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Cynder's Legend 2: Rise of Darkness [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 19:50:27 09/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay this is the squeal to Cynder's Legend.
If you haven't read it yet here is the link:

//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/vi...ic=21059&page=1

I will begin shorty, so fans gather round!!! I'm soooo happy! smilie
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#2 Posted: 21:23:11 09/10/2009
W00T! smilie
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#3 Posted: 01:02:03 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Oops. My computer lost Internet connection. I'm typing thisvfrom my IPod. I'll have to wait 'till tomarow. smilie
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#4 Posted: 10:36:40 10/10/2009
Oh no! But OK
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#5 Posted: 16:56:12 10/10/2009 | Topic Creator
okay here we go!

You will see some words you may not understand, they are all types of dragons. here is how you pronounce them.

Knucker- NU-ker
Ampithere- AMP-i-theer
Wyvern- WAY-vern
Hydra- HI-dra

Oh also ill make profiles

Prologue

Most every dragon was force underground. Only a few villages survived on the surface. For a dragon, they call him the Dark Prince, attacked anyone he saw. Now was a very special time. Many eggs hatched at this time. Not all but most.
"Oh Kireena what will we name it!?" panted a Knucker to his partner.
"Well, I think it depends, Scar." Kireena said back.
Now Scar and Kireen were both Knuckers, but there were Wyverns, Hydras, Amitheres, Frosts, and Dwarfs! All running down the largest of tunnels.
Scar and Kireena were so happy until they got to the room.

here are some links that give you info & pictures.
Knucker: http://thesipers.com/danny/knuckerdragon.html
Ampithere: http://www.freewebs.com/skreth/amphitheres.htm
Hydra: http://www.draconian.com/whatis/whatis.htm
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#6 Posted: 02:25:57 11/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Need Inspiration! AAAAA! smilie I want YOUR ideas!

this add was paid for by Ripto ink. smilie that's me!
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Yes, I am a comedian. smilie
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#7 Posted: 02:42:05 11/10/2009
Interesting.
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#8 Posted: 03:25:37 11/10/2009
Dragonology Dragons!!!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
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#9 Posted: 11:27:40 11/10/2009
Very Interesting smilie
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#10 Posted: 12:46:56 11/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Bolt
Dragonology Dragons!!!


You got that right! And every one of these are in a book called:
Dragonology a field guide to dragons. It comes with card board dragons that you put together, the dragons are 3D, it's full of information about dragons and finding them, and tells you the best time of year to look AND where! So buy one NOW! Posibly at local book store!

About the story... I felt a little lazy after being out all day so I didn't type. Sorry!! smilie
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#11 Posted: 11:37:27 12/10/2009
PLZ keep going
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#12 Posted: 20:25:52 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
okay okay! smilie

"Oh my god! our babies!!" an Amithere yelped.
The room was filled with egg yolks and shell. Only a few eggs had hatched. The various mothers and fathers found them under bits of shell or huddled in a corner with yolk all over them. Kireena and Scar found three cuddled together. One they could tell was theirs, he was red like Kireena, but darker like Scar, another was a Hydra, she was a smokey color with hints of silver, the last was a Frost, the usual light blue.
"Ohhh, the poor things! Lets find their parents, Scar." Kireena whispered.
"Yes, let's." He replied. The two picked up the chicks and raced off. The Frost was whining the whole time, The Hydra was quiet and just looked at the many dragons as they passed by, and the Knucker was asleep.
"Hello!? There are three chicks without parents!

TO BE CONTINUED...
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#13 Posted: 21:11:11 12/10/2009
Great story but what does this have to do with Cynder? want to see my story here a link//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=23248 EDIT: i fixed the link.
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#14 Posted: 22:05:48 12/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder 19000
Great story but what does this have to do with Cynder? want to see my story here a link//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?=23248


Cool! I read it!
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#15 Posted: 15:21:09 13/10/2009
Good part smilie
Yes, what has this to do with Cynder.
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#16 Posted: 17:11:23 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
you will see...

Thirteen years has passed since the uh... problem. smilie

"Ha! pinned ya!" shouted Silver, the Hydra.
"Hey No fair!" yelled Kilroy, the Knucker.
"Oh yea it is!" Icicle, the Frost dragon, called. They were playing tag in a grove near the forest. Kilroy wriggled free from Silver's grip. Something about the the same shape as an owl swooped down from one of the large trees. The three screeched as it slightly touched each of them.
"ha Ha HA!! You should have seen the look on your faces! Bwa ha ha!" laughed the Dwarf dragon Liriodon.
"Not funny, Liriodon!" Silver screeched in anger.
"Okay okay!" he said sarcastically.
"Anyway... Tag Your IT!" Icicle said and touched Liriodon.
"HEY GET BACK HERE FOOLS!" he sneered playfully.The four ran and ran. Finally Liriodon smacked Kilroy in the arm.
"OW!" he yelped. This only made them all run faster. He grabbed Icicle and bashed him on a large black and purple stone.
Rage rushed through Icicle and he took Kilroy by the arms and pinned him on the side of the rock. He accidentally hit Kilroy on the rock so hard it began to crack. Their eyes became the shape of dinner plates as they stepped back.
"I'm sorry Spyro." whispered a voice.
"Who's sayin' that?" Liriodon asked.
A blinding light came from the rock as if to answer him. They all shielded their eyes. when the light vanished what lay there in the rock's place was a small female dragon. She groaned and muttered as she lay.
"Who is that?" Silver asked.
"Who indeed." came a voice. An aged Gargoyle stood behind them.
"Zaneeba! We found her laying here while we were playing tag!" Kilroy said. She pondered This for a while and walked up the the body. The dragoness lay motionless.
"Is she dead!?" Icicle wondered. Then her stomach started moving. They could tell she was breathing. Zaneeba let out sigh of relief.
"Excuse me, can you hear me? Hello?" she said to her. The dragoness stirred before opening her eyes. She saw Icicle, Liriodon, and Zaneeba, but when she saw Silver she screamed.
"WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU!?!," she yelled pointing at Silver,
"Wha where am I, Oh, my head..." she stammered.
"Oh dear! What is your name?" Zaneeba asked.
"Cynder." She said.

To be continued...
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#17 Posted: 21:22:39 13/10/2009
So that's what it was, a time crystal
Good part
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#18 Posted: 21:34:34 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay! Finally someone understands! Anyway... PROFILE TIME!! smilie

Name: Kilroy
Species: Knucker
Description: as a chick he was light red, 2 ft 1", 20 ft long, as an adult he was Dark red color, about 4 ft. 5", and and 60 ft long.
Personality: Sensitive and shy around strangers, but when with friends very curious and bold around new areas and things, mostly serious, yet silly at times.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#19 Posted: 22:08:58 13/10/2009
OH ok. MORE PLZ more
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#20 Posted: 22:45:52 13/10/2009 | Topic Creator
They all stared at her. Cynder, the legenary dragon, had been dead for years. They were all confused. Icicle, Liriodon, and Kilroy liked her alredy, but Silver was optimistic.
"You are very sick, you, you, you CRAZY dragon!" Silver said.
"Silver look at her! She looks like her, she talkes like her, holy crap SHE IS HER!!" Liriodon exclaimed.
"Ummm... Maybe I shou-"
"All of you back to the villige! NOW!" barked Zaneeba, cutting her off.
"Coming!" Liriodon, Silver, Kilroy, and Icicle called. Cynder simpley turned and began to wlk into the forest when she heared Zaneeba Yell, "Hey! You too missy!" She boldly went with them. When they entered everyone was calm untill they saw Cynder. Then most ran to their huts or hid their faces. Cynder was puzzled by their reaction to her.
"Ummm... I think I should go." she whispered to Zaneeba.
"Don't worry just ignore them. They'er all loonies. Crazy people, trust me, Cynder. We are the only things standing between you and death, and you need to live." she said sternly.
"Oh, okay. I'm sorry." she said.
"Just don't talk to anyone untill you have been acsepted, but that won't be a problem." she sniccered. Cynder did not understand, but she went with it. They aproched a large building made of stone and bits of dried mud. The roof was straw and hay well woven together and cemented to the rest of the building.
"Oh are we in for a treat! Horray!," Kilroy whispered to his commpanions,
"We get to see Cynder in action!"
"Ohhh! he's right! Can you wait Silver!?" Liriodon whispered back, exciedly.
"Oh im full of excitment and enthuseasum," she said sarcasticly,
"But on the inside."
"Ha Ha, Silver, I know you're happy." Icicle said.
"Huh? What are you-" Cynder started to ask.
"Cynder! Come forword!" a voice boomed.
She flinched. Then she stepped to the front of the group. A Cinese Lung chick stepped forword with a Korean Young adult close behind.
"Hello, I'm Zan, THis is my uncle he wants to talk to you." she said.
"Okay, ahem, why would you like to speak with me?" Cynder asked the Young. He stared into her eyes for a moment before speaking.
"Hello Cynder, You have been acsepted by me into out clan, would like lo live with us?" he bellowed in his low voice.
"First I would like to know your name, sir." she said weakly.
"I am Potan, leader of this clan." he said.
"Okay, give me one day and night to give my final choice." she said.
"Okay, young one." he said.

To be continued...
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#21 Posted: 15:33:45 14/10/2009 | Topic Creator
is anyone reading? smilie
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#22 Posted: 16:06:27 14/10/2009
Great part smilie
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smilie
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#23 Posted: 20:07:09 14/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Phew, anyway the show must go on!

"Oh, what to do, oh, what to do." Cynder sighed. Icicle approached her.
"Go on! ask her!" Liriodon nagged.
"I am, I am!," he said, "Cynder? Doy you want to take a brake and play tag?"
"Shure, I would." she said shaking her head. The three met up with Kilroy and Silver. They all went to the grove to play again.
"You can never catch me!" Kilroy yelled.
"Oh yes I will!" Cynder snickered. Instead of running she took flight. She nose dived at Silver who was in the lead.
Here I am!" She laughed. Lightly she tackled Silver from behind. Silver shrieked in surprise.
"Whoa! She got you good Silver!" Liriodon laughed.
"Ha ha ha!" Silver said in anger. Cynder was confused. She was just playing, yet Silver was angry with her.
"Why are you angry? Did I do something wrong?" she asked.
"Yea, you did. You are supposed to stay on the ground." silver spat. Cynder drew back.
"The rules had changed and she didn't know. No one told her, Silver. Lay off." Kilroy said sternly.
"Don't tell me what to do!" Silver roared and spat tongues of fire.
Cynder gasped. The memories of Spyro and Malefor came back. She stepped back and tears started streaming down her face. She slipped into the forest.
"Cynder!? Cynder! This isn't funny!" Icicle yelled.
"She's gone!?" Kilroy screamed.
"Good reddens," Silver Said under her breath.
"Come back" she breathed. Silver was jealous that all her friends were hanging out with her, but she liked Cynder. She rely did.
"THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU JUST COULDN'T KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT, COULD YOU!?" Icicle spat, shooting out small ice shards.
"I, I,, I'm sorry Icicl-" Silver started.
"NO YOU AREN'T! YOU'RE HAPPY SHE'S GONE! YOU DEVIL!" he shouted, with she shards growing thicker and more consistent.
Silver went into the forest too calling, looking, calling, looking.
"CYNDER!" she would shout.
"Oh no." Icicle said.
"He loves her." Kilroy realized.

to be continued...

This is moving quite well, Reader tell me o any problems you have with the story. THANK YOU! smilie
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#24 Posted: 20:27:20 14/10/2009
Great keep going PLZ
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#25 Posted: 20:52:49 14/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I will soon.
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#26 Posted: 22:53:00 14/10/2009
How soon,oh and CinderLover i wrote a new chapter in my story.smilie
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#27 Posted: 01:50:16 15/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder ran through the thick forest. The vines with blue and red leafs whacked at her face while the branches, with yellow and green leaves, smacked her side. She almost felt like she was being watched. Cynder barged into a clearing. Then a large creature, twice the size of herself, lunged. She screamed as the thing attacked. She clawed and bit until it let go. A flash of sky blue and a deep yellow hit the creature and the blue thing shot it with ice while the other hit it with the branches of trees. Cynder had hidden herself in a large, wide, hollow tree trunk. She saw the whole battle, the things tumbled and rolled through the clearing. The black thing she now recognized as a black bear. She also could have sworn that she saw the blue creature as Cyril. She was simply insane, that's all. Homesick and insane.
"Are you okay?" a familiar voice came.
"who, who are you?" she asked.
"I am Cyril, this is Volteer." the blue one said.
"VOLTEER!? CYRIL!?" she screamed.
"CYNDER!? IS IT YOU!? IS IT RELY YOU!?" Volteer exclaimed. Cynder was almost crying from joy. She hugged each one happily.
"I'm afraid this reunion is bitter-sweet. For the Dark Prince is seeking you." Cyril said tears in his eyes.
"What are you talking about? Who is this 'Dark Prince' guy? I'm the Dark Queen!" Cynder bragged.
"Oh, Cynder, the dark prince is Spyro." Volteer said. She backed away.
"SPYRO WOULD NEVER DO THAT TO ME! NEVER! I'LL GO THERE AND CURE HIM OF HIS MISERY!" she cried. The guardians shook their heads.
"He has gone mad, Cynder. Nothing can stop him but death. In fact, he is looking for you, to be his Queen. He thinks you will do as he says." Cyril explained.
"I will go. I will not be his Queen but I will get him angry, I will sacrifice myself, but then he will learn that evil kills many people you once loved." Cynder said.
"NO CYNDER YOU CAN'T" Volteer protested.
"I will, goodbye, forever." she said before whisking around and walking towards where she thought was Spyro's lair.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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#28 Posted: 06:49:37 15/10/2009
Great parts smilie
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#29 Posted: 11:19:14 15/10/2009
GREAT!!! keep going PLZ
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#30 Posted: 16:50:32 15/10/2009 | Topic Creator
'Oh what have I gotten myself into, CYNDER!?" Silver called. A green dragon lunged at her. He was an adult, large, green, with a deep voice.
"This dragon is dead! She died a long time ago! Now leave this forest, or it will be your doom." he bellowed.
"But I saw her yesterday! I accidentally spooked her and she ran into the forest! One more thing," Silver said, "GET OFF OF ME!" She took up her hind legs and kicked them as hard as she could. The green dragon was thrown off of her, he smashed into a tree on the far side of her. He growled as he approached her, eyes blazing with anger. Silver knew she didn't stand a chance, but there was no choice but to fight. Rage surged through her body as she charged to meet the unfriendly dragon. She was about to knock him into the air when he jumped. She went crashing into a tree. Silver's horns were stuck, but she noticed the other dragon hadn't come down. She looked up to see that the green dragon's wings were stuck in the branches.
"Who are you and why did you attack me?" she asked.
"My name is Terrador, I work or the Dark Prince. I was sent to kill you, but I couldn't kill you, you're to young," he began, "I was going to get you out. But no, Hurt the big scary old guy, huh?"
"I'm sorry, you startled me, that's all." she replied.
"Well, I think we should focus on trying to free ourselves." Terrador said.
"Yea, I guess you're right." Silver said. They tugged and pulled until their wings and horns hurt. They were tiered and hungry.
"KILROY!? ICICLE!? LIRIODON!?" Silver called.

"Hey guys, do you hear that?" Liriodon asked.
"Yea, it's Silver! come on guys!" Icicle shouted and led the group into the forest.

To Be Continued...
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#31 Posted: 19:28:50 15/10/2009
Good part smilie
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#32 Posted: 20:55:40 15/10/2009
PLZ PLZ keep goingsmilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#33 Posted: 00:23:25 17/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm busy these days now because of school and stuff, so it will be less regular. sorry!
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#34 Posted: 00:56:48 17/10/2009
Ok, oksmilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#35 Posted: 07:51:32 17/10/2009
Ok, I can wait
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#36 Posted: 23:09:43 17/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I know, long wait! Sorry. smilie

"Silver? Cynder!" Liriodon, Icicle, and Kilroy screamed over the roaring gusts of wind. The wind was now blowing wildly, a sign that a storm was approaching. One of the last thing they wanted was to be stuck in the Malabar Forest during a thunder storm. The area was not only highly flammable, but it was also known to have mud slides.
"Liriodon?" Silver cried over the howling wings. The rain began to fall to the leafy ground and drench all of them. Terrador was doubting that her friends would come to the rescue.
Terrador sighed and said, "They probably can't hear you, and your diving me insane." The cold rain tickled their backs and face as it trickled down. The wind burned their eyes and froze their scales.
"It must be twenty below! It's freezing!" Silver shouted over the wind and rain. Still The trio trudged on, looking for their lost friend. The ground started to rumble and quake.
"What is that!?" Kilroy screamed.
"I don't kn-" Icicle was about the answer before They saw something.
"HOLY CRAP, RUN!!" Liriodon screamed. Trailing behind their heels was the largest mudslide ever.

"Hey I think I'm almost out!" Terrador said. He gave a mighty tug and the vines tore and broke.
"Here, let me help!" He offered. They both tugged on Silver's horns until They slid from their prison. Once more the ground shook and quivered.
"RUN, FLY, DODGE! MOVE!" Icicle screamed. The two looked puzzled until They saw the monstrosity behind their friends. They screamed as they ran. Silver yelped as she slipped and was engulfed by the mud slide.
"SILVER!" Icicle croaked. Hot tears ran down his face, they seemed boiling hot compared to the cold rain.
"Hel-" Silver choked before being sucked in again. Icicle tried to turn back, yet was blasted back by the wind. Terrador restrained him by carrying the three out of the forest and to the side about forty feet. They only just made the forty foot mark when the slide smashed through the trees and dawn a steep cliff.
"SILVER!?" Icicle cried. The mud slide stopped and Icicle broke free. He saw a small gray wing tip sticking out of the mass of mud. He grabbed it, but it felt cold and lifeless. He pulled Silver's body out of the mud. Neither her stomach, nor her chest were moving. he put his paw on her chest. he felt two weak heart beats, then nothing.
"NO!" he screamed and punched the mud. He gasped for air as he cried. The others approached her lifeless body. Liriodon turned and left to tell the others, Kilroy just stood there, paralyzed. Terrador took flight and left the helpless dragons to report to he vile master.
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#37 Posted: 06:41:03 18/10/2009
OH NO D8 Silver is dead?
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#38 Posted: 13:29:35 18/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Pretty much.
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#39 Posted: 20:23:39 18/10/2009 | Topic Creator
if you are still recovering from the last part, this will help. smilie

Silver was dead, nothing could be done. Even if so it was too late. Liriodon returned with a large crowd fallowing him, including Silver's parents. They all gasped and muttered when they saw her.
"MY DAUGHTER! MY BABY!" her mother wept.
"My little girl." her father breathed. Icicle was now angry. This was all Cynder's fault. She ran into the forest. If she hadn't Silver wouldn't have gone ether.
"I hope Cynder will be alright in there." Kilroy whispered.
"NOT IF SHE COME BACK HERE! IF SHE DOES, I'LL, I'LL KILL HER!" Icicle roared. Tears where making his face burn in the winter air. Kilroy was astonished. Liriodon was too, neither of them had seen Icicle this angry at a dragon before. Kilroy was concerned for Icicle's well being.
"Now Icicle you can't mean that." he said.
"I DO! I DO MEAN IT! IN FACT, I'M GOING TO KILL HER NOW!" he said with rage. Fire blazed in his eyes as he ran into the Forest of Malabar. Night began to fall an he still ran, anger and madness being his fuel.
"CYNDER! RUN, AND NEVER COME BACK! YOU HEAR ME!? NEVER COME BACK!" Icicle yelled. He let out a terrible roar. It had the volume of twenty elephants, and the decimal level of sixty. THe sound rang in Cynder's head. She shivered from head to toe. She found a hollow log witch she looked into eagerly. Inside was an opossum family of five. She liked her lips d she quickly killed and ate the largest. the others she also killed but saved for morning.
"never come back Cynder! you hear me!? never come back!" she heard.
"WHY, ICICLE!?" she called.
"YOU CAUSED SILVER TO PERISH!"
"WHAT!? NO I DIDN'T!"
"SHE RAN IN AFTER YOU, THEN THERE WAS A MUD SLIDE AND SHE GOT KILLED WHEN SHE WAS SUCKED IN!"
"LET ME SEE MY FRIEND!"
"NEVER"
"FINE! BUT YOU DON'T HAVE TO KILL ME!"
"WHY IS THAT!?"
" 'CAUSE I'M DIEING ANYWAY!"
"BY WHO!?"
"THE DARK PRINCE!"
"......."
"NOW GOODBYE! FOREVER!"
"Now look what you've done. Cynder is dieing too! Now what will I do?" Icicle wondered sadly.
"No Cynder! Wait! I'm Sorry!" he screamed.
"Wait, do I love her?" he thought.
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#40 Posted: 20:24:47 18/10/2009
KEEP GOING PLZ
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#41 Posted: 06:54:31 19/10/2009
This is very good now
Please keep going smilie
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Medic: NO!
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#42 Posted: 20:02:20 20/10/2009
MORE!
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#43 Posted: 22:18:45 21/10/2009 | Topic Creator
"Oh, my god! I do, I do love Cynder!" Icicle thought. He was paralyzed, just standing in the middle of the Malabar Forest. He was trying to move his legs to run, but they wouldn't budge. He strained to even move his mouth to say anything, even to himself. He muttered about his lost friends. He felt so alone, so sad. The two people he ever loved are both going to die. Finally a jolt of newly found energy and confidence. He raced off into the direction he heard Cynder's voice. His heart beat oh so very fast, his lungs burned and hes nose filled with the salty tang of the ocean. It was a relaxing smell and he had the want to halt and sit, but NO! He must continue on to find his friend, his lover.
"CYNDER! COME BACK! I DIDN'T MEAN WHAT I SAID BEFORE! I'M SORRY! COME HERE! PLEASE!? I, I..." the words couldn't make it out of his mouth. Still he marched on into a bog. The mud and grime was up to his chest.
"I'm trudging, I didn't know that people actually trudged." he grumbled. His stomach growled and howled as he walked. He found a few bones and gnawed on them, hoping they would satisfy his hunger. He only wanted more.
"Cynder is out there, somewhere. I have to find her," he said,
"I have to..."

Kilroy and Liriodon were worried. They wondered if Icicle had rely killed Cynder. They all liked her, a lot. Not love, but like. Icicle was the last of them that searched for Cynder, but they cared for her. they rely did. Zan was sad, Zaneeba took the blame, and Potan was upset with Liriodon, Cynder, Icicle, and Kilroy. Potan came up to Kilroy and Lirirodon quietly.
"What are you doing here!?" he bellowed. The two jumed and looked for the voice. When they saw Potan their eyed widened.
"Icicle and Cynder ran into the forest! Cynder wasn't seen since last night and, and," Kilroy babbled. Liriodon put his hand-like paw over his mouth.
"Icicle and Cynder are missing in the Forest of Malabar." he said.
"Th, they... Yeah, pretty much." Kilroy said.
"I will form a search party, you two go home." Potan said.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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#44 Posted: 06:57:55 22/10/2009
Good part
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#45 Posted: 18:42:27 22/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Liriodon and Kilroy raced to the canyon next to their camp sight. Only Liriodon, Kilroy, Icicle, and Silver knew of this place. An aged tiger named Haku lived here.
"The old coop is always trying to give advice. Just try not to upset him or we might not be going home." Kilroy dvised
"Early to bed and early to rise, makes a dragon healthy, wealthy and wise.
The gods helps them who help themselves.
Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead."
Haku said. The canyon whispered his words.

TO BE CONTINUED...

short on time, sorry!
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#46 Posted: 19:11:00 22/10/2009
Good part as always smilie
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#47 Posted: 22:18:22 22/10/2009
KEEP GOING PLZ Good story can't wait for the next chaptersmilie
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#48 Posted: 15:38:29 25/10/2009 | Topic Creator
still trying to think of a good part! But I can feel the flames of inspiration licking at my brain... MWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!! Bye.
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#49 Posted: 01:00:33 29/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder still went on. She couldn't fail her new friends. The tears of sadness felt scorching hot. Her new love hated her now. She knew that she had not killed Silver. It was an accident that Silver died. She slowly entered a large copper doorway and into a horrid, black, cold, evil area. She heard a kind, gentle, familiar voice.
"I will help you in greatest time of need." It said.
"Sil, Silver?" Cynder breathed.
"Yes, I will help." Silver echoed.
"When is my greatest time of need!?" Cynder called. The forest was silent, all but the rustling of leaves. Cynder hung her head. She was guilty, no one could deny it. She walked on, head down. Still thinking of what Silver said to her just minuets ago. She soon reached a open stone door, the hinges were very rusty and the stones were lose. The door creaked and wailed as she pushed it open.
"Well, well, well, look who came for a visit." Spyro said with a smirk.
"Well, well, well, look who betrayed all the dragons and creatures, that know and love you." Cynder commented.
"Look at the little dragon trying to look brave." he said. Cynder growled.
"WITH AN ATTITUDE!" he growled back.
"I will stop you." she said.
"ONLY DEATH WILL STOP ME!" he roared. Cynder roared back, but her roar was her adult roar. Six long horns grew from her head, her face ans legs grew longer and thinner, and her body grew too. Suddenly Silver's spirit joined Cynder's. Two more long thing heads and necks joined the first. Spyro was astonished. He had never seen such a thing.
"YOU MADE A DEAL WITH ME THAT YOU WOULD NEVER KILL ME!" Spyro yelled to her.
"THAT DEAL JUST EXPIRED!" her middle head shouted. She ran towards Spyro with her bony legs.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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#50 Posted: 07:41:34 29/10/2009
Interesting smilie
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