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HIR's Vortex [CLOSED]
DragonCamo Platinum Sparx Gems: 6710
#51 Posted: 02:08:12 09/11/2013
PAGE!!!
EDIT: **** YOU HCI
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Gay 4 GARcher
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 02:08:28 09/11/2013 by DragonCamo
hardcoreignitor Gold Sparx Gems: 2583
#52 Posted: 02:08:20 09/11/2013
THIS IS MY PAGE
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nyeheheheheh

hey lois, i’m dustah from mudda 3
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#53 Posted: 03:08:38 09/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9 Part 1: Baggy Head

HIR reached into the bag and pulled everyone out. By the time he was finished, it got very crowded, and HIR, weebbby, Windumup, Bash, Troll Slug, Jaggedstar, HCI, slambam, Eevee and darkwolf fell through a crack in the wall. "Oh god!" Bash cried, and as if on cue, Airglow, CG, Hot Dog 542, Seiki, Ash, Cody and DC fell on him. "Well isn't this spectacular!" Bash yelled.
Eevee88 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4958
#54 Posted: 05:57:21 09/11/2013
Am I dead?!?!?!

Edit: 10\ 10000000000
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Heading out, my liege? A commission, I presume? Then I shall accompany you. Just...ah, allow me to indulge in one more chapter...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 05:57:41 09/11/2013 by Eevee88
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#55 Posted: 12:35:08 09/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9 Part 2: Baggy Head

A dark shadow appeared. It emerged out of the darkness and charged at the survivors. "We gawt tis gaiz." HCI exclaimed. All the people except HIR backed away. The dark shadow had a Paper Baggy Swag Bag, which he used to ram CG, Hot Dog, DC and Seiki. Those 4 went flying out of the vault. The PBSB Shadow wasn't finished, and knocked weebbby and Windumup above, too. The 11 remaining backed away carefully.

Okay, here is how to picture all the main characters.

Troll Slug --> Milhouse
Eevee --> Eevee
Bash --> Munchlax
darkwolf --> A Dark Wolf
slambam --> Diddy Kong
HCI --> KK Slider
HIR --> Notes
Jaggedstar --> Girl that looks like a lemon
Milhouse --> Milhouse too
Cody --> Cody

Minor

weebbby --> Silver dragon
Windumup --> Wind-Up
Ash --> Squirtle
Airglow --> A goat
Seiki --> Pumpkin Sora
DC --> Cato
Chill --> Chill
CG --> Sonic
Hot Dog 542 --> Gary Coleman
BB --> Mr. Burns

I'm not going into minor characters.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#56 Posted: 17:38:37 09/11/2013
Cool. Wait who's dead? Am I dead again?
Hot Dog 542 Gold Sparx Gems: 2872
#57 Posted: 17:57:34 09/11/2013
I'm Gary Coleman. smilie
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Quote: Bimle
Why is it that so many people have hardons for dogs?
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#58 Posted: 19:30:15 09/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Btw, CS is Mega Gengar.

Chapter 10: Super Saiyan Geek

Cody, Troll Slug, Milhouse, Eevee, HCI, Bash, slambam, darkwolf, Ash, Airglow and Jaggedstar huddled together. The dark shadow was lurking closer. "Here's our sacrifice dummy!" darkwolf cried, and spun around with his arms out. It whacked Airglow and Ash, who were sent sky high. HCI rammed into the shadow, but he went through it, and went over a pit. He shook his arms frantically, and ran before he fell, into sneaky HIR, climbing above. They both fell on the ground. "It's the Codmeidster's turn!" Cody yelled, and pressed an omnitrix (I don't watch Ben 10, so I don't know how it's spelled) which turned Cody into a ghost, which let him beat up the shadow, and he turned back into his geeky self. "Dwarves!" Eevee yelled. "No, elves." Troll Slug told her. The elves ran through a dark tunnel. "After those elves!" Bash yelled. The 10 people ran into the dark tunnel.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#59 Posted: 01:58:33 10/11/2013
Awesome! Wait, did I die again,like when I hit the ground?
Bash28 Blue Sparx Gems: 951
#60 Posted: 03:21:57 10/11/2013
Lol XP

Good Chapter TS!
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"Points for bravery, Stiff."
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#61 Posted: 03:29:03 10/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11: Epic Boss Battle Part 1

Through the deep tunnel, Troll Slug was sweating. Milhouse and Cody were lagging behind, so they got mauled by evil bats. HIR, HCI, Troll Slug, Bash, Eevee, darkwolf, Jaggedstar and slambam ran faster. Suddenly, there was the kingdom. Evil elves to nice elves roamed the place 20 feet below. They started looking at a muscular elf. "That's the leader!" slambam exclaimed. Bloody Milhouse and a Bruised Cody ran smack into HIR, who fell down into the pit.

In case you are wondering, there are 4 parts to this final chapter, and anyone knocked out from the shadow thing or anything are back to land.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#62 Posted: 03:31:16 10/11/2013
Oh cool
Bash28 Blue Sparx Gems: 951
#63 Posted: 03:33:11 10/11/2013
Hmmmmm. Interesting. Very, interesting.
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"Points for bravery, Stiff."
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#64 Posted: 03:35:54 10/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Those are the main 10 characters. There will be a second story.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#65 Posted: 16:28:40 10/11/2013
Nice..
Eruptor100 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1446
#66 Posted: 19:22:33 10/11/2013
Quote: Eruptor100
I have an idea for the sequel if there is one... STAR WARS! Darth HIR! Luke troll slug, r2eruptor2, hardcorbakka, princess eevee, chill solo, seiki3po, obi slambam kenobi

The rest you can think of! Can we both do that if you think it is a good idea!



What do your think of this for a sequel, dome of the main ten return as mains but the rest become normal characters of it, and some new main characters
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Stick em up!
Credit to big green
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#67 Posted: 22:27:42 10/11/2013 | Topic Creator
The main characters become hipsters except for Bash and slambam. Them, along with weebbby and Windumup must save them from taking over the world.
Bash28 Blue Sparx Gems: 951
#68 Posted: 22:29:54 10/11/2013
I will smilie


won't i?
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"Points for bravery, Stiff."
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#69 Posted: 23:01:49 10/11/2013 | Topic Creator
No.

Chapter 11: Epic Boss Battle Part 2

"HIR" Jaggedstar yelled. "Yeah?" He said before crashing into the ground. "You are a lemon!" She yelled. "Oh, snap." Bash cried. The elves noticed them, and started running towards them. "Don't BASH us!" HCI yelled. When you could actually here the crickets chirp, his head sank down. "Sorry..." He said. "HIR!" slambam yelled. HIR tried climbing up, but Milhouse threw a rock at him. "Milhouse? What's wrong?" Cody asked. "HIR is evil..."
MagicFizz Emerald Sparx Gems: 3728
#70 Posted: 01:19:10 11/11/2013
Can I be in this?
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My life is complete.
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#71 Posted: 02:10:07 11/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Maybe in the second series...

Part 3 coming soon.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#72 Posted: 23:56:44 11/11/2013
Nicee.
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#73 Posted: 00:18:06 12/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11 Part 3: Epic Boss Battle

"HIR is faking all this time!" Milhouse yelled. "Pure evil!" He yelled. "As evil as the fact you are an idiot?" darkwolf retorted. "It's so true, it's scary." "Burn..." Eevee shouted. "Flareon?" A confuzzled HCI asked. "Wow, genius!" Troll Slug replied. "That's so cold I'll order a mojito with it." Jaggedstar replied. "With LEMONS." She continued. "What's with you and lemons, lemon head?" Bash asked. "EVERYONE JUST SHUT UP!" slambam yelled. While they were arguing and dissin' each other, Cody snuck out and saw the elves tying HIR upside down underneath Mount Wakatakalakasoapalitaullopakabakashakalaka. "Oh gawd." He gasped. "Dat title!" He repeated. He threw a ninja star at HIR, who fell inside the volcano. Eevee pounced and scooped HIR at the last second. "I owe you." HIR exclaimed. "Happy to help." Eevee replied. "We have bigger fish to fry." Cody exclaimed. "It's just us!" Eevee yelled. "The other 7 are still arguing." HIR yelled. "Eevee, get the others to join us. Cody, prepare defenses. I'll be the judge." HIR said. "Of course." Cody retorted. "Let's randomly break into a secret lair and screw up kardonis the elf king and hi-" He was stopped by Eevee. "You mean Bowser?" She asked. "Oops...wrong one...MagicFizz." HIR replied. "Let's fight!" Cody yelled.

Uh-huh...Part 4 soon!
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#74 Posted: 00:56:46 12/11/2013
Yay! 1000000000/10!!!
Bash28 Blue Sparx Gems: 951
#75 Posted: 00:58:07 12/11/2013
Perfect.
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"Points for bravery, Stiff."
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#76 Posted: 01:41:00 13/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11 Part 4: Epic Boss Battle

Eevee ran to the other arguing 7. "We need to save the world!" She yelled. HCI,
Troll Slug, Bash and Milhouse ran over. "Why?" Jaggedstar asked. "Because..." Eevee was stumped. slambam and darkwolf slipped in with the others. "Wait!" Jaggedstar said, looking at slambam. "Why should we be killing MagicFizz? He's innocent. Why?" She asked. Troll Slug, Bash, darkwolf, and slambam slipped on her side. "You're right!" Eevee exclaimed. HCI and Milhouse walked along too. From far away, Cody ran over with them. "Let's go to the Slug House!" Cody said. "Sure!" Bash exclaimed. "Guys? Kill MagicFizz?" HIR asked, then looked at the tribe. Let's just say, the elves had found dinner. d^-^b


THE END.
MagicFizz Emerald Sparx Gems: 3728
#77 Posted: 01:53:00 13/11/2013
Woah.

I don't taste gud.

Did i die???
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My life is complete.
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#78 Posted: 12:17:09 13/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Nope. The dinner was HIR.
Hot Dog 542 Gold Sparx Gems: 2872
#79 Posted: 05:09:54 14/11/2013
so is this story oveR???!?
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Quote: Bimle
Why is it that so many people have hardons for dogs?
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#80 Posted: 02:50:24 15/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Yaman.
Underian Emerald Sparx Gems: 3095
#81 Posted: 02:52:06 15/11/2013
We shall travel in the WILD with The Waka in the HIR Vortex.

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