WARNING: If you hate blood and stuff like that don't read!
Chapter 17: Stink's promise
stink slowly opened his eyes. DEXTA was staring down at the floor. His face was red with blood. But whose? And where was Flower? And what was on the floor? Stink stared down and saw what DEXTA was looking at.......And where the blood came from.....................and where Flower was..................Flower layed breatlessly on the floor. Stink sat by her and the pool of blood emnerging from her. She smiled. He stared.
'What did you do?' He whispered. She smiled.
'A sacrifice......... for my brother............' Stink looked at her. As she spoke blood dribbled from her mouth and nose.
'Well, don't worry. I'll get you to a hospitle and........and............' He couldn't think. She sighed.
'Thats why I love you................ you care about me....................but i'm a doctor too.......... i think................ i know...................if.................i live or not...............' Stink felt tears in his eyes.
'No, youre gonna make it! I know you will!' He felt his heart burn and his cheeks, but he couldn't let her die.
'No...............My body's..........too damaged.................' Stink cried and cuddled closley to her.
'I don't want you to leave me...........' He heard himself say. She was silent.
'Can you...............promise me one thing?' She asked. He nodded. 'promise me...................... you'll never ever kill....................ever..........' Stink cuddled her.
'Anything for you.' He sobbed.
'And.........I'll never.....................leave you..............' The sound of breathing died away and the thud against her chest stopped.
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This chapter is dedicated to my pet hamster, Berry
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#51 Posted: 10:43:53 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#52 Posted: 11:02:47 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 18: Darkness consumes all
Stink leaned over the body silently. tears fell onto Flower's dead body. Stink spoke up. 'You......killed her.' He muttered. Gahrad smiled. 'So i did.' 'You.....took the one thing important to me' 'What do you mean?' Stink was silent, holding Flowers cold blood soaked hands. A dark energy flew from Flower into Stink. Rosie climbed down from the throne and walked slowly over to Stink and put her hand on his shoulder. 'I'm sorry........' Stink shoved the hand off. He turned to face the Dragon. 'If you killed her...........why don't you try your own medicine?' He flew foward, eyes gleaming dark purple. Stunk shot at stink, the beam only reflected away and smashed the roof of the Arena. S tink moved foward angrily. He held the sword Flower tried killing him with and aimed at Gahrad's heart. Gahrad didn't seem the slightest bit worried. 'Go ahead, kill me. And rule the world after me.' He headed towards her...... but then he heard the voice in his head. Promise me....................you'll never ever kill.......... Stink dropped the sword and headed towards Flower. Gahrad laughed. 'So weak, so caring.' Stink ignored it and headed towards Flower's dead body He spoke to it. 'I only do this........because I'm your brother and I..........Love you............' He moved foqward to his dead sister...... and kissed her. Gahrad stared. 'Get a room.' He smirked. Stink closed his eyes and cried. After a while Flower's wrist twitched.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#53 Posted: 16:15:37 19/10/2008
I like it! Awesome and sad at the same time! Keep it up!
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#54 Posted: 16:23:48 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 19: Not so long ago
Stink fell into a flashback, not so long ago, at Christmas. Stink sat in front of the cold fireplace. It was winter, cold and chilly. It was Christmas Eve, and Stink couldn't get to sleep in his cold bed. He'd garbbed a bundle of blankets and wrapped himself, layed down on the sofa and moved the sofa closer to the warmth of the fireplace. Stink felt his eyes get heavier and heavier and slowly drifted off into a sleep... 'STINK!' Stink shook his head. Was it Christmas? no. It was still dark. Flower was standing in front of him, shaking. 'Have you seen my extra pillows?' 'No.' She started searching everywhere. Stink saw how blue her fur had become, even frost was on her nose. He pulled out his pillow and one of his warmest blanket and gave it to her. 'Here, go an get yourself warm.' Se stared at him. Something was in her eyes. Stink knew the look. She cuddled him. 'Thanks.' She walked off happily. Stink sat sadly on the prison floor crying. Flower's body had been taken by Gahrad and hidden. DEXTA had gone to fight in the arena..... and he was alone in a cell.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#55 Posted: 16:25:51 10/11/2008 | Topic Creator
At last i can continue!
Chapter 20: Experiments on the Dead 'Stunk?' Rosie peered around the Corner. Stunk was holding a vial of strange blue juice. 'What?' He muttered. 'You didn't have to kill her........' She had tears in her eyes. 'Tough. The lovely master said to kill Stink, she got in the way....... Well how was i to know she'd do that?' Rosie was silent. 'Why do we obey him?' Stunk turned red. 'DO YOU DEFY OUR MASTER?' He was angry with furyness. 'No, its just that...' 'We obey him! Don't question it!' The doors swung open and Gahrad strolled in smirking. 'Begin the experiment.' stunk turned to Flower's dead body on the metal table. Just looking at her made him feel sick. He opened her mouth. Inside there was blood and loads of disgusting stuff he couldn't identify. He poured the potion in, making sure it was swallowed. 'Yes...... lets see if this works!' Gahrad was expecting Flower to explode or do something distructive that he could use against Stink...... but there was nothing. 'What?' Stunk said. Flower's eyes blinked open. 'Impossible!' Gahrad gasped. Flower sat up. Her wounds were slowly fading to bruises. She looked at Stunk and Gahrad. 'Where....where......I.......' Gahrad looked at her confused face. 'Shhh, little one.' He smirkefd. 'Do you renember?' She looked at him. 'Yes! YOU TRIED TO MURDER HIM!' She lunged at Gahrad. Stunk held the gun up. 'STAY BACK!' She stopped. 'Chuck her in with Stink.'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#56 Posted: 08:08:45 12/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 21: Reunion
Stink sat on the cold stone floor. He muttered something. The guards came in carrying Flower. 'Flower?' He felt hapy again. She was alive! Flower fell to the floor. 'Flower?' Stink asked. 'Flower are you okay?' She looked up at him. 'Yeah......... i think so.........' She forced a smile. 'Hungry?' Stink asked. Flower nodded. Stink grabbed some of the bread and tore a peice off and gave it to Flower. 'Thank you,' Flower said. They sat in silence eating. 'How are you still alive?' Stink asked a moment later. 'That Dragon thing........ he gave me this stuff. I recon it was a Ressurection Potion.' Stink smiled. 'I missed you.' They both hugged eachover. 'Just one thing,' Flower asked, 'Where did the dark energy go when you....kissed me?' stink looked embarresed. 'Errr..... Well........... i thinkl it's inside me....' Flower's eyes opened wide. 'You need to get it out of you! Now!'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#57 Posted: 08:21:50 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 22: Darkness Consumes all......
Stink stared at Flower. 'Why?' 'You'll end up like me. Evil, Full of Hate, and just plain mean!' Flower sobbed. Stink looked at her again. 'What do I do?' It was then he noticed...... the sparkles from her eyes were gone. It was a strange look for Flower. 'You need an Injection... But DON'T tell Gahrad! He'll use it against us!' Flower said. 'Okay...... You build the Injection, I'll just act normal until I ahhhhh!' Stinnk started to scream. Flower looked at him. 'STINK!' Stink opened his eyes. They were full with terror. 'Help me........' Flower rushed to work, building the Injection. 'Don't worry. You saved me, the least I can do is return the favor.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#58 Posted: 19:28:24 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 23: Warriors of the Arena
Stink woke up, breathing in the cold misty air. He sighed and laid down again. Flower was working on her injection. Then, the doors opened and a warthog guard came in. 'come on you lazy freak! get up! Its your first day of fighting!' Stink rolled his eyes and followed the guard, making sure it didnt see the injection. Stink walked out the huge golden doors and breathed in the air. 'Stink, Stink, Stink,' Stink saw Gahrad sitting in his throne. The normal guards were sitting in the chairs cheering. 'You know, I bet you won't survive a second with my new secret weapon.' 'Your lying!' Stink shouted. The Dragon laughed. 'Am I?' 'Yes!' Gahrad smiled. 'Well, well, well. You have the guts of your father.....' Stink opened his eyes wide. 'You knew my father?' 'Yes. A brave man with a lovely wife. Such a sad ending for him. But...... no. I told you too much.' Gahrad smiled. 'But...' before Stink could talk Gahrad shouted 'FIGHT!' The doors of the coloseum opened and huge warthogs and Rhinos came thundering through. A small defenceless robot came along too.' 'DEXTA?' Stink whispered as the army enclosed on him and DEXTA. 'Got A Plan?' DEXTA said in his metal grating voice. 'No, but we need to close the doors' 'So You Do Have A Plan?' 'Well.... yeah okay, i do.' Stink grabbed his sword an slashed the head off the warhog. 'Strike one!' Stink screamed over the noises. DEXTA dug his sword into the Rhino's heart. 'Strike Two!' DEXTA beeped. Stink and DEXTA kept swiping guards down until only one was left..... the madman in Flower's jail cell. 'Pleaseeee....... have mercy!' Stink dropped his sword. 'You were with my sister?' 'Yes! But you dont understand! Even if she became good again, shes..... shes.... shes faking it!' Gahrad flamed the guard until a pile of blackened bones lay on the floor. 'Interesting fight..... but not entertaning enough.' The doors of the arena opened, and the warthogs came in and carried them to the jail cells. Flower was smirking when they arrived.
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#59 Posted: 20:17:44 13/11/2008
oh i like
plzzzzzzz continue
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#60 Posted: 20:22:47 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow! Thanx!
Chapter 24: Flower isn't Flower. Flower smirked. 'Welcome.' She held a knife up. 'Flower! What did they do to you?' Flower lunged foward and stabbed Stink's leg. Flower licked the blood off the knife. 'Flowa?' DEXTA asked. 'Shut it Crudsy.' DEXTA was silent. 'Now, Stink, I'm going to tear your flesh off bit by bit.' She raised the knife up high when suddenly Jacob came in and grabbed the knife. 'God! That was close!' He grabbed Flower and chained her up. 'JACOB! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?' Stink cried. 'Its not Her!' He hit Flower, her fur darkened. The eyes glew. Flower looked sadly at Stink. 'I'm sorry. But.......... I had to.'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#61 Posted: 20:31:11 13/11/2008
awwwwwwwwww poor skink!
i hope he gets his sister back to normal! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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#62 Posted: 20:42:03 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx! She will get back soon!
Chapter 25: Stink Stink looked at Flower. She lied. The darkness wasnt inside him. When they kissed the energy had made Flower more stronger than ever before. Flower now had her hair floating, her eyes glowing eveily and her teeth sharpened to a point. 'Flower....' Stink felt tears in his eyes. 'Whatever. Now I'm going to see the end of you.' Jacob looked at Stink. 'You've lost her Stink. Theres ow way back now...' 'No......' Stink started Crying. Flower looked at him. She laughed. Then she saw the falshes of the past. Herself walking through the forest. Wait, that was her mother? She saw a blue diamond, the palnets, solar systems, millions of unbelivable things. She saw Stink crying. 'Flower..........please come back......please!' Flower slapped Stink. She awaited the return..... gahrad opened the door and came in. 'Flower.... good work.' 'Thank you master.' She bowed efore Gahrad. 'Stink, do you seriously think I'd not spy on you? I wante dto see waht you were doing in jail. Planning a escaope, or planning revenge.' Stink looked at Flower. 'Flower....' 'Shut up! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOUR GUTS!' Stink fainted. He saw everything go black.....
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#63 Posted: 20:48:18 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
So what do u think?
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#64 Posted: 20:51:08 13/11/2008
i like it was AMAZING!
: Your story keeps getting better and i can't wait for more!
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#65 Posted: 21:01:22 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx again!
Chapter 26: Revenge Stink woke up in a lab. Flower was sitting watching. She gave him a smirk and a small wave. Gahrad, Stunk and Rosie leaned over him. 'Welcome back,' Gahrad smirked. stink saw him. 'You.........' Stink tried to kill Gahrad, only finding himself chaine dto the table. 'Awwww,' Flower teased, 'baby Stink is hurt. BAH! Your a pathetic lowlife!' Her voice had somehow deepened. 'Well, your certainly not my sister then.' Stink muttered. 'Face it, i am' She smirked. 'No, cause my sister would smile at me, she would help me, she wouldn't betray me.' Flower looked at Stink. 'That won't work. I'm too consumed.' 'MY SISTER is beautiful, nice, happy, keen, and smiley' Flower was silent. 'Did you say....beautiful?' Flower then turned and pushed gahrad into a steaming vat of lava. She grabbed Stunk's gun and shot Stunk with it. 'DIE!' She let out a dark explosion that destroye dthe arena.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#66 Posted: 21:05:26 13/11/2008
ohhhhhhhhhhh i like actuly i mean I LOVE!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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#67 Posted: 08:00:40 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Okay! Thanx again!
Chapter 27: Escape Gahrad screamed at Stunk as his flesh slowly bubled and melted. Stunk's hand reached over the edge for Gahrad, but stopped an hung there in silence. Now the arena was loud with noises, crashes, bangs and explosions. Flower shook her head and saw Stink laying on the floor across the room. She saw the floor of the Arena shaking and then exploding. Earthquakes were happening everywhere. Flower ran over to Stink. She saw a pool of blood and only relised she had just killed her own brother: the one who went through all the trouble of saving her, the one who ressurected her, the one who hugged and kissed her. Flower looked at Stink's silent body. 'Stink?' She shouted over the explosions and crashes. Stink gave no reply. Flower shook him. His hand fell off his chest and made no movement, as if the bones in his body had vanished. Flower screamed and sobbed. She then picked up Stink and headed to the doors. Looking back, Rosie was leaning over Stunk crying. 'Come with us!' Flower shouted. Rosie shook her head. 'Theres nothing left for us here or anywhere.' Flower ran out the door. DEXTA was waiting, obviously expecting Stink carrying Flower in his arms. 'What Happene...' Before they could speak the floor and the door callapsed inwards down and down and down. They ran through the corridor as the floor fell down. Outside all the Guards and Soilders were running as the desert floor shook with thunder. Flower could only hope Jacob was one of them. When they got outside the desert sand was burying the bodies of those who had fallen. the floor was raising. Flower leaned over Stink's body. 'Breath! BREATH!' His hand drooped and made no movement. DEXTA was standing. The sand was up to Flower's waist now. 'Flowa, I Am Afraid He Is.....' DEXTA didnt dare say the words. 'No! He's Stink! He'll make it!' She shook Stink. She was breathing in sand. She couldn't breath. She fainted and the last thing she saw was Gahrad's face an dthe words 'Thiiiiisssss isn'ttttttt ovvvvvverrr'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#68 Posted: 08:24:55 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 28: Home again.
stink opened his eyes in a strange house. his house. He looked at the two shapes leaning over him. 'Stink?' The voice was blurred and far away. 'He Isn'T Stable Yet.' 'He's awake!' His vision came back, he heard. Flower and DEXTA were in the room. 'You okay?' Stink nodded. 'What happened?' Stink asked. Flower hugged Stink. 'Please Stink, please forgive me for what I did. I was being used by Gahrad. I'm so sorry I just....' Stink hushed her and hugged her back. 'I missed you.' Stink whispered 'I missed you the most.' Flower whispered back. Outside the sun shone on the beutiful grass, covered in dew. He had a feeling the adventure wasn't over yet....... To be Continued in The Stink and Flower Chronicles: Dark Armies Click here for Book 2! Stinka nd Flower Chronicles: Dark armies
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#69 Posted: 20:57:18 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Also, check this out! The Diddo Chronicles
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#70 Posted: 09:33:53 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Anybody?
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#71 Posted: 20:10:41 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Secret Chapter! DUN DUN DUNNNN!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 29: Gahrad Stunk crawled around the floor. Rosie and him were struggling through the ruins and the destruction Flower had caused. Stunk growled. 'This isnt over yet.' He snarled. Rosie looked at him. 'You dont need to be harsh to them. 'They killed me!' 'Well, almost.......' 'You care too much. Im starting to think you are that bratty Flower!' Rosie went red. 'Im nothing like her! I serve Gahrad!' 'Yeah, like when you questioned him.' Stunk muttered. 'What? I only asked why we served him. Thats all!' 'if you carry on youll end up like Flower, when I shot her.' To be continued in http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=10891
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#72 Posted: 21:10:58 18/11/2008
Flower dies? O.O
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#73 Posted: 07:59:24 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, but she comes back to life of course.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#74 Posted: 17:20:57 22/11/2008
Quote: Malefor0001
I see
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#75 Posted: 10:44:36 28/11/2008
Lol 29 chapters. O.o
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#76 Posted: 15:52:02 16/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Yes! Took me a while tho!
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