- Malefor and Senka and the Relics of Darkness
- The Darkness of Malefor: The New Age
Chapter 24 will be up soon...
And if you want to read the other chapters of the story click here.
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#1 Posted: 17:57:39 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Well... I kinda gave up on my fanfics a while ago... No one was reading then... But then when I was looking I found that people had been posting asking for more like... Quite recent so I decided to continue 2 of my stories...
Chapter 24 will be up soon... And if you want to read the other chapters of the story click here. |
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#2 Posted: 18:22:42 02/04/2009
Cool look forwarding to reading them. I get the same problem, I feel like no one likes them. (My fanfics that is)
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#3 Posted: 20:42:04 04/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Note: By the way... You didn't miss a chapter... I kinda like cut out a bit to make you think like 'OMG! WHAT HAPPENED!!!' Enjoy!
Chapter 24: Shadow of the Dead Malefor looked around the dark room. His glowing white eyes shone into the darkness making a bright light for Malefor to see. The fellow Dragons in the city all lay dead in a pool of there own blood. All but one. Malefor walked up to Violet as she lay un awair of what Malefor had done. 'There is only one thing remaining for you to do...' A dark voice said in Malefors head. "Violet, wake up!" Malefor said. His voice echoed through the room. Violet didn't wake up. She just lay there infront of him. The voices of footsteps came from behind him. Malefor turned around and looked into the darkness. "Hello?" The Dragon asked as Malefors bright eyes shone towards the Dragon. Malefor stood there as the Dragon walked up to him. "It is almost over..." Malefor said as the Dragon walked up to him. He grabbed hold of Violet and flew out of the city through one of the large holes in the walls. "Malefor!" The Dragon yelled as Malefor flew up into the sky. Malefor hovered above the city looking down at its tall towers. Violet slowly opened her eyes as she looked down at the ground. She screamed in horror and conufusion until she noticed who was carrying her. Malefor's glowing eyes glaired down at her. "Malefor!! What! What is this!" She yelled. Malefor smiled down at her. "It has come Violet... We can finaly escape the city... And you... You can live as queen by my side of the new world of darkness..." Malefor said. Violet looked at him shocked. "No! No Malefor stop!" Violet yelled. Malefor looked at her in anger. "What?" He asked. "You dare tell me to stop... Nothing can stop me! Not even you... Mother..." He yelled. Violet shook her head. "What! Malefor no! Im not your mother! Don't you get it! I lo-" Violet yelled before she was interupted by Malefor. "Lies! All of them! Lies feeded into your brain when you were born... Lies that shrowd the world from the true darkness!" Malefor yelled. Violet shook her head. "No Malefor... Someone has lied to you... In your head..." She whispered. Malefor looked at her in anger. "And what if I am controling Malefor!" He yelled with a deep echoing voice. Violet shook her head. "No... You left! You said you wouldn't come again!" Violet yelled. "Indeed I did! But I never expected you to come... It seams everything came into place... Perfect..." He whsipered. Violet shook her head. "No... Malefor will come through! You can't hold on forever!" She yelled. Malefor grinned. "Indeed I can't..." He whispered. Malefor opened one of his claws as he let Violet hang from one of his claws. "No... You know what I meant! You can't hold on to Malefor forever! One day! One day Convexity and he will-" She yelled but as she did Malefor let go of Violet completly. She feel into the deep darkness of the city bellow them. Malefor shook his head as his glowing eyes turned back to normal. He had just realised what he had done. All the Dragons he had killed, and then Violet was left to the mercy of Convexity. He quickly dived down trying to save her. He knew she couldn't fly, that was one of the reasons she came to the city in the first place. Malefor hovered down onto the stone floor as he looked at the still body of Violet. To Be Continued... |
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#4 Posted: 21:03:23 04/04/2009
Awsome!
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#5 Posted: 19:51:09 09/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 25: Love Dies
Malefor walked up to her just hoping that she was still alive but there was no such luck. As he touched her ice cold scales he had to admit it. She was dead. He sighed as he turned around. "I should have done something... I should have done something to stop it!" He murmered to himself. A cold hand pulled one of his wings. "You did good Malefor!" A deep voice said. It was Violet. Malefor rubbed his eyes confused. "Violet?" He asked. "No you fool!" Convexity said in an angry voice. Malefor looked at him in anger. "I'll kill you! You did this! That wasn't me!" He said. Convexity began to laugh. "You did this Malefor! You can't deny it! You killed all of thoes Dragons! Your the one who's anger and rage braught me to this world!" Convexity said. Malefor stepped back. "But... What you said about ruling the world! That was you! Leading this world into darkness!" He said. Convexity shook his head as he walked closer to Malefor. "Like I said... Your darkness braught me to this world... I granted you power... The darkness was within you..." He said. Malefor shook his head. "No... Thats not true!" Malefor yelled. Suddenly he heard voices from behind him calling his name. He turned to face them as a yellow glow got closer from the distance. Malefor turned around to face Convexity but all that remained was Violets dead body. Malefor jumped up into the sky as he flew away from the city. He had no home, no family and he had even killed the only person who would ever love him. He needed to find somewhere to go. But he couldn't think of anywhere. He could only run. Run from his life, all he ever knew but there was a question that he couldn't answer. Could he run from the darkness. He turned his head as he looked at the Dragons chasing him. He closed his eyes as he shook his head. 'I can't do this...' He thought to himself. He looked down at the dark blue sea bellow him as the two moons reflected on the surface. He closed his eyes and dived down into the rough surface of the water. He plunged down to the sea bed as he lay motionless. Bubbles of air rose from his mouth to the surface of the water. To Be Continued... |
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#6 Posted: 16:36:21 11/04/2009
PC!!!
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#7 Posted: 19:09:00 11/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Fireball
Let me guess... Please Continue |
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#8 Posted: 13:28:23 12/04/2009
Yep.
I can't wait to read all of the Malefor and Senka Fanfics! I've been reading the 1st.
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#9 Posted: 19:09:54 17/04/2009
Sorry about this comment if you don't think of it as relivent but I'm itching to explain/say this. You did notice a light creates a shadow?
Work that one out! HINT: Its to do with TLOS and fanfics of darkness! ......More of the light bigger the shadow!
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#10 Posted: 19:14:51 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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I thought of that... In one of my previous story's they said that the only way you could defeat the darkness is by defeating all that is good in the world... AKA... The light... |
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#11 Posted: 19:17:44 17/04/2009
Oh did you? Well just saying but that's not where I got it from I was just listening to this song it suddenly came to me.
I was working it out and I got this: (Spyro example) Maybe Spyro has a bad side (shadow) because he's too good (lightness)(forgetting that he got struck by purple lighting in TEN )
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#12 Posted: 19:19:08 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: dragons
That is quite a good idea... *stealage* JK! Edit: You should write a fanfic with that kind of idea! |
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#13 Posted: 19:28:24 17/04/2009
I was going to but I thought I would never get my lazy self to do it so I thought I'd make I comment on it some where and leave it for grabs! Lol!
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#14 Posted: 19:31:41 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: dragons
Realy.... Mmmm.... © Bionicle2809 I will make it part of my fan game trilogy.... The Destiny of Spyro: The Omen of Light... (Thats another way of saying the darkness ) |
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#15 Posted: 19:34:20 17/04/2009
AWESOME!! Wha' for Youtube and things? If so awesomer!!
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#16 Posted: 19:35:39 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: dragons
Oh yeah, that main menu thing... I shall also make a main menu for that! After 'The Destiny of Spyro: The Dark Spirit' is finished |
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#17 Posted: 20:19:46 17/04/2009
Theres gonna be a Spyro fangame by you? Can't wait to play.
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#18 Posted: 20:27:05 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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Yeah... Problem... Made in... Spore: Galactic Adventures... So... You'll need that to play it... Or you can watch these vids Im gonna make of it to show people who can't play it what its like... |
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#19 Posted: 04:50:02 25/04/2009
wait voilet loves malefor? hqw long has it been since he met here(well the first day)
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#20 Posted: 09:03:54 25/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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About... 3 years... I like to skip forwards in time alot |
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