darkSpyro

here is part 1

One night spyro was walking around the temple in search for Cynder.
As he turned the corner he heard a voice call his name "Spyro....Spyro....Spyro..." whispered the voice. Spyro jumped in shock... he looked behind his shoulder .....nothing there he thought to himself. "Where are you Cynder?" said spyro out loud. Right after Spyro said it he heard the voice again but this time it was louder. "Spyro....Spyro....Spyro...." Spyro started to run then he crashed into Sparx. "Hey what's your problem Spyro...that really hurt. And why were you running anyway?" Asked Sparx. "I was running from a voice." Replied Spyro. "Wow a big purple dragon is scared of a dinky little voice." Laughed Sparx.
"This is serious Sparx" said Spyro angrily. "Yeah ok catch you later" said Sparx. "Wait!!!" Yelled Spyro. "What" said Sparx. "Have you seen Cynder?" asked Spyro. "Oh yeah I did... I saw her leave the temple." She didn't even blink even once when I saw her... how strange. Answered Sparx. "We have to tell Ignitus." said Spyro. "WE? You mean YOU have to tell him. I am enjoying Cynder not being around. And I even had a little party with a disco ball cause I celebrated her dissaperence."

Part 2 coming soon!
What you guys think about it so far????

Sparx....

I LOVE IT!!

great can't wait for tomorrow

Sparx is so mean...poor Cynder. I wonder what's wrong.
This is an ok story so far. May I ask that you make it a little easier to read? I'm not saying this in a bad way, I just find it a little hard to read.

i know it was hard to read but i was in a hurry trying to type everthing

i will make it easier to read tomarrow in part 2

awesome!

wait till you guys read the ending LOL

ok can't wait till then

OMG a suprise ending your just makeing me want ta read it more know

well its how spyro kills something

just wait till you find out how he kills it LOL

when i thought how the story was going to end it made me laugh so hard i cried LOL

nice

omg spyro kills something lol ok so when ya writing it i need to read it lol lol lol i love a good laught lol

shoulden't this be in fandom?

pretty good.

i will add part 2 later cuz i am trying to fix it up a bit

ok

cant wait for the other part

same here

Here's part 2: The next morning


"Ignitus!", shouted Spyro.
"What is it young dragon?" asked Ignitus.
"Ok, long story short.....Cynder is gone and I am hearing voices." said Spyro.
"What? Cynder is GONE?" asked Ignitus
"Yes, Sparx said he saw her leave the temple and she didn't blink once like something is wrong with her", replied Spyro.
"Ah...yes indeed, poor Cynder is in a trance", Ignitus said.
"Well what about that voice I keep hearing?" asked Spyro.
"What did the voice sound like?", asked Ignitus.
"It was bone chilling, dry and a little hoarse", Spryo said.
"Young dragon, I have no idea who this voice could be.....but we should only focus right now on finding Cynder". Ignitus said.

Part 3 Coming Soon

part 2 is short but some of the parts are going to be long

Interesting. Can't wait for the next part.

sorry guys i was busy add part 3 later

ok but try and do the next part soon it is cool

lol what happend to making a part every day lol do you know when you can write the next bit cause i am still waiting and i am getting anxious

awsome! its cool!