This is a fanfic, about the elite 7 Skylanders.
Chapter 1- A New Destiny For Bambazookers
- Hey, Zoak, how is life?
Zoak- Seriously? I hate it!
- Yeah...
(A Dwarf throws a rock at , who trips.)
- Hey! I can walk!
Meanwhile...at the Ruins...
Eon- , can you please recruit some new Skylanders?
- Sure!
Back at where is...
- That weird dwarf...is sabotaging the brick thing!
A witch walks up to the dwarf, who is covered in armor.
Witch- Hey! Ignatius! I can make your armor fireproof!
Ignatius the Dwarf- Really? Okay!
Witch- Abra-Kadabra! You are now fire-proof!
- Wow...
Ignatius- Perfect! A dragon!
(Ignatius charges up to the dragon, only to realize his soul is trapped in his body, covered in fire.)
- Hey! Are you alright?
Ignatius- Yep. You are...
- My name is .
Ignatius- Well, I need to change my name at the Skylands Name Changer.
- I'll come!
Ignatius- Thanks!
(The duo travel, and reach the destination)
Ignatius- I really hate that witch.
- You don't say!
Ignatius- STALKER!
- I sawwy.
Ignatius- Okay, 50 Skybucks.
(wait...)
- What did you change your
name to?
Ignatius-
End of Chapter 1!
Well, I will only post more if I get comments.
Comments remaining- 1
What do you think? and Ignatius, I mean, ! Hope you love it!
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#1 Posted: 00:22:06 11/08/2013 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 13:08:55 11/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Nothing?
Oh well, guests must be reading it. Chapter 2- Spyro's Quest - She tricked me! - Maybe she did the wrong spell. Witch- No I didn't. (The witch flies off to parts unknown) - Ugh! That witch! - Ah! Want to be Skylanders! - Yes! Those people rule! - What does Skylander mean? Sure! and look at each other, and say "It's tutoring time!" 15 hours of basic knowledge later... - This is , this is, , and this is . - 6 Skylanders? - Yes! - Well, you'll need to fight a bunch of baddies in an ice kingdom. By yourselves. - Let's go! End of Chapter 2 Well, who are the 7? 1- Debut- Episode 1 2- Debut- Episode 1 3- Debut- Episode 3 4- Debut- Episode 6 5- Debut- Episode 10 6- Debut- Episode 12 7- Debut- Episode 15 |
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#3 Posted: 13:21:19 11/08/2013
........Zook????
Eh..........it needs some inprovement but thats maby cuz i am not a very big fan of him anyeays its a good try also: stay with patience ....not alot people come to this section ......... .......always gets attension put her in here( ambush or) and YOU get attrnsion |
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#4 Posted: 14:24:20 11/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Ninjask- I have the characters planned out already, and I am doing my favorite 7
characters. 2 Water 2 Fire 1 Undead 2 Life |
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#5 Posted: 14:38:16 11/08/2013
Hrumpf
You dislike me huh? Chatacters:fine Storyline:??????? Sorry Next time: dont slam my afvise offf and think about it first Besides: yhere is always room for extra stuff Anyways: if you just say things like that i feel offended quickly...........i have sutism so yeah sorry |
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#6 Posted: 22:37:15 11/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Ninjask- No, I don't dislike you. Sorry, I already planned out the characters.
Anyways... Chapter 3- Ice Pity You! - Just one more cyclops. ( throws a javelin at a dummy cyclops) Snow Queen Armaldra- Great! Meanwhile... Barler the Cyclops- Let's capture the Snow Queen and melt her! Cyclops army- Yeah! Meanwhile... - This is cold. My flame can melt it. watches burn a path. - Cool! Meanwhile for the 3rd time... - Cyclops! Cyclops 1- Hah! We stole the Queen! - Ice stink at life. ( and walk up) - The snow queen is captured! - How can you... - Ignatius is my childhood friend. The queen is his godmother 65 times removed. - I changed it to IGNITOR. - English? - Hey, Chili, how would you like to be a Skylander? - I changed it to CHILL. - Yes? Well, we could be a trio, knocking out enemies and . - Trio. - Trio. -Trio. End Well, trio! Need 3 more feedback. |
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#7 Posted: 00:10:50 12/08/2013 | Topic Creator
I'm impatient.
Chapter 4- I Knew You Were Double Trouble When You Zapped Me... - Trio, where to next? ( gets zapped, and falls down a hole) - Ack! - YOLO. - That means... - Now, your turn Chili! - CHILL. - Well, shouldn't we save- - Ahh! Laser! (thud) - Don't you dare, Trubbish. - I that garbage Pokémon! Generation 5 is so- ( hits with her javelin) - I hate Genwunners! ( rescues and ) - Thanks! End That was quick...and pointless...the next one will be having a point. Well, Chill or Double Trouble? Who do you agree with? I agree with Chill. |
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#8 Posted: 11:06:14 12/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Moar!
Chapter 5- Chilllander - That was easy. - Hi, that no . That was an evil villian. - Where did you... - Um... - Well? - Well? - Hey, , want to be a Skylander? - Sure! What's our first mission? - Well? - Go underwater. - I'll stay above. - I can't swim. - Quitters. - And that is how to swim. - Nevermind, taught me. - Woah! - What? - I hear an underwater kingdom! End How do you even hear an... |
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#9 Posted: 16:41:50 13/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6- I Met a Crab King
- You found me! - What happened? - My kingdom...destroyed... - Want to be a Skylander? - For what? - No reason. - Okay. ( , , and swim up) - This is... - . - Yep. Later... - Recruited. - Hey, , want to be the 4th member in the squad? - Yes, PLEASE! End That's 4! |
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#10 Posted: 07:15:54 14/08/2013
ok, it was just something i wanted to point out, :
its Always better to have more than only seven, i know, its hard but you might think about it in the future ok? |
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#11 Posted: 22:44:41 15/08/2013 | Topic Creator
^Okay, but min. would be 60, if I even get up to there.
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#12 Posted: 08:42:08 16/08/2013
oh, ok?
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#13 Posted: 11:12:51 16/08/2013
Troll Slug, Ignitor was once called Ignatius, not Emmett.
Other than that, it's EPIC. Keep it up!
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I'll be on every now and then. |
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#14 Posted: 00:45:32 19/08/2013 | Topic Creator
^ Really?
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#15 Posted: 08:00:34 19/08/2013
Yeah, it says so on the Skylanders Wiki for Ignitor!
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#16 Posted: 08:06:19 19/08/2013
yeah!!!
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#17 Posted: 13:12:41 29/08/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7 (Finally)
Parkour - So, this is the parkour arena? - Yep. - Um...yeah. - Well, try it! - Who are you? - Who are you? ( and chase each other) - Parkour! - Wow. - He good! - Good? - Ya, sorry man. End Yeah...short. Sorry! |
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#18 Posted: 15:28:51 29/08/2013
eh, that just didnt make sence......
but thats why its fun! |
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#19 Posted: 12:25:13 01/09/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8- The Legend of Zook
- ! - Yeah? - Hungry for seafood? - >.> - Oh yeah, ? ? - How about... - NO. - Alright... ( trips over a rock, and falls in a mystical portal) - Um... - What happened? - Hey, I'm down in this portal! - I will jump! - Oh, spaghetti! You two meatball- Meatballs? I don't even. - Tongue away! ( licks , and brings him to shore, same with ) - Bye-o! - Bye! End of Chapter 8 |
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#20 Posted: 15:44:38 01/09/2013
This is pretty good! But I must say it needs an initial plot, not just a bunch of nonsense. If you ever want help, just PM or post on my GB!
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#21 Posted: 00:58:16 02/09/2013 | Topic Creator
Thanks, a few chapters will have some use, some won't. I am doing the first ever...TBC'd chapter!
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#22 Posted: 01:33:07 02/09/2013
This is pretty good, and has some humor, but no offense, after a couple I started to lose interest. I'll probably check back and see how this is doing though! Nicely done and keep going!
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#23 Posted: 19:26:55 03/09/2013 | Topic Creator
Yeah, these next few are going to be interesting!
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#24 Posted: 20:00:09 11/09/2013 | Topic Creator
Soon...
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