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Clash of the Guardians [CLOSED]
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#1 Posted: 23:32:43 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
As ages pass, old and weakened must be replaced with young and entergetic. As every generation passes, all the Temples in the Dragon Realms change their Guardians. But, in this Generation, the new Guardians have risen much earlier then expected...Throughout their entire youth, these Dragonesses will learn each of there special elements, as they learn faith, loyaltly, and courage. For they will be tested to see if they are the next TRUE GUARDIANS of the sacred Dragon Realms...

Welcome to our Fan-Fic, "Clash of the Guardians!" This story is written by: Me, Dark_Cynder, and our newest writer, NightOwl!

This is a Spyro related story about four Dragonesses from four different types of Dragon temples. The names of each one will be released soon but currently, there is an Ice Temple, a Fire Temple, an Electricity Temple, an Earth Temple, and the Elemental Temple. (The Elemetal Temple is where the story will first begin.)

The main characters names are: Venus Element Fire, Lyra Element Ice, Zasha Element Electricity, and Genia Element Earth. There are more characters that will remain annoymous, until they make their debut in a chapter!

Here is the first chapter, ENJOY!smilie

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Chapter One: Prolouge

Darkness shrouded the land as the smell of war was in the air. A large red, orange dragon sat memorized at a golden temples grotto. His scaley eyes where closed, as if he was concentrating on something hard, as clanks and clatters were heard from the armed dragons behind him. All, where waiting for freedom or death, none of them knew which.

When the dragon opened an eye he could see the land he loved dearly, the land he thought that could possibley never be the same. It was just now he had thought of it. The once grassy land had turned to a light brown, and the sky was so dark it seemed as though it were made out of smoke.

He gave an exagerrated sigh, and turned around to see Volteer running towards him. "Ignitus!" He shouted gasping for breath as he reached him. "I have hidden the Guardian eggs, throughout the swamp and made sure a part of the mercenaries is their to guard them." Ignitus only nodded and then turned to the group of male dragons slowly. "All right every one! I know your trip has been difficult, but to protect the future Guardians, we must fight!" He said harshly pacing slowly infront of them.

"But, that is not all. I have talked to the leaders of your clans. As you now an egg was each taken from each of your temples hatchery, chosen to become the next Guardians of this Temple!" But before Ignitus could even breath another word, a large roar and pulsing red eyes appeared from the sky. Everyone watched in disbelief for a brief second, until an army of wretched shadow beasts appeared at the other side of the land.

"Battle stations!" Ignitus roared spewing bits of fire at the eneimies direction in rage. "Go!" The army charged as Ignitus recieted the dragons sacred oath for luck, "May the ancestors be look after you, may they look after us all." And with that he blew a great amount of fire. Stronger then ever before, and took to the sky, ready to face his greatest fear...

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This is rough draft! NOT completed yet!!!

BTW, EXCLUSIVE!

Here is a bit of information on the main characters. More will show up soon...

Venus
Female
Side: Good
This Dragoness was born to be a leader, though her hot temper can get the better of her, Lyra is always the one to cool her down. She is stubborn, strong, spunky and always independant.

Lyra
Female
Side: Good
Lyra is more of a peace maker. Her and Venus share a special bond between each other, though they could be no more different then fire and ice. She is sweet, good natured, kind, and shy.
Edited 10 times - Last edited at 20:12:36 30/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#2 Posted: 00:43:07 29/08/2008
Sounds cool! Can't wait to see the first chapter! ^,^ And will you do this Fan-fic alone? Coz I would love to add my Fan Character- Arcticus smilie (And I'm not asking you to allow me to do chapters with you) He used to be an Ice guardian of the Dragon Temple in the Icy part of the Dragon Realms, but if you want, you can use him how you want smilie
If you'll decide to use him, then I can give you a link of a topic, in witch I posted a picture and more information about him smilie Just give me the word! smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#3 Posted: 00:49:13 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Hmmm, sure D_C! I could use some help!smilie

BTW, I have decided which story to do first! I will PM you or, write it in your GuestBook.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#4 Posted: 00:52:02 29/08/2008
I would love to help you out in this ^,^

You do know that you can't use the PM inbox, right? smilie So tell me in my guestbook smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#5 Posted: 00:56:22 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
He, he, I already sent it through there!smilie I can use it for that stuff, but from now on I will use the GuestBook.smilie

To respond, please use mine too.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#6 Posted: 01:01:28 29/08/2008
Ok, I will respond to your PM soon, in your guestbook smilie
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#7 Posted: 02:13:36 29/08/2008
smilie I written that as just an idea for you! smilie Oh well... I'm in, that's all that matters! ^,^ Who would ever thought, that I got so expirienced in this, that just a normal idea sounds like a piece of a story smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 02:15:30 29/08/2008 by Dark_Cynder
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#8 Posted: 09:21:28 29/08/2008
Cool, I can't wait for it! smilie
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#9 Posted: 13:26:58 29/08/2008
Eather do I smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#10 Posted: 21:09:14 29/08/2008
Finally some info about them! smilie smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#11 Posted: 21:11:10 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! I held back on the "Special" character since he is yours and you can post up his bio how you like it.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#12 Posted: 21:17:11 29/08/2008
Ok, but I will do that after 7-8 hours, when I'll get some sleep, ok? Besides, he won't appear in the first chapter, woun't he? smilie?
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#13 Posted: 21:19:07 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, he will appear later in the story.smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#14 Posted: 21:21:56 29/08/2008
That's good! ^,^
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#15 Posted: 21:22:43 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok!!! Sorry I haven't written the first chapter yet, I am still brainstorming...smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#16 Posted: 21:26:36 29/08/2008
Take your time. smilie You still have 7-8 hours left to write it smilie (Untill I'll be back)
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#17 Posted: 21:29:47 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
That's good!smilie Though, first will be probablly really short and it will only be in rough draft until I add more stuff to it, spell check it, and make sure I am using proper grammer...
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#18 Posted: 21:35:42 29/08/2008
smilie that is going to take 4ever smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#19 Posted: 21:45:39 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! No, I am pretty good at English and Spelling. Shan't take that long!smilie
Glass Gryphon Gold Sparx Gems: 2686
#20 Posted: 23:49:13 29/08/2008
Hey that sounds pretty good! Nice for a rough draft! smilie
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#21 Posted: 23:51:54 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow, thanks!smilie

I still need to add a few more Adjectives and I have noticed a sentence or to could be a bit more understandable but I only had twenty minutes to write this.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 23:53:58 29/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#22 Posted: 06:02:58 30/08/2008
20 MINUTES!??! smilie DUDE! I would have never writhen something so Easy to imagine and rough for such a short amaunt of time!
Awesome beginning! ^,^
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#23 Posted: 08:38:01 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks, D_C!^,^

I am so tired right now i'll wait and do the other final draft of the chapter later!

Err, has anything I have been saying sound right right now?smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 08:41:03 30/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#24 Posted: 08:42:22 30/08/2008
Idk smilie I think I understood, lol smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#25 Posted: 08:49:18 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! That's good! I woke upon the middle of the night and came here.@_@ I am going to go now I can barely keep my eyes open! C ya later!smilie
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#26 Posted: 09:03:21 30/08/2008
See ya! Sweet dreams! ^,^
Coocie2 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4249
#27 Posted: 09:30:47 30/08/2008
wow cool story
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#28 Posted: 13:57:31 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks, Coocie2!
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#29 Posted: 14:45:13 30/08/2008
Can i join?! Plz? If i can, i wont be able to do a chap untill monday.smilie
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#30 Posted: 16:15:27 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Yes, check out your Guestbook!smilie
alexis1213 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1595
#31 Posted: 17:09:46 30/08/2008
smilie thats awesome *kasplodes*
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#32 Posted: 17:17:22 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
smilie! Thank you!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:33:31 30/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#33 Posted: 17:51:08 30/08/2008
Thanx c_r!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#34 Posted: 17:54:45 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
NP! (More Letters TT)
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#35 Posted: 18:32:42 30/08/2008
Wow. After you've encouraged me, I guess I should support for you! I'm looking forward for new chapters!
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#36 Posted: 18:37:21 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!smilie Glad you like it!smilie
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#37 Posted: 18:38:17 30/08/2008
You're welcome! Can't wait for more!
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#38 Posted: 18:41:03 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Well, my buddy, Dark_Cynder will probablly be doing the next one, then another friend of mine, NightOwl.
Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#39 Posted: 19:07:22 30/08/2008
I will do it, but not today.... Today, only if at night smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#40 Posted: 19:08:49 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, that'll work. Also, check out NightOwl's Guestbook, I have some info of the story in there!smilie
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#41 Posted: 19:16:40 30/08/2008
That will work, D_C'S chap tommorow, mine monday!smilie
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Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#42 Posted: 19:20:54 30/08/2008
While you're at it, can I join? I need to develop my skills on long chapters. Also, can I add a fan character?
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Dark_Cynder Yellow Sparx Gems: 1723
#43 Posted: 19:23:46 30/08/2008
Quote: Cynder_Rox
Ok, that'll work. Also, check out NightOwl's Guestbook, I have some info of the story in there!smilie


Ok, I'll check it smilie
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#44 Posted: 19:24:01 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Hmmm, if D_C and NiOwl say ok, why not!smilie
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#45 Posted: 19:25:52 30/08/2008
Okay! Still waiting...
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#46 Posted: 19:30:17 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey, Dragonhope! Only one thing if you will be a part of the fan-fic, PM me when you write a chapter before you post it here. I want to make sure everything makes sense with what the next person had in mind with the next chapter after yours. This way, there will be less confusion in the story.
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#47 Posted: 19:32:04 30/08/2008
Alright! What about the fan character(don't wanna spoil it so I'm telling to C_R only)?
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#48 Posted: 19:39:32 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Since we are doing this fan-fic as a group, it is better to PM the character to all of us, so that way it will lessen confusion even further!smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:41:30 30/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#49 Posted: 19:42:14 30/08/2008
Okay! Let me send you the PM...
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#50 Posted: 19:44:44 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright.

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