Thankis. I'll try to type it up, though I'ma bit busy. HUGE drawing rq from Cynderfyre, and I have to write this, I'm also doing an RP...
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Chapter 14
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They continued, suprisingly, their journey was peaceful and quiet.
Something's wrong. We haven't been attacked, though we are flying over open ground... Spyro thought, Cynder also. The mountain was within sight now.
1 day later...
They landed at the foot of the mountain to take a breath. The green lava, stinging hot acid, was twisting its way through the skeleton of the mountain as usual. The terrifying point was destroyed due to their last visit, but the entrance was still open. Cynder shivvered, remembering their close call last time.
They flew to the top, and swerved into the entrance, bracing themselves for a battle. But they landed, seeing no danger. The Mountain of Malefor was deserted.
"Oh. I thought this would be a hotspot for the darkness..." Spyro muttered.
"Me too. But I still sense a presence here..." Cynder murmered. Both just felt it was right to lower their voices, like in a libary.
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Sorry, a short one. *Ish lazy* I'm too busy.
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#152 Posted: 20:23:54 28/12/2009
Hmm, wonder what will happen next
Good chapter
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#153 Posted: 20:24:02 28/12/2009
I thought you said it wasn't the moutain of malefor.*looks at you suprisholy*
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#154 Posted: 20:53:20 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Its nawt. Someone else ish there.... *que spooky music*
And thanks.
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#155 Posted: 21:20:32 28/12/2009
Mmm....*Still looks at you supisholy*
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#156 Posted: 22:05:19 28/12/2009
good chapter.
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#157 Posted: 22:29:07 28/12/2009
good part. write more.
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#158 Posted: 10:57:29 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I'll do one or two today.
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#159 Posted: 14:08:43 29/12/2009
YES!!
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#160 Posted: 19:39:15 29/12/2009
write more chapters
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#161 Posted: 19:43:45 29/12/2009
Yes, WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!........Please.
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#162 Posted: 19:49:07 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Here ya go.
Chapter 15 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The presence revealed itself. A small, weak looking wolf drew itself from behind a fallen boulder. Its light grey fur ruffled in the miserable wind. Spyro growled, showing no fear. This creature could be dangerous. The wolf whimpered. "I pose no threat." She spoke though revealing her sharp teeth in defense. "Spyro.." Cynder whispered. He dropped his attack. "What are you doing here?" He asked. "I am sheltering. I was rejected from my pack, I am lame, my forepaw is useless." She replied, "Oh. Yes. I am Star." "Hmmph." Spyro mutterured, "Its not safe here." "I know." "Then why are you sheltering here?" "I'm waiting for a rock to fall on your thick head." She retorted. Spyro growled. "The real reason?" "Its the best place to observe the stars, which I can read." Star told them. "Well, I think you should travel with us, its not safe to stay here." Cynder joined the conversation. "I would be thankful" Star replied. "Well, you'll have to keep up. We fly fast." Spyro, who disliked this she-wolf already warned, eyeing her lame paw. "I am a she-wolf. Female wolves are one of the fastest animals on earth." She scowled at him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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#163 Posted: 20:10:19 29/12/2009
Good chapter
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#164 Posted: 20:11:12 29/12/2009
this is getting really good.
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#165 Posted: 20:16:28 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks, its the people who support it who keep it going though.
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#166 Posted: 20:21:23 29/12/2009
thank you... i support it 100%...
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#167 Posted: 20:25:45 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I will write another tomorrow.
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#168 Posted: 20:58:05 29/12/2009
cool.
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#169 Posted: 21:13:27 29/12/2009
Great chapter!
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#170 Posted: 21:14:02 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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#171 Posted: 21:57:13 29/12/2009
great story. i love the wolf. write more.
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#172 Posted: 19:39:33 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I may do a group pic of it at the end. When you're waiting, why not read my Warrior cats story?
Thankies.
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#173 Posted: 19:45:06 30/12/2009
spyro don like da wolf but cynda seem ta think she oka (i wanna talk like this now so here my bweird language of cant be bothered to writ proporly)
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#174 Posted: 20:02:38 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Yup. xD If some haven't guessed, *No-one i think* Star is a Gnaw wolf from Kathryn Lasky's Guardians of Ga'Hoole: The Outcast.
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#175 Posted: 20:03:51 30/12/2009
noooo it nooot write more chaps plz
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#176 Posted: 20:10:17 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Yush, it is. C:< (JK)
Hai. Thanks. I'll start. EDIT: Chapter 16 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They set off, Spyro and Cynder flying overhead, chatting. Star ran beneath, thinking how great it would be to have a friend. Because of her paw, she had been rejected from her pack, not to return. Other outcasts like her often lived lonely lives. At least she had these two dragons for company, though she felt as though she would prefer just journeying with the black one, the purple one seemed hesitant to make friends. At least I am traveling now. She thought, then turning to face the front, and saw a massive tree looming from the mist. Its gnarled branched intertwinded endlessly, and small animals ran through the carved trunk. The tree trunck was at least 5 dragon-widths wide, and a door was carved into the wood. "Hey! Shouldn't we rest there?" Star called up to them. "I know its there. We just don't have the time to rest." Spyro replied. Alright, Sherlock. Star thought narrowing her eyes. Cynder stared at the tree blankly, knowing that she had seen it in her dreams before. She had to be on her guard. Death would strike soon. ~~~~~~~~ Short but EPIC chapter.
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#177 Posted: 20:40:51 30/12/2009
cool. write more.
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#178 Posted: 20:42:27 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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#179 Posted: 20:50:22 30/12/2009
wow that was epic i wonder what'll happen next.
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#180 Posted: 20:51:38 30/12/2009
Good chapter
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#181 Posted: 20:52:35 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks,
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#182 Posted: 21:30:50 30/12/2009
WRITE MORE PLZ! GREAT CAHPTER!
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#183 Posted: 14:21:44 31/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks, though I have to wait for Zico-Chan to tell me something first.
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#184 Posted: 16:48:21 31/12/2009
Why? I want to read more!
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#185 Posted: 16:51:09 31/12/2009 | Topic Creator
You'll see if you check the contest results.
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#186 Posted: 17:10:25 31/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Yar, I know. Stop posting random links will you?
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#187 Posted: 17:13:01 31/12/2009
I just saw the contest results! Thanks for the coment!
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#188 Posted: 17:14:50 31/12/2009 | Topic Creator
No prob.
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#189 Posted: 17:08:51 02/01/2010
more chaps...MORE! *laughs maniacly* pwease?
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#190 Posted: 21:58:53 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay. I'll type up tomorrow morning. Just I'm on a fast moving RP at the mo. No one else on it is online in the morning's so I'm free.
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#191 Posted: 20:10:17 08/01/2010
are you gonna write more?
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#192 Posted: 20:12:55 08/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ok, I'll type up now. Sorry for being non-fluet in the writing of this, its just I'm very busy. D: Well, I'll type up now, so check back in half an hour.
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#193 Posted: 20:15:12 08/01/2010
ok cool
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#194 Posted: 20:28:29 08/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 17
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cynder landed in the branches of the tree unsteadily, because she was distracted by Death flicking about in the corners of her vision. She padded down the thick branch and waited for Spyro to join her. When he landed the branch shook from the force. Cynder hadn't realised that they had been growing all the time. He smiled an embarassed smile to her and she continue to where the branch met the mighty tree. Cynder glaced down and saw Star clawng her way up. She leapt the last few metres and got her breath back. "So, are we going in?" Star gestured to the hollow when the branch met the tree, which led into a corridor which had been carved throughout the tree truck, making a village inside. "I, uh, guess so." Cynder walked in and stared around. The hollow was about three times her length and twice her hieght. The walls were smoothened and the bark had been carved into intricate patterns. They all gasped simulataniously. Spyro padded to the front of the room where it led into a hallway. He flicked his tail in a gesture to follow him. They turned right and saw the corridor snake off into other rooms. They passed countless ones until a voice shouted from one of them. "Stop!" It called. A female dragon crept from the room, relying on her sense of smell rather than her sight. This dragoness was a light turqoise and her wings were feathery like a birds. She had ears that were visible, which was rare for a dragon. She had blue hair that flopped over her sightless eyes. "Why are you here?" She requested, staring blankly at each of them. "To rest. We are heading to the mountain to the North of here." Spyro replied. The dragoness sighed. "Well, you'd better come in then. My name is Illumina." They stepped into her room, which seemed to glow faintly. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well, the prize for my contest. Illumina belongs to Zico_Chan.
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#195 Posted: 20:35:16 08/01/2010
nice chapter.
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#196 Posted: 20:35:42 08/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#197 Posted: 20:37:21 08/01/2010
Good chap!
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#198 Posted: 20:39:32 08/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh, hai. xD Thanks.
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#199 Posted: 21:37:30 08/01/2010
Good chapter
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#200 Posted: 22:25:15 08/01/2010
great story. keep writing.
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