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Dawn:The Legendary Dragon [CLOSED]
gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#101 Posted: 00:19:24 25/10/2008
write more, write more!!
Invader Zarra Blue Sparx Gems: 880
#102 Posted: 00:53:30 25/10/2008
Woah... awesomeness...!!!! :D :D :D
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xD I'm leaving DarkSpyro... Sorry guys I've been too inactive on this website... If you know where to find me, find me there.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#103 Posted: 04:09:31 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I'll continue now!!!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#104 Posted: 04:26:08 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7:"Dark Side of Dawn?"

As the black cloud cleared up,and Dawn turned into DarkDawn!This is a furious dark-side of her,in which her eyes glow white,and she has mustard color on her chest,tail,horns,and scales.Dawn also has like these tatoo markings on her front legs and paws."It cannot be!,"said SpiritGaul."The Darkness lives,again!,"he said,in fear."You better belive it!,"said DarkDawn,in a scary,low voice.She then let out a DarkConvexcity breath,twice,for a long time.And then---It happend.

To be continued.....
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#105 Posted: 04:26:47 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Sorry if it was short,but do u like it?smiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 04:27:04 25/10/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#106 Posted: 07:06:47 25/10/2008
Wow! that roxs!!! smilie do more!!!
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N/A
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#107 Posted: 19:22:05 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I'll write more L8r!!!!smiliesmiliesmilie
STAY TUNE!!!.....smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#108 Posted: 19:24:06 25/10/2008
More! More!
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
[smilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie]
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#109 Posted: 21:58:18 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
The story continues...now.
*cheers*smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie*claps*
Do something here peoples!!smiliesmilie
Just Kiddin'smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#110 Posted: 22:00:38 25/10/2008
OMG! Wohoo! *throws confetti*
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
[smilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie]
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#111 Posted: 22:34:16 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8:"Darkness Within"

DarkDawn rosed up in midair,and with anger in her,she then had unleashed DarkConvexcity Fury!It was so powerful,that Pablo was midlifted,of the ground!SpirtGaul then turned into stone,and died.The zeptar had broked and everyone got thier powers back,except for Pablo.DarkDawn was still mad and furious,but when she saw Pablo,she turned back to normal."Pablo!,"cryed out Dawn,running toward him."It's over Dawn,"said Cynder."We're...so sorry,"said Spyro."Yeah,me too,"said Sparx.A moment came by and then,"No--its not over,"said Dawn.Her and the others knew that she had a healing power,called Life Fury,but it was always hard and challenging for her.
Now with confidence,Dawn's necklase,front paws,and eyes lite up.As she put her front paws on Pablo's chest,he lite up,and the room,too!After a few seconds it stoped,and with a groan,Pablo was alive again!He got up,and Dawn happily hugged him."Wow!I never knew you can do it,"said Pablo,weakly."Well,all that matters is that you're alive,"said Dawn.
Everyone else joined in and hugged,with happiness and laughter around them,at midnight.
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 22:36:51 25/10/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#112 Posted: 22:36:17 25/10/2008
Aww! Love moment!
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
[smilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie]
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#113 Posted: 22:38:00 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
U like?
Hey,where r my other fans at?smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#114 Posted: 22:44:58 25/10/2008
Me-Painting.
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
[smilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie][smiliesmilie]
gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#115 Posted: 23:03:39 25/10/2008
happy moment.
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#116 Posted: 04:19:06 26/10/2008
hi i am here sorry been off for a while *cough* birthday *cough*
anyway i love this chapter its amazing! smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie!


oh and dragonhope i am going to check your story out straight away! smilie


so darkspyro_101 continue plz! smiliesmilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#117 Posted: 06:54:19 26/10/2008
Wow! that's awesome! and cute! smilie
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#118 Posted: 06:55:05 26/10/2008
Quote: Polar-krush
Wow! that's awesome! and cute! smilie


Yeah it is!! great job! LOVE IT!! smilie
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N/A
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#119 Posted: 17:59:30 26/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank-you!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
The last and finally chapter will be written soon.
Sorry 4 saying this.
But I'll write a new 1 about Dawn!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder28 Gold Sparx Gems: 2731
#120 Posted: 18:10:02 26/10/2008
OMG YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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grjkshgioreshgiohgoidyhopsjhidshgioshoiesrhjiosdhmiohjnios smilie
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A wise man once said, "That's a pretty dumb thing to ask a magical girl."
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#121 Posted: 23:33:09 26/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
Thank-you!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
The last and finally chapter will be written soon.
Sorry 4 saying this.
But I'll write a new 1 about Dawn!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie


noooooooo i hate when things come to an end! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie

though will you write the new story rly soon after the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
plzzzzzzzzzzzz!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#122 Posted: 22:06:31 27/10/2008
hey i'm here! awsome story! please write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#123 Posted: 04:02:45 28/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Of coarse I will spyrorockforeva!!!
The story won't just end now.
I'm still plannin' about this new story.
The title will be called:
The Legend of Dawn:The Darkness of Times
Do u like it?!
I had a little help from a friend.*wink,wink*
PEACE OUT!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#124 Posted: 04:29:48 28/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
Of coarse I will spyrorockforeva!!!
The story won't just end now.
I'm still plannin' about this new story.
The title will be called:
The Legend of Dawn:The Darkness of Times
Do u like it?!
I had a little help from a friend.*wink,wink*
PEACE OUT!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie


That's awesome!!! smilie LOL! I can't wait for the next story, of Dawn!
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N/A
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#125 Posted: 21:39:13 28/10/2008
totally awsome! can't wait for more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#126 Posted: 00:08:54 29/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Don't worry peoplez!!!Dawn will soon be in a nother story again!!smiliesmiliesmilie
Ever heard a song called 'Love Lockdown' by Kanye West?
I LOVE this song!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#127 Posted: 00:10:26 29/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
Don't worry peoplez!!!Dawn will soon be in a nother story again!!smiliesmiliesmilie
Ever heard a song called 'Love Lockdown' by Kanye West?
I LOVE this song!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie


sorry no, my fav. is the one in my sig. best song ever! well i think so! my story is based on that song!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#128 Posted: 12:27:48 29/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
Don't worry peoplez!!!Dawn will soon be in a nother story again!!smiliesmiliesmilie
Ever heard a song called 'Love Lockdown' by Kanye West?
I LOVE this song!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie



yay i like the Title of story! smiliesmiliesmilie

oh and i love that song though my fave song is Hero by Enrique Iglesias!
i know old song but he's my fave artist and i love all songs by him!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#129 Posted: 21:37:07 29/10/2008 | Topic Creator
You heard the song Cynder09?
So....how does the song start,Is it:
A.)a lot of guitars play low and slow (LOL thay ryme)smilie
B.)a type of drum that sounds low(rythematicly)
Or.....
C.)a drum starts playing
??????
Choose wisely...smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#130 Posted: 21:39:46 29/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Um,so....who want's 2 read the LAST PART Of The STORY?!!!!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
(cheer or somthing,kk?)smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 21:40:41 29/10/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#131 Posted: 21:54:49 29/10/2008
me!!! i want to hear the story!!! *crowd gose wild!!!!!!!* write more!!! we want to know what happens next!!!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#132 Posted: 22:20:10 29/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
You heard the song Cynder09?
So....how does the song start,Is it:
A.)a lot of guitars play low and slow (LOL thay ryme)smilie
B.)a type of drum that sounds low(rythematicly)
Or.....
C.)a drum starts playing
??????
Choose wisely...smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie



lol, i love the song so i would say (A)
I even know the lyrics
So keep ya love locked down, ya love locked down
So keep ya love locked down, ya love locked down
So keep ya love locked down, ya love locked down
You keep ya love locked down, you lose

i would wright the whole lyrics but that would just wast time cause everyone knows the lyrics! smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie

Anyway i want to read next chapter!
*chears*
continue,continue,CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE,CONTINUE,CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!! smilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#133 Posted: 22:24:33 29/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9:"The Final Chapter"

It was the afternoon,the next day,and Dawn has completed a most challenging task from the PowerMoon!Dawn was a little weak from yesterday,and so was Pablo.But thay are just glad that the chaos was gone,for now.Spyro and Cynder threw a big pary for Dawn.Thay were dancing,playing games,and fooling around.As the party was almost over,Spyro and Cynder made an announcement."Everyone,gather around the table!!,"said Cynder."We would like to see congrates to you Dawn,for defeating SpiritGaul."started Spyro."And we would like to congradulate to Pablo,for helping out Dawn's task.he said."Cheers to both Dawn and Pablo,Horray!!,said Cynder."YAY"said Sparx,Cynder,and Spyro."Thanks everyone!!!,"said Dawn"And thank-you Pablo!,"she said,smilling."Pass me some Apple Cider,Spyro!,"said Sparx,crazily."Don't drink a lot,or you'll get hyprid!,"said Cynder."Yay,yay,yay.What ever!!!,"said Sparx.
As the others were inside the Temple,Dawn and Pablo went outside."Thanks again,Dawn...for everything!,"said Pablo,smilling."It was no problem!,"said Dawn.
The sun was setting,as both Dawn and Pablo were lieing down,together,watching the beautiful sunset,slowly going down.They're glad that they fell in love together.As they were smilling at each other and kissing,their were going to be more challenging obstcals awaiting her.
.....But Dawn has no fear--to become-- a legend.

THE END!!!
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 22:25:00 29/10/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#134 Posted: 22:33:14 29/10/2008
wow! really cool! can't wait for you to write the next one!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#135 Posted: 22:33:45 29/10/2008
oh thats a great ending!!!!!
i am happy everything works out! smiliesmiliesmilie

but you will write the next story soon though! smilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#136 Posted: 22:38:59 29/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I'll need lots of help with my NEW story!!smilie
So u do know the lyrics of the song!!AWSOME!!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#137 Posted: 23:03:05 29/10/2008
i'll help with your story! you already know i've got a great imagination because of my story!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Invader Zarra Blue Sparx Gems: 880
#138 Posted: 23:08:56 29/10/2008
Awesome ending!!! :D
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xD I'm leaving DarkSpyro... Sorry guys I've been too inactive on this website... If you know where to find me, find me there.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#139 Posted: 23:57:01 29/10/2008
its really good! when are you going to write more?!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Cynder28 Gold Sparx Gems: 2731
#140 Posted: 12:06:06 30/10/2008
Omg YAY!!The ending!Love it smilie smilie smilie
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A wise man once said, "That's a pretty dumb thing to ask a magical girl."
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#141 Posted: 12:39:46 30/10/2008
yeah smiliesmiliesmilie i like but when ya writing new story i wanna read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#142 Posted: 21:47:25 30/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Well,since I'm goin' 2 have a vaca.(until the 8th on Nov.)
I guess I can plan everything out on a paper,then write my New story!!
But,as I say again,I need a few help.
I can't wait!!!I want 2 tell u who's goin' 2 be in my story!!!
Should I tell u guys?!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:47:57 30/10/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#143 Posted: 22:20:00 30/10/2008
it might ruin it! as much as i'd like to know you probally shouldn't tell us! it would be better, more exciting if we didn't know!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#144 Posted: 22:48:54 30/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok,but I'll tell u the dragons I have from this story.
Dawn is older.
Pablo is older.
Spyro & Cynder r older.
and......
New friends r here,too.
*winking at Cynder09*smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#145 Posted: 22:59:49 30/10/2008
i think i know! we talked about a while back when i first strted writing! so they're all teens now?!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#146 Posted: 14:34:17 31/10/2008
oh this story is going to rock! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
i just wanna read it now though!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#147 Posted: 20:50:30 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah!!!They r all teens!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
Lots of comments I had 4 this story!!!
Thanks you guys!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie

*thinking...*
Maybe I should write my New topic,and just say who's going 2 be in it!smilie
How about it guys?!!!!
YES or NO?
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#148 Posted: 21:17:37 31/10/2008
Quote: DarkSpyro_101
Yeah!!!They r all teens!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
Lots of comments I had 4 this story!!!
Thanks you guys!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie

*thinking...*
Maybe I should write my New topic,and just say who's going 2 be in it!smilie
How about it guys?!!!!
YES or NO?


whoo!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!! yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!!!!!!!!! we're dying to know what will happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#149 Posted: 21:44:21 31/10/2008
That was AWESOME!!! smilie I love it!!
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#150 Posted: 22:45:44 31/10/2008
yeah i say YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
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