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reification [CLOSED]
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#1 Posted: 00:23:19 25/11/2013 | Topic Creator
So, I was just sitting and looking at this old project of mine. I'm a bit disappointed with it, but it's one of the few things I finished -- aka "slapped on a ending to", and I would appreciate opinions, though I'm a bit hesitant to reveal it all to you. May contain mature themes so read at your own risk...

http://reifica.tumblr.com/

Reply here, or PM me your thoughts if you happen to read it.
kardonis Platinum Sparx Gems: 6366
#2 Posted: 02:27:00 25/11/2013
Well, part one was good, but for some reason it won't let me access part two. Anyway, I was kind of sad about the whole 'coma' thing, I was looking forward to a fight using the electrical powers and whatnot. But it's really well written, and very realistic in terms of emotion. Good work, tell me when you fix the second part.
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I used to be THE Bowser, now I'm just an awkward girl
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#3 Posted: 02:37:02 25/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much, really appreciated feedback! Part two isn't finished, unfortunately. The last chapter of Sarah was sorta rushed and was mostly what I wanted to rewrite actually, along with some things in the beginning. You could say I am working on part two right now, but I have to rewrite it. I'll probably release the first chapter of the second part before I rewrite chapter five of Sarah to fit with some changes I made and want to make.

I'd probably rewrite all of Part One eventually.
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 02:42:39 25/11/2013 by Wild
kardonis Platinum Sparx Gems: 6366
#4 Posted: 02:39:39 25/11/2013
Ok, I should have realized part two wasn't done yet. Keep me posted.
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I used to be THE Bowser, now I'm just an awkward girl
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#5 Posted: 22:12:48 11/01/2014 | Topic Creator
I'm working on a "game" sort of thing set in this same universe.

More updates later, game is in a very early stage.
kardonis Platinum Sparx Gems: 6366
#6 Posted: 13:20:32 12/01/2014
Cool, will it be free to play?
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I used to be THE Bowser, now I'm just an awkward girl
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#7 Posted: 00:08:35 13/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Yup! Absolutely free. c:
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