darkSpyro

Ok, before i start, give me some time to post the main charactors. It will take some time, and i gotta go soon.

Spur
Elements: ice and shadow
Other: Guardian of the Evil Crystal
Evil

Lightstrike
Elements: lightning and poison
Other: spurs brother
Evil

Shadow
Elements: shadow and poison
Other: Lightstrikes brother
Evil

Light
Elements: lightning and wind
Other: lightstrikes sister and Guardian of the Lightning Crystal
Good

Lig
Elements: Lightning and Ice
Other: Light's sister
Good

Ela
Elements: earth and life
Other: Guardian of the Earth Crystal
Good

Ace
Elements: Earth and life
Other: Ela's little brother
Good

Axle
Elements: Earth and life
Other: Ace's twin
Good

Ramses
Elements: fire and lightning
Other: electro's big brother
Good

Electro
Elements: fire and lightning
Other: Ramses little sister
Good

Flaver
elements: ice and water
Other: guardian of the water crystal
Good

Jade
Elements: wind and convexity
Other: Cynder's little sister
Good

Cynder
Elements: wind and fear
Other: jades big sister. Guardian of the Wind Crystal
Good

Convix
Elements: convexity and lightning
Other: cynder's twin
Good


Ok, time to start the rp.
prolauge:

"Do you have it?" "Have what?" "The scrolls!" "No. Convix still has them." "We must find it! Go!" "Fine Spur."

"Come on Ramses!" Electro shouted. "Coming!" he shouted. "And please call me Ram." Electro giggled. "No Ramses!" she ran up the hill. All of the good dragons were trying to travel to the temple, where they would be safe from Spur and Lightstrike. "Are you doing good, flaver?" Ramses asked Flaver. "Just great." she said sarcasticly. Cynder was walking beside her. "She's in a bad mood, Ram." "Oh, ok. Sorry." he ran up beside Electro. "Race ya!" "Try to!" Flaver had to giggle. "Hes so good with his sister." cynder smiled. "My brother did." she looked at Convix. He was walking alongside Ela. "He was a great brother, always stood up for me." Flaver frowned. "I wish I had a relitive." all of hers had been killed by malefor. Cynder knew what she was thinking. It was Cynder who killed her brother. "Im sorry." she said. "I was under controll. By the Dark Master." a tear fell from her eye. "Spyro will come back. I know it. He loves you too much to leave you forever." Cynder looked up at Flaver. "I know. But why did he leave? He didn't say goodbye." she put her head down. Light came down beside them. "Spyro, huh." she said. "Yeah, I miss him." Cynder said. Someday, he would come. And that day would be important.

Hey, you should edit this one:
Quote:

"Come one Ramses!"

Yup it is nice...
I tell you here...
And...
You didn't include Spyro on character list...will he come back?

@shorty i wanted to so you people knew who was together.
@Denragon i make that mistake a lot

Chapter 2

Lightstrike flew down the mountian. "Gotta be a Crystal, gotta be a Crystal...." then he saw it. The red, glowing crystal of evil. He landed. "Hehehehe, got it." he picked it up and took air.

"Whoa!" Ramses fell. "Clumsy Dumbsy!" Electro said as she pasted him. Flaver and Cynder walked past him. Light stoped by him and heldout her hand(or paw or whatever you call it.). He smiled and grabbed it. She pulled him up. "Hey, has anyone seen Lig or Ace or Axle?" Ela asked. "No, not since we started the journy." Convix said. It was a beutiful summer day. They were walking in the tall grassy, plains, with forests by there sides. Cynder felt the wind howling in her face. How she wished Spyro were here. But couldnt help but think somthing bad happened. No, no! she scolded herself. Hes fine! She shook her head. Then sighed. "Whats wrong?" she looked down to see Lig. "I miss someone, thats all." Cynder replied. "I miss my daddy and mommy." Cynder looked at her. "So does Light. But Lightstrike and Spur probibly dont." Cynder nodded. "Yeah, guess so."

Yeah...you got the point...
I'm starting to like the storyline...
But with your grammar...
Need Fixing...

@ Youla thanks, i dont really get grammer :/ its just me. And if Spyro comes back, it wont be untill the end.

Yeah, i guess.


Chapter 2

"Spur, i got the Crystal." Lightstrike said, kneeling down. "Finally!" Spur said. She took the gem from him and hooked it on her cape thing. "Shadow!" the little guy came out from behind Spur. "Yes, big sis?" he asked. "Help us. We have to get to the temple before Light and Lig and the "Handy Crew" get there. Understand?" "Yes," he said. "Good," she said staring out the door. "Lets go."

"Woah." Ace got to the top of the hill with Axle rightbehind him. "Ace, race ya down!" Axle said. "Roll off!" Ace looked at him the droped. "Coming right after you!" Axle said as he rolled. Electro reached the top. "Look, Ramses!" she said. Ram was right behind her. "Yes, i see." at the bottem of the hill was the Tree of Hope. The Tree of Hope was a achient tree that held secrets of the elders. "Wow." Said Jade. Cynder picked her up. "Where were you?" she asked. "With Ace and Axle." replied Jade. "Well," said Flaver. "Lets fly down. The young ones can ride on our back." Jade hopped on Cynders back, Lig jumped on Lights back, Electro leaped on Ramses back. They flew down. And got to the Tree of Hope.

Shorty right...
Better like that, didn't mean to offense...
But you should describe the character in certain situation...
Example:
"Help us, we have to get tot the temple before Light and Light and the "Handy Crew" get there. Understand?" Spur said with serious tune, flipping finger on her paw on the "Handy Crew" part...

Ok, thanks!

Just a piece of advice... You should make the story a little bit longer than this... You can do it, right?