darkSpyro

So, I was just sitting and looking at this old project of mine. I'm a bit disappointed with it, but it's one of the few things I finished -- aka "slapped on a ending to", and I would appreciate opinions, though I'm a bit hesitant to reveal it all to you. May contain mature themes so read at your own risk...

http://reifica.tumblr.com/

Reply here, or PM me your thoughts if you happen to read it.

Well, part one was good, but for some reason it won't let me access part two. Anyway, I was kind of sad about the whole 'coma' thing, I was looking forward to a fight using the electrical powers and whatnot. But it's really well written, and very realistic in terms of emotion. Good work, tell me when you fix the second part.

Thank you so much, really appreciated feedback! Part two isn't finished, unfortunately. The last chapter of Sarah was sorta rushed and was mostly what I wanted to rewrite actually, along with some things in the beginning. You could say I am working on part two right now, but I have to rewrite it. I'll probably release the first chapter of the second part before I rewrite chapter five of Sarah to fit with some changes I made and want to make.

I'd probably rewrite all of Part One eventually.

Ok, I should have realized part two wasn't done yet. Keep me posted.

I'm working on a "game" sort of thing set in this same universe.

More updates later, game is in a very early stage.

Cool, will it be free to play?

Yup! Absolutely free. c: