enhance the dwins immune, stregth, and there mental comprehension system." Dex joked
"Well, that seems.......important." Jewel responded slightly confused.
"Yea it makes them better i guess you could say." Trying to say it less nerdier.
After that Jewel left as night started to break and lights started to turn off.
"I'll see you at the top right?" she asked.
"Yea I'll go up with you actually, I'll continue this tomorrow."
Then, they made to the elevator wich did its pat lifting them to the top floor where they both got to there chambers and flopped to there beds.
"Night Jewel"-"Night Dex"
they both covered up and dosed off. The minute Jewel fell to sleep her the redness creeped back into her eye.

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There as soon as we have enough "good" members i will start the good part. Waddaya think about my description shorty i know her good side kinda dominated that piece, i will try to include a more unpredictable mood swing set

thank ya now we hve to wait for some good characters

Name: Ash
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Species: Fire dragon
Element/s: Fire, comet dash
Personality: Nice, kind, funny, serious at times, adventurous.
Appearence: He is a red dragon with ram horns. His tail end piece is an arrow but it is sideways and got it from his father. He has an orange underbelly, wing membrane and horns.
History: He one of the twin son's of the Shadow dragon Moon(father), and th Fire dragon Infern(mother). He is also the grankid of Spyro and Cynder. One day in Moonlight valley, a bunch of Posin Fluuters came and attacked his family, so him and his twin Brother Shadow stoped them all. Then everybody knew they were destined for greatness.
Other: He is the twin brother of Shadow and can sense bad vibes in the area.
Side: Good
Lives: Moonlight Valley

Name: Shadow
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Species: Shadow dragon
Element/s: Shadow
Personality: Same as Ash, smart.
Appearence: He is a Black dragon with 4 cynder like horns. His under belly is pure white as well as his wing membrane and horns. His tail end piece is a mace ball from his mother.
History: Same as Ash.
Other: He is the twin brother of Ash and can sense good vibes.
Side: Good
Lives: Moonlight Valley

thank you great!(1 per person) wich one do u want in?

Name: Ummy (U-me)
Gender: Female
Species: Elven Fairy ( they're slightly smaller than a human.)
Element/s: She focuses her energy on light magic, although she uses elemental magic to protect her self at times.
Personality: She rarely starts a fight, but often finishes one. She is caring and smart in the ways of magic and the sword.
Appearance: Ummy stands a fair height, with long brown hair. Her eyes are usually described as sapphires. Like most of her kin, she is fair to the eye, and swift to us magic. She is dressed in silken clothing, or that made of cloth, unless going to battle in which she uses specially crafted armor. Her skin is almost as thin paper, but tougher.
History: The Rise of Thorn! aka the high light of her life. but please don't think I'm like god mod, and if you do just forget the spyro stuff.
Other: has the ever returning evil sister, Thorn.
Location: The small fairie village near the small Rose-Thorn-River.
Occupation: Exploring and studying strong magic,
Friends/allies: Jyquil - a wandering merchant. and best friend. although is unseen in the story.

Name: Rouge
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon
Age: 18
Elements/Powers: Poison. And she is an Illousionist. She has the power to create illousions of anything. though they are nothing more than a hologram. though they appear very lifelike. her illousions can't cause damage, don't take any damage, and can't grasp things. the only way to 'get rid of' an illousion is to 'attack' it, which only makes it disappear. Rouge's eyes are the only sign that she's creating illousions, they glow. however, the eyes of what she creates do not glow.
Appearance: forrest green scales with a jade green underbelly and inside wings. her eyes are lime green. has six black horns, and black claws. her tail-ends are shaped like blades and are colored black. she has a green spiked crest from head to tail. the spikes are black.
Personallity: She's a trickster, prankster, and troublemaker. she uses her powers to play tricks on others and scare them. around good dragons and other creatures, she appears good. however, she behaves badly around evil beings. she can change sides in a heartbeat, but only when she wants to. she spends most of her time out on her own, playing pranks on others whenever the opportunity comes up. she's smart and sarcastic. she hates work of any kind. around good dragons, she behaves like a mishivevious child, slightly immature. around evil, she becomes more mature, and acts more like a young evil queen, giving orders to whoever will listen. everyone has thier own idea of whose side she's on, but no one really knows for sure. she appears to be neutral, and only looks out for herself. she doesn't have friends, doesn't trust others, and isn't intrested in making any friends. she keeps to herself except for the pranks she plays.
Location: she usually stays on the move, never staying in one spot for very long. however, she does keep returning to one cave hidden away behind a roaring waterfall. it has an underwater entrance as well as the main entrance behind the waterfall. the cave itself is located in the forrest. it is within this cave that she keeps any belongings she has: a brown sack for carrying things, a few daggers (knives), an emerald necklace, and other threasures she has gathered over the years of her life.
Other: she lives alone, and hangs around no one. nobody knows about her past.

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thank you great!(1 per person) wich one do u want in?

Oh shoot...err...can you make an exception? They are supposed to be twins and are supposed to...be together...you know what im saying?

^maybe one died in a tragic accidental encounter wirth the baddies and, this leaving her more dedicated and intense then most others . For the rest of ya, i luv da characters!!! gunna be a great stoy here. We are now officially locked in.

Yayz! Your gonna use Ummy!

yes!! I'll start the chapter later. probably have it up tomorrow, maybe today. Thanks again you guys!!

Yw! YAY!

ok guys im srry i took longer then i had to go to the hospital :/. BUT heres the next chapter
Chapter 2A story combines
Like any other night, the temple was still. The 6 dragons were all lying in there designated rooms. marked by a specific color, matching there scales. the 4 guardians rooms made up a hall, rooms on each side. These romms led up to 2 master bedrooms, Cynder and Spyro. The night stood silent only disturbed by the usual crickets. This night though was unlike any other. This night they heard an awfully loud ruckus from outside. the only 2 that awoke to this were the legends. The 2 jumped out of there beds in identical fashion and stepped out of there quarters. they looked at each other and started toward the door.
"What was that, do you think?" Spyro started assuming she heard the same thing.
"I don't even want to know, with everything that has started at a spur of the moment it can't be anything good."
At that moment the sound started again. As they got closer to the door they began hearing the sound of.....dragons?
"bang bang bang! let us in, they're coming for us!"The strange voices started coming clearer every step closer. When they approached the huge colt shaped rickidy door Spyro summoned the door to an open.The 3 dragons bursted in.
The dragons started a misunderstanded ramble.
"Shut your snouts!"Cynder snapped"What are you talking about one speaker."
The oldest strutted forward,"We were in the middle of our sleep when these beasts closed in on us, I was going to fight them off when these to pulled me off to leave."--- "Wait shadow thats right!" The red dragon interrupted,"We have to get back and save him!"The fairy dropped in,"Theres no point in going back now." She reasoned."Those evil beings, have most certainly got him."---"no we have to try."the red dragon argued,"wait where'd Rouge go!?"he said seeing that she was not there.
They glanced back, seeing only dust trails from the claws of a dragon.
"Cynder go get the elders up, I will go see whats up with these people." Spyro whispered closely to Cynder.
"Ok, get back here quickly they will be anxious to see this"Cynder quickly mentioned.
"Ok lets move out" Spyro announced to the others.
The group of dragons ran out into the night. the darkness was eerie Spyro knew from experience that this was not right. He kept his guard tight, and his head high. When they finally made it to the camp, they saw Rouge was fighting off the retched creatures. They looked of something of a nightmare. Spyro quickly comet dashed through the apposing enemaies, Ash did that also and they found them selfs crossing paths making an X of fire. They both looked at eachother for a moment and quickly back to the fight. Spyro switched to ice and froze them all and ash swung by and lit them up in flames. Then Rouge shot 15 clones of herself and slowly snuck through the crowd and popped up with a big stream of poison which covered the demons and slowly melted them down.
Spyro's eyes grew big with a sense of surprise. Ash galloped over to th small dragon laying lifeless on a opening of stone by a dim fire. he leaned over the dragon teary eyed with a drop streaming down his face.
"Shadow?" he whispered holding back the tears."are you there?"
The dragon opened his eyes and coughed up blood,"Ash he said faintly "Jewel, remember that name." He conisted lightly pulling his hand closely to ashes face his last words,"I love you" his hand dropped to the ground his body turned cold.
"i love you too" Ash whimpered starting to cry.
Spyro looked at Rouge, his eyebrows raised.
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There ya go first chapter down. Sorry about that FlyingSeal. From now on The evil and the Good chapters will go in the same post.(obviously separated)

oh, wow, really cool. i like where this is going. please continue.

there will be more tommorow thank you btw.

nice!


where's Ummy? I'm not rushing or anything... ah.. forget i asked.

she is coming dont worry

I'm not! I just meant... nothing. forget it.

NOOO! NOT SHADOW! Lol, okay, nice chapter. Hehe heh. Ash always though he could do things on his own.

hehe, Spyro seems suspicious of my Rouge. can't wait to see how he and the others act around her.

since you know you guys(and girls) are so awesome i will start right now evil comes first.

all right, cool.

sorry guys i havent been able to get aroundd to it. i'll try to get achapter up when i get the time. sowwy

that's ok. i know what's it like to not have the time to write. take the time you need.

chapter 3 is up tonight at 8:00 stay tuned im done with my 3 projects so im going to start being on more. thanks for understanding Cynder09

alright, cool. can't wait to see more.

just going to jump right in here


Chapter 3

As chamber grew darker the night grew more eerie. The gecko couldnt sleep, he was excited on his new genetic formula. When a full figure entered the room quietly. The footsteps faintly scratched at the ground, the stranger walked mysteriously through the chamber. tik..tik..tik the feet kept a steady pace throughout until it came to the dragonesses chamber entrance. it peaked its head through the open arch, peaked around andstepped out. As it came near the window where moonlight was shimmering in, once the gecko identified it he shot a look in amazement. The blackened shape stepped towards the window. it looked back at the gecko and hissed. smash!! the window shattered loudly and the mystery creature jumped out spread its wings and flew for the whole. Jewel awoke from her slumber, the decency drained out from wothin along with the delightful blue in her eyes replaced with a maroon red. She rose up eyes wide, and stepped out her chamber glancing the room, when she saw the shattered window.
"What happened to my window!!" she shouted,"Dex get in here, now!"
he hopped up and slipped into the room lighting the candle link witch dominoed around the ceiling lighting each candle beside it.
"Yes...m-m-master"dex squeaked."Do you know anything about this?"the pissed off dragon asked "no lord nothing, nothing at all." he replied timidly."Very well then, get back to bed you need your rest. the dragon paced through the night thinking what could've done that. the possibilities were slim.and so the night creeped on when she finally decided to get some sleep.

cool. wonder who the strange figure was.

good is coming up tonight dont worry
and umm.... sorry bout the weird chapter

that's ok, it was cool. hope good will be up soon. i want to see want my Rouge does next.

cool! Can't wait! *falls over in excitement*

can mine been in it
Name: Cyclone
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon
Age: 11
Elements/Powers:wind
Appearance:horns:top 1 curves down and bottom 1 curves up no crest purple underbelly and wing webbings red body and small straight spikes next to her underbelly
Personality:Adventurous,lonely and angry at times
Location:Avalar
Side:Good
Other:She lives alone with her pals and tells no one of their human past

Name: Flame
Gender: Male
Species: Dragon
Age: 11
Elements/Powers:Fire
Appearance:horns: curves down and bottom bit curves up crest:sharp spikes black belly and wing webbings red body
Personality:Very easily made angry or sad
Location:Avalar
Side:Good
Other:He lives alone with his pals and tells no one of their human past

Name: Moon
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon
Age: 11
Elements/Powers:Shadow
Appearance:horns: curves up black hair instead of crest gray belly and wing webbings blue body
Personality:funny, a real joker sometimes
Location:Avalar
Side:Good
Other:She lives alone with her pals and tells no one of their human past
EDIT:Flame is not the flame in aht

Get ready for a huge holiday surprise guys

ok, cool. can't wait to see it. ^ ^

im zoned in...

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Chapter 3

Spyro stepped forward at a slow steady pace to Ash who was was just wipping his tears away.
"Come on we need to get back to the temple quickly before more of them come."
Ash looked up at spyro sniffling"ok, we need to bring his body though."
Spyro shrugged, "ok i guess i'll carry him."
off they walked, Keeping a fast pace. Rouge strayed away like usaul and was far up the path. When they made it to the temple, the elders where waiting anxiously. Spyro and the others quickly rushed in.
"Ignitus, i think we have a problem." As Spyro started their was a clank coming from the roof. Silence struck the room, again another clank.
"What was that?" Ignitus whispered to himself.
Suddenly there was a knock at the towering door. Something inside launched Spyro to the door to open it.
"Spyro what are you doing!?" Cynder whispered.
That didnt stop him as he stepped up to the door. The door slid open. at their surprise there were two dragons standing at the door.
"We come with no harm" The dragon stepped closer.
"Dont move one more step." Terrador said sternly,"State yourself's" he continued.
The red dragon stated,"I go by the name of Cyclone."
The blue dragon,"I am Shnarles."- the dragon broke out laughing when everyone started staring at him."no, my true name is Moon."
Cynder started to chuckle when terrador commanded them in. Now Sparx had woke up, "Hey whats going on out here? ya know its hard to ever get any sleep around here."
"Wait a minute Sparx, go back to bed." Spyro quickly answered. Sparx mumbling, walked away.
"Anyways where do you guys come from?" Cynder questioned.
"Are home was Avalar now we make a living on the run." Cyclone said.
"Why are you here?" Cynder continued on with the questions.
"Well.." she said taking a huge breath along with a pause."That is why we are here, we have been here longer then you think...Spyro." The dragon said.
"What do you mean" Spyro replied defensively.
"We have been watching you for some time now."
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pretty shor t but i wanted to get shumting up before the nights end

cool. intresting. can't wait for more.

Thank you! well im not going to say more tonight because im a really bad procrasinator so.... i will try against my terrible habit. i need helpz on procrasination because its like my major problem

haha, i'm a procrastinator myself. but i love writing, so there's not much of a problem there.

yea i <3 the writing also its great!I find myself not such a reader though somehow

i'm a great reader. i use to read a lot when i was little. but as i got older, i was more intrested in video games. i do love writing though. not sure how to help procrastination. you just gotta do it.

lol yea i've been more of a gamer too. since i was a little guy, obviously my first game was... spyro

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lol yea i've been more of a gamer too. since i was a little guy, obviously my first game was... spyro

well, my first game was Mario, followed by Pokemon.