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CHAPTER 9
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#151 Posted: 20:40:43 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#152 Posted: 20:44:19 19/10/2008
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I already said!^ |
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#153 Posted: 20:44:56 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh. YOU EDITED!!!
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#154 Posted: 20:45:57 19/10/2008
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I never edited it! It was like that from the beginning! But never mind |
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#155 Posted: 21:18:04 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
By the time Icies is saying she was the best dragon in the temple, the music should be on 'I'm Miss American Dream since I was 17'. Das Music
Chapter 9: Piece of Me "You little son of a-" "Do you think a dragon of your age should curse?" Trecxior asked Icies. "I wasn't going to! You lousy dragon!" Icies yelled. "Hm, little angry are we?" Trecxior asked. "Oh my gosh! Angry? ANGRY? NO WAY!!! I AM WWWWAAAAAAAYYYYYY PAST ANGRY!!!!!!" Icies yelled again. "Calm down!!! If you do, I'll listen to you." Trecxior said. "Fine. I was the best dragon in the temple! It didn't matter what was bad or not, Or sneak away to the forest They used to love me and respect me, And Now, guess what." Icies said. "YOU are gonna get!!!" She yelled. "You will die!" Trecxior said as he lunged to Icies. She jumped and said "Do you wanna piece of me?" Icies shot out Ice, and hit Trecxior right in the leg, freezing it. "Hehehe, That the best you got?" He said as he broke off the ice just by moving his muscle. "No where near!" Icies shouted back. "Fine then. TAKE THIS!!" Trecxior shot out earth. "No. Not Earth." Icies whispered. As Icies was still, Trecxior hit her right in the heart with Darkness. "No.....Icies........" Midnight said. "Oh. Midnight Your alive? Well not for long." Trecxior used earth on Midnight. Midnight fell down. Her heart stopped beating. "Midnight? MIDNIGHT!!!!" Icies yelled. "Hah! You think you can beat me like that?" Trecxior walked over to Icies. "Stay away." Icies shot up into the air without using her wings and .... Trecxior was in her paws!! "WHAT ARE YOU DOING???!!!!" Trecxior yelled. "You wanna Piece of Me. NOW YOUR GONNA GET IT!!!!" Icies yelled as she turned golded and eyes glowing white. "No- Malefor was right! She HAS Light!" Trecxior spoke to himself. "Icies!!! Don't do it!!!!" a Dragon appeared out of thin air! It was Cyral, Icies' Mom!! "Mother, I have to. He killed Midnight. He took me." "Icies. You'll kill yourself!!!" Cyral yelled back. "I must. Goodbye Mom..." Icies used her fury. When the light dimmed, the two where gone. Midnight still lay where she was, her heart still not beating... "I-Icies..." Her Mother cried. -------------------- OMG I am EVIL!!!
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#156 Posted: 21:29:29 19/10/2008
Oh, awesome! Poor Midnight...
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#157 Posted: 21:30:44 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Icies died too....
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#158 Posted: 21:46:50 19/10/2008
You killed the main character!O.O
*Bawls* Icies was so awesome...... |
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#159 Posted: 21:53:48 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Yes she was. Sassy 2
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#160 Posted: 22:15:01 19/10/2008
Lolz, she was to funny!
If your fan-fic o...o-ver? |
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#161 Posted: 22:56:51 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
NEVER!!!
There's a TON More to come!
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#162 Posted: 23:00:24 19/10/2008
Good!^.^ I hope it is just getting started!
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#163 Posted: 23:03:17 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
The party's just getting warmed up!
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#164 Posted: 00:22:43 20/10/2008 | Topic Creator
R.I.P. Icies
R.I.P. Midnight R.W/O.P. Trecxior Rest Without Peace I couldn't resist!
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SpyroCrazy Yellow Sparx Gems: 1648 |
#165 Posted: 17:31:59 20/10/2008
Heya I'll read when I find time!
Will you read mine! Born in darkness... PLEASE REEEEAAAAAAADDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#166 Posted: 23:25:53 20/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Okay I will!
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#167 Posted: 21:46:52 21/10/2008
Awsome story Cynder16!!!
Have u read mine yet? Well anyways,I love these characters u are using!!! More,Please!
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..." |
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723 |
#168 Posted: 13:27:41 22/10/2008
OMG!! You MURDERER!!!! Why did yOU HAD To kilL ICIES!!!!!!! She was SO funny! I hope she will be back <='(
*Types after some while*: Ya know, moments like this always make the story WAY better, so I think it was necessary to k-kill her <=') *Types after even more time*: ME STILL LOVE YOUR FAN-FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8D |
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#169 Posted: 16:25:25 23/10/2008
please, don't turn her into a sue.........
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#170 Posted: 13:56:12 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Whoa...... Thanks PPL!!!
DarkSpyro_101: I will! D_C: She will return....
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#171 Posted: 16:21:58 25/10/2008
OMG really!? Thank god!!!!!
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#172 Posted: 22:04:28 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I have an Idea for Chapter 10&11!!!!
Here is the Music for Chapter 10.Music Oh and when the ppl start to sing in the song, the golden dragon in the story should be on the ground. Okay!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#173 Posted: 23:28:54 29/10/2008
ok! sounds cool!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#174 Posted: 01:28:36 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I like ur sig 2!
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391 |
#175 Posted: 16:08:30 31/10/2008
oh i love your story cynder16!
keep on writing plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#176 Posted: 16:42:14 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10-Part 1:Alciesta
(al-C-S-ta) As Cyral cried, the last tear driped off her cheek, landed as a heart, then all her tears started up her head! They formed as a heart in the golden air, that gave off a golden glow. Then the heart formed as a dragon, still glowing. This dragon was completely gold, with white eyes. It's white eyes then turned to look at Cyral. It just watched her. Then, it jumped down to the ground. "You. You are Cyral, Correct?" it said. "Y-Yeah...." Cyral sobbed. "I am here, to help you in your time of need. My name is Alciesta." As soon as Alciesta said her name, she started to glow her golden color."What-What are you doing??!?!?!" Cyral screamed, still crying. "I am not just a dragon. I am a spirit dragon. Your protector, Icies' Protector, Cyril's protector. Your whole family's protector. And now, your time of need, is worse then-" Alciesta gulped."Your own life, being sacrificed." she finished. "And now, I will help you." "But How?" Cyral started to feel better. "I will revive Icies, and Midnight. But-" Alciesta cried a bit. "I must revive Trexior to do so," she said. "That trader..." Alciesta whispered. Then, Alciesta dropped down to the ground. "Alciesta..." Cyral cried. "Are you okay?!" She ran to Alciesta. "Yes. There's just...bad memories...." she said.
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#177 Posted: 17:15:37 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks Ppl! For making this topic popular!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#178 Posted: 19:08:02 31/10/2008
your welcome! thank you, forwriting a really cool story!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#179 Posted: 22:41:35 31/10/2008
YEAH i love that chapter
plz continue!
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spyro rocks foreva spread the word to the world |
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#180 Posted: 17:30:47 01/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I can't right now, because I have to do a stupid project
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#181 Posted: 18:23:19 01/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Don't mess with these girl dragons!!!Cause they fight back HARD!!!
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#182 Posted: 20:47:37 01/11/2008
oh well, i hope you write more soon!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#183 Posted: 02:38:58 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I will try, the project may take a while.
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391 |
#184 Posted: 02:44:18 02/11/2008
ok i guess the wait will be worth it!
see when ya write yar chapter can ya make it a long one! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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spyro rocks foreva spread the word to the world |
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#185 Posted: 02:56:24 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Ill try my best and also my hardest.
Also, DA DRAGONS FIGHT BACK HARD!!!!!
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391 |
#186 Posted: 04:45:05 02/11/2008
oh yeah i like long chapters
lol hay where ya get those smileys? my fave is the hug one ya used, its so sweet!
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#187 Posted: 12:47:44 02/11/2008
Wow, I like it!
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#188 Posted: 13:53:06 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks NiOwl!
To spyrorocksforeva:I use them from deviantart. I hit Copy Image URL, and then put them in an [img]box. Thats it! It works!
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#189 Posted: 14:55:15 02/11/2008
awwwwwwww there so sweet!
i love the hug one! awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#190 Posted: 15:01:56 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
It goes like this-
Spyro-><-Cynder AAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!
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#191 Posted: 19:39:52 02/11/2008
please write more soon!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#192 Posted: 20:14:39 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I'll try. But I gotta go. I'm getting off my break. (From the project.)Bye!
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970 |
#193 Posted: 15:59:19 03/11/2008
Wow, me likey the story. I like it when the authors put emotion into the story. Like when Icies died. Please keep writing!!!
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8970 |
#194 Posted: 16:01:26 03/11/2008
Plz read our little story/play. Srry, I can't do links, so just go to idle chatter, then look for talk to spyro. We still writing, so anyone can feel free to join if you wish.
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#195 Posted: 16:31:22 03/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I'm glad U like it! And I will check out that topic!
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#196 Posted: 16:32:17 03/11/2008
Cool. Thanx!
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#197 Posted: 16:33:39 03/11/2008 | Topic Creator
NP!
And I like ur avatar!
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#198 Posted: 16:34:42 03/11/2008
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Again, thanx! |
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#199 Posted: 16:40:45 03/11/2008 | Topic Creator
NP! Ignitus always was my favorite. He Rocks!!
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#200 Posted: 16:41:34 03/11/2008
So, when are you going to continue writing?
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