Info: The text goes italic when the characters are thinking and at the start of the chapter, the text goes bold when they are shouting or yelling.
Characters:
Bolt: The electricity dragon that Spyro & Cynder are training. She is very adventurous and Frozen-Flame is her friend. She trains in the Temple Dojo. She is very good at her training. Bolt lives in the Temple Grotto with the other Apprentice Dragons. She is the best Apprentice Dragon yet!
Spyro: The elemental dragon who trains the Apprentice Dragons with Cynder. He is now an adult, he has mastered all the elements now. Spyro usually tells off Frozen-Flame for making Bolt do things with him. Spyro is a very good trainer for the Apprentice Dragons.
Cynder: Training dragons alongside Spyro, Cynder is too an adult dragon. Somehow she has mastered all the elements aswell. Cynder likes to train Bolt the most for she is a quick learner and one of the best students.
Frozen-Flame: The mischievous ice dragon, Frozen-Flame likes to play around in the swamp. He sometimes gets his ice out of control and freezes things. Good thing that only happens sometimes! He also likes Trickle but he doesn't tell. He is a good fighter.
Trickle: The cute little water dragon. Trickle is in the Dragon Fighting School. Frozen-Flame likes her but doesn't want to tell anyone. Trickle uses her water to give to other dragon on long walks, but Spyro & Cynder do it aswell. She is a very good fighter too.
Crystal: The crystal shard dragon. Crystal is a very clever dragon and usually passes her tests just like one second after Bolt. She likes to sit in the sun and relax with Axle. Crystal is cute and loves the day sky.
Axle: The light dragon. Axle is Crystal's friend. He loves to sleep with Crystal and play out side in the swamp. Av-course Spyro & Cynder would let them out to play! Axle is a nice dragon to be around.
Wyverns: The helpers of Malefor. The wyverns try to get Malefor out of the volcano. They also try to attack the temple but Bolt or the others stop them.
Malefor: The evil elemental dragon. Malefor has been trapped in a volcano by the Ancestors. He makes the wyverns try to get him out but they never win. He uses the magic element to cast spells over the Temple and the dragons within.
The Beginning...
The Temple had just started being a training area for the new batch of dragon eggs ready to hatch in the grotto...
Spyro and Cynder were lying outside on the Temple Porch watching the sun set over the mountains when they heard a cracking sound. Spyro & Cynder ran in to see the eggs in the grotto. The electricity dragon egg had a big crack in it. Then off popped the shell and a cute little electric dragon showed its cute face out of the egg. Then all the other eggs started to hatch.
Cynder: What will we call all these?
Spyro: How about the electricity one Bolt, the water one Trickle, um, the ice one Frozen-Flame, the crystal shards one Crystal ant the light one Axle?
Cynder: Yeah! Hello Bolt, Trickle, Frozen-Flame, Crystal and Axle. They are so cute! They will do good in their training.
2 weeks later...
Spyro: Geese! It's hard taking care of dragonlings.
Cynder: Tell me about it! *rubs some sweat off her forehead*
Now it was night and they finally got them to sleep.
Cynder: Now that's more quieter!
Spyro: Lets get a good night's rest till tomorrow...
7 years later...
The dragons were 7 years old and are starting their training today.
Trickle: I can't wait till our training starts!
Bolt: Me neither! It'll be so cool!
Frozen-Flame: Well, it'll be alot of work...
Axle: Are you saying that you don't want to do it?
Crystal: Yeah?
Frozen-Flame: No!
Spyro & Cynder walk over.
Spyro: Your training will begin in ten minuets.
Cynder: The girls will come with me and the boys will go with Spyro.
They walk off.
Trickle: How about we play a game?
Crystal: Yeah!
They play tip for 10 mins.
Spyro comes.
Spyro: Come and follow me for your training.
They all walk to the temple. The girls went to Cynder and the boys went to Spyro. The training lasted the whole day.
The boys went good at their training. Axle got the outstanding mark and Frozen-Flame got very high. But the girls got a better score and it wasn't because of the more dragons. Bolt got an outstanding, Trickle got very high and Crystal got outstanding.
This test was to mark how good the dragons were at fighting.
They walked into the Temple Grotto to go to bed. When the dragons got to bed and Spyro & Cynder went to their sleeping room, the dragons started to talk about the mark they got.
Frozen-Flame: What mark did you get Trickle?
Trickle: Very high.
Frozen-Flame: Same as me!
Crystal: What did you get Axle?
Axle: Outstanding.
Crystal: That is my mark aswell!
Trickle: What mark did you get Bolt?
Bolt: I got outstanding.
Axel: I think we should *yawn* go to sleep...
And with that they fell asleep.
To be Continued...
This here is Bolt:
Here is something, they all had a good sleep!
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#1 Posted: 04:35:34 09/08/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 08:25:38 09/08/2009
Good start
The only thing you've got to do is check some minor spelling mistakes But other than that GOOD Keep on going I also like the picture of Bolt; Very nice.
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#3 Posted: 18:23:00 09/08/2009
Cool beans! And I like your Photoshop skillz... at least it LOOKS like Photoshop.
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#4 Posted: 16:49:46 10/08/2009
I don't exactly like the recolor. I mean, your photoshop skills are great and all, but your character could stand to be at least a bit more original.
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#5 Posted: 10:41:54 15/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Back to the story!
The Golden Egg... The Apprentice Dragons had their first test, but there will be more tests to come. Now for the next morning... The dragons woke up from a loud BANG! Spyro: AHH! What is that! Cynder: That was loud! Apprentice Dragons: AAHHHHH!!!!! Frozen-Flame: What the hell was that!! Crystal: I have no idea! And don't talk like that, Frozen-Flame! Frozen-Flame: Sorry... Bolt: How about I go outside to see what it is? Axel: That would be good... Bolt goes outside to see what it is. She sees a Golden Dragon Egg lying on the ground... Bolt: Whow! Spyro, Cynder, LOOK! Spyro, Cynder and the Apprentice Dragons come rushing out. Trickle: What is that Golden Egg doing there? Spyro: I don't know? We need to put it in the Temple Grotto! They rush inside to the Temple Grotto and put the egg in the hatchery. The egg then splits in half and a 7 year old dragon pops out. Bolt: How is that possible?! A dragon our age hatching from an egg! Spyro: Maybe the Ancestors will give an answer? Spyro waits for the Ancestors to answer... Ancestors: This is a gold dragon, all gold dragons are born strangely. This one was born 7 years old. His name is Hasarach. Spyro opened his eyes and told them what the answer was. Cynder: So Hasarach, how did you get here. Hasarach: I got thrown down from the Heavens. Bolt: Are you good at fighting? Hasarach: Yes, a master! Bolt: Me too! Trickle: You should watch Bolt fight! Hey how could you be a master fighter if you just hatched from an egg?! Hasarach: I got trained by the Ancestors in my egg... Spyro: Enough talk, Hasarach will do his first test. Spyro & Hasarach go to the Temple Dojo. Hasarach gets a n Outstanding mark! Bolt: Well how'd it go? Spyro: He got outstanding like you Bolt! Bolt: I'm starting to like you, Hasarach... Hararach's cheeks go rosy red. Hasarach: Yeah, I'm good at fighting... It gets to the night and the dragons go to the Temple Grotto to sleep. Once Spyro & Cynder went to sleep, Bolt asked Hasarach if he wanted to sleep with her because he didn't have anywhere to sleep. Hasarach went to sleep with Bolt and all were asleep, except Malefor and the Wyverns. Malefor: Wyvern Emperor! Rade and attack on the Temple! Wyvern Emperor: Yes, Master... To be Continued... |
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#6 Posted: 10:59:41 15/08/2009
Good.I liked it.
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#7 Posted: 20:46:45 15/08/2009
They're going to fall in love. I just know it. >_>
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#8 Posted: 22:16:31 16/08/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll do the rest of the story tonight or next week.
Info: I can only come on the computer on Sunday & Monday. :-( |
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#9 Posted: 01:03:23 17/08/2009
Cool! Hasarach sounds shiny...
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#10 Posted: 01:08:55 17/08/2009
Awesome story! Keep going!
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#11 Posted: 08:31:42 17/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Here is Hasarach:
(I got him from Dragon Adopters!) Scardy Wyverns... A cute dragon named Hasarach has hatched from an egg that fell from the sky. Bolt thinks he is cute! The others are jealous of him... Malefor has told the Wyvern Leader to rade attack on the Temple. The dragons are still asleep. Bolt: *yawn* Hasarach. *shakes him* Hasarach: *yawn* Bolt? Bolt: I feel something is wrong. Hasarach: I sense it too! Bolt: Shh, you'll wake the others. Bolt & Hasarach go outside to see what was wrong. They saw the wyverns coming to the Temple! Emperor Wyvern: Get those two lovebirds! Hasarach: Hey! We're not in love!!! The wyverns hit Hasarach. Bolt: Hasarach!! NO!!! Bolt uses electricity to zap them off. They all flew away... Bolt: Hasarach! Hasarach stays still for a moment and then wakes up. Hasarach: Bolt? Are you ok? Bolt: I'm fine! You got attacked! Hasarach: That explains my sore head... They go inside to the Grotto and go to sleep. The next morning Spyro & Cynder go inside the Grotto. Cynder: Wake up! The Apprentice Dragons wake up. Trickle: Don't tell us we have to do training... Frozen-Flame: Yeah! It's Saturday!! Spyro: You don't! Bolt: We had a little accident last night. They all look at Bolt & Hasarach. Hasarach: It's true! The wyverns attacking us. Meanwhile, at Malefor's volcano things weren't lookin' good... Malefor: WHAT!!! A seven year old Electricity Dragon beating your wyverns! Emperor Wyvern: She zapped them! Malefor: ........ Emperor Wyvern: Ok, we got scared and flew back here... Malefor: WELL DESTROY THEM NOW!!!!! Emperor Wyvern: Yes, Master. They flew off to the temple. Back at the temple... Bolt: Hasarach, the wyverns, they're comin' back!! Hasarach: SPYRO & CYNDER!! Cynder & Spyro come rushing in. Spyro: Whats wrong *pants* Bolt: The wyverns! The dragons wait outside for the wyverns. 30 minutes later... The wyverns came. Emperor Wyvern: AHH!! Spyro & Cynder are there! Retreat the attack!!! They fly off screaming! Bolt: Well we got rid of 'em! Spyro & Cynder walk inside. Hasarach: Well it's just you and me on the Temple Porch watching the sunset. Bolt: I need to tell you something... Hasarach: What? Spyro: Hasarach & Bolt, come inside to sleep!! Bolt: Never mind... They go inside to sleep. To be Continued... |
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#12 Posted: 09:49:55 17/08/2009
How predictable.
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#13 Posted: 10:14:01 17/08/2009
Good...
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#14 Posted: 10:40:55 17/08/2009
Good job.
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#15 Posted: 11:40:19 17/08/2009
keep going
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#16 Posted: 19:17:54 17/08/2009
Good chapter
keep it going
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#17 Posted: 19:58:42 17/08/2009
I stopped after reading the words 'Emperor Wyvern'... You know why,
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#18 Posted: 10:20:46 18/08/2009
Quote: ShadowDragon91
Nope. I wasn't planning on posting here again. Plus, using MS word doesn't help the story content. |
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#19 Posted: 21:11:06 18/08/2009
Quote: Tango
Sorry, I'll delete my post.
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#20 Posted: 10:50:11 23/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Bolt's way...
Those scarred wyverns! They ran a way, well flew away, and left the dragons in peace. Well for now... Malefor: ARRR!!! YOU STUPID WYVERNS!!! Emperor Wyvern: Sorry Master... Malefor: SORRY!!! YOU RAN AWAY LIKE A SCHOOL GIRL!!! Wyverns: M-m-m-master. Malefor: WHAT!!! Wyverns: I-It w-w-was Spyro a-a-and C-Cynder. Malefor: IF I WERE YOU I"LL GO TRAIN NOT TO BE A WUSS!!!!! Wyverns: W-w-w-wes, Master... Back at the temple it was a quite morning and Hasarach & Bolt were sitting on the meadow. Hasarach: What was it you wanted to tell me last night, Bolt? Bolt: Umm, Spyro & Cynder got you a new bed for you and you don't have to sleep with me. The other dragons were playing bug ball, a game where the bug's the ball. Most of the girls didn't want to go near the ball. Bolt: Hey, girls! Come with me... Girls: Ok... They walk off into the mushroom forest. Trickle: What is it? Bolt: Want to scare the boys? Crystal: With what? Bolt: Suggestions? Trickle: Umm, Flowers! Bolt: Flowers! They go off and find 10 flowers. Bolt: Lets go scare them now! They go to the boys and they run off screaming! Spyro & Cynder come along... Spyro: Training... Crystal: Can we play for a bit more? Trickle: Pleeeeeaaaaase? Cynder: Not now. They do their training and go to bed for it was night. In the middle of the night, Bolt goes off and sneaks out of the temple. Then the morning came and the dragons woke up. Axle: Where's Bolt? Frozen-Flame: She was here last night. Crystal: She probably ran out. Bolt came back at lunch time. Trickle: There you are. Bolt: I was just out getting things. It was a normal day: Lunch Training But at night they got to go out on the porch to sleep. All the dragons were asleep except Hasarach and Bolt. Bolt: Now I need to tell you something. Hasarach: What is it? Bolt: I... Hasarach: You what? Bolt: I... Find out what Bolt says in the next chapter! |
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#21 Posted: 10:58:48 23/08/2009
NICE!
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#22 Posted: 11:52:28 23/08/2009
Very nice!
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#23 Posted: 17:52:10 23/08/2009
Awesome!
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#24 Posted: 18:39:57 23/08/2009
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love reading storys like this,they don't tell you until the next chapter.NICE job!
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#25 Posted: 18:59:23 23/08/2009
You know, the Emperor Wyvern is my character and you just stole him and made him out to seem like a total wimp...
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#26 Posted: 07:48:26 24/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Distant Lands...
I... You what? Find out now... Bolt: I am leaving! Hasarach: What! Bolt: Yes, leaving. Hasarach: But you can't! Bolt: I can! Bolt then flew away to who knows where. Spyro & Cynder come running up. Cynder: Where's Bolt?! Hasarach: ..... The wyverns flew out of nowhere! Emperor Wyvern: Attack! The wyverns grabbed the dragons and flew to Malefor's Volcano. Malefor: Ah, ah, ah, what do we have here? Emperor Wyvern: We caught them Master! Malefor: Cage them up! At Bolt's journey, she flew through a beautiful portal to a new world. The portal closed, she was not to go back. Bolt: Where am I? A mysterious voice answered... Voice: The world of Scrazular. Bolt: Scrazular? Then a creature came out of the bushes. He had a spiked neck like an iguana's, 4 legs, a tail and arms on his back. He called himself Fyah. Fyah: Come out Vistor... A glowing blue dragonfly with arms and legs came out of the bushes. Vistor: W-w-what is it Fyah? Fyah: A dragon is here to help us! Bolt: What, me! Fyah: Yes, you. Vistor: Our sea serpent friend Dazer has been corrupted by Strafer's dark magic. Fyah: Let's start our journey! They jump through the forest and reach a cliff at the ocean's edge. A big blue sea serpent pops out. Vistor: There is Dazer! Fyah: We need to get the darkness out of him! Bolt uses fury and the dark spirit flies out. Bolt: How's that? Fyah: That was great, Bolt! Dazer: Fyah, Vistor, what happened? Vistor: We'll talk about it. |
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#27 Posted: 08:32:33 24/08/2009
NICE.....
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#28 Posted: 09:03:49 24/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
I'll do more next week! |
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#29 Posted: 12:17:43 24/08/2009
Nice chapter
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#30 Posted: 21:58:45 24/08/2009
Awesome!
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#31 Posted: 01:02:12 26/08/2009
Nice chapter.
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#32 Posted: 06:19:57 28/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Into the Deep...
Bolt ran away from the Temple and got herself into trouble, a grazler named Fyah, a dazletoe named Vistor and a sea serpent named Dazer want Bolt to help them destroy Strafer... Bolt, Fyah, Vistor & Dazer had a rough night. The floor was all bumpy and was hard to sleep on. They started to wake up. Dazer: Now *yawn* I can slither on land like a snake. Vistor: You are pretty gig for a snake... Fyah: Come on! Bolt: We are going through the temple ruins. They walk through but *crack, crack* THE FLOOR BREAKS!!! Dazer: AHHH!! *boom on the ground* that was uncalled for... Fyah: Come on! They walk through the ruins and come to a wall. Bolt: I'll break it! She uses electricity and the wall breaks, they move on. A light shines up a head. Vistor: Lets go! They go through the tunnel and come out into a desert. The desert was very dry and looked inhabited. But then a freezele runs through the dunes and dug, dug ,dug. It then fell, fell, fell. It must have been looking for something! Dazer: How could a desert be under the ground, and another land under that?! They go and look down the hole and see a frozen world. It was full of freezeles, understowes, hacors & jazzers! The team fall through the sand into the frozen land. To be Continued... This one was short because it is how they get into the deep, not how they stay there. The next Chapter will be how they get out, I'm guessing it's going to be another short one... |
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#33 Posted: 20:48:28 28/08/2009
Cool!
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#34 Posted: 22:17:46 28/08/2009
Cool!Love it!
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#35 Posted: 23:23:54 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll try & do my other chapter tonight, I'll be away most of the day!
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#36 Posted: 23:25:27 29/08/2009
Okay.
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#37 Posted: 00:13:35 30/08/2009
PC!!!
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#38 Posted: 00:12:31 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry it took so long but:
Back on the road again... Bolt, Fyah, Vistor, and Dazer fell into the deep, icy lands. Now they have to escape before the Evil Strafer gets to them... Bolt: How will we get out of here? Fyah: With Dazer! Dazer: I'll lift Fyah and myself out while you & Vistor fly! They do that and now they were in the desert. Fyah: Go on Dazer! They do it again. Vistor: Yay, we are out! Fyah: Lets go! Told you it was going to be short! |
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