The Dragon Girl
Coming soon.....
I hope you people will enjoy it.
NOTE:At First Spyro won't be in this. But he will.
Here is a title.(YES it is on Google Eyes, But It's the best I can do)
The Dragon Girl
I don't want to spoil it. I'm sorry but there won't be a preview.
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I might not write for a while. Cause I am going on Vacation soon
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Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857 |
#1 Posted: 01:04:18 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 01:05:49 07/08/2008
Quote: Cynder16
I don't get it... |
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#3 Posted: 01:11:31 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Don't get what?
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#4 Posted: 04:06:42 07/08/2008
This sounds cool! Can't wait till it starts, Cyn16!
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#5 Posted: 04:54:49 07/08/2008
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Same thing here! |
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#6 Posted: 14:56:31 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: Strange Dreams
"Wake up! You stupid good for nothing girl!" yelled a voice. "Yes Amelia." said Cassandra. "Cassandra, Fix this house. Put it in tip-top shape by noon." "Yes Ma'am."replied Cassandra. Amelia and her daughters, Megan and Barbara. Cassandra endlessly cleaned. Now at 10:00, Cassandra invited her boyfriend, Devon over. "You called?" said Devon. "Devon! I have been having .................. dreams." replied Cassandra "What kind?" asked Devon. "We were Dragons. I was being told something." she said."'Come. You will be summoned. Your Life, Your Destiny lies.... Here. ' That's all I can remember." Cassandra replied. "Seems that we are having the same dreams." said Devon. "Really?" asked Cassandra. "We just might be. Sorry, but I have to go." replied Devon. "Okay." said Cassandra. Amelia came home. Cassandra ate, then fell asleep. Cassandra was a dragon. A large figure appeared. "You will become a dragon in 5 days." it said. "Wait, What?"replied Cassandra. "' Sacred Threshold, Hollow Ground, Pathways Unfold, Lost is Found. Prove Your Worth With Quick Desire. Ice and Earth, Electric, Fire.' These words will help you to find an Ally." it said again."I must go now. Wake."it finished."No! Don't go! No! NO!!!"screeched Cassandra, but it was too late. The figure vanished. Cassandra turned back into a girl, and awoke......
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#7 Posted: 15:09:23 07/08/2008
You are getting sleepy... you are about to witness the fate of the universe... deeeeeep in your mind.
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#8 Posted: 15:23:51 07/08/2008
Robo-Spyro! How dare you talk that way! It is FANDOM! People make stories about what they want, and how they want! If you don't like it, then don't read it!
Sorry, Cynder16... I just can't allow, so that someone would hurt a member of the CFC BTW Good beginning of the story, Cyn16! |
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#9 Posted: 15:25:43 07/08/2008
OK, sorry I won't do it again.
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#10 Posted: 15:29:02 07/08/2008
Good. I'm happy that you notised your mistake Oh, and sorry for being so harsh
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#11 Posted: 15:30:20 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
To Robo-Spyro: Thanks.
To D_C: Sometimes I think that I should have started with her as a Dragon.
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#12 Posted: 15:33:32 07/08/2008
No, it's ok Cynder16 I'm sure, your story will be great! Once you'll do it more further
Remember the Spyro story? It beginned from Cynder being lost in a forest, and now look at it! IT IS AWESOME!!!! And your will be the same |
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#13 Posted: 15:34:29 07/08/2008
No, Cyn16! It is good the way it is! Don't someones stupid criticisism bother you. They are just probably doing because the are bored anyway...
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#14 Posted: 15:35:02 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah. But I think the human thing is a little boring.
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#15 Posted: 15:36:43 07/08/2008
But then it will become "Dragon thing" So everything is fine, Cyn16. Just do your stuff!
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#16 Posted: 15:37:24 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#17 Posted: 15:37:34 07/08/2008
Really?! Why?! Well, it is your story, you can change it if you want...
I guess you could do something, where she is really a Dragon, but she can turn into a human too. But, I like your story a lot! |
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#18 Posted: 15:39:43 07/08/2008
Yeah, this is actualy something new in the whole forum! And I LOVE new ideas!!! Keep it up, Cyn16!
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#19 Posted: 16:01:43 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks. And If u don't know,
Cassandra and Devon are actually only dragons. They were corrupted, and .... turned human. They don't remember anything
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#20 Posted: 16:09:26 07/08/2008
Ok
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#21 Posted: 16:13:15 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
So they're my fan characters!
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#22 Posted: 16:34:02 07/08/2008
Oh cool! Now I've know what I'm gonna do to one of my fan characters! Keep up the good work!
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
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#23 Posted: 16:34:40 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks
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#24 Posted: 17:02:53 07/08/2008
WOW! *dies*
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#25 Posted: 17:07:11 07/08/2008
NOO, Night Owl! Don't go! ...............................You forgot me!
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#26 Posted: 17:09:50 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
And Thanks!!!!!!!! Niowl I can't figure out How I can thank you. Maybe write more?
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#27 Posted: 11:31:27 08/08/2008
Quote: Cynder16
That's what I've been trying to say. But anyway, your story is still good, it just needs more elements, and less talking about boring everyday humans.
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#28 Posted: 13:42:24 08/08/2008 | Topic Creator
You still don't need to be mean about it.
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#29 Posted: 19:06:34 08/08/2008
Quote: Cynder16
Plz? *does cute puppy face* but i don't ant to rush you: Excellence comes with a price. (the fanfic the excellence the price, the price is waiting!)
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#30 Posted: 20:58:26 12/08/2008
I found this and I should say make more.
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#31 Posted: 05:42:41 15/08/2008
cool story Cynder 16!!!
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#32 Posted: 23:37:30 16/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you all. I am sorry I left home.
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#33 Posted: 00:01:28 17/08/2008
Whoa! Cynder16!
Long time no see! |
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#34 Posted: 00:18:38 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah. I am happy to be back!
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#35 Posted: 17:57:02 17/08/2008
YEAH! You are back! =D
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#36 Posted: 18:05:32 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
And still alive!
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#37 Posted: 18:36:23 17/08/2008
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#38 Posted: 16:53:32 18/08/2008
Can you make more?
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#39 Posted: 18:18:25 27/08/2008
PLZ?Error- posting sytems brain is diddy.-
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#40 Posted: 05:41:17 07/09/2008
your story roxs Cy16! keep up the good work!
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#41 Posted: 00:18:27 09/09/2008 | Topic Creator
GAH!!! i lost it!!! where is it????
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