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Spyro: The Rise of Thorn ( please read!!! ) [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 16:54:19 07/03/2010 | Topic Creator
here is my Spyro story, hope you like it.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 17:24:56 10/04/2010 by NightBlade
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#2 Posted: 16:55:10 07/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Part one
Well don't laugh. here we go. my one just kind of has the word they will actuality say if it is made. i call it "Spyro, Rise of thorn"
Ummy, a fairly beautiful fairy sorceress, walked across the meadow upon the mountain and looked slightly across the purple and yellow sky. to her surprise there was a small storm cloud. "It's time." she muttered softly. She quickly jumped into the air and her wings spread, taking her into the sky. racing across the forest and the lake she made it to lily road, a small farming fey village in which her mother had been the leader of for as long as she could remember.
Silently and quickly she landed in front of her mother,who had been preparing the ritual. " daughter, i saw your swift arrival, it is time isn't it." Ummy merely nodded. "then let us begin." they and a couple other priests set up the ceremonial ingredients. Ummy spread her arm and a small beam of magic left her hands. them beam went into an arch made of dragon scales, no sooner than it hit the arch it began to turn pure white. the portal was open. Ummy's deep blue eyes were fixated on the portal for soon they would arrive.
the portals white coloration soon became colored, it showed the world in which dragons had lived. It was stable now. "Mother," Ummy began,"I'll return shortly, i hope." She turned to her mother, then went into the portal.
mean while Spyro and Cynder had no idea where they were. after defeating malefore they had been thought dead, though not by Ignitios. "Are you sure we're going the right way?" Cynder protested to Spyro's constant insisting they were on they right track. "yes we are. i can feel." "well you could feel it for the last ten miles or so." Spyro stopped for a second, had he heard something following them? No. it was probably just his imagination. But wait, there it was again. "Cynder. Listen," and she did,"We're not alone." it was as if the world just then had come to a silence, there was nothing.
A figure, almost human sized, had leapt out from the tree in front of them. long brown hair was upon this figure, robed and hooded, all they could see from they mask was two piercing blue eyes gassing at them.

"Surrender now and things will go plain and smoothly." the, apparently female, figure said. "Is that our only option, after all i think i could add a knew one." Cynder replied. "Me as well." spyro added. the figure chuckled then said,"You really should look before you leap." And with a leap the figure was in the air, beautiful wings spread, and had two rather sharp blades. Then it began to spiral toward them. "Cynder duck!" and she did just in time. for a second after she would have been captured or worse. "A little slower than i would have imagined. oh well."
The figure trust one of the blades into some hidden compartment and began casting a spell. "I got it!" Cynder yell and leaped at the figure. but to soon. while in the air it had stopped charging the spell at hit Cynder with it, in the chest too. to the ground she fell. almost asleep from the looks of it. "Now it's your turn dragon!" Spyro at that moment toke action jumped up and lacked on to the figure's foot. "Let go!" she said losing balance, then falling towards the ground. He had it just where he wanted it. "Why are you attacking us?" he asked. "See for your self." And with that that figure had turned over and cast the spell on him. Asleep he fell.
The following morning Cynder had awoken first, because she had been hit first. To her surprise on a kind of cushion in a room next to Spyro. there was no kind of cage or collar or anything. a tall figure with beautiful wings and long brown hair, and familiar peircing blue eyes. "Cynder? That is your name right? How are you?" Wide eyed, Cynder looked at the attacker. "You? You attacked us. Why..." "Fore, i warned you and i was willing to take drastic measures. now lets us await for your friend, Spyro right, to awaken. My name is Ummiara, though most people just call me Ummy." Spyro bolted on his feet ready for battle, to that Ummy giggled. "Calm Spyro. Let me fetch you water and some stew for i did hit you a lot harder than Cynder." and it showed his eyes were droopy and he could barely stand up. she disappeared though the door.
There was nothing to stop them from just walking out, and leaving. no traps or spell, the door led to a long hallway which would take them to a small kitchen a kind of living room, and then just out the front door. that simple. Spyro gazed down the hall way once or twice only to see the same unguarded door. it couldn't be that simple. "I am going to get some fresh air." spyro said still drowsy. Cynder, who had spoken with their attacker, Ummy, simply stared at spyro. "Maybe I should come with you... after all look what Ummy did to you." "You have a point." So down the hall way they went.
the kitchen smelled wonderful, but still they went. the door way remarkably unlocked. And this is what they saw. Elves, fairies, springens, and fey beings of all sorts walking around, shopping, talking, singing and eating in a kind of market. children handing out cookies, playing, and asking their mothers to let them by hand-crafted toys of all sorts.
Ummiara,or Ummy, was in the kitchen arguing with the cook to give spyro an un-scheduled meal. eventually she won, and went to go check on them. when she saw them standing in the door way, she figured that the dragons had wanted to stretch their legs, nothing more. "Spyro? feeling better? i have some stew, if you please. i though you would like to regain your strength? we could go view town if you wish." She said in a genital voice. after a moment of silence She reached for a sort of purse made from leaves.
"Aren't you keeping us prisoner?" Spyro inquired, eyes drooping. Ummy started muttering strange words under her breathe as power built up in her hand. "Spyro!" Cynder shouted worried. The spell flew from her hand hitting Spyro, and like that he immediately looked better.
"It's called a dispel spell, it removes harmful... and good spell side affects." Ummy said shaking her head. "Do you want to see town? Or i could see if your friend is here yet." puzzled Cynder said "Our friend, you mean sparks?" "The annoying little dragon fly that zips away at the very sight of us? yes." She begins to walk out the door, then waves for them to come along. They did for she obviously could make them.
about three or four blocks down a, what looks to be a guard, walks up to the group. "Ummiara Bright-wing, daughter of the Nightess, second in command of lily road. What are you doing with two dragons? you know dragon capture is illegal." The male guard eyed her carefully, almost fearfully. "Guard Merison, of the royal guard, my body guard, and the biggest jerk i know. these dragons are the ones from the ancient myth, which so far is correct. And my mother and father clearly stated that these dragons remain under my care and are not to be harmed until farther notice, now return to your station... mam." she smile at the look of the Merison's expression of shock and indignity. "Yes, sir." he replied after a moment of pause. and farther yet they walked. soon enough there was a sort of palace, big beautiful and waiting at the front of the palace was and fairy, looked to be about forty or so, an fairy male also about forty or so. The man spoke firm clear and welcoming, "daughter you have returned to us, with the dragons. i presume you are here to take.. it off our hands." he said eying a small cage behind him.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#3 Posted: 16:56:05 07/03/2010 | Topic Creator
"yes father, a have. And would you ask the guards to keep an eye out for the storm, for i have see her methods of attack." she said swiftly and worriedly. The mother spoke this time, worry also upon her face. "She will be here in no less than a day if my calculations are correct. Prepare the dragons and the fly for battle." a familiar voice piked up for behind the parents of Ummy. "Battle! I don't want to die! Why is there a cloth over this cage?! I thought finally i was heading to a peaceful place!" "that would be sparks," Spyro began ,"you'd surprised at what flies out of his mouth."
The Father picked up the cage and thrust it into Ummy's hands. The expression on his face clearly was, Take him far away.
this is not done, hope you like it for what a twelve-year old can do.
dumb character limit.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#4 Posted: 20:19:33 13/03/2010 | Topic Creator
continuing,
Ummy took the cloth off of the cage which sparks was contained, glaring at him with her peircing blue eyes. she shook her head sadly, "We have little time to prepare before she gets here... and for Narisare's sake, speak up!" Narisare was the god she fallowed, the god of pure magic. spyro said with interest and worry in his voice, "Who is she? You talk about it some, but I want to know." "She is Thorn, an evil necromancer of what used to be my kind, she was once beautiful and pure but was corrupted. Now she plans to do the same to the rest of our world. And if the legend of my kind is correct you are the ones chosen to help us." She said gravely in response. Cynder almost forgave her for what she had done with the truth in her words. "Ummiara, er... Ummy we'll help you." "We will?!" Sparks said in shock. Ummy smiled weakly, then gave a stern look to the soldiers that normally protected her, even though she didn't need it. "Alright men! I want these dragons on the training ground with at least some kind of food and drink, and i don't mean alcohol! Have two suits of Dragon armor of their choice laid out, and a small set us dragon-fly armor for the pest in the cage! Move it!" The soldiers held up strange leash-like devises, and began toward them. "I'll have none of those, i'll be back soon." she said softly. The soldiers, after Ummy was gone, escorted them to the armory. One in particular stepped for word, " the name is Don Lonnard Besider, pleasure to meet a purple dragon and his beautiful black dragon friend." He bowed with that and walked away, or at least out-side. They pick armor and found the training ground quite easily. Ummy was already there, sitting on a wall of some sort, in a beautiful armor made of light magic crystals and gems. it gave her a magical energy boost and protected her from dark attacks. She giggled, looking pleased talking to a male sprigan, a being that lives in trees that may turn into nature it self. She sees spyro and cynder and motions for then to come her way. "This is Nathan Farlion, he is you instructor on how to battle Thorn and her minions." She explained.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#5 Posted: 20:52:04 13/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Thorn, in her clouded device, gazed into the black crystal seeing all of the town Ummy was trying to protect. She then looked at the mirror that always loomed about her headquarters. She saw her blood red eye, tattered black hair, and colorless white skin, and the tattoos she had around her eyes that improved her abilities. She shook her head and gazed back into the crystal. it would only be a few hours before she got there, and Ummy then would have to except defeat. She saw the dragons. dragons? the legend of course. time has come at last.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#6 Posted: 23:40:53 13/03/2010 | Topic Creator
After a few hours of training, Ummy sweating slightly placed a dish of water in front of each of the dragons. "Thorn will arrive any minute, be ready. But first, I have a surprise for you." She said walking in the direction in which they were training sparks. Sparks came zipping out and began speaking at once, "Guess what I can do! Look!" And small orb of power developed in his hand, and a he threw it something nearby exploded. "Sweat huh? Looks like i am not just the pest any more." Ummy giggled in her amused fashion. Then looked to the sky in horror. "She is here! Move men! fallow me!" She leaped into the air at that flying at a tremendous speed, strait to the center of town. Citizens that could not fight were in shelters made for such a time. Soldiers and even the Royal Guard Soldiers, a group of soldiers reserved at the highest rank for the worst of emergencies were there. Her mother and father, at the head of the command. A hideous laughter of some female was heard then a low, cruel voice, "Fools. You think that you troops of men women a gifted children will stop me and my army? Think again." A thunder clap from the clouded storm up ahead brought lighting and her. Thorn was instantly there, oddly enough alone. She was sitting, then slowly raised. She looked up, and a wicked smile formed from her lips. "Fools." she hissed, and a hundred or so dark elves fairies, sprigens and more were suddenly there. Ummy muttered a fixer of words, a light shone brightly around her. "Attack!" Ummy burst out. And the battle began. Swords clashed with claw and blade and wood. magic clashed with many things. Thorn sliced through soldiers like butter as did Ummy until they collided. Magic and sword met greater than ever as Spyro and Cynder fought bravely. Thorn teleported away from Ummy, then behind her. Thorn cut a hole in Ummy's Armor and wounded her greatly.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#7 Posted: 23:45:01 13/03/2010
cool i like this story so far!
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
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#8 Posted: 00:11:54 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you! you should read my little sister's, Corruption.
Ummy gasped in pain. The wound had nearly hit her heart. Thorn had moved on leaving her to die. Ummy was smarter than that. She healed the wound with a healing spell then tried to see the situation. Her mother was holding off lots of the attackers, thorn walking slowly behind her. Spyro and Cynder beginning to be over whelmed and her father aiding those whose shelter had been broken. "Mother!" she screamed as she saw what was happening.
She raced to her too late, Thorn's blade had finished her. Ummy with tears in her eye screamed. She cursed in magic and some unearthly power took her. The pure white armor she was wearing turned into multiple colors at once. Vine ensnared thorn as fire, ice, electricity and rock chunks flew at her. A fury beyond expectations from a light mage. almost every thing was killed that was an enemy. Thorn quickly, before being hit teleported behind her farther, then he fell. And Thorn and her troops were gone, back to where ever the hideout of theirs was.
Ummy came to the ground and her armor went back to normal. tear escaped her, and it began to rain. rain of sorrow for all she had lost.
Spyro and Cynder wounded were tended to be healers among those who could not fight. "Ummy... Ummy are you ok?" Spyro said weakly. "She will pay for this, death is not even what she deserves, but i will bring it to her!" Shocked by the statement Cynder came up to Ummy slowly. "all is not lost." Ummy stood up. and walked out side the city gates saying she would return soon.
a few days later she returned baring scrolls and maps of the realm. She said her greeting to the dragons and began to explain, "You'll stay here for a few more days, then we set out for Mayromu Mountain. that is where we will find thorn, I believe. sweat dreams, you need the rest, and if you have trouble sleeping, i can fix it." She waved them goodnight and retired to her quarters.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#9 Posted: 13:38:40 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
The night went on slowly, almost not at all. Ummy went to check on them a couple of times, in which they pretended to sleep. As soon as Ummy was gone her door shut, ( they are all in the same house as in the beginning ) they began talking of how this world was similar but yet different. They would have to make sure sparks was quiet so he would not wake Ummy. Soon they hear something break the silence. Footsteps? A small tiny sound, quieter than Ummy's. Something magic went around the door, some kind of silencer if they remembered well from Ummy's lessons with magic. Someone Came through the door clocked, hooded. It looked like an assassin or thief. The silence had been so if there was a fight it would not be heard, but it was a weak one that required almost no magic at all. The person moved steadily quietly, Spyro and Cynder prepared for battle. The person of some-sort took out a blow dart and shot each of them, except for sparks who was asleep. "Cynder!" Spyro shouted his mind beginning to go funny, clouded, hard to think. The same happened to Cynder. They passed out asleep.
They awoke at the same time in a cellar, no, a dungeon. Dragons in cages were every down here, grown dragons, young dragons, dragon eggs. They remembered that keeping dragons was illegal. One golden boy dragon, teen aged in the cage next to them said sadly, "Welcome to the dragon fights, where you fight to the death against one of us." he shook his head. "My mom is dead, so are my friends, at least they didn't get my sister. worst of all. a window behind you guys opens so you can see and hear the blood and goer." "That is horrible!" said Cynder. Thugs came down mumbling to each other, "The boss says the gold one and one of the red ones in teens." "Well I say we bring out three for spice." "boss already said no to that." They had strange leashes in hand and helmets with some kind of dark magic. they took the gold dragon in the leash as he tried to grab the ground to pull away. The red one did the same. The window opened the could see a coliseum at a throne was a women and a man, not Thorn though. The women was blond with green eyes wearing all black. the man Black haired, with hazel eyes, also wearing all black. The woman spoke crisp and clear, "Ladies and gentle men, monsters of all ages! I welcome you to the Dragon fights! Now the golden dragon, Tarnish, against the fire dragon ash! Fight!" The thugs put the helmets on them and they went blood crazed. they fought until the red dragon ash was the winner. they took the helmet off him and tarnish's dead body, ash hung his head in grief. thugs took him back. before the window closed they hear, "For our next fight a rare purple dragon, against a black dragon who shall prevail?!" "Were doomed. This is just perfect." Spyro said. They didn't know how long they had until fight time.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#10 Posted: 22:06:27 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Spyro and Cynder fought to get out, but nothing worked. It seemed who ever built the place knew what they were doing. about an hour later the thugs returned. "This is it." Cynder said to Spyro. They kissed, even in front of all the other dragons. Thugs put the leases on them despite the fight to get them on and dragged them to the arena, each at different ends. The woman announces the fight. The thugs put the helmet put the helmets on them. Spyro's vision turned red. he saw Cynder, then she turned into Thorn. He saw Ummy crying and Cynder helpless. He would teach her a lesson. The same happened to Cynder. They began to Circle each other and just when ready to strike, a boom came from above. Their helmets some how shattered and their vision went to normal. A tall fairy in an assassin's or thief's, a outcast in the fey world, uniform Stood nearby. She had Dark brown long hair, blue eyes, but not quite like Ummy's, one eye had an eye patch over it. "Come on!" She called in a voice like Ummy's but deeper. They fallowed behind her as she ran through the fight's thugs. it toke awhile, but soon fresh air was about, and they were out side. Dragon fights, and capture were illegal, so they had to stay under ground. Ummy was there. She had a blade out and spoke swiftly and calmly,"By the orders of Nafera, the royal family, i place you under arrest for the capture of these to dragons." The fairy that had helped them escape spoke firmly, "And by orders General Nickson, I, Rose Nanica, under cover agent of the fairy army, your charges are dropped." She held a badge, and it was true.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
ash Emerald Sparx Gems: 3014
#11 Posted: 22:15:46 16/03/2010
awesome
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I'M WITH THE DUCK!!
Gotta have that wall of words man~
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#12 Posted: 22:19:08 16/03/2010
hello cooooolllll.
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I'M WITH THE DUCK!!
Gotta have that wall of words man~
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#13 Posted: 22:21:14 16/03/2010 | Topic Creator
don't double post ash, just cause your new I'll tell you now. Where was I?

"The army?!" Ummy began in protest "Why did you capture them then?! They... they're important!" She had a childish look of disapproval. Rose smiled then said, "Ummy, I have visited your town before and know your are not you are not a full grown fairy, but you act much wiser than one your age. after all you are only 65. you need to be 100, to be an adult in our standers though."
[OOC] the youngest most fairies die at is 1,000 so she is a teenager.
She nodded, and motioned for her to fallow. Then sparks said suddenly, "Wait! Ummy in our age system thing you are ancient! but here your normal? and i was just thinking the you were, um, pretty..." Ummy then smacked him so hard it was heard miles round. After being able to breathe he spoke in stutters, "Ok, your beautiful! sheesh! You hit hard." She took a deep breath then spoke,"Spyro, Cynder, town is just a little bit ahead.. I'm going in. Bringing this place down..." She dash into the entrance, screams thuds, bangs and clashes were heard. They guided Rose back. Ummy was only shortly behind. Everything seemed ok... There was the gate. no guards. The wall. no mages. Ummy flew faster than they walked, and caught up. "Ummy... aren't there suppose to be guards up there and mages.?" Cynder asked softly. "Yeah. they are just up... where are they?" She jumped over the wall with ease. what else could they do? She froze, horrified. There was no one. the town in ruins. Guards dead, mages turned into horrible things. Spyro and cynder flew in to see. There were no citizens though. "Thorn will pay for this. We must get to the library of serenity. the scrolls are there." Ummy said with hatred in her voice. "Where?" Spyro asked. "Yeah and what good will a library do? Books of doom!!" Sparks added foolishly "Just keep up." Ummy fallowed a corridor in one of the unharmed shelters. She muttered occasionally"Left, right strait, left." or something like that. it seemed to take for ever, bu eventually they reached a large locked door. She spoke in a language none of the others could under stand. The door opened reviling a large library full of books, scrolls, and tablets. fountains with water pure. and plants with fruit rich and sweet. food and drink were also supplied in magical containers. "Well come to the library of serenity. Only certain being may here of its existence. let alone see it," she push her sleeve up showing a birth mark of a tear with pure light energy around it. "I am one. It has been hundreds of years since a dragon looked at this holly ground. After malifore, we never let one in or out of our world. We used to coexist, but eventually, we couldn't. Our worlds split apart." She shook her head and walked to a scroll in a display case. She held it gingerly. and read, "Thorn, the sworn evil is born. her vengeance she seeks among the sick and the weak. not knowing who did to her, the corruption to wear. Her blood sister, and mother shall aid the slaying, by two dragons to come to our world, their role playing. One purple one black, shall stop the attack. but the sister's true name, her fate is the same." She set it down. "That is the legend of our people. We have yet two find the sister and the mother. But we have discovered her true name. which I shall not tell you here." Sparks let a pretend snore past."Boring. What was so good about the library again?" "Sparks, if I were you, I would shut my mouth." Spyro said quietly.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 15:06:37 20/03/2010 by NightBlade
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#14 Posted: 21:31:06 29/03/2010 | Topic Creator
"Using a scroll in this library I can teleport us to a location closer to thorn's lair," Ummy said as she raised her hand, it glowed it a magical energy,"Hang on!" They felt a whoosh. Energy pulsed, set off a blast of color. They spun round, at least that is what it felt like. Falling. Then it stopped, They found themselves in a cave, a large one at that. a single large opening at the far edge of the cage loomed over a chasm. Ummy held on to a rock for support. The teleportation had drained her of most of her energy. "Are you ok?" asked Cynder worriedly. "Me?!" Ummy said, startled, "I must look pretty bad, he he, I am just drained. I will be fine." Rose looked over in a hurry, in worry as well. "We shall rest here, Ummiara, while you recover." She spoke swiftly and in an emotionless way as soldiers were taught to. They spent the night in that cave, nothing too bad happened, save the rain. Ummy looked better after a few hours rest. Rose had been lecturing Ummy about the danger she had put herself in for something that reckless. "Yes, mother." Ummy replied to the whole thing in a sarcastic manner. Rose didn't know how to take that, and walked out to collect fire wood.
The next day, most of them were joking over how nothing had happened during the night. Ummy had cooked the best breakfast they had in a long time. After that they set out.
The mountain was steep and load with thorns monsters, but they managed to get around them. At the top of the mountain, there was a large stone door. It was likely to be magically trapped, but that didn't stop Ummy or Rose. A few magic words and it just popped open. It was all too easy.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:27:59 02/04/2010 by NightBlade
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#15 Posted: 22:45:10 04/04/2010 | Topic Creator
"Come along," Ummy spoke in a quiet but firm voice," We need to be quiet if we wish to go unnoticed." Thorn's lair was cold damp, with signs of hatred and cruelty. Dark crystals lied every where, giving off some of the energy Thorn herself must have used in battle. As they traveled further down it only got darker. At last they came upon a Large chamber room. Many hall ways and corridors were connected to the room but luckily they were labeled.
The the north the kitchen, thralls rooms, and guard barracks lie. To the east, The dungeon, the dragon pits, and the dinning hall were. South, Thorn's Chambers, her study, and her personal armory. To the west was the way they came and a armory for Thorn's minions. still no guards. The dungeon was likely where the towns folk were being held, so they proceeded there. The hallway there was long steep and slippery. It must have taken an hour to get to the actual prisoner holding area, but still not even a trip wire.
There villagers were in steel cages with barely enough food to last one day for a single person. Ummy's eyes swelled with tears for their treatment. How could a person do this? Thought Spyro. The fey he had seen happy and charming at the village a day ago were now sad and covered in enough pain and dirt to hide them in the shadows. He walked to the cage and destroyed it. No alarm. Not even a shout. What is going on here? Cynder thought. Nothing, I mean nothing is this simple. The fey followed silently, like mice in a small house. The way back up the hallway was harder up, than down. If one fell so did every one else as he or she slid down for a few feet. After two hours of climbing and falling, then climbing again, they made it to the main chamber. There was thorn.
She stood in full armor, her army behind her. "Silly Ummiara. Did you honestly think that I would let you go in and out my home as you pleased, taking my... guests... with out a fight?" "Thorn you evil vile wicked fiend! One of the people behind me is YOUR death! And i intend to help them do them job." Ummy's eyes filled with rage, longing for revenge and destruction, for the death of Thorn. "Ummy, you haven't figured it out yet? The legend says that my sister will kill me along side her mother. Well, Are you ready? after all you are my sister."
"No. It can't be. I couldn't be your..." "Sister. Well mother, or Rose how does this make you feel. you knew all along. and yet you never told Ummy or my when i was pure." Tears came to thorn's red eyes though she continued."And the dragons. Who could for get them? When I'm through with Ummy and her weak mother, you can be my dragons, fighting at my side until you parish." She smile at the thought. "Never." Said spyro. "We're with Ummy until the end of this!" Cynder added "Then all of you shall parish!!!" Thorn boomed in rage. A force field between them and the villagers formed as did on between thorn and her army. "I hope you like pain." She said in a quiet voice.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#16 Posted: 15:36:26 07/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Ummy drew her blade as did Thorn. Spyro and Cynder had to find the weak spot to her armor. They menoverd her first attack towards them, though if they hadn't one might have lost their head. Ummy lunged toward thorn, she blocked. They each were in a furry of slashes from blades and blastes from magic. Then Spyro saw it. The single flaw to Thorn's armor. It was cracked on one side her her sholder. Cynder blasted fear at the spot to have thorn turn and see her. Thorn ducked, the blast head for ummy who also ducked. Rose held a bow and nearly hit the spot dead on. Ummy saw what they were trying to do. In spyro and cynder's minds they heard clearly from Ummy," Destract her! I'll get her weak piont!" Spyro rammed into thorn nearly throwing her off balence. Cynder head dived doing the job, Ummy flailed her sword making a direct hit on thorn's sholder. The armor crumber to pieces to reveal a thin suit of leather underneath. "So you found my weak spot! It won't happen again." Thorn said in a mocking voice. This was Spyro and Cynder's chance! Cynder ran around her, hitting her with shadow. As thorn tried to block this her left flank was open. Spyro lungded at thorn hitting her with a fire blast. Thorn reared to get to Spyro, Her sword heading in his direction swiftly. Ummy Struck once as Rose hit her in the sholder with an arrow. Thorn fell. As she hit the ground she laughed evily. She began to turn to solid dark cystal as dark crupted fairies will. She shattered. No one could she Ummy through a cloud of dust and dark energy. Ummy saw this only. She saw a beautiful fairy, with short brown hair, nearly eyes as blue as hers. "Ummy," The fairy began,"I am sorry sister. I was curpted and my sight and will vanished, but i always wished for this. Take my tear and make me whole. Only you can help me. But my curption is spreading and soon it will claim you. I love you, Ummy." The figure vanished and ummy saw what was happening, the cave would collapes soon. She had to get every one out. On the figure that was Thorn, she saw a pure white cystal tear. She had been pure. Ummy took the tear, then teleported everyone out of the cave.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#17 Posted: 17:21:54 10/04/2010 | Topic Creator
The village in ruins, all the villagers looked for items they could use to rebuild.
They only found a few tools, rakes and screws mostly. Ummy clasped to the ground, energy drained. Rose looked to her and said softly, "I'm so sorry Ummiara. I hoped your life would never come to something like this." "Mother, you did your best, and i respect you for that. Spyro, Cynder, you have shown our world a kindness beyond repayment," Ummy waved her hands to the portal, it opened to show them the dragon world. "The least i can do is leave the portal open so you can go home, or to other worlds and return. But I ask you stay for one last thing." "Of course, Ummy." Cynder spoke in calm words knowing Ummy was drained. She got up and broke the tear. As it shattered the town's beauty restored. "A fairy's tear holds more power than most anything else. And know that you always have a home here." Ummy said as houses grew, colors formed, plants flourished. "And I thought you might want to see this." Ummy lead them to a small dragon of pure gold. "Her name is Keisha. I was wondering id you would look after her." "We would be honored to." Spyro said. With the small dragon, they left for the dragon world. they would return one day.
300 years later...
Ummy looked outside from the palace window. she saw her children outside playing with their grandmother, rose. Her thoughts returned to the countless times Spyro and Cynder had visited. All the things they ha done to help the village and all beings in every world. She walked to the library of serenity, and pulled out a blank scroll. In with she wrote at the very top of her story... In every world their is a savor or two. and in everyone a lesson to learn my story is of the savors of my and many worlds. My story is the Rise of Thorn.

The End... the next book, "The return of evil" is coming soon!
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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