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Chapter 1:

Artrex jumped out of his ship and looked at his DataPAD. He was nearly ready to fly the ship, he was just missing one thing. The Turbulator. He rolled his eyes and set off back to the INTER-Mart for one. The DataPAD also assured him he need the 5.01 version. He was heading for the shop when a huge shadow came overhead. He turned round and stared at the huge ship in the sky.

END OF CHAPTER 1

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Ok if anyone has any comments or questions please ask here!

Also I made up Artrex. No stealing!

Hope ya like it!!

YEY! i love your artrex!

thankyou!!

Chapter 2 - Coming Soon!

This is pretty good so far! ^.^ Love the title art! x3

Thankyou!! It took me about 50 seconds to make! ME IZ PROUD! xD

You're welcome! xD

I'm writing up Chapter 2 tomorow i think! I'll add a new chapta each day!

Can't wait to read it!

ty!! (means thankyou) i'll PM u when i've uploaded it!

nice crashdude55!!

Thankyou!!

Also I edited part of chapter 1!

Chapter 2:

The giant ship loomed over everyone. Everyone started running around and screaming. It shot lasers everywhere and people had to duck out the way. People’s mini-ships exploded from the beams of red light shooting out of the holes in the giant mother ship. Artrex ran inside the store and took out a Turbulator. He paid for it quickly, on his way out. He did it by swiping the bottom of his DataPAD on the till. He ran to his ship and avoided a few of the deadly beams. He ran up to his ship and fixed the Turbulator in the back of it. He hurriedly did up the screws.

He then got in his ship and started it up while having his fingers crossed.
“I hope this works…” Artrex closed his eyes and pressed the turbo button. It did nothing. Not a single puff of energy. Just then the menacing ships laser gun swivelled round and aimed at him. He pulled the door but it was jammed.
“Oh great!!” he huffed. He pulled really hard. The gun glowed and shot out a beam of light. He closed his eyes.
“This is the worst day of my……..” he was cut off by a loud crashing and booming noise. It rattled his bones. I must be dead he thought worriedly. But as he opened his eyes he was that his ship was intact. So was he. And he also saw that his ship was in space. It must have finally got the power to take off at the last moment. He breathed a sigh of relief. Just one thing…
“Where do I go now?” he wondered. He put his hand on the steering wheel and zoomed off into space.

END OF CHAPTER 2

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So! Does anyone like it?

funky lol xd

thanks! what do u think could be improved?

Also heres a pic of artrex!

COOOL! Artrex rockz!!!!!!

Thanks!

Yet another awesome chapter! ^.^

Nice pic, BTW. x3

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Chapter 1:

Artrex jumped out of his ship and looked at his DataPAD. He was nearly ready to fly the ship, he was just missing one thing. The Turbulator. He rolled his eyes and set off back to the INTER-Mart for one. The DataPAD also assured him he need the 5.01 version. He was heading for the shop when a huge shadow came overhead. He turned round and stared at the huge ship in the sky.

END OF CHAPTER 1
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Ok if anyone has any comments or questions please ask here!

Also I made up Artrex. No stealing!

Hope ya like it!!

Made you a banner for your story because I was bored. XP It sucks.

Don't claim it's yours though, because I made it.

Pretty good so-far.

Q: How do you fly a space-ship with a stearing wheel?

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Chapter 1:

Artrex jumped out of his ship and looked at his DataPAD. He was nearly ready to fly the ship, he was just missing one thing. The Turbulator. He rolled his eyes and set off back to the INTER-Mart for one. The DataPAD also assured him he need the 5.01 version. He was heading for the shop when a huge shadow came overhead. He turned round and stared at the huge ship in the sky.

END OF CHAPTER 1
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Ok if anyone has any comments or questions please ask here!

Also I made up Artrex. No stealing!

Hope ya like it!!

Made you a banner for your story because I was bored. XP It sucks.

Don't claim it's yours though, because I made it.

Lol ok! can me use it at the end of each chapter?? I will credit ur name saying u made it!

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Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: Crashdude55

Chapter 1:

Artrex jumped out of his ship and looked at his DataPAD. He was nearly ready to fly the ship, he was just missing one thing. The Turbulator. He rolled his eyes and set off back to the INTER-Mart for one. The DataPAD also assured him he need the 5.01 version. He was heading for the shop when a huge shadow came overhead. He turned round and stared at the huge ship in the sky.

END OF CHAPTER 1
_________________________________________________________

Ok if anyone has any comments or questions please ask here!

Also I made up Artrex. No stealing!

Hope ya like it!!

Made you a banner for your story because I was bored. XP It sucks.

Don't claim it's yours though, because I made it.

Lol ok! can me use it at the end of each chapter?? I will credit ur name saying u made it!

Sure, that's why I made it for you.

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: Crashdude55

Quote: Spyro2008

Made you a banner for your story because I was bored. XP It sucks.

Don't claim it's yours though, because I made it.

Lol ok! can me use it at the end of each chapter?? I will credit ur name saying u made it!

Sure, that's why I made it for you.

Thankyouz!

Also could u tell me how u did that?? Its amazing!!!!

WHOA! Spyro2008 that is coooool!

wicked story CD55

thanks!

Chapter 3

Artrex did not really know where he was headed. He had been in space before, in space-ships and had passed his Galactic Starship Test. So he had an idea of what it was like before. But now, with the freedom of the whole galaxy to go to, he had no boundaries. He locked onto the nearest planet and zoomed down to see if he could get some help for his home planet Innamon, twin planet of Illadon. His ship landed on one of the Sky-Docks at Illadon Central and he set off into the new world in front of him.

He went to a huge building that looked like a palace with huge airships above it. It was gold buildings, everywhere, nice gold. Not too shiny, just right. He stepped towards a giant door of the palace and pressed a red button.


END OF CHAPTER 3

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Chapter 4 coming soon.

UPDATES:

*I have started updates
*I think I may be creating an Artrex part of my website once I have finished it!
*Artrex likes cheese!
*I likes cheese!


Thats all for now folks! 8D

Chapter 4:

“Hello” A calm computer voice intoned “Please state your enquiry” Artrex thought for a moment then said; “My home planet is in danger. I request some help.” He waited about 10 seconds and then a living voice spoke up.
“Well then...” The male voice started. “What is the name of this planet”
“Planet Innamon” Artrex answered.
“We hope you are not lying about this. We have dispatched 2000 ships to help.”
“Thank you…”
“No… thank you! Now I was wondering… would you like a 200 CombusterProton only 700000000000000 Illamon?”
“Ehhh no thanks” Artrex shut off the system and walked back to his ship.
Artrex thought he had solved the problem, but really, his adventures were just begining...


END OF CHAPTER 4

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is illadonium the money in this?

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is illadonium the money in this?

yes its the money for Planet Illadon. Ooops no wait its Illamon. OOPS!

*changes it*

Plus i made a mistake on his home planet. Its called Innamon, which is twin planet of Illadon!

cool twin planits.....you could have a bynery system in ther to

As the money??

Twin planets are imposible, ONE of them HAS to be a moon, even if there exactly the same size.

Earth! Pluto's moon is bigger than the planet. But its still a moon.

By the way, the picture at the end is somehow cousing the writing to go over the edge and I have to scrole sideways to read it.

This is a fantasy story. So in my story Twin Planets are possible. This isn't real life you know...

no....a bynery system is two planits obiting each other.....and plutos not a planit

wow thanks for the idea. And no they don't orbit each other they just look very the same. Like all the continents are the same shape!

I know its not possible in real life but in fantasy stories anything is possible!

no bynery planits orbit each other coz there trapped by each others gravity

theyre not bynery! Just twin.

oh right seprit orbit identical planits

yup u got it!

............(gfcsdrycsegs)

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no....a bynery system is two planits obiting each other.....and plutos not a planit

Gosap: Told you it was a moon!

Pasog: *Facepalms*

its not a moon either

Well then what the flame is it???!!!

.....an giant asteriod

How did I know you where going to ay that?

Besides since when was it not a planet? I mean its been a planet for the last 80 years, what happen did it suddenly shrink or something (And no you can't blame global worming on this one)?

first off globle warming only affects earth.......and pluto has always been that size BUT it was miss classified as a planit and not an asteriod