Long ago... there were two princess snivy twins. One was a nice normal coloured snivy like me, and the other was an evil weird coloured snivy like my twin sister, Sapphire. The two sisters hated each other and battled so strong that they both died... legend says 100 years later, the same would happen to non royals... me and Sapphire are the twin sisters. Now my story begins... by the way... my name is Crystal
After awhile Crystal and her friends were bleeding from a huge fight and Usher Oshawott (her crush) was hurt badly. "Usher... please hold on!" Crystal pleaded. "Crystal..." Usher said "I'll be fine". "When Usher says things they happen" Cody the riolu said. Cody had a scar on his eye from long ago. Crystal had a flower in her ear. Usher had weird hair. "Yea" the shiny zorua named Darkness said. Her hair went over her left eye.
To be continued
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porsche9000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2213 |
#1 Posted: 23:46:35 18/08/2012 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 23:58:17 18/08/2012
It is good so far, but many grammatical errors.
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#3 Posted: 23:59:36 18/08/2012 | Topic Creator
I know... I suck at grammer... sorry its so short
Pt. 2 "Crystal... you know how humans died with the sisters fighting?" an eevee named Shine asked. She had the same hair style as Darkness. "Yea" Crystal replied. "I think she is saying that you and Sapphire are really powerful but you can't get defeated" a pikachu name Sparky said. He had ears like the clone pikachu in the first movie and had lots of hair on his chest. "Yea" Shine said, smiling. "Guys we have to find shelter!" a emolga named Star said. She had a ponytail. "She's right" said a minccino named Gabe. He had the same hair style as Usher. "Just a sec" Crystal said. She put her hand on Usher, herself and her flower glowing and Usher healed. "Thanks" Usher thanked. "Don't mention it" Crystal said To be continued
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#4 Posted: 00:18:52 19/08/2012
It's very good. Keep it up
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#5 Posted: 07:28:09 19/08/2012
Good.
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#6 Posted: 10:31:27 19/08/2012 | Topic Creator
Thx!!!
Pt. 3 Somewhere a light blue and dark pink snivy with a blue eye was sitting in a tree... the snivy was Sapphire "Now I wish I could kill my sister!" said Sapphire, looking at the moon. "I agree babe" a lime green and light blue oshawott named Aaron said. He had a red shell, yellow ears, yellow feet, a yellow tail, and a blue nose. "Aaron! For the last time I don't like you or ever will!" Sapphire hissed. "I like your twin brother". "I know! The most powerful member of the Destroyers... Usher". With the Destroyers "Well we have to sleep" Crystal said, sounding very tired. "Yea" Usher replied To be continued If you want I can add your characters
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#7 Posted: 12:20:12 19/08/2012
Your welcome
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prextail202 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4039 |
#8 Posted: 16:18:46 19/08/2012
Nice! Can Twix the Leafeon be in this? along with her twin brother Midnight the Umbreon?
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#9 Posted: 16:26:23 19/08/2012 | Topic Creator
Sure why not
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#10 Posted: 16:53:01 19/08/2012
Thanks!
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#11 Posted: 16:58:27 19/08/2012 | Topic Creator
No problem
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#12 Posted: 18:32:46 19/08/2012
Okay can you put Slash, Ashton, Shock and Diamond in this if you want to. Sorry if that's to many characters and I'm being damanding
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#13 Posted: 18:36:44 19/08/2012 | Topic Creator
That's fine. I will put them in
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#14 Posted: 18:39:20 19/08/2012
Thanks
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#15 Posted: 18:41:46 19/08/2012 | Topic Creator
What pokemon is shock again?
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#16 Posted: 19:20:18 19/08/2012
A pikachu
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#17 Posted: 20:15:20 19/08/2012
When will the next chapter be up?
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di ****n molto or whatever I guess |
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#18 Posted: 14:38:51 20/08/2012 | Topic Creator
Pt. 3
After awhile Sapphire just had to have Crystal's powers! She wanted Usher to love her and not her sister! (who she thinks is way less attractive). "Aaron! We have to find something to get rid of Crystal so I can have her crystal powers!" Sapphire hollered. "But you have sapphire powers... they are the excact same except your powers are blue, and Crystal's are white!" Aaron replied. "I know but I want everyone to fear me! I want to control the world!" Sapphire snapped. "And I want Usher..." she whispered. With the destroyers "Come on guys!" Crystal said. "We are!" Cody replied. When the two were fighting Shine bumped into something that was bigger than her but looked like her. She looked up and saw a leafeon. "Hi there! I`m twix!`the leafeon said. `Hi! I`m Porsche the pidgeotto`a Pidgeotto said. She was one of the bird members of the destroyers. She had a bright pink necklace. The other bird was her crush, Ace the tranquill. `Porsche! Ace! Your back!`Star exclaimed. `Yep!`said Ace. Ace had a cross necklace on. To b continued
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#19 Posted: 20:23:28 30/08/2012
Good job again
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#20 Posted: 21:11:11 30/08/2012 | Topic Creator
thanks
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#21 Posted: 23:54:20 30/08/2012
Your welcome
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#22 Posted: 23:59:55 30/08/2012
lol, there be two pt 3's X3.
But nice job. I can see a start.
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#23 Posted: 00:45:16 31/08/2012 | Topic Creator
lol thx
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