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"So we saw something weird while we were walking over here" Brandon said.
"What was it?" I asked with Curiousness.
"It was a Gargoyle dressed like a mailman" He said.
Margret and I looked at each other with worried faces. Brandon and Jacob just looked at us.
"I think this dinner is over" Margret said to them.
"We just got here" Jacob protested.
"Just go home and stay there," She said, " a meer mortal can't survive out here".
"What do you mean ma'am?" Jacob asked
"It means none of us are human except you two" She told him
I decided it was time to show them what she ment.

This is just a small fragment from the book that I am Writing
If you want the first chapter i will write it
Please tell me if it is interesting
It is not finished yet but I am almost finished with writing chapter 13

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Chapter 1: A new guy moves in
It was a normal day for me. I'm A.J. My real name is Alexandra Jones but most people call me A.J. I'm sixteen years old and I live with my older sister Margret. She is twenty years old. I walked outside of our old Victorian house and saw that two new guys were moving in to the house next door. One of them looked my age. The other looked like he was about twenty five I decided to go welcome them.
I walked over to them with a big smile on my face and said,"Hi, My name is A.J".
"I'm Brandon and this is my younger brother Jacob"The older one said to me.
"I think I can speak for myself Brandon" Jacob said looking at me then Brandon.
"Anyways why don't you two come over for dinner tonight" I exclaimed.
"That would be nice" Brandon said back to me.
"We'll be there" Jacob said to me.
I skipped home and ran inside to tell Margret about the guests coming over tonight.
"Hey Margret we are having guests tonight" I said as i skipped into the kitchen.
"Is it those new guys?" She asked
"Yeah it is" I said back.
"Well then I need to cook tacos with pie as desert" She said
"Make cranberry pie this time" I said.
"Ok little sister" She said back as she started to cook.
I ran upstairs and into my room to read a book called Inkheart. It is a great book and i must resume reading it. After all I need to read anyways. I started to read when the smell of tacos filled my nostrills.
~That was Chapter 1~

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