darkSpyro

Long have all of you waited, but I have finally done it! Four hours of hard work and I can finally announce the 2nd Part of my story open to read for everyone! “The Era of The Great Asin: A New, yet Familiar Journey” tells of Asin’s life after twenty years of being sealed away in a Sacred Statue. Now she’s a thirty year old Adult Dragon with even more Powerful Light abilities. But even the Darkness became stronger in these long twenty years. So Live Asin’s life along with her, by Reading the new Chapters!


Oh yeah! Now this is what I'm talkin' about! From now on, this topic (well, atleast the first post) is going to be desighned almost like a Web-page! Right now, it still looks kinda crapy, but I'll be upgrating it. And also, I will probably soon take all of this to a new topic, because I'm afraid because of the 1st Chapter, witch is bellow in this post, I will soon run out of room.

I have finally decided to look at what is new on SpyroWorld and I've discovered that they've found some DotD concept Art. Remember, I wasn't the one who originaly found this, but I figured it would be a good idea to show this to my friends ^,^
Concept Art
And about the story: I'll start writing the 2nd part of it, tomorrow. In fact, I think I'll even make a new Topic.


My Story has 5 parts, and each part ends like a seperated story. Right now, I've finished the 1st part- "The Era of The Great Asin: The Beginning of the End". Since I have very hard time at school right now, I won't start the 2nd Part untill Holidays, witch start from the 20th of December, and end on the 5th of January. Please be Patiant and Visit back here for more news every day. Sayonara to all! 8D




Note: I'll be writing this story very seldom, bcuz I don't have much of free time or desire to write

ENJOY!! ^,^
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<Chapter 1: The beginning of a new Era>

As the Night falls, a Dragon flies trough the Dark sky, cutting the air with its huge massive wings. The Night seemed silent, as if there was no one around for many generations. It was a peaceful period of time. For once the Dragon race could enjoy the normal life without fearing to die. The Dragon flew around the Realms, as if it was searching for something. Even though there weren’t any wars for more then 800 years, the Dragon Realms still remain being careful, choosing four Guardians every new generation.
The Dragon landed on a high mountain, breathing heavily from the twenty-three hours flight. It thought that this beauty and harmony would less forever. But… Unfortunately, it was only a wish….

At the next night, the Dragon saw a dark fog heading right towards the Dragon Realms, it was closing in Extremely high Speed, and as it reached the Dragon’s homes, everything started to die, slowly. The dragons were flying away from the fug, in panic… The dragons managed to reach a safe place under the Dragon Temple. There was a special room under the Statue, witch was big enough to hide two thousand grown dragons. As the fug stranded above the Dragon realms, all the plants died, and the left Dragon eggs where shattering in pieces, leaving only dust behind.

In this tragic night, all of the Dragon eggs in the Temple were suppose to hatch. It was the Year of the Dragon. The Dark fug covered the Temple, not allowing the Dragons to leave it. After four long hours of being trapped, not knowing what is happening, the sealing suddenly broke down in to millions of pieces, allowing the Dark fug to enter the Temple. And as it entered, a demonic voice has spoken: “You shall all die!” And with that, many reptile looking creatures appeared from the fug. They were all evil looking, covered in Black smoke, with Red glowing devil eyes. Their bodies were all covered in Dark Blue makings. The three remain guardians fought the Dark creatures, until two of them has fell. The last one, the Ice guardian, Soulrion, grabbed one of the dragon eggs, witch first came in to his sight, and quickly flew away from the Temple. The Dark creatures didn’t follow him. They’ve focused their attention on the Dragon eggs, as they destroyed one by one, not leaving a piece of a shell behind. “Well, well, well…. And these “Dragons” are know to be as the most powerful creatures in the universe? Hmph! Don’t make me laugh! This was too easy!!” The Demonic voice yelled. “I think I’ll take a little souvenir with me! HAHA!!” The last Dragon egg was lifted in to the air, as if someone invisible took it in their hands. “This egg looks pretty useful” Said the voice, “looking” at the most firstest Purple egg, which has ever created.

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As Soulrion flew out of the Dragon Temple, the only thought in his mind, was to save this egg. He flew long, but saw nothing but a deserted land, destroyed buildings, dead plants and of course- complete Darkness. The old Dragon felt like the energy was slowly leaving his body. Soulrion flew as far as possible, until he completely lost strength and fell in to the darkness. As he hit the dry ground, the Dragon egg catapulted out of his paw, landing near a broken tree. “Who’d ever thought…. That…. t-this could hap-p... pe-n…..” The dragon said, and the next thing he faced, was death….

The Dragon egg was left alone in the new land of pure darkness. A light of Darkness has flashed somewhere in a direction of the Temple. The Corruption has been successfully completed…. While laying in Darkness, the shiny White egg started to become more Darker, until it completely became Black. And once it did, it hatched. The Hatchling was black, with already matured wings. Dragon elders say that if a dragon births with big and strong wings, then in the future, this dragon will be a Great flyer.
The hatchling was unaware of what was going on, so it just started screaming for someone.

To be Continued in <Chapter 2: Her Beginning>

oh this is really good i can't wait till next chapter!

Yes, this is just a beginning. It'll get WAY more interesting later And thanks! ^,^

Whee! So good yet still good!

sweet! i cant do caps because im cold and am typing with 1 hand!

Oh, I hope you'll get well soon, Cynder16

awesome! write moar!

I will Oh and guys, make sure to listen to this Music while reading my chapters It helps me imagine and write the scenes in the Chapters ^,^

Fabulous, Asin! More than fabulous!^.^

I am so glad you are making a fan-fic about Asin! I know you have been talking about it for a while and it is finnaly here! It is like getting DotD!8D

Cynder_Rox, you have just broth me to life! I was feeling so horrible just now, but you've made me feel much more better! I'll definatly write more! I'm glad that this "B-day" turned out just swell ^,^ (CFC's B-day)

Wow...!!Continue!!!*explodes*

I already have 1/2 of the 2nd chapter ready So I'll probably post it today ^,^ I'm glad you like it

I just wanted to tell you about it in your Guestbook, but I saw you already commented it ! You're FAAAAAAAAAAAST!!!

Your welcome, D_C!

It was to bad I couldn't spend it with you...

Yeah ._. But cheer up, C_R! ^,^ Coz the next chapter is in da building!

ENJOY! ^,^
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<Chapter 2: Her Beginning>

The Defenseless little Dragon sat near the Dead Dragon’s corpse, witch has turned in to Blue Dust, because of the Burning Darkness all around. The Hatchling yelled some more, but there was no response. Not even its own voice sounded back. It screamed, and it felt like its voice was going in to emptiness, as if it was going and going, not hitting anything. The New born dragon sat and screamed for hours, until it loosed its voice and couldn’t scream anymore. Then it lowered its head and tried to stand up. The first few times ended up falling on the dead ground, but then the hatchling finally stood up and approached the first object it could see. It was its savior’s remains. The hatchling touched the dust with its un-clawed paws. It felt icy cold…. dead, just like everything else, witch surrounded the little dragon. The hatchling put its two weak paws in to the blue dust.

“The corruption is complete, my Lord” one of the fogged reptiles announced, replying to its Master, witch turned out to be the Dark fug that has covered the whole Dragon realms, and still continues consuming the rest of the Dragon world. “This dragon is definitely much more powerful then any other dragon we have met, so far….” The Dark fug continued, looking on a weakened large Dark purple dragon. “This shall be the first ever dragon to know how to use the power of Darkness…. and the last one, but right now, it was “overloaded” with power, so he passed out….” A short pause followed. “…But when he will awake, he will take my place, here, as the Dark emperor”
Then suddenly, the Dark fug felt a warm light, witch for him was like thousands of knifes cutting him in pieces, even if he didn’t had a body. “Aughh!” cried the Dark fug. “My Lord, what’s going on?” the Dark creatures asked their master. “The dragon…” It “looked” in to the direction Soulrion flew with the White egg. “…one egg was still not destroyed…. YOU FOOLS! I told you not to waste your time on the Guardians!... Unless if they are trying to save a Dragon egg!!!
Soon a little light shone somewhere far away. “Well don’t you stand there! Go and Kill that Hatchling!!!” The Dark Fug ordered all of his minions. The Dark creatures rushed out of the Temple, like bullets that shot from a gun.

Once the little Dragon put its paws in the dust, the sand alike pieces started to glow with a Light Blue color. The hatchling was surprised and not knowing what it was, automatically flapped its wings and jumped back on a short distance, still staring at the shining dust. The Hatchling couldn’t get its eyes of the dust, as it started glowing brighter. While hypnotized by the beauty of something the little dragon has never seen before, the Dark creatures where closing in, itching to tare apart the just born dragon hatchling. As soon as the Dark creatures reached the hatchling, they jumped in to the air, with opened mouths, ready to eat the little dragon. They’ve looked like a mob of hungry wolfs. But when they where just in front of the baby dragon, the dust in a matter of milliseconds shrunk in to a little ball of light and exploded in to millions of lights. The Hatchling found it to be unimaginably amazing and beautiful. Time slowed down. The Dark creatures moved their long faces in different directions, not understanding what was going on. The Lights started flying, like arrows with high speeds, through the Dark creature’s bodies. As a Light flew through a Dark creature, the reptile’s body broke apart in to dust, leaving the smoke to disappear in the sky.
As soon as all of the fogged creatures were vanquished, the lights combined back in one ball of Light and quickly flew right around the hatchling. The little dragon stared at the Light with amazement. The Light started making circles around the baby dragon. With every circle it passed, it was growing its number. Once there became six of the lights, they’ve all flew to the Hatchling’s tail, and started fling around in, though not as fast as before. Instead- very slowly. The hatchling didn’t know what it was, but it accepted the lights on its tail. Then it looked around and decided that it must go and search for something… though it didn’t know for what…

Now that Soulrion has awoken the little dragon’s within Light, the hatchling starts its journey, as it wanders around the broken lands of Darkness….

To be Continued in <Chapter 3: The Light Within>

Quote: Cynder_Rox

What's the Dragon in the White egg?

Quote: Dark_Cynder

....While laying in Darkness, the shiny White egg started to become more Darker, until it completely became Black. And once it did, it hatched.....

Does this^ explains your question?

Mez wanna more

No worries, I'll write more 8D But I'm warning you, I'll get C:MoM today, so I may go and play PS2 after a few hours, and that means: No Chapter

Aww...OK but what is Asin?Maybe I missed something?

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Quote: Dark_Cynder

....While laying in Darkness, the shiny White egg started to become more Darker, until it completely became Black. And once it did, it hatched.....

Does this^ explains your question?

Oh, gosh! I am an idiot!xD

Sorry, I had just woken up then... .__.

Quote: Cynder28

Aww...OK but what is Asin?Maybe I missed something?

No, it's just C_R already knows Asin and a "Little" bit of Info about her And also Night Owl, Nalemor and Cynder16 know Asin

Quote: Cynder_Rox

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Quote: Dark_Cynder

....While laying in Darkness, the shiny White egg started to become more Darker, until it completely became Black. And once it did, it hatched.....

Does this^ explains your question?

Oh, gosh! I am an idiot!xD

Sorry, I had just woken up then... .__.

No, it's ok, C_R

DO MORE NOW D_C!! I command u!
Btw I am cold, but can type with 2 hands.

I'm already writing! Though I'm not sure it will be postet today

D_C! D_C! D_C!....*reads ur last post* awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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YAYYY!! Good news!!!!!!! the 3rd chapter WILL be posted, today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Quote: Cynder28

Aww...OK but what is Asin?Maybe I missed something?

No, it's just C_R already knows Asin and a "Little" bit of Info about her And also Night Owl, Nalemor and Cynder16 know Asin

Quote: Cynder_Rox

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Does this^ explains your question?

Oh, gosh! I am an idiot!xD

Sorry, I had just woken up then... .__.

No, it's ok, C_R

Awwww, dangit... I just ruined the surprise, didn't I?

Well, actualy no, coz the Topic title says: "The Era of The Great Asin: The Beginning of the End", so you didn't spoil anything, but......
Yeah, you kinda did But it's alright

Oh, that was so stupid! *Edit's that post*

DELETE THAT QUOTE!!!!!!!!
CHARGE!!!!
sorry, i had to do that! and yay! chapter 3! do it do it do it do it do it do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote: Cynder_Rox

Oh, that was so stupid! *Edit's that post*

Why did you delete the whole post? Oh, ok *Edits all of her posts*

EDIT: Ok, I edited Sorry for saying a phrase for you, C_R

I was talking 2 u D_C...

I didn't spot it *Goes to delete!*

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Looks good! Havent time to read it now, but I will make sure I do!

YAY! okay! 8D Tnx ^,^ You have no time to read, and I have no time to write

Me neither...

awesome

You think so? I already stopped continuing it, because thought that it's not too good......... Still thank though. Maybe because of you, I may continue it =)

Quote: Dark_Cynder

You think so? I already stopped continuing it, because thought that it's not too good......... Still thank though. Maybe because of you, I may continue it =)

You were going to discontinue it? Why?! It is great! Lot better then I can write...

GREAT? Maybe.. Idk...
Asin: What are you talking about!? Of course it was great! You've said this before to others: The beginnings are always boring, because it's like an introduction to the story, but as the story starts to heat up, it becomes AWESOME! 8D $$$
I supose you're right, as soon as I'll make my Art topic here, I'll write more chapters!
Asin: YAY! Can't wait to know more about myself

ITS FAB! MORE PLEASE! Thats inspired me to draw baby Asin!

I have a pic of Baby Asin, too I may show it, but I need to upload it, first >.<

OKay, I just finished mine. I wanna pic it up off the page and cuddle it! I love the baby asin character. Oh! I'm gonna do a baby Luna now!

Quote: Night Owl

Oh! I'm gonna do a baby Luna now!

!!!
Asin: I wonder how did she drew me...

Dont worry Asin, you look okay, one of mah best drawings! Really.

Asin: That's good ^,^

I did a baby nalemore too, He's still got the peice of shell on his head! XP

OMG! !!!!
Asin: baby.... NALEMOR!?!?!! !!!!!!!!!!!! ROFLZZZ!!!!!
That is something I will never be able to Imagine!!! And even if I could, I would regret it's Nalemor!

Lolz, you'll have to post them, Night Owl!8D

I've drawn baby Spyro once before. Just his head, though. Now I am trying to draw an Anime Spyro, inspired by KillytheFoxes one on dA.

Ok. But it may take a while, ya know.

Please do post it