darkSpyro

Okay this particular story is about one of my role play characters. His name is Slash and he is a Umbreon. Give me your honest opinions or if you want me to put any specific characters in it


Here are some of the characters from some role playes
Slash-main character in this story umbreon
Raindrop- Slashes sister leafeon
Ashton- Slashes adopted cousin arceops
Jolt- Slashes brother Jolteon
Diamond- Slashes other sis espeon
Snowflake- Glaceon


Slash sat looking into the fire with his cousin Ashton. " Hey Slash" Ashton said "I know we are cousins and all but I really don't know very much about your childhood". Was it good?" he asked. "Well its funny you should ask that because I was just thinking about it" Slash replied. " Well it all started when I was born. My father left when I was born and I never met him, but my mother said he was a fine looking Jolteon and a piece of work". Then one day when I was young...
" Slash Slash!!!! Where are you?" said Raindrop. " I give up your the best at hide and seek". Slash emerged from the darkness. " I'm right here" he said.

can you put in all my female rp characters (Porsche, Crystal, Darkness, Shine, Sapphire, and Star)?

No prop

Slash walked over to Raindrop. " So since you don't want to play hide and seek, what should we do?" he asked. " Well I don't know" said Raindrop. Slash looks over at a glaceon. He sighs. Raindrop looks in his direction. " I know you like Snowflake, Slash" she said. " You should go talk to her". " I can't" said Slash " I won't know what to say". Then a espeon walked up to them. " Hi guys" said Diamond Slash's other sister. " What's up?" she said. " Um nothing" Slash said uneasily. Then a zoura ran in front of them followed by a Snivy. " Betcha can't catch me" said the Zoura. " Bet I can" yelled the Snivy. Slash stood watching them. Suddenly Snowflake walked over to them. " Hey guys" she said. Slash started to blush but Raindrop quickly ran I front of him to make sure Snowflake didn't see him. " Hi Snowflake" said Raindrop

Good so far

Thank you

Your welcome
When is the next part?

Cool!
But I think you should add a description of the characters at the top since I don't know who they all are!

Thanks

When is the next part?

Good. But this belongs in the Non-Spyro section.

Oh my bad. And thanks

NEXT PART!!!!