darkSpyro

i'v started a comic and i'm not sure if i should continue

sorry no scanner

voice: spyro......spyro........
(in spyro's head)
: h...hello anyone there?
voice: your late
: who are you?...where are you?....where am i?
strange shape/voice: i am here
: jesus crist!
strange shape/voice: older yet you don't know me
: who...no what are you?
strange shape/voice: strange
strange shape/voice: it appers ignitus is kepping secrets
: how do you know ignitus!!
other voice: spyro?...
strange shape/voice: sparx?...so he did surive
(back in the real world)
voice: time you woke up
: *wakes up and dives at sparx* GET BACK HERE!!
: spyro?...no stop

should i keep going or should i just stop?.....you choose

what is the story behind your comic? It sounds cool so far.

hmmm so far ur story is nice

i'm making a story but i'm going to finish it on paper then post it on the dark spyro

Continue my friend.

continue plz

You should start it off better, describe the characters more, and describe what is going on, because i didn't understand what you were going on about at first.

For example:

There was a massive explosion and spyro fel to the floor, badly wounded, he fainted.

You should have something like that at the beginning

i like the example samuel but he just asleep and i don't think spyro knows whats going on ether.......its been set it will continue. thanks of your support

i only got the second page done due to slow ideas

ok...

: were'd it go!
: were'd what go?
: that thing
(electric explotion)
spider robot 1: target located
: locate this
(fighting starts)
spider robot 3: ( pulls out it eye) AARGH
(spyro throws robot eye at other spider robot)
spider robot 4: ERROR...ERROR *explodes*
: ha me:4 alien robots:0
(spyro looks at huge mess from fighting)
: aw hell ignitus is gonna kill me for this

double posting i know but what you think

good! mooore!

almost finished with the 3rd page

yaya!

finished the 3rd page but i'm at the library and have forgot most of the words

orightey theyen

ok back and i have the page

.....right here we go

: *outside* spyro!...I think you should see this!
: *goes outside* see what?
: look...at this
: *looks over wall* sparx
: yeah
: *sees an endless sea of spider robots* I think were in trouble
: *has run off*
: sparx?
(grappling hooks come up)
: better make a start
zac: *climbing up grapple rope* alright a suvivor
: who are you
: *grabs zac* are you controling thoes things?!
zac: I wish...thats our enemy
ellsa: zac...we have to move...now
(missiles launch)
ellsa: incoming!!!
(knocks zac and spyro to the floor...explotions)
zac: ow
: *blacks out*
ellsa: dragon?...can you hear me...dragon!
zac: come on we have to go!
(some time later)
voice 1: he's tough for a little guy
: *still seeing black...thinking* who's that?...ow
voice 2: I know anyone elts and they'd be lucky to be alive
: *starts to open eyes*


wow that one was longer than i thought i would be......ok opinions or critasizem

yep another double post

: *opens eyes*...*thinking*what the?
dragon: he's awake
: *thinking* why can't i move?
computer: this will hurt abit
(machine starts)
: AAARRGGHHH!
guard: that sounds like it hurts
(short time later)
: what happened?
dragon: you took a missile in the back...your lucky it was a duff
: *abit dizzy* w...what
dragon: your not from around here are you? *gives spyro something*
: whats that?
: *thinks* stabeliser?
dragon: final check...missile removed...sholder rebuilt...no mental damage...yep you can go
(5 miniuts later)
: *thinking* everythings metal and gray
intercom: will the dragon named spyro report to the brige
: *thinking* voices?...i must be dreaming
G-major voice: spyro!
: *thinks* what *looks down dark hall*
G-major voice: approch
: *does so and peers into the darkness* is some one there
G-major voice: there is...i can help you
: come out of there
G-major voice: that's a bad idea
: why's that?
G-major voice: watch
(souless red eyes and strange dark green markings appear)
: *steps back* er...whats that
G-major voice: my dragon self
: dragon self???
: *thinks* he's nuts
G-major voice: remember that strange shape you saw in your sleep?
: you know where it is
G-major voice: yes
: where
G-major voice: your speaking to it
: *steps back again* why are you following me
G-major voice: because i wish to correct what i'v done wrong


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