Chapter 1:
In the Dragon Village, Spyro and Cynder were playing with their friends Tigerstar and Flame. They were play fighting, practicing their skills. Ignitus a dragon elder was watching the young dragons.”Cynder may I have a word with you in the dragon temple?”Ignitus said then walked into the Dragon Temple. Cynder looked at the others. Spyro shrugged and Flame and Tigerstar were obviously holding in a laugh. Cynder walked off after Ignitus.
“What do you want Ignitus?” Cynder asked looking slightly annoyed.
“Cynder you are in grave danger” Ignitus began “The dark master is after you again and he swore that if you fail him again he will kill you” Cynder looked shocked
“But…But” Cynder began.
“Now is not the time to explain” Ignitus interrupted “Go and play with the others.”
Cynder began to walk off but turned around
“Ignitus what happens if Spyro finds out?” Cynder looked at the wise dragon and felt a flicker of doubt
“Do not worry about Spyro young dragon,” Ignitus said
Cynder nodded and ran out of the temple. But Cynder didn’t go and play with the others, she flew away and didn’t look back. Tears glinted in Cynder’s eyes as she flew. Cynder couldn’t stay with the others if she did Malafor would have a clear path to her. Ignitus watched Cynder fly away and nodded his head. He knew why she was flying away. Spyro looked up and noticed Cynder.He then looked at Ignitus and wondered what he had said.The others too had stopped and looked at Spyro. Spyro watched her go with tears glinting in his eyes.Flame came up to him and gave his brother a hug.Tigerstar flew after Cynder but Ignitus got in her way...........
Next part coming soon
By the way you Probably want to see Tigerstar and Flame.OK!!!
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#1 Posted: 06:24:34 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 07:57:51 10/09/2009
Awesome fanfic! With the dragon generator, Flame looks almost exactly like my Spyro's lair character, Fyre, but the crest is different....
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#3 Posted: 08:02:15 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Yup and u need to give me the link.
Any way Chapter 2: Tigerstar flew down in disgust and the others walked to her. “Ignitus why can’t we go to Cynder??” She asked as Cyril, Terridor and Volteer walked up to the youngsters. “Now is not the time young ones.” Cyril said as Ignitus turned around. “I’m afraid Cynder is in trouble again Spyro we must leave her to her own problems.” Ignitus explained. “NO!!!! Your saying that she is being chased again and there is nothing I can do?? Ignitus I have helped her before I can help her now!!” Spyro said looking determined. Sparx came up and shook his head. “Spyro If the old guy says there is nothing you can do then there is nothing you can do. Now come on I’m hungry.” Sparx complained as the other Guardians came up to Ignitus. Cynder landed in Avalar and flew into the cave behind the waterfall. Tears fell from her eyes as she remembered camping there with Spyro and she missed him a lot. She walked to this little case in one end where they had found armour. “I thought he was gone. I thought I got him back for the pain he caused me” She whispered looking out into the sky. As night fell she went out to get what little food she could. When she came back she yawned then went to sleep. Spyro came out to the ledge of the temple where he had first learnt to fly. Tigerstar was inside but Flame was with him. “Spyro I know it’s hard to take in but we all know Cynder. She is strong and she will get through this. Bro I know I wouldn’t be able to understand exactly what you’re going through as I still have Tigerstar but I want you to not give up hope. She loves u and she will do what she can to save u the grief.” Flame said coming up beside his brother. “It wasn’t meant to be this way Flame. We destroyed Malefor. How could he be back??” Spyro asked staring out into the night. “Listen Spyro. We never defeated Malefor. You and Cynder both dreamt you had.She has never got him back and neither have you.” Flame said looking down. Spyro turned to him. “Flame I am going after her. Come if you want but I have to get to her before the Blue Moon Eclipse. You know what happens to dragons when it comes and this year it will be for a whole week. We can’t take the chance. I have to find her!!” Spyro replied flying off. As he flew a portal appeared in front of him and he went in it. He came out the other end in Malefor’s lair. He lay on the ground till he heard Malefor’s horrid voice.
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#4 Posted: 08:06:12 10/09/2009
Cool! Just a suggestion, maybe you should start a new line when a new character speaks, it makes it easier to read.
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#5 Posted: 08:16:14 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok I'll do that now.By the way could u send me that link?
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#6 Posted: 08:22:05 10/09/2009
Which link? I must have forgotten......
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#7 Posted: 08:30:40 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
The Spyro's lair
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#8 Posted: 08:33:06 10/09/2009
Oooohhhhh here it is:
http://lair.spyrothedragon.com/splash/
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#9 Posted: 08:37:30 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
thanx.Can't be bothered puting up any more today
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#10 Posted: 08:39:54 10/09/2009
Actually, when you click the link you have to select a country and click 'enter the lair' at the bottom.
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#11 Posted: 08:58:17 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah but do u just like play games??
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#12 Posted: 09:01:58 10/09/2009
The site isn't working. I can't log in or sign up. Just play games for now.
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#13 Posted: 09:04:35 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok neither can I.Still trying to get youtube to work
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#14 Posted: 09:09:27 10/09/2009
Okay. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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#15 Posted: 09:18:32 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:
The next morning Cynder got up and flew out on her journey. She was halfway when she crashed into one of Malefor’s creatures and she fainted. She was carried to Malefor in a cage by this creature. When she awoke she was in Malefor’s lair and Spyro was there looking at her in horror. Malefor was talking to Spyro and he was turning his head from Malefor to her then back. Spyro was angry but before he could do anything the four guardians appeared. “Malefor we can’t stop you with Cynder but you have no right to teleport Spyro here. We saw you do it and it wasn’t right and you shouldn’t have done it.” Ignitus said as he landed. The others surrounded him and then the flew away with Spyro with Cynder watching him
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#16 Posted: 09:23:48 10/09/2009
Malefor flew away? Where WHERE!? Ooooh this is getting epic!
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#17 Posted: 09:28:57 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
No the others flew away with Spyro
Typing up it now
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#18 Posted: 09:51:47 10/09/2009
Oooohhhh okay! I like this fanfic.
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#19 Posted: 09:54:35 10/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lol got the next bit.
Chapter 4: Cynder tried to break out but she was turned evil again before she could escape. She roared loudly and flew after them. A little way off she saw them but then the two moons came together and made the Blue Moon Eclipse. All the dragons fell to the ground with a thud. When Spyro woke up Cynder was next to him and the others had left except Tigerstar and Flame. The three got up confused. Normally a Blue Moon Eclipse brang the dragons into the eternal darkness. Spyro was worried when Cynder didn’t get up. He picked her up and they flew to Ignitus. Ignitus was worried when he saw her and so were the others. Terrador examined her. “I’m afraid it is the Dark Masters magic. Only he can save her. Spyro, Tigerstar, Flame we will do what we can to get u and Cynder to his lair” Terrador told them then he turned to the others. “We have to get them there so do what u can” He said then Ignitus turned to them. “I will get u across the border.” He said before picking Cynder up and flying off with them. “Be careful and we will help you when you need us” Called Cyril
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#20 Posted: 10:08:19 10/09/2009
Nice! This is really good! Although you spelled Terrador's name wrong.
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#21 Posted: 05:39:58 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
OPPS didn't relise
Chapter 5: Warning contains Spoilers Volteer shook his head but wished them luck aswell. When they came to the border Flame looked grim. “Ignitus Spyro and Cynder can’t get past this. I can and I’m sure Tigerstar can but not them. How will they get there??” Flame said as he looked at it. Ignitus looked at him then shook his head. “I will protect them from the heat as much as I can. You and Tigerstar go ahead. I will get these two to safety.” Ignitus replied as Flame and Tigerstar walked in and battled the heat. When they got to the other end they let Ignitus know so that Spyro and Cynder could get there. Ignitus looked at them then shook his head. “Spyro we must get Cynder across” Ignitus said as he made a blue light around them and began into the heat. After a while the light faded and Ignitus tried to keep it up. Spyro noticed and looked around. “Ignitus we must find another way. You can’t keep up like this.” He said looking around. Ignitus shook his head and looked at Spyro. “Spyro take Cynder and I will send you across. I must go. My path ends helping you but yours has just begun. Remember to gather strength from your friends and follow your heart. It will rarely fail you. And now you must go…go...GO!!!” He said as the light got brighter and Spyro found himself with Flame and Tigerstar.
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#22 Posted: 05:59:49 11/09/2009
Nice story
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#23 Posted: 06:14:30 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
thanx
Chapter 6: Flame shook his head and walked up to Spyro. “I’m so sorry Spyro. I can’t imagine what it’s like to lose Ignitus. He was like your father.” Flame said patting his brother on the back. Spyro looked at him his eyes glinted with tears. “He isn’t gone Flame!!! He is still out there” He said shaking his head. Tigerstar came behind them. “Let it go Spyro. He is gone. You can’t save him” She said shaking her own head. Spyro faced them. “He wasn’t meant to end like this. He was meant to live till I saved the world.” He replied as Flame hugged him. Flame nodded. “We have to go on for him and for Cynder” He replied picking her up. Spyro nodded and they set off. On the way they encountered another Golem on the way. All of them were too weak to fight him and when he hit Spyro he fainted and fell down on the ground in the Burned lands. The others landed by him but they to were too weak to fight. Cyril flew up and protected them with his Ice. The Golem fought hard but in the end he died of Pneumonia. Cyril lay on the ground dying when Spyro woke up. He ran to the Ice guardian’s side as tears filled his, Flame’s and Tigerstar’s eyes. Spyro leant on him. “Not you aswell Cyril” He cried looking at the Ice guardian in horror. Cyril coughed then looked at him. “Spyro care for Cynder and the others. I am greatful to die knowing I helped you to get the Dark Master again” He said as his eyes closed and his breathing stopped.
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#24 Posted: 06:41:14 11/09/2009
Good....
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#25 Posted: 06:46:39 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx although at first I wasn't sure about the deaths
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#26 Posted: 06:58:07 11/09/2009
Oh...how ever do you want to have more deaths too?
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#27 Posted: 07:05:40 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
It came to me when I wrote the story. I am just copying and pasting a story I already wrote.
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#28 Posted: 07:08:03 11/09/2009
Ok!You're good at writing,so could you give me a hand at myth?
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#29 Posted: 07:17:09 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
No you're not bothering me. Of course I can give u a hand. I'll take a look at it
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#30 Posted: 07:20:01 11/09/2009
Golem: I'm going to die of pneumonia! Hooray! Lol...
But it was sad that Cyril had to die as well as Ignitus.....
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#31 Posted: 07:34:47 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah well here is
Chapter 7: Spyro shook his head as he grew angry. “Now Malefor gets it!!” He said as the others came up to him. They continued the journey. On the way Flame slowed and came alongside Spyro. “Spyro are they others weakened because it is the Blue Moon Eclipse??” He asked looking at him. Spyro shook his head. “I don’t know but if it is then the other two are in trouble” Half way there the Destroyer appeared out of nowhere and hit all three dragons making them spiral down and fain. The Destroyer was about to hit them when Volteer appeared and protected them. He was also hit and defeated by the destroyer. When Spyro got up it was like déjà vu. He saw Volteer on the ground and he punched it. He went to Volteer and gave him a zap with his lightning breath. Then he punched the ground. “I’m sorry Volteer” He said tears in his eyes but he wasn’t showing it. Volteer looked at him and smiled quickly. “Don’t be Spyro. I am sorry” He said then faded away. Tigerstar shook her head and Flame looked down. Spyro picked Cynder up then flew away. The others followed him with tears in their eyes.
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#32 Posted: 07:38:01 11/09/2009
Ohhh...cool!
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#33 Posted: 07:41:38 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx. I even have a song for more of the story
Chapter 8: When they came to the Lair Spyro burst through the door. Malefor was in there laughing his head off. Spyro dropped Cynder and stared at Malefor. “How could you be so evil?? What did they do to you??” He yelled glaring at Malefor as the others came behind Spyro. Malefor laughed. “I betrayed them, they betrayed you. What does it matter really?” He laughed. Flame growled. “They had high hopes for you and you repay them at exactly the time of the Blue Moon Eclipse?” He yelled getting just as angry. Malefor laughed again. “By the way thanks to Cynder you guys came here. You can get up now Cynder.” He laughed as Cynder got up upsetly. Tigerstar glared at her. “You were pretending after we trusted you?? If you hadn’t then maybe Ignitus and the others would be alive” She yelled as Cynder looked down. She was about to say something but Spyro cut in. “That wasn’t her fault. She was being used by the Dark Master” He said but then a thought came over him. “But what he is saying true Cynder?? Did you really fake it for him??” He asked looking rather upset. Cynder shook her head. “No… I don’t know… I don’t remember” She replied. Malefor glared at them. “Fine I will defeat you and the others” He replied flying up and began to attack them. Spyro, Cynder, Flame and Tigerstar worked together to defeat him. Cynder was injured and so were the others and they were thrown against a wall. They lay there as Malefor got his convexity breath ready. He was about to shoot it then Terrador attacked him. Spyro and the others got up and helped Terrador with convexity breath. Malefor hit Terrador with his and he was killed with it. Spyro sent Malefor to the Purple realm then went to Terrador. “He is gone Terrador. Everyone is safe” He whispered to Terrador’s dead body. “Good-bye friend” Spyro walked to the others shaking his head. “We shouldn’t be going through this” He whispered as he hugged Cynder. Cynder looked at him. “Why did Malefor have to get his revenge like this??” She asked as tears dropped from her eyes. Flame shook his head. “I guess we won’t know that…Come on we should go back and give everyone the news.”
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#34 Posted: 08:14:24 11/09/2009
Noooo! Everyone's dyiiiinnnnnggg!!! T-T
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#35 Posted: 08:16:07 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lol sorry that is the way I wrote it
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#36 Posted: 08:22:15 11/09/2009
It's okay, it's your fanfic. Great story!
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#37 Posted: 08:24:02 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9:
When the others got back everyone knew about what had happened and they had made four special stones in front of the temple. Spyro blew fire on Ignitus’s, Ice on Cyril’s, Lightning on Volteer’s and Earth on Terrador’s. Tigerstar and Cynder sang a song to remember them that they had prepared. Spyro stood by the stones his head hanged down and Flame was next to him. After the song they met up together as they others went under cover. Cynder looked out at the sky. “Something isn’t right” She said and the others saw what she was saying. The sky was purple and the moons hadn’t moved
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#38 Posted: 09:11:39 11/09/2009
Awwww, that's so sad and deep.......
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#39 Posted: 10:02:11 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I know thats why I chose that song
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#40 Posted: 10:11:12 11/09/2009
Choosing songs for a fanfic is a good idea, so the reader can imagine the situation through what they read and what they hear.
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#41 Posted: 10:13:54 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanx.... I thought it would help
I think this is a good one
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#42 Posted: 10:31:26 11/09/2009
Awwwww there's a song by Evanescense (I think it's wake me up) That really reminds me of Cynder....
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#43 Posted: 10:37:47 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
no its called my imortal
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#44 Posted: 10:50:10 11/09/2009
A different song....
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#45 Posted: 10:55:02 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
opps sorry.The song I've got could work for malefor aswell
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#46 Posted: 11:05:59 11/09/2009
I know, they are very deep songs....
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#47 Posted: 11:17:04 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lol people died what did u expect
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#48 Posted: 11:22:18 11/09/2009
Hahaa..... we've been tennis posting!!!!
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#49 Posted: 13:44:03 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Lol ur right
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#50 Posted: 23:56:52 11/09/2009
Keep up the good work!
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