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Twilight, the Rising (New chapters released!) [CLOSED]
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#1 Posted: 22:23:47 06/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Twilight, born along side her sisters, is a Dark Dragoness raised under the Dark Master's influence. With great power, her and her sister, train to become masters of the Dark elements, and to relieve there rulers plee: To create a world full of darkness...

But as Twilight grows, something strange happens. The feel of light and love grows deep inside of her as she embarks on a whole new world, different then any other...


Table of contents:

Chapter one: Page one
Chapter two: Page six
Chapter three: Page six
Chapter one: Darkness

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"Master..." An icy voice whispered, through the darkness of the night. Two dark dragons were sitting out at the peak of a flattened mountain where they stood every night, overlooking and admiring the evil they had corrupted onto the valley. "Yes, Twilight?" A deep voice bellowed, harshened through habit. "I heard the Eternal night is ending... That the purple dragon is awakening! Doesn't that worry you?" She questioned bitterly, cocking her black head.

"Young warrior, a great dragon doesn't show fear, they see it in their enemies eyes." He pronounced nobely, but she could see the exact fear he was talking about in HIS crimson eyes. Twilight was a servant to her great master. A dragon that could weild all the elements of the universe, and even some greater that where unknown...Even though the dragoness knew something about her master, (Through surmising) she knew nothing about herself. Nor did her sisters Nightmare, Siren, and Cynder. When she was young, she once asked master, but his response was confusing and didn't tell her anything she wanted to really know.

"You are here so you can create a world of darkness... Nothing more, nothing less." He had left her dwelling on the words, just like he left her dwelling on the ones he had just said now. It seemed as though everything in her life would always be a mystery, and never an answer...

~*~*~*~

Wind flew in different directions recklessly, snow rode with the changing currents, and fiery red eyes that could go through ones soul stared at her endlessly. With each step crunching was heard beneath her paws, and she didn't even dare to look down. The large masculine shadow ape leading her by chains suddenly stopped, and bowed, but then scurried off into the distance. "Welcome, Twilight..." Master boomed, fire and smoke curling out of the edges of his mouth.

"Master, why am I here? Have I disobeyed you?" She cried. He closed his eyes and sighed, inhaling the atmosphere. "Your here so you can complete your training. You are an adolescent dragon now, it is time you became a warrior like your sisters..." She only nodded, she could sense danger somewhere in the arena. "Master... Before we begin, what must I do?" "You will see!" He smirked, and then blew a huge blast of fire at gate. Large steps where heard, shaking her, as she crouched down in her fighting position. Her eyes where now gleaming with energy as the creature appeared from the darkness....
Edited 15 times - Last edited at 17:32:01 04/11/2008 by Cynder_Rox
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#2 Posted: 23:50:48 06/09/2008
smilie oh...... my....... goodness........... this sounds AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT! 8D
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#3 Posted: 03:22:23 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Whoa, geez, breath!smilie

The first chapter shall come in a week or two, once I get some planning done.

This story will be one that I put more effort into, that's why. I wanna make sure this story will appeal a little more to my readers, and attract a larger audience then my previous fan-fics.

I will not be dropping the others, though at times one or the other may be delayed. Also, I may need someone to help out with a few things, so if anyone is interested, and has some good, fresh ideas, they are welcome here.

Twilight is taking place of my other "used-to be" fan-character, Saroura. As a matter of fact, Twilight has the same appearance as Saroura, thus making her a better, cooler alternative. (Atleast in my opinion)

Also, if this attracts more people, like I hope I may do some cool extras, so if you could tell a few people about the story- I'd appreciate that, and you might just get a cookie!smilie
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#4 Posted: 05:40:39 07/09/2008
checking, but nothing yet smilie
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#5 Posted: 05:45:04 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Would you like to help me? I need a few ideas, I am fresh out...
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#6 Posted: 05:50:33 07/09/2008
Sure, but I can't tonight... my brain ish JELLEH from teh METALZZZZZZZ x]]
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#7 Posted: 05:54:35 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Mine is too! Dunno why...

But anywho, later, when your brain has ammounted to something a bit more, uh, stable, we can think of some good ideas!smilie
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#8 Posted: 05:58:40 07/09/2008
Quote: Cynder_Rox
Mine is too! Dunno why...

But anywho, later, when your brain has ammounted to something a bit more, uh, stable, we can think of some good ideas!smilie


j00r listeninz to METAL?!?!?! smilie
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#9 Posted: 09:21:16 07/09/2008
Wow! I can't wait! *goes to tell more people about it*
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#10 Posted: 14:20:53 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Night Owl
Wow! I can't wait! *goes to tell more people about it*


Thanks! If you get a couple more people I might add a tiny extra!

EDIT: Oh shoot, I almost forgot! Here's a cookie!smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 14:25:30 07/09/2008 by Cynder_Rox
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#11 Posted: 15:08:22 07/09/2008
HHHAAAIIII! I'm back x] and mah brainz ish normal now, i think..... =3
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#12 Posted: 15:11:09 07/09/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! Hey, could you tell a few people about mah story too, please?
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#13 Posted: 00:19:44 09/09/2008
I Will try.
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#14 Posted: 00:24:40 09/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you!
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#15 Posted: 00:33:14 09/09/2008
npsmilie to the fan club!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
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#16 Posted: 00:36:54 09/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Lol, to the fan-club!smilie
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#17 Posted: 00:39:46 09/09/2008
It's a Uh.....Nevermind.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
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#18 Posted: 00:41:04 09/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Er, ok...smilie
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#19 Posted: 00:42:25 09/09/2008
T posted it. smilie
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#20 Posted: 16:24:07 10/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Update!

I have decided, that instead of there just being Twilight and Cynder, there will be two other Dark Dragoneses!

Names: Siren, Elements: Green Fear, Poison. Unammed, Elements: Blue Fear, Shadow.

Cynder, Elements: Red Fear, ShadowFire. Twilight, Elements: Purple Fear, Wind.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#21 Posted: 16:33:35 10/09/2008
Yazers!!! I can't wait!
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#22 Posted: 16:34:50 10/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#23 Posted: 16:41:44 10/09/2008
No probs.
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#24 Posted: 04:21:06 14/09/2008
hey i cannot wait!!!
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OK i am now back for good...... heh bet none of meh friends remember meh.
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#25 Posted: 16:41:57 14/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks, Dark Midnight! The first chapter should come out soon...
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#26 Posted: 21:19:58 01/10/2008 | Topic Creator
First part of chap one on first post! ENJOY!
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 22:38:20 01/10/2008 by Cynder_Rox
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#27 Posted: 00:45:09 02/10/2008
awesome! smilie
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#28 Posted: 00:52:29 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!

And for our lucky first commenter!!!! You get a cookie!8D
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#29 Posted: 00:55:33 02/10/2008
ZOMG YAY COOKIE!!!!! *glomps C_R for cookie* smilie YAY!!!! *eats cookie* tastes burn't... RAAWWWWWRRZZZZLLLLRRRZZZZ *tackles C_R and mauls to death* smilie U BURN MAH COOKIE!


smilie bahhhhhh OHHHHHHH wellZZZZZZZZZZZ can it be i can haz hugz time plz? *wants hugz*
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#30 Posted: 00:57:34 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
HOLY COW!!!!*Gives fresh cookie with little walnuts in it* Is that better, mad cookie man?
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#31 Posted: 00:59:06 02/10/2008
yayz 8D *eats cookie* tastes muchhh better 8> *hugs*
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#32 Posted: 01:01:51 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Good! *Looks nervous and walks slowly away...*
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#33 Posted: 01:05:52 02/10/2008
i iz not going to flame j00 or anything... i would never smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#34 Posted: 14:10:43 02/10/2008
smilie Man, the two of you sure made me laugh like crazeh! smiliesmiliesmilie

Anywho, your new Fan-fic, C_R, sure sounds like something totaly awesome and NEW! Plus, it has alot of Darkness in it! smilie I can feeeeeeeeeeel it! smilie
Oh no wait, it's just the freezeness here smilie I'm freezing down here >.<

If you'll need any new ideas, I can help you smilie My brain, unlike someone's brains I know, is always full of ideas and always active ^,^

Oh and I added your Fan-fic to my siggy, so that people could see and then read it smilie
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 14:17:03 02/10/2008 by Dark_Cynder
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#35 Posted: 14:44:43 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Awwww, Thank you, D_C! I really appreciate it!smilie

I hope my first chapter wasn't so bad...I always struggle with the first couple of chapters, since that is the first impression on how my story is going to be!O.o
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#36 Posted: 15:00:35 02/10/2008
WOOT! It rocks! smilie I recon it will rock so hard it will turn into one! 0.0
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#37 Posted: 15:01:50 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! Lol, that was hilarious!smilie

And thanks!smilie Tell some of your friends to if you can!
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#38 Posted: 15:07:16 02/10/2008
I will! smilie *longer post*
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#39 Posted: 15:31:14 02/10/2008
Hi Cynder_Rox. I'm new to the forum, Night Owl told me about your story and I must say it is really cool! Can't wait for more.
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#40 Posted: 15:58:39 02/10/2008
Yeah, I can't wait to hear some more about Darkness, eather! 8D
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#41 Posted: 16:14:07 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks, ice_bomb!smilie And welcome! I hope you make tons of friends here!

There should be more soon, so stay tuned!
Nalemor Ripto Gems: 789
#42 Posted: 20:29:43 02/10/2008
awesomeness, cant wait 8D
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#43 Posted: 22:31:50 02/10/2008
Your Story is really good. Can't wait for more! smilie
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#44 Posted: 22:45:49 02/10/2008
Wow, thats a good story! By the way, Nalemor told me to come read it.
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#45 Posted: 22:47:05 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys!smilie
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#46 Posted: 09:31:46 04/10/2008
It's really good!
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#47 Posted: 14:08:07 04/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks, SpyroCrazy! I might write more today!smilie
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#48 Posted: 14:39:10 04/10/2008
oh thats amazing, and i am telling the truth cause i am not a fan-fic person and theres only a few i like so this is realy got my attention and i can't wait for the next part!

oh and can ya plz write a big long chapter next if you can! smilie
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#49 Posted: 14:42:53 04/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow, thank you!smilie I will when I have the time! (Which I sadly don't have right now...)
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#50 Posted: 14:44:45 04/10/2008
awwwwww, well atleast i can read it when you have the time lol!
can't wait smilie
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