P.S this will also be coming onto deviantart, so watch for it there too

the doctor
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#1 Posted: 19:06:57 15/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok i havent really got a story to this, so each time i add to this, it will be completely made up on the spot as i wrote it. But basically, its the story of Cynder, and her life and i know probs alot of people have done this sort of thing already, but i want a go at it, so yeah. I've called it 'mightnight dream' plainly because cynder (in the back of her mind) dreams of a better life(not under the masters controls) and at midnight it's all dark and that... erm... if thats makes sense lol. anyway, heres the start of it.
P.S this will also be coming onto deviantart, so watch for it there too ![]()
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the doctor
Yellow Sparx
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#2 Posted: 19:20:30 15/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Intro
Bump.......Bump... bump bump.... bump bump.... bump bump... bu bump..... A small, black dragon eye opened, as it entered the door to a new world. Only this world wasn't a dream. Voices. Sounds could be heard. Dark Master........ waiting.... new age.......... 'Voices? I wanna try that' The baby dragon mumbled, trying to copy the voices outside. 'outside? I wanna be outside. Like the voices!' A foot kicked against the hard shell. The voices stopped. The baby dragon kicked and kicked, till the egg broke. It threw itself forward, breaking through into this new world. 'What new wonders are in this world? I bet this world's full of great new people' The little dragon looked up, as it was greeted by an army of apes staring towards it. The little dragon laughed... only what was about to come for this young dragon was no laughing matter...
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Night Owl
Yellow Sparx
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#3 Posted: 16:46:34 18/09/2008
0wow. I really like it!
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Dark_Spyro999
Emerald Sparx
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#4 Posted: 19:15:51 18/09/2008
wow keep going
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the doctor
Yellow Sparx
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#5 Posted: 20:44:32 18/09/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah someone commented
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Night Owl
Yellow Sparx
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#6 Posted: 21:07:34 18/09/2008
Yeah!
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Lover of Spyro
Yellow Sparx
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#7 Posted: 15:46:18 19/09/2008
emmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa post moaaaaaaaarrr !!
*error: the capital letters ratio was too high* lol
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Shadow Angel
Green Sparx
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#8 Posted: 16:29:17 19/09/2008
i love it!!!! keep going
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Lover of Spyro
Yellow Sparx
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#9 Posted: 16:26:26 23/09/2008
keep goin em !! and comment on miiiyynnn
pweeze ^__^ Error: The capital letter ratio is too high ... -__-
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