darkSpyro

The site: The Spierters!

Prologue

The nest of Spierters are growing hungry! A strange infection is spreading over the Galaxy and made its way to Baysee, the home planet of the Spierters. The creatures that live there are growing weak. The food source is low for the herbivorous creatures and therefor the carnivores, like the Spierters, will have no food left.The infection made the lowlands of Baysee an uninhabitable place but the herbivores of Baysee have the infection and are able to live there.
Who will save Baysee?
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Chapter 1: The Mission

"I'm sooo hungry!," cried a Spierter. "Hey, what about me?!," cried another Spierter. "Stop thinking about yourself, I'M HUNGRY TOO!!," yelled another. A female Spierter called Torpedia yelled "I've had enough! I'm searching for food, who's with me?!." A male Spierter called Zed and another male called Kosek walked up to Torpedia. "Is that all?," she said. The others nodded their head. "Let's go," said Zed. They walked up to the opening to the lowlands. "What happened here?," asked Kosek as he saw he purple rotting lands. "I have no idea," replied Zed in amazement. "Well lets go have a look," said Kosek. Torpedia saw something, "Wait. Something's going on in the distance!" They saw Arclarts and Cricktors fighting each other. This was not right, they live peacefully together! "Arclarts & Cricktors fighting each other?," asked Zed. "Wait, something was on their head," said Kosek. "TENTACLES!," they all cried. "that must be what is making them act like this!," said Torpedia. "Well lets go down to see if anything is left," said Kosek...

Quote: THEdragon

Edit: Ooops I thought this was a roleplay. Good story anyway, I know what the spierters are, they're creatures from DS Spore.

^They look kinda like that.

Yeah, I finished the game.
And they are my favourite creature!
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Them in my story:



Chapter 2: The Lowlands

The trio walked down to the rotting lowlands and saw some trees. "Look at all the dead trees," said Torpedia. "They hardly look like trees in the high lands," replied Kosek. Then Zed saw a water flower, "Hey, I can make the tree come to life with this!" Zed pored water on the tree then it grew, but it had no leaves! "Strange," he said. "Where are the leaves?" Then some Arclarts saw a banana grow on the tree and ran up to it. "Banana," one said and jumped up to grab it. Then the Arclarts ran back to their nest. "Lets follow them!," cried Kosek as they ran after the Arclarts. They ran after the Arclarts, trying not to be seen. When they were behind a rotting bush, they attacked the Arclart nest. When the attack was over, that part of the lowlands gt cured from the infection & a Arclart sporeling made its way to the nest. "Look, this part of the lowlands is cured!," said Zed. "And the Arclart nest is back to life!," said Kosek. "Lets bring this meat back to the nest," insisted Torpedia.

Yeah, go Spierters!
I do also like the Lileepa on the planet Flubit!
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Chapter 3: Helping the Nest

The Spierters walked back up the hill to the highland, walked through a little bush and went to their nest."I need food!," a little Spierter yelled. "Not to worry everyone, we have food!," Torpedia laughed as she ran to the nest. The trio chucked the meat to the other Spierters. "Thanks you guys," said a Spierter as he ate his delicious meat. One was thirsty, "can we have water with that?" "Sure," said Kosek as he got some water flowers. He then chucked them carefully, trying not to explode them. The other Spierters shoved their faces into the flowers and drank all the water in them. "Now lets go save the lowlands!," cried Zed...

I like the Taktos too!
My fave on each planet:
Tapti: Takto,
Pangu: Bubelu,
Baysee: Spierters,
Flubit: Lileepa,
Zericne: Brongus.
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Chapter 4: Save the Lowlands!

The trio bolted down to the lowlands to save it & the creatures who live there. They ran to the Cricktors nest to attack. "GET THE CRICKTORS!!," yelled Zed. Now the Cricktors were alert and ran to attack too (they would normally hide but they are now very aggressive because of the tentacles).The fight started and the Spierters kicked, bit and stabbed the Cricktors. The Cricktors lost the battle and the lowlands were saved! "We saved Baysee!," yelled Kosek. Then suddenly a blue waterfall thing fell to the ground. What was that? A blue spotted, purple underbellie, 2 legged creature swam down and said "No you haven't!" in reply to 'we saved Baysee'. He slid onto the ground and said "I'm Gar' Skuther!" "What can you do against us?!,"asked Zed. "Oh, I can do THIS!," Gar' Skuther turned huge with 3 huge Skuther-like legs just as he said 'THIS'!

You think so?

Next Chapter!
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Chapter 5: The Battle!

Now they started a battle and the fight was on! Kosek bit Gar' Skuther's leg, Zed jumped on him & Torpedia stabbed his slimy paw. His paw was bleeding with blue blood. Then Gar' Skuther zapped the trio and they fell to the ground. Unable to move, they lay there on the ground. Then Kosek got up slowly and said "Hey! I've got the power of Fire!" Then Torpedia said "I control Earth!" "And I have water!," said Zed. They used their elements on Gar' Skuther but not as good because they didn't know how to use them. "I USED THE WRONG POWER!!," yelled Gar' Skuther. Then he fell over from Torpedia's Earth Wave. Zed's Water broke on his head and Kosek's Flame Thrower hit him on the neck. Gar' Skuther had enough! He hit the trio on the ground and they couldn't move. Then over the hill, Arclarts came rushing to the Battle. Then Cricktors came. The two herds ran over Gar' Skuther and he got knocked out. The waterfall thingy fell on him and he floated up. "Why did you help us?," asked Zed. "You helped us," replied an Arclart. "Now we saved Baysee?," asked Kosek. "Yes, we saved Baysee!," replied Torpedia. "Lets go back home..."

Yes! More will come.

Here I am!!
Sorry I took so long, I was at my Dad's for a few weeks...
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Chapter 6: The Way Home

After our heroes battled Gar' Skuther and got their new abilities, they walked away to their nest. "That was fun battling Gar' Skuther!," said Zed. "We got these cool new Elements, we defeated Gar' Skuther but we did get a little hurt..." They walked through the fresh river and Kosek fell head first in the water. "Kosek, get up out of the deep end of the river!," laughed Torpedia. "I'm coming, I'm coming," replied a wet & embarrassed Kosek. They took a drink from the water flowers and went on. They got up to the hill now and saw their nest. They walked through the little bush and ran up to the nest. "How did you guys go?, " asked Ezor. "We defeated Gar' Skuther!," replied Zed. "It was so fun!" Then another Spierter came up and said "One of Sporelings evolved into one of us! We called him Squirt!" "Great, now we have more Spierters to hunt and protect our nest!," replied Kosek. "Come on, lets get a good night rest," said Torpedia sleepily. And then they slept on the soft leaves on the bottom of their nest...
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Please read & comment my new story!
I will still wright Chapters on here!

New Chapter comin' through!
Can you please comment on my new story?
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Chapter 7: Bad News...

After the long night at the nest, the trio woke up to see some footprints on the dusty ground. "What creature did they come from?," asked Zed. "I've never seen those footprints before!" "They seem to be going up the Mountain," said Torpedia. "Lets follow them!," yelled Kosek as they started running. After a few minuets, they saw a Spierter with a tail! "Hello, what's your name?," asked Zed. The Spierter looked up, "My name is Kinto Tari, or Tari for short." The ground started shaking. "I need to warn the creatures! A strange new creature has been spotted attacking other nests!," yelled Kinto Tari. "What does this creature look like?," asked Kosek. "They look like strange creatures. They have yellow/green spotted skin, they have spikes on their back, a long clawed tail & sharp, sharp teeth!," exclaimed Kinto Tari. "Look, my nest was killed by those creatures and I need a place to stay!" "Go down this side of the mountain a you will see a Spierter nest. Stay there, you will be excepted!" said Torpedia as she pointed down the left side of the mountain. "Now we have to stop the creatures!," she said as she ordered Kosek & Zed to follow her down the right side of the mountain...

Thats ok!
I like Tari, he sounds cool!
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Chapter 8: Face to Face

Kinto Tari made his way down the mountain and so did the other three. They stumbled down rocks, fell in muddy puddles & got spiked on vines. Then they got down the mountain and saw an infected land and the new creatures were everywhere! "These new creatures don't look natural,"said Zed. "They look like Gar' Skuther's creations! He must still be alive!," yelled Torpedia. They ran down to the new creatures and started a battle! Torpedia rumbled the ground with earth and the creature fell over. Next was Kosek's Flame Jet that burnt the creature. Last but not least, Zed's Tsunami! The creature drowned & died. They looked around and saw things coming up from the ground. Breaking the soil, more & more creatures came out. "Oh no," whispered Kosek sacredly. By the look on their faces, you could tell the trio were scared. There were more creatures than what it takes to fill a life-sized Gar' Skuther container! How are we going to defeat these things?! Kosek used Comet Dash and knocked a few over, Zed used Water Jet & now Torpedia used Earth Missile. The creatures still didn't die! "How are we going to defeat them?," asked Zed sorrily. "I, I don't know," said Torpedia as a tear dropped from her eye. And just as they were about to lose all hope, a voice ran through Torpedia's mind: Sometimes when all seems lost, a light shines through the darkness and even the smallest amount of HOPE can bring safety to the world! Then they formed a circle and let out a load of energy that killed the creatures. The trio did their first fury attack! Then the land turned back to the natural balance...

Yeah, I kinda changed the part from DotD though.
I'm glad you like it!
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Chapter 9: Is That All?

The trio landed on the ground a saw the fresh grass on the ground again. "Yay! Now Baysee is back, for now," yelled Kosek. "But did we defeat all the creatures?," asked Zed. "Now I don't know," replied Torpedia. "Only one way to find out!" They started walking around, looking if there were anymore creatures. To their surprise, they saw nothing to do with new creatures. They started walking up the mountain to go back to their nest. "I don't think that there are anymore creatures," said Torpedia. "Me neither," said Kosek. "Me & Zed can't see any or even any of their footprints." When they got to the top of the mountain, a surprise was waiting for them! The creatures were at their nest & got Kinto Tari. "Why do you want Tari?!," asked Zed. "We are Hastors and want this one you call Tari because he is the last Tailed Spierter! We were ordered to kill them from Master Skuther!," one of the Hastors yelled. "Why kill the Tailed? What is wrong with them?," asked Kosek. "Master Skuther!," yelled an angry Hastor. "They're working for Gar' Skuther. He must have ordered them to call him Master Skuther!," Torpedia told Kosek & Zed. "We have to destroy them with that fury power!" They repeated the circle formation and let the power go. The Hastors were gone! "That was awesome guys!," yelled Tari. "That was like a action movie!" "Well that's the last we'll hear from the Hastors for a while!," said Torpedia. "Can I hear about it?," asked an excited Squirt. "Sure!," said the trio as they told Squirt about their amazing adventures...

Thanks THEdragon!
Tari is the last after all!
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Chapter 10: A New Spierter

After they told Squirt about their adventures, the trio looked for some food. They walked down to the low lands and saw some food from a dead Cricktor. They started eating the meat and a female Spierter walked from the bushes. "Hello," said the Spierter in a kind, low voice. "My name is Zoe and you seem to eating my food." "New Spierters seem to be popping up out of every corner of this Vally!," said Kosek as he looked at Zed. Zed was surprised to see such a beautiful Spierter. "H-h-h-hello, my n-name is Zed," said Zed. "Why hello Zed," said Zoe shyly. "You look like you just fought a big creature." Just as Zed was about to say something, Torpedia butted him out of the way and said, "I think Zed likes you, Zoe." "I do too," Zoe replied. "He blushed when I came out of the bush. He also seems nervous every time he looks at me." "Come with us," said Torpedia. "And bring the meat." They walked up the hill to their nest to show the other Spierters the new rival...

Thanks!
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Chapter 11: Rising Evil!

After the trio told the nest about the new rival, they went for a walk. They walked up the Mountain and just strode along to top. "So Zed, do ya really like her," asked Kosek when Torpedia was distant enough. "Yeah," Zed said nervously. "Since I told you a secret, do you like anyone? Be honest!" Kosek looked at Torpedia and looked back, "umm, Torpedia..." "Really?," said Zed. "Ahh, yeah," replied Kosek. They walked down into a beautiful cave and saw two big yellow eyes at the back of the cave. "So, you managed to defeat my Hastors?," said a familiar voice. "Too bad that they are now raiding the planet," said the voice as he stepped into the light. "Gar' Skuther!," yelled the trio. "Yes, it is I," said Gar' Skuther. "When you, er, THINGS defeated me, I had to get this robotic suit on. At least it carries a whole lot of infection!" Gar' Skuther looked at Kosek and smirked. "This lower life-form," he said as he turned Kosek into a Shadowed Monster Spierter. "Shall work for me!!" "KOSEK!!!," yelled Torpedia & Zed. The two Spierters circled the Shadowed Kosek. Zed got ready to Title Wave him. "Zed, no! Don't attack, he could get hurt. We can turn him back!," said Torpedia. "Ok, Torie," replied Zed in an unfortunate tone. Torpedia walked up to Kosek. Kosek snared at Torpedia. He bared his enormous teeth. "Lets see you defeat your own friend!," yelled Gar' Skuther. Torpedia walked closer to Kosek. "Kosek, it's me, Torpedia," said Torpedia softly. Kosek looked confused. "Ko, listen!," said Torpedia. "You are one of us, a Spierter!" Kosek didn't reply. "You think that will save your friend?!," chuckled Gar' Skuther. Something seemed to be rushing through Kosek's mind: "I've had enough! I'm searching for food, who's with me?!." A male Spierter called Zed and another male called Kosek walked up to Torpedia. "Look at all the dead trees," said Torpedia. "They hardly look like trees in the high lands," replied Kosek. Then Zed saw a water flower, "Hey, I can make the tree come to life with this!" Gar' Skuther zapped the trio and they fell to the ground. Unable to move, they lay there on the ground. "So Zed, do ya really like her," asked Kosek when Torpedia was distant enough. "Yeah," Zed said nervously. "Since I told you a secret, do you like anyone? Be honest!" Kosek looked at Torpedia and looked back, "umm, Torpedia..." "Really?," said Zed. "Ahh, yeah," replied Kosek. Kosek turned back into a normal Spierter. "Torpedia, is that you?," asked Kosek. "Yes, Kosek. It is me!," replied Torpedia in a happy voice. They ran out of the cave and back to the nest...