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Quote: death horn

NO NO I WILL NOT UR NOT THE BOSS OF ME!!!!!!!

FAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriosly GROW UP!!!!

Quote: DARK CINDER

Quote: death horn

NO NO I WILL NOT UR NOT THE BOSS OF ME!!!!!!!

FAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriosly GROW UP!!!!

She is nine years old for crying out loud. She doesn't know any better.

its rude to point

Quote: DARK CINDER

Quote: death horn

NO NO I WILL NOT UR NOT THE BOSS OF ME!!!!!!!

FAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriosly GROW UP!!!!

She is nine years old for crying out loud. She doesn't know any better.

you had a little arrow D: pointing up to my poast D:

*dies*

i have no idear she just hates you D:

Quote: DARK CINDER

i have no idear she just hates you D:

She hates her because some of Cynder_543 freinds blocked her...

People need to use CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

Once, in a small grotto a black egg was made. His name was Death, his mother's name was Flapi and his father's name was Kumurri. Death was a black dragon, the rarest kind ever. Death had a loving family. He had a Papocu, which is a rare type of bird, named Popi. Death was a teenager and he had a girlfriend named Brooke.
Chapter 2
Once Brooke and Death were walking in Flameberry woods until Death sensed something. He looked behind him and there was Gemna, an evil dragoness. He told Brooke to go and hide, for he knew she was after them. Death flew up to Gemna and bit her paw. She jumped into the air and nailed(?) Death with her horns onto the ground.
Chapter 3
Brooke saw everything. She flew up and smacked Gemna with her tail and stunned her. Brooke walked up to Death, he was almost dead. Brooke used her life reviving power to save him. Now it was time to fly away, but Death's wings had been torn, and as a result he could not fly until his wings were healed. Gemna got up, Death's wings healed, he could fly now.
Chapter 4
Gemna was not far behind them. She blew smoke bombs and it got foggy, Death and Brooke were unable to see. Death fell out of the sky and slammed into the ground. Brooke realised it was not smoke, it was sleeping gas. Then, BAM, she fell out of the sky. 4 hours later they both awoke. Gemna was standing in front of them. Brooke and Death used the light and dark fury combined and destroyed her. (You really do need to put a bit more build up into the fight )
Chapter 5
Brooke and Death were tired, they both fell on the ground, BAM!!!! 8 hours later they woke up. Death was injured but only mildly. Brooke was fine.
"Death...I love you," Brooke said.
"I love you too," Death whispered.
They went home to the grotto. Death's parents and Brooke's parents were gone; they had fled the land, so Death and Brooke were the domanats now.
Chapter 6
As Death and Brooke grew up they had 4 eggs, they were Guardains by then, and they passed away in the year Malefor was born.

as death and brooke grew up the had 4,908,563,713,90 eggs they wer gaurdains by then and they passed away in the year malefor was born

I have read several topics that death horn made about her stories... and I must say I am just disgusted at all of your needless cruelty toward her. I was afraid to act until now, for the fear of making it worse. But on every single story, she gets nothing but "this is FAIL"s, and "grow up"s, and "don't bother trying"s. She's a KID... you can't expect her to have the writing skill of someone who's taken English classes for three years. She's only trying to exercise her imagination, and she will certainly not improve if she keeps getting this kind of treatment. I give her kudos just for continuing. Just because you're anonymous on the internet does not give you the right to treat people like garbage.

I have read several topics that death horn made about her stories... and I must say I am just disgusted at all of your needless cruelty toward her. I was afraid to act until now, for the fear of making it worse. But on every single story, she gets nothing but "this is FAIL"s, and "grow up"s, and "don't bother trying"s. She's a KID... you can't expect her to have the writing skill of someone who's taken English classes for three years. She's only trying to exercise her imagination, and she will certainly not improve if she keeps getting this kind of treatment. I give her kudos just for continuing. Just because you're anonymous on the internet does not give you the right to treat people like garbage.

I have read several topics that death horn made about her stories... and I must say I am just disgusted at all of your needless cruelty toward her. I was afraid to act until now, for the fear of making it worse. But on every single story, she gets nothing but "this is FAIL"s, and "grow up"s, and "don't bother trying"s. She's a KID... you can't expect her to have the writing skill of someone who's taken English classes for three years. She's only trying to exercise her imagination, and she will certainly not improve if she keeps getting this kind of treatment. I give her kudos just for continuing. Just because you're anonymous on the internet does not give you the right to treat people like garbage.

Thats strange, she said she was 10... So, she doesn't even know her own age?

Quote: SequoiaDragon

I have read several topics that death horn made about her stories... and I must say I am just disgusted at all of your needless cruelty toward her. I was afraid to act until now, for the fear of making it worse. But on every single story, she gets nothing but "this is FAIL"s, and "grow up"s, and "don't bother trying"s. She's a KID... you can't expect her to have the writing skill of someone who's taken English classes for three years. She's only trying to exercise her imagination, and she will certainly not improve if she keeps getting this kind of treatment. I give her kudos just for continuing. Just because you're anonymous on the internet does not give you the right to treat people like garbage.

I agree with you.