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#1 Posted: 19:52:42 23/08/2013 | Topic Creator
For starters, I hope this doesn't offend anyone who has made a story similar to this, I just think it is such a great idea! The first chapter will come soon! If you have any ideas for this story, please post them!
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#2 Posted: 20:21:59 23/08/2013 | Topic Creator
All right, here it comes.
Voodood woke up in a strange place. His vision was limited, but he could hear his fellow Skylanders around him. He saw several beings that looked like Portal Masters, but he wasn't sure. "Where am I?!" He called. "You are at Toys 'R' Us, my friend." A voice replied. That was the preview.
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Sleepy0429 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3217 |
#3 Posted: 21:55:21 23/08/2013
Rip off of BBB DTA and some more.
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uttster13 Gold Sparx Gems: 2701 |
#4 Posted: 23:04:59 23/08/2013
It's especially a rip off of BBB because you are using a character that no one really liked! And you used TRU and that was a big part BBB in the beginning.
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Sleepy0429 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3217 |
#5 Posted: 23:06:39 23/08/2013
You are also using a overstock character,
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uttster13 Gold Sparx Gems: 2701 |
#6 Posted: 23:09:03 23/08/2013
^ True.
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#7 Posted: 23:47:36 23/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Alright guys. Sorry. I'll stop writing.
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uttster13 Gold Sparx Gems: 2701 |
#8 Posted: 00:00:30 24/08/2013
We didn't say to stop writing. The point is that if you are writing a story, make it original and make it stand out.
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#9 Posted: 00:01:39 24/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I'll work on something else!
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