darkSpyro

so, now that i'm new here , i decided to make a story ,just for fun, my teather says that i\m good with making storys,( but my grammer in english is still bad) i reely would like to hear what you guys think. so lets get started

CHAPTER ONE: another world

spyro, Kirby and pickachu are playing with a ball, yoshi joins in and everyone is playing.
but in a place nearby mata knight and stealth elf are doing random things....


mata knight: what do you mean, i fell shakey
stealth elf: i dunno, it feels like ....i just don't know....
mata knight: hmmmm, hey , i see a black dot
stealth elf: you are seeing things mata knight
mata knight: no i'm not !
...
spyro: wheee
pickachuu: whooo
yoshi: whaaaa
Kirby: *sees black beam going up*AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
spyro: what is that?
yoshi*gasp* .....
pickachu: I pika don't chu know....
spyro: come on and lets see!

they ran over to the source , seeing mata knight and stealth elf panicking, the beam come from mata knight sword: Galexia.

mata knight: what do we do what do we do?/????????
stealth elf: *bumbps into a tree*
mata knight: * bumps into stealth elf
* a flash comes out of noware*
....

spyro: where are we?
Kirby: owowow.....
pickachu: chuchuchu chuuuu*uses thunderbolt and everyone wakes up*
yoshi: whare are mata knight and uhhhhh?
spyro: who's uuuh?
yoshi: how is that ninja-skylander-watsemes-thing called?
spyro: stealth elf
yoshi: i don't care
spyro: I DO!
Kirby: and what is this place

the 4 look around, the grass is purple and the sky is orange, thare ware cristals on the ground.... a sphare-like bird flies to the group...
Kirby: AAAAH A SPHARE DOOMER
spyro: is it dangerous
Kirby: yes...

pickachu and yoshi are playing with the silver sphare doomer
sphare doomer: more visitors, yeee
spyro: more?
sphare doomer: yes, you see, mata knight and stealt elf came by a little eerlier hare, hee-heee
....

thare's no support but that doesn't make me stop with writhing

CHAPTER TWO: shadow elfs ,rising fear

sphare doomer: ...to be honest ?
spyro: what?
sphare doomer: no, i just don't trust that green thing , just....
yoshi: I'M THE ONLY MARIO DUDE
spyro: who cares, but you do and i don't mind

BAM
pickachu: what whas that
sphare doomer:*rans off*
spyro: crap

Kirby stared at the black clouds who whare rising into the sky, he sees mata knight blasting of towards him

Kirby: AAAAH*gots rammed by mata knight*
mata knight: sorry
spyro: where is stealth elf?
mata knight:*starts shaking and runs away*AAAAAAAH
yoshi: why does he runs of?
???: i donnu
spyro: who
???: me

stealth elf walks in, with a purple crown on her head, dark aura was floating around her

spyro:this reminds me of melafor
Kirby: no megolar
pickachu: shadow lugia
yoshi: DARK BOWSER
spyro: dont scream
yoshi: sorry
Kirby: wats wrong with s.....ehhh,,,,,
spyro:*facepalm*...ealth elf
Kirby: thanks
stealth elf: *unexpected starts with using blade slash *
pikachu(i typed it wrong the hole time: my apoologizes): oh snap*runs away
Kirby/yoshi/spyro: *screaming* : RUUUUUUUHN AAAAWAAAAAYYYY!
....
WIERD!

still no suppport
wel, ill be patien and wil not post in her until somone posts something hare......