darkSpyro

so i decided to make my own fan-fic now since there is alot going about
and a lot of fan-fics have inspired me i don't realy know if i will be any good but i will try my best. My fan-fic wont be about spyro as alot of fan-fics have been about that and i know i couldn't think of anything as
good as those and i don't want to copy anything so i am making mine just basicly about dragons like alot of other people have done anyway.
i will write the first chapter tonight if posible or straight after the first post!

ok so i think thats basicly it oh wait i will go over the storyline briefly.

now a dragon is born but not long after its birth its parents die and it has to live live on its own but then it need to furfill a forgotton Prophecy that was told long ago when excitence was created!

ok so thats a basic staorline it might bend while i wright cause i usaly change things. So i hope you like it and if you have any idears for the next chapter or things to tweek the chapter i had just written be sure to share but remember to put in spoliers.
ok one last thing i am really bad at picking names so if you can come up with a better name then please tell cause i would happily change them.

Nice idea.

You could call the dragon Mersrek.

thx but i don't think my story will be near as good as yours!
well here is the first chapter!
and i like that name i will use it!

chapter 1
The Makings of the TRAJICTY!

Sentor looked up into the night sky, the icy cold air cooled his
thoughts, as he couldn't help but think of the loss of everything.
All that was left was the wonder, what might happen in the future
but he will never know he was full of doubt "things will never be the
same again not, not after what as happened," Sentor said aloud to
himself. Then a thought went in his head and he couldn't help
but just say "Merla" as he knew she was awaiting him and he couldn't
let her down he had to be there before ... her egg .... there egg would
hatch. When he thought about the egg, all the doubt had vanished
and a rush of joy overwhelmed him, he couldn't believe that the time
has come. The day when the little green egg would hatch and inside
the amazement and wonder of a dragon, there dragon.

Just then, a just of wind blow upon Sentor's face and he could hear the noises of
the wolfs and birds and just then he knew the time had come, the time to see
the egg hatch. Suddenly Sentor jumped into the air and flew to the
rocky edge of the cliff in Santonary. Where he saw with his own eyes
Merla and the little green egg but also the egg was hatching as
it moved and cracks started to form, any second now Sentor thought
any second. He closed his eyes to picture the moment then he heard
the egg crack and quickly opened his eyes to see what amazement has
come but Sentor wished he kept his eyes closed. He stared at what
was in front of him but not in amazement he stared with shock, worry and fear.
Then he noticed Merla bursting into tears.
"Why did this happen, how
could this happen," Merla said. "why".

CHAPTER 2
ADAPTING


THEY BOTH LOOKED DOWN AT THE HATCHLING IN HORROR, they just
couldn't believe it. The little hatchling looked up at his parents in amazement,
he looked into there worried eyes and a sense of fear came upon
him. He didn't know what was going on but he knew it was bad
and it made him feel really scared, upset and uneasy, what was going on? what
is happening? was all he could think of.

Sentor came over to Merla and started to comfort her.
"come on Merla, its not as bad as it seems believe me we can get
through this," said Sentor.
"yeah but why us, why after all we have been through the only
enjoyment of our lives is ruined" replied Merla.
"Merla don't worry about it, everything is going to be alright
the only thing you should worry about at the moment is
deciding the name of our wee hatchling," Sentor said.
Merla got up and walked towards the hatchling, she looked at him
deep in the eyes.She saw the fear in his face and immediately faked
a smile but she still saw that fear in him, she looked deeper she saw
something else something she couldn't explain she was just about
to call out Sentor when that sudden thing vanished with the sparkle
of his green eyes.
"Mersrek," she said aloud.
"yeah we'll call him Mersrek," she repeated.
Then she got up and walked back to where she was original sitting,
Mersrek tried to follow but having difficulties fell to the ground, Sentor realising
picked Mersrek up and took him next to his mother where they both
slept till the morning.


The next day Mersrek was learning how to talk, he was learning really fast and could

speak briefly but still he didn't know all the names of the animals around about him

or he didn't know about the elements that surround life itself. Mersrek walking improved too he wasn't great but he could walk normally. Merla and Sentor knew that he would be able to fly by the beginning of spring.


It was the middle of winter at the moment and the icy cold air flowed through the cave were

Mersrek was born, it got so cold that Mersrek would cuddle up to his mother to get some warmth as she was always so warm and alive. Mersrek was getting a bit hungry as his

father would always go out in the morning and evening to hunt and get some fresh meat but it was coming to midnight and Sentor still wasn't back from his morning hunt, and Mersrek

felt sick and he didn't know what was hurting more the pain in he stomach of hunger or the thought that he didn't know where his father was and he might be losing him forever

Wow, that was awesome!

oh thx i didn't rly think anyone would reply

but now i am happy

thx you 2!

but i don't think my story will be nearly as good as yours cynder_rox!

ok so here is next chapter!

CHAPTER 3
LOSS


Mersrek felling sick went to sleep helplessly and woke up the next day by the light that shined through the came.
The light hit his nose and it lit up with the warmth of the air, it felt so good he wanted to
leave the icy cold cave and travel far into the sunlight beyond, though he knew
he couldn't, like his father said, he was too young. He had just learnt
to talk and his walking improved but he still needed time he was just
getting used to it but a sudden erg came over him he needed to find out when.
When will i be old enough he thought. He turn round to ask mother but
he looked in shock of the empty space where mother used to be lying. Mersrek started
to panic, where has mother gone, has she left me. Suddenly without
thinking Mersrek got up and ran towards the exit of the cave but stop
at the sight of a large dragon blocking his way.

It was a very large and was no taller than his father he had smooth fine red scaled
but had a little hint of maroon in it. He had bold eye that gleamed in the light they were
a brown colour. the dragon also had large curved horns that were sharpened, Mersrek could just imagine him at a Battle with his big muscles that could easily knock someone over to make them surrender with sadness begging in there eyes
and his razor sharp claws and the giant feet that could kill someone
instantly if got caught under.


"Where do you think your going, Hasn't your father ever told you its
dangerous outside," said the dragon with a smile on his face.
Mersrek looked at the dragon shocked he had never seen such a big
dragon in his live, well he had never seen any except his parents.
As Mersrek examined the dragon, the dragon's smile broadened. Mersrek
felt a mixture of fear and safety as he looked at the dragon, just
something wasn't right but what?

Mersrek stopped examining the dragon and started to listen to what he was saying.
"My name is Alaster, and i have come to tell you something important," Alaster started.
"i need to tell you that your parents, your parents ........ that can't be with
you anymore" Alaster finished quickly.
Fern felt sick, what was Alaster talking about he though. His trout
felt numb and he could just manage to say one word.
"why"
" Mersrek its my job to look after all the dragons and well, you spending time
with your parents is a big risk to all the dragons," Alaster explained.
Mersrek couldn't believe this, suddenly his anger got stronger and a heat started
to burn in him.
"what are you saying, did you take them away because of a risk to all
dragons, well i don't care about other dragons anyway i haven't even
meet them. I hate you for all you have done," Mersrek screamed.
Mersrek felt so angry and suddenly opened his mouth to say more but
before he could speak a flame burst out all around, Mersrek couldn't believe
his eyes and now was even more scared. He ran off out the cave
to where he didn't know.

Mersrek kept on running with his anger still burning in him but he suddenly stopped
and looked back, why had he just snap out like that?

Without even giving Alaster a chance cause how did he know
it was his fault well he did say but he didn't complete his sentence, Mersrek
felt very stupid and immature for what he just did. He thought he did it
because he was upset because of the absence of his father the
other day and now he mother would just make it worst.
"mother, Father,"mumbled Mersrek.
Mersrek kept on walking felling sick and incredibly lonely and scared.

hey! you wrote a fan-fic! its really good! please write more!

ok thx i just desided to after seeing all these and yours just inspired me!

CHAPTER 4
DREAM


Mersrek had been travaling for many suns now and was getting very
weak. He was tired, hungry and lonly as all he could think about
was the lost of his parents. Mersrek soon stoped walking as he heard something
in the distence, he creepd closer as he wonderd who it was. Was it his parents.
Mersrek got closer with a grin on his face to relize that it was something
eles. Mersrek walked up to it and stared in amazment. He had never seen
or heard of such creator. The creator looked back.
"your, your a dragon," it said.
"yes i am my names Mersrek, who are you and what are you?" Mersrek replyed.
"Don't you know, i'm a fox and my name is Bran."
Fern just looked at him strangly.
"so where are you from," asked Bran
"i don't know, i think i'm lost"
"oh, do you want me to help i know this place realy well"
"thanks but i realy don't know where i want to go"
"well i will help with what i can but right know you can hang around
here for a bit with my family"
At that very moment when Bran mention the word family Mersrek felt a
strange feeling stir within him as he didn't know where his family were
then he gave a snarl as he thought of alastor but in the end Mersrek agreed
to go with Bran.

The rest of the day went pretty well, Mersrek talked and talked and now
he felt less scared and even more he had made a friend. During Mersrek
sleep he had a wierd dream one like he has never seen before. He
saw himself full of great power and might and a big army of dragons
fighting against an army of wolfs. There were birds everywhere flying all about and there were deer and all sorts of animals, and among them all he seen
two dragons with grins on there face's, Mersrek couldn't see who they were as shawdows coverd there faces
but somehow he felt like he knew them somehow but yet he didn't. Though if he didn't know them then
how did he have this strange feeling like he did. Suddenly Mersrek woke up and shifferd as the dream gave
him goosebumbs.

really cool! so i inspired you?! cool! i've never inspired someone to do something before!

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really cool! so i inspired you?! cool! i've never inspired someone to do something before!

yep you did
because your story rocks so much!

CHAPTER 5
JOURNEY


Mersrek looked round and seen everyone sleeping so Mersrek decided to get back to sleep but no use
the dream that he had made him shiver and he just couldn't sleep
knowing he would have that dream again. He looked around and scanned
everyone everyone were so nice but he longed to be back in the cave
with his parents and hug them and feel the warmth and safety they gave him,
he wanted to feel protected again, he didn't want to feel this feeling like he didn't belong
and abandoned and he never knew how scared he was till now.

Mersrek pushed back his thoughts and concentrated getting some sleep
then he noticed that someone was missing, he looked around and
tried to remember everyone and tried to identify who was missing
then he noticed it was Stan. Bran's father. Slowly Mersrek got up and started to walk
around he kept on walking as he didn't know where he was going
and felt like he should turn back but then he came across paw marks
on the ground and immediately knew that it was Stan's trail and Mersrek
started to follow them.

Mersrek was walking for quite a while when he felt like he was being watched be someone or something. Mersrek had an erg to run far away and never look back but he just stopped
and shivered in fear. He didn't know why but he kept having these mixed feelings.
Mersrek turned around and a gust of wind blow in his face and then he noticed nothing was there
So Mersrek carried on walking to where he came upon a weird figure in the distance
but as Mersrek neared he realised that it was Stan, Stan was sitting up over the cliff side and was looking out on the land beneath him.
Mersrek emerged him then Stan gave a long hissing growl
and Mersrek backed away. And Stan turned round to face Mersrek.
"What are you doing here? he hissed"
"well .......... I ...... I noticed you were gone and came to find you," Mersrek struggled to find words and he was just about to open his mouth to say more
when Stan interrupted him.
"Well you shouldn't have, isn't an old fox aloud to have some time to himself."
Mersrek felt scared every time he talked to Stan as he always ignored him and always snarled at him.
Mersrek always tried to stay as far away from Stan as possible and he always succeeded until now Mersrek didn't know what came over him as he walked closer to Stan, he knew Stan would just shout at him and get more angry but Mersrek didn't care he was so freaked out by his dream that he needed someone to talk to and to comfort him and he thought if only,
if only he could get Stan to understand him. Mersrek stopped as he needed to think then he began to slowly make his way back towards Stan and he was scared cause he knew
that Stan would never understand him but there was something else he there not just instinct but also hope.
Stan sprang to life as soon as Mersrek got nearer than a meter near him.
"What are you doing, I thought i told you to go," Stan shouted furiously.
"Wait Stan, i know you hate me but ...,"
" Hate you," Stan started to laugh. " I more than hate you, now when i tell you to go i mean it OK
i may not be like my foolish thing of a son, who thinks its alright to befriend us foxes for the filthy disgusting
dragons but I ............. I ........ I am a pure fox, i kill with proud and i conquer my fears except the most powerful fear
of all the fear of man, that everyone knows is friends with the dragon."
Mersrek couldn't believe what he was hearing as he listened on and soon he just couldn't take it anymore, he ran and ran until
he couldn't see anything but the still nature all around, Mersrek knew he couldn't go back to the den with Bran and the rest
so he carried on walking to where he did not know.

Stan sat up in amazement as he saw the Little hatchling run in terror, he smiled to himself as he knew he did the other foxes proud
and he did his family a great favour which they would be forever grateful for. Suddenly the past swept up in his mind, he tried to forget
but he couldn't as he knew he dead cubs were calling out to him. Stan felt an anger flow through him thought of all dragon had done and what man helped them with.
"scavengers" Stan snarled as he saw Mersrek glimpse into disappearance.

Stan remembered what had happened it was late evening and his mate Stella had just given birth to a lovely pack of 6 foxes
but it didn't last long as the pack grow up really fast they were able to hunt in no time but
they were still children and still needed to learn a lot more to be a valuable fox. So when they were on there first hunt Stan brought his friend
Kenra a she dragon who had 2 silver smooth sharp horns on her head then 6 slightly smaller horns, her scales was a shimmering silver red with splashes of black around about.

So they took them through the forest for ages when they came across a camp of humans and they were about to run away when Kenra gave a deep roar and suddenly humans came
out from all over the place with weird sharp tools in their hands and burning sticks. First the Humans looked at Kenra in disbelief and then turned round to the foxes and ran after then trying to kill them but
luckily they got away but later that month when Stan and Stella had token Bran and Lerla to the river and when they came back the horror was Kenra standing over the 4 cubs and she had killed all. Suddenly everything made sense
to Stan that dragon and man are allies and that foxes should not fear Dragons but feel the hatred of all.

Stan really hated Mersrek the first time he saw him as it brought back all the bad memories and not just that the thought that Bran
his own son bringing in the living blood of the creator that killed his brothers and sisters made him feel even worse but he tried so hard for Bran
not to see the hatred in his eyes as Stella has told him that they should trust Bran to know what he is doing but Stan couldn't
cause he did trust Kenra before she betrayed them but it taught Stan a lesson to never trust anything or anyone except your
own race. Stan truly believed this and nothing could make him change his mind or to realise the truth that dragon and man aren't working together
because man doesn't know of dragon but they didn't attack Kenra that night because the sun was shinning in there eyes so
they couldn't see but the reason Kenra killed their cubs was still unknown but Mersrek was soon going to find out in the future as his destiny commanded it.

Stan was wrong by saying dragons evil and working with man because man works with dog but he was wright about Kenra!

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really cool! so i inspired you?! cool! i've never inspired someone to do something before!

yep you did
because your story rocks so much!

its that good?! i mean i knew it was good but i didn't know it was that good! but really cool story! please continue! i'm writing mine now!

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oh thx i didn't rly think anyone would reply

but now i am happy

thx you 2!

but i don't think my story will be nearly as good as yours cynder_rox!

NP! *blushes*

Oh, great new chapters!8D Keep on writing!

oh thx

i am rly happy

CHAPTER 6
CHASE!


Mersrek was walking for several suns now and it was coming near to spring
Mersrek smelled the fresh air thought he could smell something in the distance
it made him seriously hungry so he followed the sent until it brought him
to a dead rhinoceros on the ground, Mersrek smelled the fresh meat as he approached it
but somehow he didn't want to eat it just something just didn't seem right.

Mersrek looked at it liking his lips when suddenly he sprang at it and started to eat all the fresh
meat but it wasn't till long when he heard a long growl about him and a few wolves came
out from the trees and gave fern a long glare. Mersrek just jamp up and ran as fast as he could
but didn't notice till a few minutes later that the wolfs were running after him.
Mersrek kept on running through the tree's with the fright of his life as the wolfs
were catching up. Mersrek was running through lakes and mud trying to lose
them but they kept chasing him and by this time Mersrek felt a long sharp pain in him leg
and he knew he couldn't keep this up forever and he looked around for
a hiding spot but he couldn't find anywhere then he noticed a small hole
dug up by some small animal that fern could just manage to fit in. As soon as fern jamp in
the pain in his leg got worst and he looked down and seen a big red cut,
it was pretty deep and it mad him incredibly tired. The wolves were
still outside sniffing the air about looking for Mersrek. And Mersrek stayed cured up
in the hole and didn't even think of coming out until he was sure they had gone.
Though not long after Mersrek went in this hole he fell asleep.

really cool! please write more!

oh thx!

your welcome! i can't wait for more! i wrote more of mine!

yay i better go read!
oh and also if your wonder why i picked that title for my story is because i couldn't think of anything!

anyway thx for all nice coments!!!!!!!

Great story spyrorockforeva!

oh thx!!!!!

Now before reading this chapter i need to tell you about 2 characters that will be mentioned and you need to know about this or you might not understand, well you might but this will just make it more clearer, OK so the characters mentioned are AZURE and MOCCASIN!

OK i will put it in a spoiler because i will mention it in the story later so if you do understand just ignore it till i actually mention it!





Chapter 7
ANSWER!

Mersrek woke up with the wet rain dripping on his nose. Mersrek suddenly jamp
up and squeezed himself out the hold into the wet storm. He hear
a low roar from a cave nearby thought it sounded filmier and Mersrek slowly
walked up to the cave making sure he didn't make a sound. Then his heart
started to beat real fast as he got into the cave in the sight of his parents
standing in front of him made him feel safe again but what he didn't notice is
in the shadow there was a pack of wolfs ( the exact ones that were chasing him before) and that is what his parents were
looking at and they didn't even seem to notice Mersrek walk up beside them.
"Why are you doing this," said Merla
"Hmmmmmm ...... don't you already know, you do don't you and i can
see your dying inside at the though of it, said a dark grey wolf with bright yellow eyes he seemed like the leader of the pack and he steeped in the light and Mersrek gasped at the sight of him.
"Now all i ask of you is to tell me were he is,"
"No, i have told you already that we don't know and even if we did we wouldn't tell you," cried Sentor.

Mersrek was getting really scared now but he was still not noticed as he huddled in the shadows unseen.

"well then if you won't communicate properly then we will have to take things into different matters, won't we,"
Mersrek could see his mothers start to breath faster and he knew she was terrified though he still didn't know what they were talking about.

Just then the pack of wolfs neared the two dragons and got ready to attack.
Then that's when Mersrek almost fainted as he watch the wolfs attacking his parents then he saw his father fall to the ground.
"Sentor,"
"Now i will give you one more chance tell me and you can keep your life,"
"No, If Sentor goes i go with him, i won't leave him alone,"
"You stupid fool," the grey wolf snorted " you shall have your wish.

And with that a wolf jamp at Mersrek's mother and she flew and hit the wall next to Sentor.
"mother,"
Though no one heard Mersrek as he was mumbling.
" i guess our work here is done," said a black wolf next to the leader.
"No Coral, We still haven't found him, just like Kenra commanded we don't come
back till he is found,"
"stupid fool," said another black, that looked like Coral but had specks
of grey on his forehead.
"Olive how dare you mark our master like that, you shall be punished for that, if one of the Qeller hunters caught you, you would pay with your life,"
"But Ivory, why should we follow her, all she talks about is the prophecy and darkness, it all shares me. Why can't we go back to normal."
"Olive this way she gives us protection from Azure and keeps us free
from Moccasin!"
"Free, this way we aren't free, we are never free now adays with Moccasin coming. Sometimes i feel him inside my mind trying to scare me. And that proves that Crimson doesn't protect us from him because we all know she works with him and that he feeds on fear but mainly us. She just uses us."
"Stop this, Stop this nonscence. You shall not get away with what you have just said, you as all people knows that this talk is forbidden and i won't let you down easy like before,"

And with that the wolfs left the cave while Mersrek stood there trebling
looking at his dead parents together he was about to move towards them
then the roof of the cave collapse and buried his parents in the ground
and it also buried Mersrek as he struggled to escape then a gain rock
knocked him out cold.

CHAPTER 8
NOWHERE!


Mersrek woke up with rocks all above him, a pain ached through his back
and wings!the only reason he survived that was because he used his wings
to shield him. Though the rocks were still too strong for him and now
his wings were in agony.

Mersrek slowly pushed the rocks out of the way and got up.
He made his way to where his parents where lying under all the rocks
Mersrek longed for them to still be here, to comfort him and make him feel safe
but all that was behind him now and Mersrek made his way for the exit
of the cave where he left his parents behind forever.

Crimson lay on the ground looking up at the stars, she admired them and she wondered where the came from and what they were. Suddenly she was interrupted from her thoughts by a Queller who walked in.
"What are you doing sneaking up on me like that," Crimson growled.
"Sorry Mistress but i am here to bring you more news," said the Queller.
Crimson grinned because she knew everything was going as planed
and she got up and turned round to look at the Queller in the face.
"News, so go on then, tell me!"
"Well you know Sentor and Merla, they have been killed now but they wouldn't say a word,"
"What, hmmmmmmm those fools, OK i need you to get more troops out
and get them to search for him don't leave anywhere unserched! and also tell them that they shouldn't come back until they find him, and also tell them that whoever finds him gets the reward,"

The Queller's eyes gleamed as he heard the work reward and he raised his
eyebrow.
"How do we know who he is, i mean like what he looks like,"
Crimson gave an angry look at the Queller and then she calmed a little
bit.
"Well he has a mark on his neck in the shape of a Q, Just like i have been explaining very recently, You should listed more now go, go and send out the strongest among us and find him!"

Mersrek walked along the empty path that lead into the woods, He followed it only to realise that there in the distance stood a blue dragon, it was a she and about the same age as him.
Her scales were blue and she had long pink horns, she had spikes running all the way down her back and they were a wight, lilac colour. She also had 2 gold bands round her front paws and she had an amulet
around her neck.

Mersrek emerged her and as he did so she sprung round to face him
and then she smiled.
"hello there," she said
"oh hi," replayed Mersrek "So what are you doing out here on your
own in the woods?"
"I could ask you the very same question," answered the dragon.

Her eyes sparkled and Mersrek felt something that he couldn't explain
though he knew that he liked this dragon and she was really friendly.
Mersrek moved closer to this dragon.

"Well my name is Mersrek, and only recently my parents have died and
now i don't know where to go or what to do, I think i am lost!"

"Lost, how can you be lost?"
"Well i have nowhere to go and i don't know which direction i am heading,"
"yes but your not really lost until you find out where you want to go, so your not lost at all you just haven't made your mind up!"
"but i am alone and doesn't that also mean i am lost,"
"Well your not alone now," said the dragon as she winked but Mersrek still wasn't getting the hint.

The dragon shook her head and continued.
"Anyway my name is Misty and i am a Loner,"
"A Loner, what about your parents?" interrupted Mersrek.
"emmmm well my parents abandoned me at birth and ever since i have been living alone,"

Now Mersrek thought of everything the had just said and then he just
got the hint.
"Your not alone anymore,"

Misty Smiled as Mersrek spoke and then the two dragons walked
along the woods.

really cool! please write more!

Cool story, like it!!! You should publish this! But what's the title?

oh thx for the comments

oh and i haven't desided on a title yet so i am just calling it The Matter because they were the first two words that came in my head!

ok in this chapter i have made up a lot of names!
i am rly bad at making up names i just like making up the story!
oh and also the chapter is all about Crimson!

Chapter 9
Army


Crimson was walking through the fields and looking at all the dragons on her army. They were all set out into groups from weakest to strongest. At the very Bottom of the field there were the CADETS they were the spare ones who wanted to join but were either too weak, badly injured or she still didn't trust them. There they sat around and kept far away from Crimson and the meetings but only came when asked. The only fought when they ran out of dragons and needed more help or if the army was being attacked by surprise! This group was one of the biggest groups as Crimson didn't really trust people but herself except for Azure and The Moccasin.

Soon she would bring them back just like what the prophecy said. She had too if she would succeed. And as soon as they come back there power will rule all but not just that they will be able to unlock the portal to the other world and leave this world behind to suffer and everyone on to suffer too and die.
Though they can only do that after the great Battle the prophecy also foretold.
Crimson had no idea what this Battle was but she knew it would happen if the prophecy foretold it so she prepared the biggest army possible and she was still trying to make the army grow.

As soon as the battle ends there will be no use for the other groups as only her, Azure, Moccasin and her closest dragons would come not forgetting her minion of course Chiffon. Crimson looked about wondering where he went.

"Chiffon, where are you," Crimson shouted. But still no sound came.

"Chiffon," Crimson repeated.

The next thing she new was Chiffon came running towards her.
"Chiffon, there you are i have been wondering about you."
"Sorry mistress but i have noticed a gang of dragons gathering up in the
north, they are calling themselves the NIGHT DRAGONS."

Crimson looked down for a moment and then raised her head to face Chiffon.
"What are they doing up there," Crimson asked.
"Well i managed to sneak in without anyone noticing and i overhead
two dragons talking about how they are fighting against you and trying to stop you opining the portal to the other world and leave this world to
suffer."

Crimson felt really angry. How could those Night Dragons thing think they could defeat her and stop the portal from opining cause she knew she would win and that Night Dragons would all die trying.

" Tell me Chiffon, what type of dragons are they,"
"All types Mistress they are fire,ice,earth,electric,wind,water and all that
but also i heard them talk about the greatest army,"
"Greatest army? whats that about?"
" Well they Said that there going to join forces with an army of not just dragons but all animals about. They say that an army of animals and dragons would be far more powerful than any dragon army has seen."
"Well they haven't meet our army yet, So is that all?"
"Not exactly they say that the leader is also searching for the marked one and that when he finds him she will kill him."

Crimson looked in shock at Chiffon and felt uneasy as she knew more than anyone that without help by the marked one there would be no way of opening the portal with Azure and Moccasin.
"And who is there leader may i ask?" snapped Crimson.
"Well if i am not mistaken I think it is Slategrey."

Crimson just stood there staring at Chiffon with mouth open.
"Is everything OK mistress," Asked Chiffon.

Crimson shook her head fast and looked up at Chiffon she felt upset and scared and she never felt like this before in a long time but most of all she felt betrayed.
"Slategrey is my brother," Crimson said before walking away into the darkness.

really cool! but maybe you should try thinking of a better name!

i know i write in a bunch of letters then i just muddel them around till its got either er or a in the end!

i am rly bad at picking names but i am going to look for ideas on internet!


so try to ignore my dodgy names (if can )
the ony new name i like is Fern!
hmmmmmmmmm maybe i should name more names after colours and plants!

ok here is a bunch of coulours i picked out

do ya like any as names!

Azure,Beige,Bisque,Cadet,Chartreuse,Coral,Cornsilk,Crimson,Cyan,Khaki,
Magenta,Olive,FireBrick,Fuchsia,Gainsboro,GoldenRod,HoneyDew,Indigo,
Ivory,LavenderBlush,Chiffon,Maroon,Misty,Moccasin,Peru,Sienna,Tan,Teal,
Thistle,Slategrey ansd Sky.

are any of those good?

wow! nice names! i like crimson! sky might have been used already, i'm not sure! firebrick is cool! indigo is good! you can use any of these! they're all good!

yeah i will use all
well not sky cause as you said someone might have!
ok so i am gonna edit my posts now (just 9,8 and 7)
i don't need to change Mersrek,Merla and Sentor!
but everyone else i will change!
i got 31 new charecter to make

ok i am so glad of coulors now!

ok so i have changed names now that i have editing i just want to say if ya think the name changes are ok!
and i left the good names for the charecters i have planed for later in the story!
but some of these charecters have good names aswell cause they play a big part in story!
ok so here it is

Torg - Ivory
Fent - Olive
The Denter - Moccasin
Fern - Azure
Kenra - Crimson
Kray - Slategrey
Rensdar - Coral
Lara - Misty
Stondver - Chiffon

hey and also would Indigo go with a boys or girls name?

oh and the group called the PRODS DRAGONS are now called the CADET DRAGONS! The Cadets for short!
and the Dragry will now be called The Night Dragons ( Night Dragons for short!)

ok so what about these new name changes!

great! awsome! and indigo might make a better name for a girl, but your doing great so far! keep it up!

thx

CHAPTER 10
REMEMBER!


Mersrek and Misty were walking through the woods until they came across an old cave
and luckily no one was inside so they decided to sleep there for a while.

Though Mersrek had one of those bad dreams again but this one wasn't like the last one.
In this one Mersrek was standing in the cave looking down at misty. He herd her breath and he just couldn't take his eyes off her. He thought she was so precious but slowly Misty started to disappear into the thin air.
"Misty,Misty" Mersrek shouted.
but nothing happened and now Mersrek was lying alone on the hard cold ground.

Then he heard a voice. It started off with just a whisper
"................remerber...................remember"
Then gradual it got louder and louder and the tone got harsher and it
sounded like it was screaming out in pain.
"REMEMBER..........REMEMBER............ REMEMBER!"

"Remember what, what?"
But it kept coming ignoring Mersrek's question
and the sound stinged in Mersreks ears and he couldn't
block it out.

"...............remember.....................remember"
Suddenly Mersrek got really angry and shouted at the top of his voice in a
large harsh tone.
"STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT. NOW WHAT IS IT YOU WANT ME TO REMEMBER?"
Then everything went quite and a long buzzing sound started to grue louder and louder
and it suddenly stopped Mersrek's thoughts and then a bunch of memories appeared in mersreks mind.

He saw stuff he hardly remembered himself. He saw the moment when he
was born. He tyred to get rid of the picture but it stayed there and Mersrek
new that he couldn't get away from it.

So Mersrek started to exam the picture. He saw himself looking up at his mother
he was looking deep into her eyes and he thought she was doing the same but then he noticed
that she was actually looking at his neck terrified. but why?

But before Mersrek could find out what his mother was looking at and what was on his neck the picture vanished and all
that was left was darkness. Though the darkness didn't last for long as another memory came but this one was of Berl. It was
when they had first met. Mersrek calmed down a bit now and Berl was always kind and funny and he calmed him down when he was scared
or angry. Mersrek was getting really relaxed not but then he noticed Berls eyes, he noticed them
staring at his neck. Then the picture vanished before he could see what was on his neck.

Mersrek felt more worried than ever now and he felt like he couldn't breath. He felt the cave walls close in on him as he was getting seriously
catastrophic. He was sweating really bad now and he kept turning sideways trying to see what was on his neck. He kept tossing and turning
and falling over as well as twitching. Still he couldn't see what was there but he still kept moving. Then suddenly the buzzing noise came again
and that made Mersrek feel worse and the creepy voice came that made Mersrek's ears bleed the voice was
horrible and crooked and it freaked Mersrek out.
"remember...............................remember.......................remember"

The noise got louder and louder and Mersrek kept seeing every ones terrified eyes from the memories. On and on
they flashed, louder and louder the noises got and more and more he moved and twitched.

MEANWHILE

Misty was having a good sleep when all of a sudden this bang woke her up.
She looked around and saw Mersrek twisting about and trying to look at his neck.
"Mersrek,Mersrek," Misty whispered.
"Mersrek, what are you doing?" Misty asked.
Though she got no reply.
"Mersrek! What are.....................!"
She stopped as soon as she had seen his eyes closed. So she went quite and just sat there staring at him until he called out.
"STOP IT STOP IT! GET AWAY GET AWAY! STOP LOOKING AT IT! WHAT IS IT? WHATS ON MY NECK?"

And at this Mersrek's breathing got faster and then Misty noticed that Mersrek was having a bad dream.
So she tyred to wake him.
"Mersrek,Mersrek!"

But no use Mersrek was deep in his sleep. Next Misty started to nudge him, Still no use. Misty was getting
really annoyed now. She wanted to wake Mersrek up. Then Misty lifted her paw in the air and without
thinking she dug it in Mersrek. Mersrek woke up and yelped in pain while Misty jamp back in shock. They
just stood there staring at each other. Every once in a while Misty would stare at Mersreks neck and every
now and again Mersrek would rub his paw. Which was the place Misty dug her paw into.

really cool story! keep writing! its really good!

That is AWESOME!!!!

oh thx for nice comments i am writing at moment so chapter will be here soon!

ok so i am going to change the name to "The age of the Prophecies"
but i wont change it till sunday so that you all can see what it will be changed to!

oh and the credit for the Title is by Dragonlover!

cool! great title! i can't wait for more!

oh thx!

i'll change the titel soon!

CHAPTER 11

POWERS!


Mersrek kept staring at Misty. He was very confused and didn't know what to say.
Misty too just stared in silence. She didn't know what Mersrek was thinking so she kept quiet. Though soon enough the silence got annoying so Misty cleared her throat to speak.

" I am really sorry Mersrek!" Misty started but Mersrek kept on staring at her.

"Mersrek, please don't be mad, it's just ........... just that you wouldn't wake up so i tyred to nudge you but you still wouldn't wake up. So i tyred again but i think i nudged you too hard and i am really sorry," Misty lied not telling the fact that she panicked and that was the first thing that came in her mind.

Mersrek just kept looking at Misty. He wasn't concentrating on what she was saying. He was too busy thinking of his weird dream. He hardly noticed the pain in his paw now. Suddenly he looked down at the ground and shaked his head.

"Misty it's OK! Forget about it, I'm fine,! Mersrek explained.

Misty knew that Mersrek was lying just to make her feel better but all she did
was smile and walked over to him.


Crimson walked up to the very cave that Merla and Sentor were berried in.
She dug her way through the rocks until she reached Merla's dead body.
She looked down on her and she thought. She thought of all they had been
through, all they had done together but most of all she thought of there
friendship. How they used to be so close and now, now they were More like
enemies. Crimson blamed this on Sentor for she knew Sentor didn't like her
as soon as they meet and as soon as she talked of fulfilling the prophecy
Sentor would shout at her and soon enough Merla turned her back on her
and went away with Sentor.

Crimson slashed Merla's face with her claw hoping to wipe off all the memories of her.
Crimson then shook herself and started to look around. She was looking for
Mersrek but soon she gave up and left the cave full of rocks.

She had been looking for him the last few days, since she couldn't trust anyone else to find him.She then looked up at the sky and started to count the stars.

" The time will be here soon and we can't afford to miss it, we need to find him. we need to before its too late," Crimson said as Chiffon crept up on her.

" But why now? Why do we have to find him by then?" asked Chiffon

"Chiffon don't you know anything!" shouted crimson quite sarcastically.

Chiffon just stared at Crimson in shock not knowing why Crimson was shouting at him.
Crimson took a deep breath and tyred to calm down then she began again.

" The prophecy speaks of Azure and Moccasin only coming back at the first sunset of spring," Crimson explained.

" So we need to find him by then if we are too succeed and if we can't get to him by then we would have
to wait till next year but i am afraid that by next year he will be too powerful and we wont be able
to get him on our side,"

Everything now went silent as they both started to think but soon enough Crimson began to speak again.

"Come on Chiffon lets Carry on looking for him! He can't be far from here. I know it i can smell him and it's
still quite strong,"

"Coming Mistress!" Chiffon called after her trying to keep up.


" Uggg I'm starving!" Complained Mersrek.

" Stop your complaining," Misty Said sarcastically.

" But we haven't ate in 3 days," Mersrek moaned.

" Hey were nearly there so do you think you can survive till then," asked Misty.

"Fine then I'll try! Hey where are you taking me anyway?" asked Mersrek back.

"Oh it's a great place with lots of people and more food than you could ever
imagine and most of all it's full of magic!"

"Magic?"

"Yes Magic?" answered Misty quite annoyed.

Mersrek soon stopped walking and Misty swung around to face him.
He was looking very confused.

"Why did you stop?" asked Misty.

"Wait MAGIC are you joking?"

" Of course not! So you never heard of magic then?"

" Well yeah but just stories from my mother. I've not really seen it or anything,"

" So you haven't got your powers yet?"

"POWERS! I have Powers?"

" Yep don't you know that. Every dragon has powers. Some more than
others but we all have at least one power. Like me I have the power of
Wind, Water,Ice, light and Courage."

"Wow that sounds amazing. I can't wait till i get mine!"

" Well why don't i teach you then?"

" You can do that?"

" Well it's simple really all i got to do is teach you me elements and see
if you have any of them and if you don't then all you got to do is think of
your favourite elements and then it will naturally come to you."

" Oh cool! When can you teach me?"

" Hey way don't we start now! All we got to do now is to find a place to
practise! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...... i got it! There is a cave
not so far away from here, Come on," Shouted Misty.

" Hey wait up" Shouted Mersrek back running after Misty.

wow! thats probally the longest chapter i've ever seen! anyway, great story! i love it!

lol oh sorry for it being long i just write alot!

oh and thx!

thats ok! i didn't mind! i liked it! and your welcome! please write more soon!

oh thx! *gives hug*

i think i am going to cry of kindness!

your welcome! i wrote more of my story!