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I was cyril's dark knight and I got story.
gary
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#1 Posted: 03:30:18 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
![]() I was cyril's dark knight and I got story.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Cynder_Rox
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#2 Posted: 03:30:58 04/08/2008
Cool Dragon, gary!
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Last edited at 03:32:33 05/08/2008 by Cynder_Rox
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gary
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#3 Posted: 03:37:25 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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cyril say" came on,gary,I want make you some dark knight".gary ask"ok,right,but I not ready to became dark knight".
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Last edited at 07:24:30 04/08/2008 by gary
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Cynder_Rox
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#4 Posted: 03:42:04 04/08/2008
Cool! Short first part though
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gary
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#5 Posted: 03:50:17 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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cyril say"gary,you got to hide before spyro see you when he came back and he will kill you".spyro say"whew,after I was frozen for long time".
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Last edited at 09:39:43 04/08/2008 by gary
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shadron
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#6 Posted: 13:39:34 04/08/2008
great
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gary
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#7 Posted: 15:06:54 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
after I came out from window and then spyro see me.
page 3 spyro say"YOU,don't get near cyril" gary ask"bring it on""turn dark knight gary ![]() cyril say"SPYRO,stop hurting gary,he was my best dark knight" spyro say "I was sorry,cyril""I don't hurt him again"
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Last edited at 04:59:23 05/08/2008 by gary
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spyrathedragon
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#8 Posted: 15:55:53 04/08/2008
ummmm gary,you have a poor sence of writing sentenses.but great storey!and cyril say?its suppose to be after the sentence or before the sentence like this:cyril said"SPYRO,stop hurtin gary!he was my best dark night!"
or "SPYRO,stop hurting gary!he was my best dark night!"said cyril and asking(ask)is a ? at the end of the sentence.your storey won't make sence at all if you dont use propper grammer and writing.take a look at my storey and pay atenchon to the words and sentences.my storey is:The Legend of Spyro:The Realm of Darkness.its on fandom.read it and you will se my propper grammer ALSO NO OFFENCE IT'S A GREAT STOREY.IT REALLY IS. sinceraly -spyrathedragon p.s. also if the charicter is doing something then like in a book it shouldn't just be:*turns into dark night gary* you should tell the detals.you should also look for that in my storey. sinceraly -spyrathedragon
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gary
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#9 Posted: 00:49:58 05/08/2008 | Topic Creator
ok.
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Spyroboy
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#10 Posted: 03:28:43 05/08/2008
Nice
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gary
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#11 Posted: 03:45:43 05/08/2008 | Topic Creator
![]() that my master.
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Last edited at 10:41:06 06/08/2008 by gary
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Cynder_Rox
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#12 Posted: 03:47:05 05/08/2008
Nice!
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Coocie2
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#13 Posted: 03:48:10 05/08/2008
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gary
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#14 Posted: 07:32:09 05/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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"gary,I was sorry" said spyro was sad."let go,spyro"said gary.when cynder told us about dark master."gary,your mission to defeat dark master"said cynder."ok"said gary.
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Last edited at 12:34:32 06/08/2008 by gary
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Aang
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#15 Posted: 05:18:49 07/08/2008
Defeat the DM? That's gonna be hard
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gary
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#16 Posted: 05:38:37 07/08/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah,after spyro,cynder and gary was left from the ghost temple and dark master's army attack me to sent him.he think I was cynder which I not.
page 5 spyro and cynder were faint by dark master's army ambush."uh, my head hurt,where are we.....wait,the gary as dark knight was taken away"said cynder.
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Last edited at 07:03:54 08/08/2008 by gary
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