Yep, the next story in The Legendary Ruuko series is finery up! If you haven't read the first one, I highly recommend it. You will probably won't understand it if you haven't read it. Here is the link.
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#1 Posted: 09:10:58 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 12:22:15 13/09/2009 | Topic Creator
..... Well, I guess I will start now... Even if people aren't going to read it.....
BTW, I think these lyrics suits Ruuko's personality the best. PROLOGUE: A swift breeze went by as two young dragons padded around the clearing. They looked scared and unhappy, there eyes wide with terror, looking like they've missing something in-portent. They took a step back as an older looking dragon padded towards them. "What do you want with us!?" One off the dragons squeaked. The other dragon hid behind his sister. "Nothing little ones" The adult dragon laughed. "All I wanted to do is welcome you to the spirit tribe..." Another dragon came padding into the clearing. Her eyes were filled with sorrow. "Poor scraps.... They are way too young to join us..." The white dragon crocked. The other dragon flicked his tail in-front off her until she looked away. "We can't save them now, Cloudberry. It's too late. They will hunt with us now" Even though his voice was calm, his eyes were filled with sadness. "... Your right Firefrost.... It is too late to save them now. There already dead and there bodys are probably already... eaten.... You have been here for over 1000 years so I'm sure you know what you're doing" Cloudberry spoke through gritted teeth. "Were is our mother?! Why are we here!?" One off the younger dragons cried. "Tell us! Please!" Cloudberry and Firefrost glanced at each other. "You mean you can't remember?" It was Cloudberry who spoke "No, we don't!" "Well... An ape took you away and well.... he killed you. Both off you... The ape hasn't done anything with the body yet..." "Were is our mummy?!" "Your mother hasn't joined us yet. She is still in the living world, looking for her lost children" "Then send us back! You said it yourself! We were too young to die!" "A bit off a pitty too. We were going to give both off you a great destiny.... But I guess we will have to give it to someone else..." Cloudberry swiped a paw over her eyes as if she was swiping away tears. The two dragons didn't ask anymore questions. There eyes were filled with sadness. "So... We don't get our 'great destiny'?" The smaller one squeaked. "I'm afraid not Stick... Unless...." Cloudberry turned to Firefrost. "Firefrost, do you think we can reincarnate these two dragons!?" She asked. "Can we reincarnate Stick and Cora?" Firefrost narrowed his eyes. "We can't just go reincarnating anyone that dies. It takes up alot off power" He pointed out. "Ones a dragon dies, thats i-" Cloudberry cut him off with a large growl. "Have you forgotten? These two black dragons were supposed to have a great destiny ahead off them! Without them, the world would be destroyed! Would you rather reincarnate Stick and Cora or have the world destroyed?" Firefrost looked defeated. "I guess your right Cloudberry... Without them, this world would suffer from destruction... Alright, I will do it" Firefrost padded towards Stick and Cora. Cora backed away a little. "What are you doing?" Cora squeaked. "I'm sending you back to the living. Now keep still" Firefrost snapped. He swiped his tail around them both and closed his eyes. "Remember, you two have a great destiny ahead off you. Try not to get killed this time" Cloudberry whispered. "You two will go back to the living as a black egg" Stick wanted to ask more questions, but it was to late, they were already turned back into an egg. Firefrost created a small portal beneath the two eggs and let them both fall through it. As soon as the portal closed, Firefrost bagan to pant very hard. "Fireforst, are you okay?" Cloudberry asked. "Yeah. I'm okay..." He whispered. "Reincarnating takes up more energy then you think Cloudberry.... Lets just hope they don't die again" "If they are dieing, then I will be sure to help them" Cloudberry growled. "It may not do any good, but it is better then nothing" |
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#3 Posted: 04:50:26 14/09/2009
WOW! Awesome! Is Firefrost the same Firefrost from your story?
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#4 Posted: 06:52:30 14/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep. I tried to put a twist there. But I don't think it's that much off a twist.
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#5 Posted: 12:47:40 16/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Is anyone going to post besides Skyqueen? D:
CHAPTER 1: A black dragon padded through the bracken. His tail and head low and kicking rocks through the undergrowth. He growled with fury, trying to forget what had happened. But he can't get his sister out off his mind. If I would off defeated that grey dragon, then I would off been there to help Cynder! And that purple dragon might off been defeated! Ruuko couldn't stop the images from flashing into his mind. Flying into convexity.... Watching the purple dragon escape with his sister in it's paws.... Forcing himself to get out off convexity and confront Gaul and tell him what happened.... Call yourself a powerful dragon!? Call yourself Cynder's assistant? Call yourself the mentor off Bluefur and Sparrowheart!!?! He began to pad a little bit faster, ignoring the thorns that tugged at his scales. All he wanted now is to go back in time and stop all this from happening. He wished he was a dragon that can control time. He new that there are such dragons out there that have the power off time in there paws, including the purple dragon. Suddenly, a powerful thought went through his mind. If his sister or the purple dragon was in his paws, would they be able to succeed? Probely would! Ruuko mumbled out loud I'm not as powerful as them! He stopped to a halt when he realized he was in front of the gates to Gaul's castle. The place were hope goes to die. Two guards were standing outside. They nodded to Ruuko and aloud him to go through. One of the apes bowled his head respectfully, while the other one gave Ruuko a hostel glance, still not trusting Ruuko fully. Ruuko took notice of this, but he has not got enough time for quarrels now. He sighed as he padded through the doorway and up into Gaul's room. He opened the door and spotted Gaul on his blood red chair. Just one ape were sitting next to him. One off them was just as large as Gaul. His name is Rockheart and he is Gaul's second favorite warrior. Cynder is his first. Ruuko couldn't imagine what Gaul would do when he realized that his deputy shrank back into a kid and was taken away by the purple dragon. Ruuko bowled his head as he walked towards the ape king. "Well. Ruuko. It has been awhile since you've talked to me" Gaul replied calmly. "What were you doing all this time?" Ruuko flinched. Thinking about what he was going to say. "I.... I was fighting a... A giraffe!" Ruuko lied. It took him a couple off heart beats to realize what he just said. Fighting a giraffe?! What kind off lie is that!? Ruuko thought. He kept his head bowled, not reveling the anger and depression that shone through his eyes. He took a swift glance upward. Gaul stared at him disbelievingly, while the other ape let out a silent laughter. "I see... You shouldn't lie to the ape king Ruuko" Gaul snapped. "I'm sorry Gaul. I'm... I was just going to tell you something. Half to why I was gone for so long, and half to why Cynder is missing..." |
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#6 Posted: 22:41:07 16/09/2009
Guud!!
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#7 Posted: 06:26:18 17/09/2009
There is another story about ruuko isn't there. If so, i might have to read that one to tell whats going on.
Anyway, this is very good
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#8 Posted: 06:31:08 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Alright, two new people!
Oh and Solister, there is about 6 pages for the first one. So you can take your time. xD |
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#9 Posted: 15:36:23 17/09/2009
hmm, I'll look at it this evening
What is it called by the way
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#10 Posted: 06:14:44 18/09/2009 | Topic Creator
^ I think I might just give you the link. I finished it, then it died and now it is lost somewhere in the pages... I think it is on number three....
Edit: Here is the link: //forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=13051 |
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#11 Posted: 06:18:54 18/09/2009
OK Thanks
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#12 Posted: 06:20:27 18/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Wait a minuet, I already gave out the link on the first page....
EDIT: I meant comment. xD |
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#13 Posted: 03:12:42 19/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko told the whole story, from when he left to find Cynder to the part when he went to convixity. He felt Gaul's foul breath getting hotter and hotter as Ruuko's story came to an end.
"I was too late to help her. She shrunk down to her kid form and the purple dragon carried her out off convexity" Ruuko finished, he then added, "don't worry! I will find her! I promised I would find her before I finery flew out off Convexity!" Ruuko braced himself, ready to hear a huge roar from Gaul and blame Ruuko for everything. But nothing happened. Rockheart just gave him a cold gaze while only a shadow went through Gaul. "Err.... Gaul?" Ruuko muttered, unsure what to do. "Gaul... Gaul!?" "I guess you would have to replace her" Gaul replied to Ruuko, as if he didn't even hear Ruuko muttering to him. Ruuko's eyes grew wide with excitement. Him, to be held in a high place and be more closer to Gaul!? Maybe this way, he could prove to all the apes that he his loyal! But then anger shot through him like a forest fire. How could I just replace what Cynder did!? Shouldn't Gaul send me and some off his millions to go and look for her!? Is he really that beast-hearted!? Just to forget one off his best warriors? "But what about Cynder? Shouldn't you go and look for her?" Ruuko asked. "Nah. She was supposed defeat the purple dragon. That was what she was made to do. If she couldn't defeat that dragon, then she wasn't the right dragon for the job. Malefor told me that the spirits in the dark mouton- that is were all the evilest dragons go, you won't go there because you not that beast-hearted- told him that a black dragon would be powerful enough to bring the world to darkness. There was only two black eggs in the temple, you and Cynder. And if Cynder wasn't the right dragon, then that means that-" "I'm the one that is supposed to free Malefor?" Ruuko guessed. "Correct" Gaul growled. "But-but that is impossible! I'm not as powerful as Cynder! It can't be! There must be some other black dragon out there...." "It is you Ruuko. Your destiny is to free Malefor" Rockheart snapped. "Rockheart is right Ruuko" Gaul pointed out before Ruuko to protest. "So that's it? Are you just going to forget about Cynder? I'm sure she did alot for you Gaul! And you just pretend she doesn't even exist?!" Ruuko couldn't believe what he was hearing. "Even if she is still alive, what hope is there now? The purple dragon has token off with her. Even if you go out to look for her, you wouldn't find her" Rockheart's reply was rather cold. "But Cynder-" "Has gone" Rockheart snapped. Ruuko didn't know what to do. He turned away with his tail and wings low. He didn't know if he could just forget about her like Gaul and Rockheart did. He heared a silent mutter came from behind him. Gaul and Rockheart were talking about something, but Ruuko didn't want to talk about it. |
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#14 Posted: 05:18:44 24/09/2009
Please continue! And more of my Deigo story is up!
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#15 Posted: 08:05:15 24/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Wait, I could off sworn I posted the next part! Now I have to do it all again!
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#16 Posted: 08:37:14 24/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Kicking rocks again on his way out, Ruuko padded down the slope to the stream, jumping over a log on the way. The sun started to go down as he lapped his tongue over the water, bringing tinny specks into the air. He looked up at the sky, it was blazing with red and the clouds had a yellow tone in them. As soon as he saw a fish floating past his paws, he realized how hungry he was. His stomach roared like a tiger, and his legs grew weaker suddenly.
How could I forget!? I haven't eaten for days! Ruuko clenched his stomach. If it continued to roar like that, then he wouldn't catch anything. He looked down at the stream and saw his reflection in the pool. It reminded him off his sister, and he swiped his paw over it. His reflection began to fade into the stream. How could I do this!? It's mine fault shes gone! And it's my fault we can't find her! |
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#17 Posted: 15:36:45 24/09/2009
Good chapters
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#18 Posted: 01:50:48 28/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. ^O^
CHAPTER 2: Only a couple off heart beats has passed when Ruuko realized again that he needed meat. "I might as well catch myself a fish now that I'm standing right in front off the stream" Ruuko whispered to himself quietly. He got up, shaking bits off grit off his scales, then he padded quietly into the stream. The brown water was icy cold and Ruuko shivered when it touched his skin. But he was also grateful to feel the rest off the grit come off his feet. Ruuko couldn't remember the last time he stomped into a stream. He waded out a little further, bringing up speaks off water drops into the air. I've got to be more careful! Ruuko gritted his teeth when he felt some seaweed swaying past his legs. It tickled his paws, making Ruuko lift it up and step on the the green, thin stick. Ruuko stopped paddling when he felt the icy cold water reach his belly. He new if he went any further, the current would be too strong for him to swim and he would get washed away down the river. Ruuko shivered again at the thought off himself with two broken hind legs and a wing, dragging himself on the floor, trying to reach the castle. He wouldn't want that to happen to him, but it will be he went further into the stream. Letting out a yelp off terror, Ruuko waded back a little bit, so he had enough room to leap on the fish. He felt the same seaweed tickling he's legs, Ruuko sank his head under the water and grabbed the sea weed, pulling it out and then accidentally swallowing it. Ugh! Ruuko lifted his head and spat out the remains off the seaweed. At the same time, a fish came slivering towards him Ruuko quickly stood still, his jaw half open. I will not let you get away! Ruuko waited for the fish to sliver closer and closer to him.... He slowly lifted up a paw, ready to grab the fish. Thats it, just a little more closer.... Okay, NOW! Ruuko lifted his paw up and swiped at the fish. He missed it by a length off a whisker, water splashed into his eyes, making his vision turn blurry. Ruuko squinted, looking for the fish. He spotted it heading towards the other side. flinging himself forward, Ruuko pounced at fish, aiming at the spot were the fish is going to go. Ruuko closed his eyes, hoping his paws will get the fish. He opened them, something was slivering desperately underneath his paws. I caught it! |
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#19 Posted: 05:47:58 28/09/2009
Good chapter
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#20 Posted: 08:46:09 28/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Taking a deep breath, Ruuko sanked his head under the water and picked up his prey, his eyes stinging as bubbles began to fly up into them. Closing his eyes, Ruuko lifted his head out off the brown water and waded back towards the bank, holding the fish as hard as he could in his jaws. When he got out off the water, he drop his prey on the rock, shaking himself before he did so.
It looks like a salmon... Ruuko's belly roared loudly again as he looked down onto the salmon. He whipped his eyes with his claws and then killed the fish by slicing it in half. He gulped the fish down as soon as he killed it and began to feel the strength return to his legs. It didn't fill him up completely, but enough to catch himself something big. He began to lap as the stream in huge gulps. He also forgot the last time he drank. |
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#21 Posted: 15:14:23 28/09/2009
Nice part
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#22 Posted: 01:45:36 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Your the only one reading.... Well, I'm glad your reading. Thanks. ^.^
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#23 Posted: 12:59:32 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
This is a quick drawing off Ruuko BTW.
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#24 Posted: 15:40:33 29/09/2009
Thats okay
Your last story was excellant and this one is shaping up to be excellant as well
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#25 Posted: 01:51:51 30/09/2009 | Topic Creator
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#26 Posted: 06:24:48 30/09/2009
Nice picture
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#27 Posted: 10:31:08 30/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. =D
***** After catching himself a rabbit and a small mouse, Ruuko padded inside Gaul's castle, his stomach feeling full and warm. He new that if one off Gaul's millions went out hunting, they should catch something for Gaul to show him some respect, but he couldn't bring himself to do it. He would never forget how Gaul didn't even care that Cynder got taken away by the purple dragon. Tail low, Ruuko sat down next to the door with his wings curled up. Ruuko realized something wasn't right.... No ape was in the hall way. No one was eating prey or forcing another ape to give them a rabbit leg. Were did everyone go? Ruuko lowered his head to sniff the ground. The ape's sent seemed to go up the hall way. Must be a meeting. I'd better be there, I don't want Gaul to give out news without me knowing! Ruuko padded through the hall way, up to Gaul's room. The carpet had paw prints all over it and is smelt like as if it hasn't been washed for days. The door was dirty and when Ruuko rest his paw on it, it left a paw print. The apes must off ran in here like a stampead! Snorting with disgust, Ruuko stood up on his hind legs and twisted the handle with his teeth. As he opened the door, it let out a large creaking sound. Like always, Gaul was siting on his red chair. Rockheart stood next to him. In front off them was filled with lots off apes, bats and other large beast. Ruuko recognized most off them, but some off them he didn't know that much about. He was about to find a spot for him to sit when Rockheart called out his name. "Ruuko! Your finely here! About time! Come over here!" Puzzled, Ruuko pushed through the crowd towards him, nearly stepping on tails and wings along the way. "Now that your replacing Cynder, you get too sit at the front" Anger roared through Ruuko's belly. He didn't want to replace Cynder! He opened his mouth, ready to let out a snappy remark, but nothing came out. If he talked back to Rockheart, he new he wouldn't get away without a nasty scratch. "Why are we having a meeting?" Ruuko asked instead, his voice sounding croaky because he haven't talked for so long. "Oh, you will found out soon" Rockheart replied darkly "Very soon..." |
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#28 Posted: 11:40:40 30/09/2009
Guud!!
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#29 Posted: 15:17:01 30/09/2009
Nice part
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#30 Posted: 04:25:03 01/10/2009
Yeah, awesome part! I love your drawings, Cynder_543! Your a very good drawer. Please continue!
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#31 Posted: 08:24:13 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks!
Ruuko looked at him questioningly. He didn't know if he liked the sound off it. "What do you mea-" A loud growl for silence came from Gaul, it drowned out his words. "Every ape and beast has been called for a meeting because off something important" Gaul began. Ruuko's tail pricked. "As you may know, Cynder failed to free the Dark Master. She got defeated by the purple dragon and, according to Ruuko, she got shrunk back down to her original size" Ruuko looked around and saw most off the beast's eyes darkened. "The purple dragon took her away back to were he lives. I'm guessing she got taken back to the temple. Because off this, I don't think we will be seing Cynder again. But, we do have a special dragon to replace her. Ruuko. According to Malefor, the dark spirits told him of a black dragon that would free him from his prision. Because Ruuko's egg seemed weak, we assumed it was Cynder. But because she has failed, it has to be Ruuko. He is the only other black dragon out there" As Gaul finished speaking, all eyes turned on Ruuko. Some off them looked like they were saying "Congratulations!" while others were saying, "Well, what do want us to do now?" Ruuko felt uneasy. He can't replace Cynder! Cynder is still out there! Why do they have to pretend she is dead!? Ruuko scratched the ground uneasily. He was glad when Gaul flicked his staff for silence, making eyes turn to look at him again. Ruuko looked up, wondering what else there is to say. "I would love for Ruuko to go back out and get the crystals again, but it is already too late. The purple dragon found the guardians and I am sure they will all stay at the Temple and never leave it. I doubt Ruuko will be able to fight off four guardians" Ruuko got up to his paws, ready to protest, but Rockheart gave him a swift, warning glare, making him sit back down again. "There is something else that I thought would free Malefor" Gaul was standing up on his chair now, waving his staff in the air "We will need bate to do this. I haven't thought off who will be the bate. But the bate will have to leer the purple dragon to the mountain off Malefor. I will be there, waiting for him. I will fight him and try to get him to stand on the spot were the dark spirits get sucked into. At the exact time, the moon will rise above him, forming an eclipse. The moon should trigger the dark spirits, making them angry and forming a convexity beam underneath the dragon. The beam would be too powerful for the dragon to handle, making him get controlled by darkness. But, him getting controlled by darkness will make our master assume we have control off the purple dragon. He would like to see the power for himself, making him use all off his power to brake free off the prison. Then, the purple dragon will have no control over his body except his voice and his arms will look like they are beginning to fade. That is because the purple dragon will be standing right on top off the spot were Malefor is braking free of his prison. At the end, Malefor will send the dark spirits away, and the purple dragon will be under his control and me, all off yous, Malefo and the purple dragon will terrorize the villages and everyone else who dares to stop us!" Some apes were yowling in agreement, some had no idea what Gaul was saying but was still yowling, but others were completely clueless about everything and was giving Gaul an uneasy glance. Ruuko felt pain hit his heart. His sister will miss everything and it's all because off him. He yowled in agreement anyway. Gaul let the noise die down it's self until he began to speak again. "For all off this to happen, we need to leave the castle and move to the mountain off Malefor. At the same time, the eclipse will be happening, making the sunlight turn to darkness. At Malefor's prison, I will tell him what is happening. I will tell him to use his powers to make the eclipse stay there forever. I will help out too, using my staff. And, Ruuko" Gaul turned to look at him "Because you are a dragon, you will help out too" Ruuko gave him a tinny nod. "What will this eclipse do? What do you mean by making the eclipse stay there?" A large bat called out. Ruuko new his name was Darkwing. "I new someone will say that" Gaul grunted "The eclipse will bring us something interesting" Everyone leaned forward. "The Eternal darkness" |
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#32 Posted: 16:32:22 01/10/2009
Ahh, the plot thickens
Good part
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#33 Posted: 02:26:02 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm just wondering, do you get what they are trying to do? xD
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#34 Posted: 05:11:01 02/10/2009
Ah, yeah. Sort of. . .Malefor will control Spyro. . .And use Spyro's and his own powers to destroy the world. . .am I right?
Please continue! This is very intresting.
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#35 Posted: 07:04:56 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep, your right. I don't blame you for not getting whats going on. I don't really get it myself. I had to read it over and over before I got it. Oh, and thanks for reading my storys Skyqueen. You have been reading my storys since I first started the first chapter in The Legendary Ruuko series. So thanks for reading.
CHAPTER 3: Everyone stood in silence. Not even Snotface, the brave warrior with a bad cold which lasted for seasons, began to protest. The leaves outside also made no noise. Ruuko could sense a tinny leaf swaying off a tree branch. Ah, I see. You’re all very uneasy about this. Am I right?" Rockheart sneered "I thought every one of you heartless bunch always welcomed the darkness as it stretched through the sky. Am I right Ruuko?" Ruuko didn't hear what he was saying. He was lost in thought about everything. Eternal Darkness? Sounds awesome, but what about Cynder?! She should be here to see the last bit off sunlight! "Ruuko?" Rockheart's growl bolted Ruuko back to the living world. Ruuko glanced up at the fierce warrior, who was waiting for a reply. "Err... Can you say that again, sir?" Ruuko silently shuffled his left paw across the dirty floor, bringing little speaks off dust. Rockheart sighed and hit Ruuko on the head with Gaul's staff. "I said, do you think these apes should off agreed to Gaul's idea off eternal darkness? Do you like the idea?" Ruuko thought for a moment, wondering what it would be like. He always welcomed the sunshine on his skin every morning. If the sun would be covered up by the moon all the time, then he will never feel the burning on his skin again. But he always liked the darkness. It made him feel stronger. He can't explain why, but he loved being surrounded by darkness. Besides, his element, shadow, is always stronger at night. And if he would ever have the trouble off not seeing were his going, then he could breath fire for light. "Yes, it's a great idea, Rockheart" Ruuko cheered, hoping Rockheart didn't sense the fear burning inside his body. "Ah ha! See, Ruuko agrees with m-" "That’s enough Rockheart" Gaul snapped, interrupting him "I will give them a chance to think about it. Then, we will leave this rotten place and go to the mountain off Malefor" Gaul's eyes glowed, and then darkened. "I suggest all off you get ready for the journey. Pack up what you need, hunt for food, have a good rest, and, if you must, say goodbye to this dump" A swift swipe off his staff told everyone the meeting is over. Ruuko stood up, shaking himself, then padded after them. He halted when a loud roar called him back. "Ruuko, come over here. You have taken Cynder's place, that means you must join in discussions too" Rockheart snapped. Gaul got up from his sit and stared disbelievingly at Rockheart. "Are you blind? Cynder has never been in a personal and important discussion. She only organizes apes to go out and hunt or fight" "Sorry sir" Rockheart muttered "I just thought we should have a ‘thinker’ in our conversation. After all, you and me aren't very good at thinking. No offense Gaul" "I don't need Ruuko. You can go now Ruuko. You don't need to join in our discussion" Gaul turned to look at Ruuko, and then he turned back to Rockheart. Ruuko snorted, closing the door behind him. He went outside to practice his battle moves. He wanted to get Cynder out off his mind. Oh, and something funny will happen soon. When it happens, I will feel sorry for Ruuko. |
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#36 Posted: 16:07:15 02/10/2009
Good chapter
And yes, I do know whats going on
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#37 Posted: 02:02:49 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Good. xD
Ruuko stalked across the castle gates. No ape was on guard. But he new they were coming. Ruuko stood up on his hind legs and tasted the air. He could smell the fish in the stream, smoke coming from the chimney, dirty apes padding around looking for something to eat. His mouth watered as he smelt a familiar sent. Prey! Dropping down to all fours, Ruuko bent his head down to sniff the dirt. It smelt off many different scents. But he picked out one fresh sent amongst the rest. My prey went this way! Ruuko headed towards the river, kicking up dust behind him. He wanted nothing more then to sink his teeth into some prey. He new there was a short gap between this prey and the prey he recently caught, but he could feel enough space for one more piece off fresh meat. Besides, it would get Cynder out off his mind. Heading further and further towards the stream, Ruuko could make out a brown fluff ball. It stood on the land right in front off the stream, it’s paw was in the river, it was catching a fish. Ruuko halted, realizing that this brown fluff ball was a grizzly bear. But this bear seemed smaller then a fall grown bear. He is just a cub. Nothing to be afraid off. They can't breath fire like a dragon can! I can kill them in a second! Ruuko stalked closer towards the bear, careful not to step on a twig. He made not attempt to hide in the bushes. Today he is going to hunt a grizzly bear. As he crept closer and closer to the bear, his mouth began to water and he had to swiftly swipe his paw over his mouth to dry it out. Unexpectedly, the bear's ears pricked. He heard it mutter something under it’s breath. Please don't turn around! Go back to what you were doing! The bear lifted up one off his hind legs. What is he doing? Yellow water pored out off the bear's rear end and sprayed on Ruuko's head. Without thinking, Ruuko let out a roar off terror. "AAAAGGGHHH!!! STOP THAT!!! I COMMAND YOU TO STOP!!" As the bear finished, it turned around, fear and worry glittered in his eyes. "Err... Soz 'ate. I did n c u ther" The bear puffed out his chest, showing his not afraid. "What the..." Ruuko was surprise that the small fluff ball can't talk properly. He shock himself, growling, "Why did you do that you bottle nosed idiot?! I will cut off your head and throw it in your face, flea brain!" The bear was now on the defensive side, crouching low to the ground. But his eyes shined, as if he was talking to an old friend. "Hwo can u thro' mah 'ead in my fwace if u all redy hav' mah 'ead in your hwan'? Shoul' ent mah 'ace be on the 'ead u r catchin'?" The bear let out a giggle and then swang his enormous head and body around greatly. "U can wat me catchin' da fishy if u lik" |
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#38 Posted: 06:32:19 03/10/2009
lol at the bear
good chapter
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#39 Posted: 06:53:58 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I like teh bear.
"Listen, if you wouldn't off peed on my face, you would off been dead by now. So consider yourself lucky" Ruuko growled. He new that he had to wash himself to get the piss off. "Thanks, now I have to bathe myself in the stream!" Ruuko plunged into the stream and sat down. "Ooooooohhhhh, but twry 2 bee stwilll ok? Ef u mov', duh fishys wil no' com' to meh" The bear replied. Duh! "It mus' be unwcomfortable 2 hwav' 'hat stuf on u. Im sozy. But I gwot to admi', it 'as pretty funy. N then u 'aid that u wer gwoing 2 'hop my head off and thro' it at mah 'ace... Yea'... Good twimes... Gooooooooooood twimes..." Shut up! |
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#40 Posted: 12:31:30 03/10/2009
Now the bear is starting to get annoying
Good part
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#41 Posted: 02:52:37 04/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I think the bear is awesome.
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#42 Posted: 04:58:07 04/10/2009 | Topic Creator
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#43 Posted: 20:41:01 05/10/2009
LOL! Please continue! And no prob, Cynder_543, I love reading your stories!
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#44 Posted: 00:24:22 07/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko got up, shaking his scales, then wadded out off the water. The sunlight still beamed down on him, making him warm so quickly. It also turned his black skin to dark blue. He had to heave himself on the bank, trying to stay away from the bear, saying, "I don't need help!" to him.
"Jus' 2 let u no, my 'ame is Berry" The grizzly bear said, shifting his paws. "I-I wil' go 'ow ef u lik'. I've catchin' a few fishys 2 fil' 'e up. 'hats all I wanted. I 'eft hwalf off a fishy for u. I can't 'at it al'. You can hwav' it if u lik'." Ruuko shock his head. He had eaten enough prey. If he would to eat that fish, he would feel so full that he couldn't even walk. While he was in the river, shaking the piss off his scales, he also caught the fishes that swam past his legs. "Oh? R u sure? 'hen I wil' 'eep it 'nd gwiv' it 2 broth'r," Ruuko's tail twitched. Were is Berry's family anyway? "I no 'hat u r thinkin'.... My fwamily is 'ot that far away. They 'et me 'atch som' fishys on my own 4 a bwit. So I gwot 2 no what it was lik' 2 bee a wild be'r." Oh, I thought your family abandoned you.... Like they did to me... |
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#45 Posted: 00:26:57 07/10/2009 | Topic Creator
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Aw man! I did it again! D: |
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#46 Posted: 04:49:13 07/10/2009
It's OK, Cynder_543. I've done that before to.
Please continue!
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#47 Posted: 05:15:24 07/10/2009 | Topic Creator
You did?
"I got to get going" Ruuko forced himself to say. He couldn't believe it. He came here to hunt the grizzly bear, but instead he became friends with Berry! If Berry wouldn't off peed on me, then he would off been inside my stomach.... Consider yourself lucky! Ruuko did realize Berry talking, but he didn't care. He just snorted, then he padded back towards the castle. Once he was in there, he settled down in his nest and closed his eyes, allowing darkness to take over. |
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#48 Posted: 11:17:50 07/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko opened his eyes. He was standing in a bright green forest. The ground was filled with red sand and there was baby carrots growing out off the ground a little further down the forest. He could see a long but narrow, sparkly stream lapping over the sand across the forest, splitting it in two. He new he was dreaming. Ruuko walked towards the stream, kicking up bits off sand on the way. As he got closer, he could see something on the other side. He could make out legs, a tail, wings, body and a head.
Could it be another dragon? As Ruuko padded further towards the stream, he could make out more parts like horns, a spine and eyes. It was a pretty brown female dragon with eyes that roared like fire. She looks familiar... Ruuko spreaded out his wings, trying to catch the dragon's attention. But the dragon didn't even twitched. As Ruuko stared at her, she became more and more familiar. Could she be the dragon that kept on appearing in the real world? Ruuko flew over to the other side and touched her shoulder, but she didn’t move a muscle. "Hey!" Ruuko growled at her "can you stop ignoring me? I don't know if I done anything wrong.... Did I?" The female dragon didn't say anything. The only thing that moved was the tip off her spine, but they were only swaying in the wind. Ruuko patted her shoulder again, bracing himself in case she turned around to attack. What is she doing? Ruuko padded around her, but he couldn't see her face. Every time he moved, her back continued to face him as if the whole forest was rotating, matching his pace. What is going on!? Ruuko blinked, and she was gone He jumped up in surprise, nearly slipping in the dust. How can she vanish like that!?"Hey! Where are you? Come out!" As he continued on yowling, he could here a whisper in his ears. His eyes flung open, giving way to the real world. The first thing he saw was Rockheart towering over him. |
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#49 Posted: 16:18:31 07/10/2009
Interesting and good chapters
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#50 Posted: 22:58:42 07/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko avoided Rockheart's gaze. He didn't want to see the anger and fury roaring like a forest fire inside them.
"Yes Rockheart?" Ruuko had to force the words out. Rockheart continued to glare at him for a couple off heartbeats, then he lifted his enormous head, reveling his shadow slivering from underneath him. "Now that Cynder is gone..." Rockheart began. Ruuko thought he saw sorrow glowing in his eyes, but it went a away before he could make sure. "I will be sleeping in here until I become leader." Rockheart finished. Ruuko stared at Rockheart in amazement. He got to sleep with the deputy! "But, I will move to another room if you don't stop yowling in your sleep!" Rockheart snapped. "You were so loud that you could off scared all the prey from outside! Now go back to sleep, and this time, I'd better not hear anything from you" Rockheart spat out the last words. He walked over to the door, opened it, then shut it with a loud bang. Ruuko let out a breath he didn't realize he was holding. He curled up in his nest again and went back to sleep. This time, no horrid dreams disturbed him. |
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