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Skylanders: At Kaos's last strike [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 15:07:06 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Alright fan fiction time thanks to all you guys that made a skylander! i will start as soon as i get home!
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#2 Posted: 15:16:41 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
welcome to my fan fiction engoy watch out for your characters soon smilie
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chapter one: a memory

My village was destroyed. Every last corn stalk was burnt to crisps. Every last hut collapsed. Every last member of my pack was gone. Though i was only two years old at the time it was then i decided to become a skylander. You see earlier that morning my village was conquered by the elements fire, water, undead, and life. I knew the only source to all that hydras power: Kaos!

After that my village turned to my training grounds. Week after week i trainded their. My hunger was overthrown by my blood thirsty need for revenge. After five months of training i was ready for the long journey to the core of light.

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sorry for the short chapter i just stopped their to leave you guys hanging smilie i know right im so evil i will continue later or tomorrow it depends how many veiwers i have smilie spread this topic around thatnks
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#3 Posted: 18:07:57 16/02/2012
Looks good, but i'd like to know this: is this at the same time as the game or after it? Or even before? Oh and also, i know i'm being picky but...
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Week after week i trainded their.

wrong there. Just let you know! I reccomend you proof-read each chapter before posting it, it can be quite annoying editing all the time (as i found out with my own f.f.).
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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#4 Posted: 20:21:04 16/02/2012
its good so far. but whos the main charecter?
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#5 Posted: 20:26:21 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
You will see later and yea I should edit sorry 'smilie
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#6 Posted: 20:33:15 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
This is after
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#7 Posted: 20:37:52 16/02/2012
Where do you make a skylander?
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#8 Posted: 21:50:11 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: EARTH

"Ahhhhhhhhhhh!"

"Hey Ryan, did you hear that?"
"Umm no... Should I have been listening?"

Ryan and his friend Brandon were walking home from school on a thursday afternoon. Every thing was normal untill Brandon started hearing things. They were on their way to the electronics store to get the first go at the new "Skylanders: Giants" game. They arrived at the store and looked throughout the window to see the news forecast.

"Welcome to channel 5 news! Were going to start by reporting straight from a NASA astronomer Mark Qúeso who predicts a falling UFO (unidentified flying object) who appears to be behind all this screaming you've been hearing
in downtown Los Angeles"

"Creepy, huh?" a voice said.

Ryan freaked out and said "Umm I'm not allowed to talk to strangers." Then he turned around realizing that it wasn't a stranger. It was his crush Tawnie.

Ryans heart leaped. "I wonder what kind of UFO it is, a spaceship? An alein? No, no, no I got it..."
Her voice trailed off as she saw Ryan wasn't paying attention ,but was looking into space .

"LOOK OUT!" Ryan yelled and he leaped towards Tawnie pushing her out of the way. BOOM! Ryan blacked out.
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#9 Posted: 22:11:18 16/02/2012
...who's the character I'm getting impatient
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#10 Posted: 22:19:37 16/02/2012 | Topic Creator
That's the point smilie
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#11 Posted: 22:24:30 16/02/2012
who r the 5 guys i wanna know smilie
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#12 Posted: 00:47:21 17/02/2012
This is AWESOME! smilie
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#13 Posted: 02:19:51 17/02/2012
^You said it!!! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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#14 Posted: 02:39:57 17/02/2012
Awesome!
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#15 Posted: 03:02:12 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
The earth part is based on me and my friend brandon and tawnie... Um yea you get the point smilie
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#16 Posted: 03:09:52 17/02/2012
Funny my brothers name is Brandon well the suspended is killing me to see if Blitze or Mushuck made it in
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#17 Posted: 03:32:17 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Kk coming in like 6 chapters
beware the alpha squad smilie
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#18 Posted: 12:02:29 17/02/2012
^awwww at least 1 of mine can make it in still
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#19 Posted: 13:09:00 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I'm going to try to fit every ones in
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#20 Posted: 14:06:18 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: skylands in peace

I'm sorry for you people who can't wait for their character to come in the main character will come in chapter 5
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"Hey spyro pass the ball!" shouted trigger happy from behind wham shell. He was clearly not open for a pass.

After the skylanders banished Kaos to earth they had nothing to do but sit back and play ball. Or so they thought...

Spyro ignored trigger happy and went on to pass the ball to Terrafin. Terrafin took the ball with him as he jumped underneath the ground and raced towards the goal. He suddenly popped out of the ground and he then flung the ball into the goal. Spyro cheered on Terrafin until something different happened.

Did this always happen when someone scored a goal? No.

The ruins were scorched in dark, purple flames. Chop Chop and Hex were acting differently as if they were in a undean crypt zone. Was the core out of wack? Did Cynder fart again? All these scenarios raced through Spyro's head. A zombie apocolips? These all couldn't be possible what was it?

Suddenly the flames vanished into ashes leaving something or shall I say someone behind.

His sharp fur blowed in the wind. His teeth were as if one thousand blades. Then he ran towards spyro as fast as lightning. "Greetings my name is Clawshock I have come to join you."

Spyro froze
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Claw shock by spyro_cynder88 thanks smilie
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#21 Posted: 16:31:48 17/02/2012
@Deebish70
For your signature maybe make it a link so people can just click that?
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#22 Posted: 17:44:39 17/02/2012
cool fan fic!

Great idea to keep us in suspence (makes me want to read on)
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#23 Posted: 20:36:54 17/02/2012
Quote: Deebish70
I'm going to try to fit every ones in

I SERIOUSLY reccommend you DON'T do this. I found it VERY difficult handling just 5, juggling them around, trying to give them equal speaking parts. Then I added about 7 more and REALLY regretted it. But seriously, it's difficult juggling characters
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#24 Posted: 20:59:33 17/02/2012
DARN! i wish marshanado was the main charecter!
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#25 Posted: 01:26:41 18/02/2012
WOAH! lol did smilie fart again absolutely random right there
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#26 Posted: 01:33:26 18/02/2012
yeah trix master!
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#27 Posted: 01:53:35 18/02/2012
but it's funny lol smilie how much chapters do u make a day about deebs
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#28 Posted: 05:08:05 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Hmm yea I guess I'm going to choose my favorites to be in it maybe one of each element (tough luck to the air cuz theirs like 6 of em)
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#29 Posted: 12:50:44 18/02/2012
well maybe u could put like 1 or 2 more
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#30 Posted: 13:35:02 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: alien invation

"Huh? Were are we?" Ryan asked.

"Hey he's alive!" Brandon cheered from next to his bed.

Ryan looked around. He was in a hospital. He saw the bed next to him being crowded by hazmat workers and scientists. "what's happening over their?"

"Don't ask me..." Brandon began walking towards the bed Ryan followed.

'Uh oh! What if this is Tawnie! She wouldn't be as hot with radiation spilling out of her, or blood all over her face, or no, worse! What if she was dead!?! I knew I shouldnt of pounced at her too hard. I should of known she would hit her head on concrete!' Ryan thought the worst things possible.

Ryan pushed the workers out of the way and saw a burnt, beaten kid. Ryan didn't know what to do. He punched a hazmat guy in confusion, but he was contained by two scientists. "He's gone mad!"
Said the scientist holding his left arm. Then Ryan froze when a girl walked into the room holding a teddy bear. It was Tawnie! The scientists let Ryan go and he ran towards the bed were the body was.

Ryan rememberer vaguely from his video games.

Ryan, Tawnie, and Brandon stared at it "Kaos!" they all shouted.
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#31 Posted: 13:38:35 18/02/2012
Good morning well I didn't suspect that
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#32 Posted: 13:52:49 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Expect the unexpected bro that's all I could say
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#33 Posted: 14:14:40 18/02/2012
i can tell you that marshanado is not the main cuz in chapter 1 it says "pack" which means wolf. well i dont know if hes the air guy, but probs not cuz there is tons of them. smilie
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#34 Posted: 15:06:51 18/02/2012
actually trentd78 claw shock is undead
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#35 Posted: 15:09:14 18/02/2012
and also deeb said "I'll try to get everyone in" so your marshanado is possibly still gonna be in the fan fiction smilie
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#36 Posted: 16:14:12 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I'm going to choose maybe 1 or 2 of each or I might just choose my favorites
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#37 Posted: 16:43:35 18/02/2012
^okay i cant wait to see the skylanders hope 1 of em r mine smilie
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#38 Posted: 17:18:48 18/02/2012
Do you want to see a picture that I drew of Clawshock?

http://spyrocynder88.deviantar...ander-284521217
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#39 Posted: 18:24:52 18/02/2012
i wish i made 2 cuz i want 1 of them to be it and i will have a better chance!
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#40 Posted: 20:04:49 18/02/2012
@spyro_cynder88 THAT'S AWESOMENESS!
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#41 Posted: 21:02:04 18/02/2012
Thanks. smilie
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#42 Posted: 21:14:50 18/02/2012
YYYYYYIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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#43 Posted: 21:22:55 18/02/2012
hey that's my line :3 YIPPIE!
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#44 Posted: 21:52:37 18/02/2012
awesome fan fic smilie
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#45 Posted: 02:13:58 19/02/2012
cant wait till next chapter
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#46 Posted: 03:39:00 19/02/2012
nor can I smilie
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#47 Posted: 04:05:44 19/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Alright tomorrow morning (California time) will be next chapter: rejected
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#48 Posted: 13:43:24 19/02/2012
when will mine come in?
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#49 Posted: 14:52:34 19/02/2012
i hope mine comes in smilie
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#50 Posted: 15:45:46 19/02/2012
GOOD MORNING EVERYONE smilie
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