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#1 Posted: 20:57:03 24/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Hi people! I am making this story of Spyro and his Dragonteam. They are older. They are 13. I will post who the dragonteam is in a bit.
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#2 Posted: 21:05:20 24/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Leaders:Spyro and Cynder!
Others: Violet and Nick,http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCq1JZUuOvUElementra and Elementro,http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTzg1sbl1Ccand Ember and Flame![you shoul know who they are.] (oh and Rocky in the 2nd link is actually Elementro in this.)
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#3 Posted: 21:11:18 24/07/2008
once I can show you Leroy I can join right?
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#4 Posted: 21:11:53 24/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah Sure! but then I need his girlfriend.
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#5 Posted: 22:39:17 24/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Intro:
Dragonteam:Cynder Spyro Ember Flame Violet Nick Elementra and Elementro. Guardians:Ignita Ignitus Terra Terrador Cyril Cyral Voltra and Volteer. Hidden Characters: Wait, Why am I telling you this? Helpful Hints: Spyro is Older. There will be dating in this.
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#6 Posted: 23:54:34 24/07/2008
Hey Cynder16! Do you mind if I join in? I'll post the dragon I'm entering.
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#7 Posted: 23:59:12 24/07/2008
I did this in case you would accepet him.
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#8 Posted: 00:07:08 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1:The First Victory
As Spyro and Cynder are on there date, a fireball shoots out of the sky! "Cynder! Are you okay?"asked Spyro."Ugh, Yeah I'm fine."replied Cynder."DEATH IS OPON YOU!! DIE NOW!!"said a muffled voice."Leave them alone!"screeched Ember. All of the dragonteam ran up to Spyro and Cynder."HAH! NOW YOU DIE TOO!"it said still muffled."Assassin!"cried Violet."YES! THE LAST WORD YOU WILL EVER SAY!!! AHAHAHAHAHAH!!"Cynder fired her shadow beam as fast as she could!"YOU HAVEN'T SEEN THE LAST OF THE ASSASSIN!"He yelled as he fly off."What a Freak."said Flame."Yeah."replied Nick. Later at the temple,"Wow that must have been an exciting battle."said Ignita."PFFF! I've seen them do better."said Terra triumphantly."Yeah well,At least the have better fighting skills then Us, Terra."said Voltra trying to help."Let us not get into an argument over a victory, shall we Cyril dear?"said Cyral."Not at all. Not at all."replied Cyril."Can we just celebrate the victory yet?"asked Terrador in a deep growl."We Should We Should We Should!"said Volteer rapidly repeating."All Of You Please Be Quite! We are to celebrate a victory,so let us!"said Ignitus hushing everyone. Everyone Partied till the end of the night. "Night Dragonteam"Everyone said to each other. Everyone shares a nest. Violet and Nick, Elementro and Elementra, Ember and Flame, Cynder and Spyro. "Night Spyro."said Cynder. "Night Cynder"whispered Spyro.
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#9 Posted: 00:09:10 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
He will need a girl with him. I will put him and his girl in Chapter 3. Sorry but I already wrote Chapter 2.
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#10 Posted: 00:13:36 25/07/2008
can I add Nalemor and Infinity?
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#11 Posted: 00:23:58 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
No. Because..... I'll PM you
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#12 Posted: 00:28:25 25/07/2008
Quote: Cynder16
Okay...*hurries to generator*
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#13 Posted: 00:29:20 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
lol Dragonhope.
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#14 Posted: 00:35:26 25/07/2008
Done
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#15 Posted: 00:35:54 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
It is not coming up
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#16 Posted: 00:37:08 25/07/2008
Oh well. You can just imagine Eartharrow, Redarrow's girl
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#17 Posted: 00:38:05 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Nope Got it
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#18 Posted: 00:39:13 25/07/2008
Alright
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#19 Posted: 00:50:42 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:Cynder's Dream
"Cynder, I am friend. I must tell you, Find Me. I am a black dragon My name.... is.........Asin."said The dragon of Asin."Oh Asin! It is so good to hear from you!"said Cynder."Do you remember me and Nalemor?"asked a similar voice."Oh course Infinity! How Could I forget you and Nalemor! Wait, were did you three go? Spyro and I lost you about a year ago."asked Cynder."Malefor's demise was also a new beginning to him."said Nalemor."Then were is Cassandra and Devion?"asked Cynder."We do not know."said Infinity."They are the only ones who can bring us into our universe. Find them. Tell them. Then seek us in the portal's portal of Convexity."replied Asin. Then they are slowly disappeared and Cynder woke up."Finally Your Up! I was Getting Worried Cynder! Are you okay?"asked Spyro as Cynder opened her eyes....
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#20 Posted: 00:53:58 25/07/2008
Almost there...
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#21 Posted: 00:55:56 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I am writing Chapter 3 as we type.
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#22 Posted: 00:58:14 25/07/2008
oh cool!
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#23 Posted: 01:02:39 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Done! It is short. But I hope Chapter 4 will be Long!
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#24 Posted: 01:04:16 25/07/2008
Oh boy
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#25 Posted: 01:13:48 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:New Friends and a Capture
"Yeah I'm Fine"Said Cynder. "Oh and This is Redarrow and his girlfriend Eartharrow. They are joining are team." said Elementra. "Alrighty then."said Cynder. "We wish to accompany you in battle Cynder!"said Eartharrow. "Yes" said Redarrow. Just then, Gaul came smashing through the window! "COME NOW CYNDER!!!" He yelled! Cynder was sucked into Gaul's hand and Gaul jumped off! "HELP!!" Cynder Yelled! But The Temple was to far off...... But Not Of Spyro's Plan!"Boys, Help distract the apes. Girls grab Cynder as soon as possible!"said Spyro. "GO DRAGONTEAM" They all yelled. ------------------------ Sorry it is short. I am having writer's block. But not after now!
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#26 Posted: 01:15:34 25/07/2008
okay, wtf? Gaul is dead... lol other than that, its good
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#27 Posted: 01:15:59 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I have Chapter 4 in my head. Do you want me to post it now or later?
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#28 Posted: 01:17:09 25/07/2008
post post post *chanting*
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#29 Posted: 01:18:11 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Gaul didn't die. He was trapped and the DM freed him in this story.
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#30 Posted: 01:19:02 25/07/2008
:/ what other story??
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#31 Posted: 01:19:30 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
In this Story!
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#32 Posted: 01:20:27 25/07/2008
ohhh, u gonna post what happened to him later? if so you should put that in a spoiler
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#33 Posted: 01:22:07 25/07/2008
Cool! They finally appeared!
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#34 Posted: 01:23:36 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Do I post Chapter 4 now or later?
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#35 Posted: 01:24:18 25/07/2008
Your choice
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#36 Posted: 01:25:12 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Ill do now
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#37 Posted: 01:25:54 25/07/2008
Okay
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#38 Posted: 01:33:04 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4:Cynder's Portal
Cynder was chained to the wall.'What do I do?'she thought. Suddenly Spyro crashed though the ceiling with the other boys. "Let her go Gaul!"Spyro demanded. "HAH! Never!"replied Gaul. The battle lasted at least 10 min. Spyro's boys did there best but didn't make enough time for the girls. They were caught! "Run NOW!" yelled Violet. Gaul zapped a portal under Cynder trying to hit Violet. "AAAAAHHHHH!" Cynder yelled as she was sucked into the portal. "OOFFFF!" she had a rough landing. Luckily, it was a teleportation portal. "Cassandra! Devion!"Cynder yelled with joy! "Cynder!" Cassandra and Devion Yelled. ----------------------------- Still have writer's block. Sorry!
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#39 Posted: 01:36:02 25/07/2008
What in the world is writer's block?
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#40 Posted: 01:36:52 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
You can't think if a good story
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#41 Posted: 01:44:14 25/07/2008
does it have to do with school? my school has writers club.
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#42 Posted: 01:46:06 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
What?
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#43 Posted: 01:48:02 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
A writer can't think of a good story to write
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#44 Posted: 01:48:41 25/07/2008
is Writers Block a school program?
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#45 Posted: 01:54:13 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
No. When you are a writer and can't think of what to write, YOU HAVE WRITER"S BLOCK!
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#46 Posted: 01:54:38 25/07/2008
ohh, lolz i r dumb
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#47 Posted: 01:55:20 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
No your not! sometimes ppl don't understand things well
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#48 Posted: 01:58:01 25/07/2008
I DUMB I R NO NOFING! *beats head against Temple wall* STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID!
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#49 Posted: 02:00:09 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Stop Nalemor. Only you and Dragon hope read my story.....
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#50 Posted: 02:00:56 25/07/2008 | Topic Creator
G2G! Be back tomorrow! Night!
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