darkSpyro

Oh,well,another stupid energydragon story:
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April was slept,her long black hair was messy,her bed was alittle big and the sun was shining,the littlle gryphons were learning flying and made noises happily.
kane her husband,was looking for dragons.dragon hunters were in the forest,looking for wyverns.But there was a big diffrent between them,Kane was a dragon rider.After a while,April woke up and yawned:
"Ohhhh,what a dream."
she got out of her bed and combed her hair,she was whispering a song.she looked at her desk and mumbeled:
"Silly."
she search her drawer and got worried:
"where is ....?!"
she threw her pillow on the ground and looked in it crazilly:
"Oh,no..."
she scratched her bedsheet and screamed;
"Oh,no!Kane!"
april ran downstairs and cried:
"Kane!"
there was no answer,she walked to the garden and called Kane again but still garden was silent,grphons were scared of the noises.
april ran back to her house and wore her clothes:
Boots,close dress and all the things that drgon rider wore.
April shouted:
"Speedy!"
A fast wyvern came and yawned:
"Why are you worry?Where's my master,kane?"
April whispered anxios:
"The map...The map has stolen and kane isn't here."
Speedy stood up quickly and yelled:
"THE MAP?!"
April :
"shhhh..."
Speedy roared:
"Who knows this map?strange..."
April nodded and asked:
"Can I ride you?"
"how many time did you ride wyvern?"
"never,but once I rode a chinese one."
Speedy got angry:
"Those slow,old dragons?You're too basic for me!"
"Pleassssse!"
"Oh,ok,just for map and kane."
"thanks.."
she came on wyvern back hardly.Speedy scowled.
Suddenly wyvern flied up and April screamed.Speedy snickered.

Execuse me,Is my story that bad that no one have a look in it?

April grabbed speedy neck and closed her eyes she was sick and going to threw out...
Speedy yelled:
"Where do you wanna go?"
"At the forest,..."
"Hmmm...Grab me hard."
he threw himself down,April couldn't breath she just closed her eyes and tried to think about another thing.Suddenly she felt calm and opened her eyes,they were on the land.she jumped down and looked around.there were many trees and many strange sounds April looked at speedy ,speedy nodded.April went to a river for washing.then she called:
"Kane!"
Nobody answered but a man jumped out of a bush,he had dragon riders clothes too and an egg in his hand.
"Oh,kane...where were you?I was worried."
Kane said quaitly:
"Looking for this dragon egg,.."
he showed the big egg and continued:
"what's wrong?Seems worry."
"Ummm...Kane...the map...has...LOST.."
"THE MAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

I like it

Thanks!
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Kane shaked April:
"When?"
April whined:
"I don't know exactly...In this morning."
Kane sat on the ground and grabbed his head with his hands :
"Oh,...no...."
April sat beside him:
"We'll find it...dear."
She put her hand on kane's shoulder.Kane sighed:
"I hope dragon hunters didn't find map."
his face became white.April shed a tear:
"My fault."
"Maybe."
he said apathetic and stood up.April started crying:
"Oh,don't tell Speedy,dragons will be angry,I always do wrong!I shouldn't put the map easily on the desk...forgive me Kane forgive me!"
Kane just looked at her and said:
"Sorry,I can't.You didn't keep the dragons secret well."
he went away in the trees and diaspeared.April threw herself on the ground:
"Kane is a huge dragon lover,Some times i feel that he loves dragon more then me..."
she stood up and went away to Speedy,But he wasn't there.April screamed.

I like this It's good.

Thanks(You're a big hope for me...)
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April looked around calling:
"Speedy!"
she walked to a bush and saw some blood,she turned back and closed her eyes:
"Kane will kill me..."
"What's up,April?"
April looked around and saw Speedy eating a rabbit:
"Speedy!I thought you're dead!"
Speedy yawned:
"Where is master?Did you tell him?"
"Yes..."
Speedy suddenly became angry:
"What did he say?"
"ummm...he said that he has hide the map..."
she lied and looked at his sharp teeth,she felt sorry for herself.Kane came and called:
"April!"
April became white and screamed:
"Coming!coming!"
She ran to the voice and saw kane.Kane was on a dead dragon,the blood was everywhere.April digusted.Kane sighed and said angrily:
"Dragons are fighting and killing each other..."
April didn't get pity:
"Is that body death for a weak?it smells terrible!"
Kane looked angrily:
"No,a poisen dragon has killed him!"
April got afraid:
"You mean..."
Kane roared:
"Yes...darkness is begining..."
April whined:
"Without the map..."
Kane breath deeply:
"And the anger of the dragons of you..."
April sat confusingly and shouted angrily.
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I like it. It just shows, some of the best fanfics are not as popular

Thank you so much,friend!
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April was coming back home,she was so tired and messy,kane didn't come he said that he should look for more dragon eggs.Speedy was singing and flying fast,no body tell him the truth and that made April realy sorry.Finaly,they arrived and April jumped down slowly she ran to her room and changed clothes,then she washed herself and then she heared a bell,she became angry,dragon hunters were coming with another poor death wyvern.
"Hey neighbor!why don't you came and choose one the dragon skins for your dress?"
April looked out of the window,there was a thin tall woman had a basket in her hand:Maria.April became red and tried to smile:
"No,I have many wyvern clothes..."
"But today is a shadow dragon!It's cute!come and see!"
April screamed:
"What?!"
she ran down stairs and saw a nighmare: A big bloody shadow dragon on the ground and women that cratch his skin crazily and giving hunters golden coins.April got sick:
"An elemental dragon!Are you crazy people?"
No one pay attension to her,April became white and ran away,to the charlie home.

Um.... well 2 things.... and I'm only trying to help you here....

1. You title's too short... and it;s not catchy or creative

2. Put an empty line between each of your chapter.... makes it look crisper...

Otherwise, not half bad.

Yhanks for your comment.

Ummm...
I wonder who's the hero and will they defeat the darkness and win?
or it's the end of the dragons?
will see...

I do like it, it's different.

thanks,tomorrow I'll write .it's enough for today.

Eagerly waiting friend

April knocked the door,no answer,she knocked harder,still no answer.she hit the door and yelled:
"Charlie!"
Finally she broke the door and got in,she wished she'd never saw that:A young man was on the floor that a sword was in his heart and there was a paper on it the paper was bloody.April shoucked and went to the paper slowly:
We found you,you'll die with your dragons
April whined:
"Charlie..."
she shed a tear on the paper,their friends were killed for what?There was a big danger near them.April cried and hugged charlie body.she was thinking of their future with sacring all the time.She sighed:
"What's the use of loving dragons?they just make trouble..."
She lied on the floor and closed her eyes.
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Kane was in the forest looking for more eggs he was so angry:
"I should never trust April."
he thought.
"GET LOST STRANGER."
he looked back.
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thank you so much Spyrocrazy for giving me hope.

No problem I like it, I find it intresting and it's a nice fanfic to read because the chapters aren't as big as loaves of bread

thanks.

no problem.... and it isn't bad at all... just not the style of writing that I prefer.... I read it and I liked it anyhow just to let you know (since I didn't add that in before)

(I like loaves of bread) lol

Kane saw a big red dragon,the dragon was about one hundred years old.Kane couldn't breath:Another elemental dragon!
He looked at the dragon and smiled:
"I'm not a dragon hunter I'm a dragon rider."
The dragon yawned and looked at kane.then he opened his wings and sighed:
"A dragon rider...they are few..."
Kane nodded,then he remembered the map and his smile became scowl.He wished that the dragon forgot the map that they give to dragon riders.Kane tried to be happy:
"Is your home safe?"
The dragon looked proud:
"yes"
Kane breath deeply:
"Did you fight with any body?"
"Not yet..."
"Not yet?!"
"Water dragons ae going to fight with us..."
"Why?"
"Because of a land...There is alnd that no dragon hunter knows it."
"What about the onus?"
"Which onus?"
"Ummm..."
the dragon shook his head and flied away.Kane mumbled:
"They forgot the peace onus...too bad...it's a sign."
he ran to the village.
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When he arrived,there was just a shadow dragon skeleton there,Kane became angry and roared.He saw the charlie house door open.he went to it and called:
"Charlie..."
Suddenly he saw the dead body and yelled.April opened her eyes and whined:
"He's dead.the killer has a messege for you."
she showed the paper.he read it and became white:
"April...you should go..."
"Why?!"
"they will kill you,I should protect dragons..."
"But Kane..."
"Don't argue with me!"
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After a while,April was on a unicorn,riding to the mountains.she was crying.the tears were felling on the unicorn hair.She thought of her husband and became ashamed.He was a hero,what about her?A silly crying wife. Suddenly she heared a voic ahe looked back and saw a black rider is following her,she screamed.
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Thank you everyone!

The black rider caught April's hair and threw her on the ground the unicorn ran away.April jumped up and got her sward and guard.the rider had one too.April attacked him,but the rider turned right,she attacked right but he turned left and kicked April's leg,April yelled and jumped up.she looked at the rider's face,he had a hood.She step backward and breath deeply.the rider step forward and threw a coin up.
April looked at the coin for a minute and suddenly The rider threw her a dirk.the drik hurt april shoulder she looked at the drik and found out that it was poisend,Her eyes went dark and she fell on the ground.she felt that someone is putting her on a hourse and ride it,then she felt nothing.
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Sorry it's too short.

Coool

when April opened her eyes,it was dark.She looked around the cell.there were many dragon's skeletons there.she sighed and sat.she found out that some one has healed her hurt.She thought angrily:
"They need me.."
She found a messege:
Tell us the truth or...
"Or what?"
She looked out of a small window,She thought sadly of her husband.Suddenly she saw an Elemental dragon!She was confused.He was caught by some people.she thought that they should be soliders. Then the black rider came and said something and turned to April fastly.
April hided her head.
Another messege came from window:
Good fighter
April Kick the wall angrily and threw heself on the floor.
another messege came to her:
Don't hurt yourself,I'll do it
April turned her head up and saw the black rider with his hood.April looked at him:
"Don't bother yourself,I won't tell anything to you!"
Strange...The black rider didn't answer just wrote another messege:
We'll see...We have an elemental dragon and if he understand that the map has lost...he will...
April remembered the map and whined:
"did you find it?"
black rider didn't answer and went away and shut the door.April closed her eyes :
"forgive me , Kane..."

Oooh more!!!

Kane was hiding the egg carefully.Then he sighed and thought of April:
"I hope she's good..."
He yawned and went to the forest with speedy.He looked around,but he didn't see any elemental dragon.He sat and looked at the ground...
Strange,Horse trace.He was confused:
"dragon hunters don't use normal horses..."
Speedy was boared,walking around and hunting some rabbits.He went to a big tree and saw a strange creature...he roared,but the creature bite him:
"DARK CREATURES!!!!!!!!"
Speedy flied up and warned Kane.Kane shoucked and ran then he jump and caught speedy feet.they flied away,but Kane was scared:
"another dark sign..."
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April was on the floor thinking that she should never losed the map.
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Thanks everyone!

Speedy landed on another part pf forest.Kane yawned and slept on a tree.Speedy looked around and saw a river and went to it.he looked around and saw a black dragon,no,dark dagon Speedy wanted to yell but the dragon looked at him and smiled...she was female....Red scary eyes...A lovely smile...and some strange markes on her body.
"Hi,wyvern..."
Speedy roared:
"Dark.."
Dark dragon giggled:
"my name isn't dark..it's Selena..."
Speedy looked angrily:
"What do u want?"
"What do I want?!I was here thinking..."
"Thinking to evil plans?!"
Selena looked at Speedy and sighed:
"No...thinking to the life.."
Speedy roared:
"That's not my business!"
Selena screamed:
"So why are u here!"
Then she sat down and shook her tail gently :
"What are u doing here?"
Speedy walked to Selena:
"Why are u here?"
Selena whispered:
"Sometimes I want to be on calm..."
"Calm?!"
Selena suddenly jumped up and ran away:
"I'm late!Master!"
Speedy ran to her and jumped on her:
"NO!you must answer my question!"
Selena eyes glowed angrily and she hissed with a strange diffrent voice:
"Get lost little kid!"
the she opened her mounth and a cold fire came from it:
Darkness
Speedy fell on the ground and Selena flied away.
Speedy whined.

Kewl!

Speedy opened his eyes and looked around:
"Where's..."
He saw kane infront of him:
"Are you ok,guy?"
"I can't remember any thing..."
"What happend?"
"A dragon....dark...Selena....I can't..."
Kane sighed:
"I know...there are dark cratures everywhere now,We should be careful..."
Speedy nodded but he knew that Selena would not hurt him.
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April kicked the weak wall:
"I think I can destroy it..."
Suddenly a solider came in and brought April to a room the black rider had a sward in his hand.
"You're so fool..."
Then she walked toward him:
"You won't kill me..."
the black rider didn't answer.
April whispered:
"Because I know where's the Shrine you want."
Black rider nodded and finally talked:
"Say..."
"It's in the mountain...over there..."
"Why are you saying it to me?!"
"Because,My friends dead..because of you..."
"I didn't kill them..."
"Yes you did...How ever I not intrest in dragons now...Go and kill them,but...don't forgot my money."
Black rider yelled:
"WHAT?"
"Yes...my money.."
then she smiled:
"If I kill them,they wouldn't care to the map...and Kane would pay attenstion to me."
The black rider roared:
"What if I kill you?!"
"Oh,you wouldn't..because I know how to make you rich."
April's mind was destroyed...she didn't know what is she sayin'...but something in her was saying that free...Her eyes were changed...something was in her body.
The black rider smiled and whispered:
"Alright."
April hissed:
"You'll be rich easily..."

Oooh, please continue!

Tanx!I'll write it after school!

I'm still on holiday

Speedy was flying worry,Kane had told him that the forest has lots of dark creatures now.He was looking for Selena,He saw a little black and understand that she's Selena,He landed and saw Selena eating a meat.Selena saw Speedy and roared:
"Get lost..."
Speedy walked toward her:
"No,you should listen to me.."
Selena eyes glowed again and she attacked Speedy,her mouth was bloody and made her more scary,Speedy yelled and jumped up:
"You should tell me where are you from!"
Selena showed her teeth and screamed:
"You are too nosey! These dragons are dead!"
She shoot aa cold fire to Speedy.Speedy jumped right and opened his wings:
"Don't make me Attack you...You are enemy!"
But Selen just roared and scratch Speedy body,Speedy yelld and shoot Selena away.Then he growled.Selena Put a black circle on her self and unleash it.speedy yelled and hide behind the tree.Selena flied away,laughing evily.Speedy looked sadly.
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I'm on holiday too.this school isn't serius it's just for summer classes.But my mom says that i should go every days.

Omg this is great

Kane was walking angrily:
"Speedy,They are wild,Some of them doesn't know their names too!They are no more a dragon they are just darkness! "
Speedy wasn't listening just thinking to Selena.Kane suddenly turned to Speedy:
"Promise you never try to talk with her."
Speedy mumbled:
"ugh...Ok..."
"Good"
Kane was looking for the map,The map had many secrets about dragons,It shouldn't find by dragon hunters...I'm sorry...it did...
Suddenly a gryphon landed:
"I have a messege..."
Then he began:
"From village:we no more want you to came in the village...Many dragons attacked us,just because of you!"
Kane couldn't breath:
"WHAT?!"
Speedy whined:
"Dark creatures...they attacked us...oh no...Selena..."
Kne sat angrily.
Gryphon just looked ta him coldly and left.
Speedy shed a tear.

Please continue!

Aright:Tomorrow
Thanks friends!thanks very much!

You are welcome, amigo!

OOC:How can I edit the topic name?
Thanks!
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April was on ahorse,showing the way to the rider.The rider was looking at a map all the time,suddenly a sword came near his neck:
"Wha..."
April snickered:
"Kill him..."
The rider fell on the ground bloody.A fairy cleaned her sword:
"Sorry I came late..."
April hissed:
"I'll forgive you just this time..."
The fairy cried and bowed:
"Oh my master..."
April snickered:
"No get lost!I have work with April..."
The fairy screamed and flied away quickly.April waited and waited,Selena came.April roared:
"I told you never go to Kane and Speedy..."
Selena smiled:
"Yes,my master,But this little silly wyvern is so sweet..."
She laughed.April smiled:
"Wanna another hunt,yeah...?"
"Oh,YEAH!"
"The forest village,has a wizard...he's all yours..."
Selena mumbled:
"Should I come like a dragon again...?"
"Oh,yes..."
Selena screamed of happiness and flied away.April walked to the forest.

*Clap's loudly*

Thanks!

Kane had an argue with Speedy:
"Speedy!Mountain isn't safe to go!"
"It is!It's safe!"
"It's safe for dragons!"
"NO!"
"YES!"
"Ok,you say.which place is safe for us?"
"Easy,in the bird island..."
"WHAT?!This place is so far,I don't like water dragons and..."
"Shhh.."
"What?!"
"SHHHHHHHH!"
Speedy looked around and heared the voice too.It was whining...
Kane walked slowly to the voice,then he shoucked:A female elf,had hurted.
Kane walked to her:
"What..."
The elf roared:
"Dragons attacked us!This forest is ours!I told you,we should kill the all quickly!"
Kane tried to explain,but the elf screamed:
"If you go with dragons,You're our enemy!You told us to peace with dragons!We'll atack them!the rules are no more important for us!Elves will attack!Dragons start that!The wizard bones has found A drgon had ate him!Dragons are wild and dangerous,..."
Kane went white then he yelled:
"You're wrong!Dragon never eat humans!"
"Yes they do!They are like other wild creatures!"
"Speedy isn't wild!"
"He is!He's a wyvern isn't he?!"
"Wyverns never kill humans for fun!"
"Who said for fun?!They want to rule the world!"
"NO!"
"Yes...The war has begun..."
The elf vanished in nature.Kane sat confused,he whispered:
"It's just a dark begin..."

Kewl!

Omg! Why I haven't watched this earlier???

*Snort* Kane is a llama.

-.o'' Ok...

Ever played ANB?

Hmmh... no

Kane is a charactor from it.

I'm so sorry,but I didn't want to bring the Spyro characters in,Kane is just a name,isn't it?Kane is a human in this story.
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April walked to a stone and sat,suddenly an old gryphon came:
"Why did you come?"
April tried to smile:
"Aren't you happy?"
Gryphin shook his head:
"First I should know why are you here,then I'll tell you how much I'm happy."
April breath deeply:
"You'll be so happy..."
Then she continued:
"You know that the dragonrider wizard has dead..."
The old Gryphon nodded sadly.April smiled and looked at a big tree:
"I'm sure dragons has killed him,They want to be the boss,they don't like this game"
The old gryphon yelled:
"What?!That's impossible!"
April said calmly:
"Possible."
The old gryphon mumbled.April snickered:
"So,you want to watch the poor dragonriders dieng,the poor elves..."
The old gryphon roared:
"Never!I'll make a big army!"
April laughed:
"I'll help you..."
They raise hands and another manner broked...

MOAR!! NOW!!!