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the adventures of jimmy the dragon remake [CLOSED]
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#1 Posted: 14:50:33 09/09/2008 | Topic Creator
i am remaking my fanfic that got ruined so i will tell you the first chapter


chapter 1
at the year of the dragon eggs hatched in a cave called spyro's lair but the eggs were stolen by egg thieves but a dragon egg hatched the dragon attacked the egg thieves and the eggs were saved this dragon was called jimmy the dragon he learned that all the dragons that went to the ice mountains where frozen.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 14:52:09 09/09/2008 by jimmy dragon
black dragon Ripto Gems: 2470
#2 Posted: 21:38:02 09/09/2008
Cool smilie.

Post too short smilie
black dragon Ripto Gems: 2470
#3 Posted: 23:37:26 11/09/2008
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
i am remaking my fanfic that got ruined so i will tell you the first chapter


chapter 1
at the year of the dragon eggs hatched in a cave called spyro's lair but the eggs were stolen by egg thieves but a dragon egg hatched the dragon attacked the egg thieves and the eggs were saved this dragon was called jimmy the dragon he learned that all the dragons that went to the ice mountains where frozen.


Still really crappy. smilie


I had a feeling you'd say that.
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#4 Posted: 00:00:59 12/09/2008
Quote: black dragon
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
i am remaking my fanfic that got ruined so i will tell you the first chapter


chapter 1
at the year of the dragon eggs hatched in a cave called spyro's lair but the eggs were stolen by egg thieves but a dragon egg hatched the dragon attacked the egg thieves and the eggs were saved this dragon was called jimmy the dragon he learned that all the dragons that went to the ice mountains where frozen.


Still really crappy. smilie


I had a feeling you'd say that.


if I could unleashed all the stupid stuff in this story, we'd have pages.
Dark Midnight Green Sparx Gems: 131
#5 Posted: 00:09:54 12/09/2008
that is too much like tlos
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OK i am now back for good...... heh bet none of meh friends remember meh.
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#6 Posted: 00:45:29 12/09/2008
Quote: Dark Midnight
that is too much like tlos


Yeah, Jimmy, gain some originality.
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#7 Posted: 17:55:54 12/09/2008 | Topic Creator
i don't care Spyro2008!!!!!!!!

Chapter 2
one day jimmy was looking at the ice mountains when a dragon pushed jimmy off the rocks when jimmy landed on the ground he found himself in a world of snow it was very cold then he looked up and saw the dragon that had pushed him off the rocks fly into the ice mountain
so jimmy went after the dragon it was getting colder as jimmy went deeper into the mountain until he found a big icy room.

i will do chapter 3 soon
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:04:46 12/09/2008 by jimmy dragon
Dark Midnight Green Sparx Gems: 131
#8 Posted: 04:44:21 14/09/2008
these chapters need to be LONG!!!!!!!! not 3 sentences.

3 sentences are a paragraph not a chapter anyway.
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OK i am now back for good...... heh bet none of meh friends remember meh.
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#9 Posted: 10:23:44 14/09/2008 | Topic Creator
will you stop telling me what to do i know what i am doing!!!!!
Dark Midnight Green Sparx Gems: 131
#10 Posted: 17:31:31 14/09/2008
i am not.....i am just saying they need to be longer *rolls eyes* DUHHH
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OK i am now back for good...... heh bet none of meh friends remember meh.
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#11 Posted: 00:49:18 15/09/2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
will you stop telling me what to do i know what i am doing!!!!!


You really don't know.
black dragon Ripto Gems: 2470
#12 Posted: 06:24:29 15/09/2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
i don't care Spyro2008!!!!!!!!

Chapter 2
one day jimmy was looking at the ice mountains when a dragon pushed jimmy off the rocks when jimmy landed on the ground he found himself in a world of snow it was very cold then he looked up and saw the dragon that had pushed him off the rocks fly into the ice mountain
so jimmy went after the dragon it was getting colder as jimmy went deeper into the mountain until he found a big icy room.

i will do chapter 3 soon



Cool story smilie
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#13 Posted: 17:59:02 15/09/2008 | Topic Creator
ignores spyro2008
chapter 3
jimmy flew down to the icy platform and then a dragon jumped on the platform it was the dragon who pushed jimmy off the cliff the dragon was called cemro then they started to fight jimmy started hitting cemro with his tail cemro dodged the attacks and hit jimmy with a powerful fireball jimmy was badly hurt then a big black thing shot out of jimmy's mouth and it hit cemro then cemro was running all over the place and then he blacked out jimmy got up and flew back to spyro's lair when he got back to spyro's lair it was night and all the dragons were asleep so he went to sleep with them after a long day.

i will do chapter 4 soon.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#14 Posted: 16:57:03 16/09/2008
Cool! 2 people are reading it now! smilie I cant wait for the next chap, and just ignore those people who make fun of you, the fanfic is brill! smilie
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Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090
#15 Posted: 17:24:55 16/09/2008
wow nice fanfic!!! 3 ppl are reading it now! smilie
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#16 Posted: 17:28:45 16/09/2008 | Topic Creator
chapter 4
the next day jimmy woke up and went into the dragon temple and he saw the chroniclor and asked about that black thing the chroniclor told jimmy that he is an aura dragon and the black thing was an attack called black aura jimmy went back to spyro's lair and looked at the ice mountain when he saw a yellow dragon jimmy went down to find out who this dragon was the dragon was called maja jimmy chased maja to the deepest part of the ice mountain then maja took the lock gem disaster would happen if all the lock gems were taken jimmy chased maja then maja took the lock gem of the dragon temple two lock gems have been taken there is three left and jimmy must beat maja to them.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#17 Posted: 17:30:09 16/09/2008
Cool! smilie i love it
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jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#18 Posted: 18:22:11 16/09/2008 | Topic Creator
the dragon training dojo is NOT the dojo from the dragon temple
chapter 5
jimmy was looking at the map when he found a place that had a lock gem in it the place was called vida temple when he got there he saw a dragon called vida she started to attack jimmy he dodged and then hit vida with a powerfull tail whip but the fight was not over yet vida used a fire fury and fireballs went everywhere jimmy dodged them all and used the black aura on vida then he used aura horn knocking out vida then jimmy ran very fast then he saw maja take the lock gem the next place to go was the dragon training dojo.
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090
#19 Posted: 18:28:58 16/09/2008
cool i really like it! smilie
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#20 Posted: 19:22:25 16/09/2008
Me too! smilie
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black dragon Ripto Gems: 2470
#21 Posted: 03:31:22 17/09/2008
Awesome smilie
Malefor0001 Gold Sparx Gems: 2365
#22 Posted: 17:10:06 17/09/2008
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
will you stop telling me what to do i know what i am doing!!!!!


You really don't know.


I think its actually really good!
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Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090
#23 Posted: 17:10:59 17/09/2008
Quote: Malefor0001
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
will you stop telling me what to do i know what i am doing!!!!!


You really don't know.


I think its actually really good!


me too smilie its really cool!
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#24 Posted: 23:23:43 17/09/2008
Jimmy, try to make each paragraph longer and make the story more attractive, if you want to be a famous writer.
Shadow Angel Green Sparx Gems: 259
#25 Posted: 23:24:35 17/09/2008
^yeah really
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I love Rex 4 ever....
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#26 Posted: 00:00:51 18/09/2008
Quote: Shadow Angel
^yeah really


You agree? 0.0
Shadow Angel Green Sparx Gems: 259
#27 Posted: 00:01:42 18/09/2008
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: Shadow Angel
^yeah really


You agree? 0.0


yeah why?
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I love Rex 4 ever....
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#28 Posted: 00:02:34 18/09/2008
Quote: Shadow Angel
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: Shadow Angel
^yeah really


You agree? 0.0


yeah why?

Nothing, people use to bash me for saying his story wasn't attractive.
Shadow Angel Green Sparx Gems: 259
#29 Posted: 00:04:33 18/09/2008
Quote: Spyro2008
Quote: Shadow Angel
Quote: Spyro2008


You agree? 0.0


yeah why?

Nothing, people use to bash me for saying his story wasn't attractive.


really? OMG LOL
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I love Rex 4 ever....
hannah1997 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1227
#30 Posted: 00:20:18 18/09/2008
woah.........................
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Kaito Shion = best vocaloid ever
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#31 Posted: 15:39:26 18/09/2008 | Topic Creator
shadow angel if you do not like something then DON'T post!!!!!!!!
dragons Blue Sparx Gems: 817
#32 Posted: 13:14:56 21/09/2008
These stories are pretty cool but they are not bery much detailed!!
But still cooool!!
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tye-dye dragon Yellow Sparx Gems: 1459
#33 Posted: 13:47:23 21/09/2008
You need to remember to put in punctuation. I'm reading it too! I like it so far. Mind, I like all Spyro fanfics.
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jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#34 Posted: 17:04:29 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
if you do not like things about the story then don't post.
Spyro2008 Ripto Gems: 1353
#35 Posted: 00:25:32 22/09/2008
Quote: jimmy dragon
if you do not like things about the story then don't post.


Well then you're not going to get much replies.
jimmy dragon Ripto Gems: 841
#36 Posted: 17:52:04 28/09/2008 | Topic Creator
i got an account on that fanfic site (i cannot remember what is was called)so i am closing this and later i will post my fanfic if you to post things about the fanfic do so in my guestbook.
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