darkSpyro

Part one:escape
Chapter one:
She landed and looked around,it was night and there were few light from the moon.She walked toward a river and looked in it,A triangle green face was looking at her in river.She put her hand in it.The water washed her bloody hand.She was holding a black stone on the other hand.Her eyes were glowing in the night.She put the stone on the ground and sat.therre was a dragon head picture on the stone.She looked around,A figure came out from shadows,it was big and had a silver armor.The figure asked:
"Did you bring it,Diba?"
Diba smiled and shook her head:
"First,The crystal..."
A dark green crystal fell infront of her,She smiled and hold it then pointed at the stone:
"Here."
The figure sighed:
"How many soldiers you killed?"
"Hmmm...I don't know...But it was necessary"
"How is the egg?"
"ou mean our Fate?It's very well...Remember,We shoulld escape..."

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The sun was shining in the sky.splendor looked out of the window:
"So...How any soldiers have killed?"
"7 soldiers,but all of them were from the dread's army..."
"Hmmm...It has no differents...We're now friends with them...dark and light should have balance...forgot?!"
"Oh,No sir..."
Splender looked at a strong red dragon with old wings:
"Very good...valor...Now...search for the murder..."
"Yes,sir!"
He opened his wings and flew away.Splendor roared angrily:
"They want to destroy the peace in my land!"
"Of course they want...but we won't let it...will we?"
A big old dragon came,his eyes were red and had no pupil.He was black and had the biggest wings that Splendor had seen,Splendor smiled:
"Good morning Dread..."
"I don't think it' good...My soldiers died..."
"We'll find the murder...promise..."
"Good...But first I want to tell you something...on of my spies saw a female shadow...very similar to Diba...your best gaurdian..."
"WHAT?!FIND DIBA!"

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Diba whispered:
"Keen...Keen...are you awake?"
The last night figure yawned:
"Oh,yeah..."
"Hurry!We should escape!"
"Huh?Oh right...right...I should bring the stone and the crystal..."
"Quick!"
Keen got up and looked out of the cave,He went out and dug the ground he grabbed the stone and the crystal.Diba grabbed an egg and hide it in her mantle .Keen wore his armor and yelled:
"Are you ready?"
"Oh,yes..."
"I thing we can arrive to South at the night.But hurry!"
"OK!OK!"
"But first,Are you sure no one saw you?"
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"Ofcourse no one saw me!"
"Oh,good...I was worried..."
"Go?"
"Go!"
They opened their wings and flew to South,they went upper and upper beside the clouds,the weather was alittle cold.Diba looked down and saw a golden big stone:
"Look,the castle!"
They went upper to not be see by the soldiers.Keen looked around:
"Do you know where are we?!"
Diba shrugged:
"No"
Keen nodded and dove down,Diba followed,the wind was flewing aroud their face,it was a good feeling.Diba saw the ground coming closer.Keen opened his wings widely and his speed came lower.Diba didn't do this she flapped her wings slowly and landed,Keen landed too and they looked around,they were in a desert.Keen whispered:
"We're in the red desert...we should go there..."
He pointed at a a little tree.Diba mumbled:
"So hot..."
"Then you couldn't stand the cave we wanna go...it has lava..."
"Please don't talk about lava in such a hot place..."
Keen sat:
"We should rest..."
"Alright..."

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Keen opened his eyes and yawned,Diba was still slept.He got up and looked at the sky,he saw something strange coming to them,it was dark brown and very fast,he looked at it again carefully a strong wind came and the sands made looking for him harder but he didn't need to look,he knew what was it,he yelled:
"whirlwind !"
Diba opened her eyes,she screamed:
"Lay on the ground!"
Kenn laid and made a yellow shield around their self. The whirlwind arrived and made everything sandy.Diba roared:
"Damn it..."
The shield was breaking.they saw a shadow in the whirlwind the shadow's month was opened,he closed his moth and the whirlwind stopped.Keen broke the shield.Diba looked at the shadow,it was a dragon,a brown dragon with very strong wings and strong claws it's skin was hard,his black pupils were wide,and he was breathing deeply.Keen asked:
"Who are you?"
The dragon blinked and spoke:
"I'm Tornado,the wind dragon.Master of desert."
His voice was bass.he walked to them slowly.Diba coughed:
"This place is very sandy."
Tornado didn't smile,he was very serious.He shook his body and sand fell off from him.Keen asked:
"I'm sorry...we bothered you...we should go to the...Where's the TREE?!"
He looked around nervously.Tornado sighed:
"You're lost..."
Diba mumbled.

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Splendor yelled:
"What do you mean you didn't find them?!"
Valor shook his head:
"Sorry sir...they aren't here..."
"Damn it..."
Dread was in a dark corner,he came out and walked to Valor with angry eyes,Valor stepped backward,Dread whispered angrily:
"Do you know what's your job?!Finding them and if you don't do it you're useless and if you're useless...."
He smiled evilly:
"You haven't any place in this world..."
His right claw came to Valor's neck:
"Got it?"
Valor looked straight at Dread:
"Yes,sir..."
Dread didn't like the look,he roared:
"Remember...dark and light are in balance now...but until our power stone is here...but now it isn't here and too bad..."
Splendor looked at Dread:
"You don't mean that you want to fight us?!"
"Not yet...just warning..."
Splendor growled:
"I don't know what to do,where are they Diba has taken her crystal too,so I can't control her."
Dread smiled and showed his sharp teeth:
"What about our spy?"
"You mean Saye?!The female from your land?"
"Of course."
He snickered at Valor:
"Call Saye."
"Yes sir."

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